A SIMPLE LOVE STORY (SWASAN)- BY HELLYFAN

Hello everyone ….. today I tried to write something on our heavenly couple SWASAN. Guys its my very first SS as well as very first try…..so please don’t mind if I have done some mistakes……
And yes no proof writing, now enough of me …..Let’s get started…

CHARACTER SKETCH:
SANSKAAR- He was a police officer earlier but something happened which changed him.
SWARA- she is a perfect example of beauty with brain. She is a doctor by profession.
Other characters are same as the show.

PROLOUGE:
A marriage is going on…two couples are sitting, one is happy and the other couple is lost somewhere….marriage completed… they were about to go suddenly,
GROOM: stay away stay away …….someone please pour water on this fire…..please and he fainted
All started murmuring something … seeing this bride came and said
BRIDE: you all can leave…thank you for coming here
Hearing this everyone left the place and the bride without even caring about the groom left to her room and stared crying…….

Done… now u all decide should I continue or not and yaah I will be happy with 10 comments also…and one more thing I will be definitely regular …till then bye bye take care ..

74 comments

  1. Neptune

    Neptune

    |Registered Member

    hey dear..it’s really awesome ..btw are you new here..if so then welcome to swsaan family dear..even am a crazy swasanian…

    • Hellyfan

      Hellyfan

      |Author

      thank u soo much neptune…. it means a lot dear….yaah i m new in writing section but not in reading section….u welcomed me earlier also ….ummm when i joined the site.. i guess u forgot but its ok…. thank u once again

  2. Mars

    Mars

    |Registered Member

    Omgg sweeto its awesome I loved it. Plzz plzzz continue soon and welcome to writing section. May u write more and more. My blessings are always with you hihihi kidding….
    Post soon I m waiting….
    Take care
    Bye.

    • Hellyfan

      Hellyfan

      |Author

      awww…… thank u soo much dii ….u know what di i was just waiting for ur comment… seriously i was about to msg u personally that please read my first ss….. but then thought no no she have a lot to do …but now my wish came true … i m really very happy that u gave me ur blessings and thank u soo much once again dii……..

      • Mars

        Mars

        |Registered Member

        Ohhhh so sweet of youu .
        Actually I was busy in writing so didn’t get time to read. But I have to read this as its by you.
        My blessings are with you I m feeling very big lolll.
        And your os request also will fulfil soon I m cooking story in my mind.hihihi
        Continue this story soon
        All the best.

    • Hellyfan

      Hellyfan

      |Author

      thank u anniya dii … this comment in my very first ss means alot… thank u once again and yaah i will post the next part tomorrow

  3. Harshita

    Harshita

    |Registered Member

    Firstly welcome to our swasan family dear……

    About the story…….Hmm…..very nice plot…..update next soon

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