A SIMPLE LOVE STORY (SWASAN) -1 BY HELLYFAN

Hello guys…. How are u all…?
Ohhhhmyyyyygodddd……. What a response thank u thank u thank u soo much. U guys motivated me a lot.. Thank u once again…
Now let’s begin with our first episode……

‘Mangalam Bhagavan Vishnu………Mangalam Garudadhwajah…….Mangalam Pundareekaksha…….Mangalay tano Hari…. Ommm’
SHADI SAMPAN HUYI…..
Now bride and groom stand up and take blessings from elders and god for Ur bright future…. (The priest said)
Two brides and two grooms stood up and about to go suddenly one groom started shouting…..
G-(started shouting like mad) stay away… stay away please someone bring water and pour it on fire ….. Please I hate it ……and then he fainted.

All started murmuring something….
LADY1- see this mad… they thought that they will make him marry and everything will be all right.
LADY2- yes, how shameless they are … even after knowing that SANSKAAR is MAD they married him. I think the girl is having some problem that’s why she agreed for this marriage.
LADY1- yes I think u r right warna kon ladki ek pagal se shadi karegi

This was it for SWARA… she came forward and shouted ….
SWARA- you all can leave …. The marriage is over ….. Thank you for becoming a part of it.
And in no time everyone left … and even swara left the mandap and ran to her room.
SWARA’s POV:-
Ohh god … why are u punishing me …. What have I done to u …? Please I swara bose was never this much weak but that incidence changed me … my nature … and my name as well ……..
FLASHBACK –
Ragini and Laksh are in love with each other.
Swara’s dadi – na chori shadi hogi to dono chorio ki ek hi ghar me hogi na to na hogi..
Ragini – but dadi his brother is not in a proper mental condition … how can swara di marry him.
Dadi- To tu Laksh se shadi mat kar.

Swara was listening all this silently. She always wanted her sister’s happiness. And after seeing her crying Swara took a decision and said.
DADI JI I M RAEDY TO MARRY SANSKAAR.
DADI (with a smirk) – are u serious.
SWARA- yes…
DADI- ok then Shekhar fix the date.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ FLASHBACK ENDS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
And now just for my sister’s sake I m bearing all this. God help me please or give me patience to tolerate all this and she started crying….
Suddenly the door opens…..

Hufffffff done with my first part……
PRECAP: SWARA SHOUTING ON SANSKAAR…
Thank u guys will post soon till then bye bye take care….

50 comments

  1. Hellyfan

    Hellyfan

    |Author

    hey hii guyss….. this is a msg for u all…….
    first of all i m really very sry for this short part …. actually i realised it now after reading it ……….
    and secondly thank u for ur respose in previous shot …….
    and at last i will end this story in 4-5 parts and i promise next part will be really long………pakka wala promise …….. bye take care

  2. Anniya

    Anniya

    |Registered Member

    See I was correct story is not simple as it seems, well kiddo you’re writing very well about episode length then I just remember those days when I started writing I used to thought episode is long but after posting I used to get to know reality… So never mind…. Continue soon wants to see how swara cope with this marriage and sanskar…. And that lady seriously she’s Idiot peice… Ufff see how much I talked…. Update soon

    • Hellyfan

      Hellyfan

      |Author

      awww ….. thank u soo much dii… ur comment made my day once again…. and yes this is what happened … i thought its long enough but after reading……….. leave it . thank u soo much once again and will post soon

  3. Rabia0032

    Rabia0032

    |Registered Member

    Hey helly chill yaar don’t need to be fast…start with short update than come with long updates ok…but it’s nice..

  4. Mars

    Mars

    |Registered Member

    Don’t worry dear about length it’s okay. Coming to story its toooo good.
    This dadi urgggg…. Always after my shona. Swasan got married wow.
    It will be worth reading how Swara is going to handle Sanskar.
    Hawwww precap Swara will shout……
    Waiting continue soon
    Thanks
    Take care.

    • Hellyfan

      Hellyfan

      |Author

      thank u soo much dii……… ur comment motivated me alot…
      ur such a inspiration for me really………
      and thank u soo much will post soon
      love u………..

  5. Neptune

    Neptune

    |Registered Member

    hey dear..you are right i welcomed you when you joined the site..i remember it now he he….
    this part was awesome..arghh i hate this daadi for troubling my shonu….
    i loved this part..don’t worry about the length.. it’s okay…
    post soon dear

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