A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA

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Hi guys, I am not new here. I used to comment in ffs, mostly in Raglak ffs. That time I wasn’t a registered member. Anyways here I am presenting a TS on Raglak. This is my first attempt so hope you all will like it. So here is the intro of my TS.

Ragini-She is a beautiful girl, has moral values. But she is really very modern and very outspoken. She is really very rich and pampered by everyone of her family. But she is not spoiled, she is brought up in USA.
Laksh-He is really spoiled and pampered by everyone of his family as he is the only son of his family. He has too much ego and he doesn’t let anyone to insult him and if anybody does so then he is ready to give harsh punishments to them.
Annapurna-Laksh’s mother. Here she is a biggest goon and a business woman. She is very cruel and everyone calls her as ‘Annapurna Devi’.
Daksh(played by Naman Shaw)-He is elder brother of Ragini and he is an IAS police officer. Laksh and Daksh are enemies because Daksh loves Laksh’s younger sis Uttara.
Shekhar-Ragini’s father. He is a best business man and is really very famous.
Janki-Ragini’s mother. A simple woman. She is house wife.
Ramprasad-Annapurna’s brother. He is very loyal to Annapurna.
Sahil-Ramprasad’s son.
Nikhil-Ramprasad’s other son but he is really very nice.
Mansi-Ragini’s best friend.
Sneha(played by Krystal D’Souza)-Ragini’s sis and Sahil’s girlfriend.
Uttara-Laksh’s sis.

Guys how was the intro of my first story? Should I continue this? Please tell me through your comments. I want you all to comment. So pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee shower your comments.. I am waiting…

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89 Comments
  1. AWESOME pls continue

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thank you ArjunaArjuna.

      1. Riya_Mitra

        Sorry dear by mistake I wrote your name for two times

  2. Varshni

    Yeah please continue !!!!

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Sure I will and thanks for commenting

  3. Shrilatha

    Awesome I am into it..loved yaar…may I know ur ID when u used to comment on ffs before registration..

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Shri it was my mom’s ID. Should I tell you the ID? Achha do one thing go to any ff of Irfan Pathan. I am giving you the names-
      1.Swaragini-fixing broken relations is it pure or impure.
      2.Swaragini-love in slums of India and others with full of lust
      3.Swaragini-love in slums season 2 and many more. In Deesh’s ffs also I used to comment. I hope you know her. And my logo’s colour was green and white. And yeah thanks for commenting.

  4. Jayanti

    loved the intro riya…..ap as a goon…really interesting to see…because she was shown as a very quiet and an understanding laday….post first part soon

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thank you so much Jayanti for commenting. I’ll try to post the first shot asapasap.

  5. Nymisha281

    Awesome Riya….interesting

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Nymisha

  6. its nice yaar continue now a days raglak ff is very less so please don’t stop .

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Yes I know dear and don’t take tension I’ll not stop it in the middle. And thanks for commenting.

  7. Mintu

    Awesome dear..ofcourse continue it

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Yep I’ll continue it and thanks for commenting.

  8. Follybraverl

    Hey hi dear warm welcome ?

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for welcoming me and also for commenting ?.

      1. Follybraverl

        You are Irfan Pathan dear wowwwww I have read your ff when I was new here

    2. Riya_Mitra

      Hey dear I am not Irfan Pathan. Don’t say like this because I don’t have that much good storylines and I am nothing in front of him. I said I used to read his ffs and used to comment. We both are very good friends.

  9. IQRA222

    awesome

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Iqra. And are you a Raglak fan? Because I have seen your comments in Swasan ffs too. Hence asking.

      1. IQRA222

        Please do call me iqu only and yes i am big raglakian no doubt but yes i love swasan too so that is why

    2. OK I’ll call you Iqu from now

  10. Interesting and plz continue. Thanks a lot for Raglak story. Day by day number of Raglak ffs are decreasing. So I want you to continue ur story

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Ammu. But according to me day by day the number of Raglak ffs are increasing. And don’t worry I’ll continue my story and will try to post the first shot soon.

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  11. Asra

    superbbb dear…plz continue….waiting for ur update….tkcr dear….

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Asra di. And I’ll continue my ff and will try to post asap. You also take care.

  12. Superb, continue. I am waiting to see different roles of the characters. ALL THE BEST for the upcoming updates.

    Bye. Take care.

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thank you soooooo much Makku for commenting. I’ll try to post the first shot soon. Bye… And yeah you also take care. And again thanks for your wonderful wishes for my ff.

  13. Oh I forgot to say your cover pic is superb……….. and the words are just AWESOME…………

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks a lot dear.

  14. superb dear

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Ammy

  15. Aanchal

    Awesome dear plz con

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting and I’ll continue don’t worry.

  16. Jnana

    Nice. Waiting to see cruel Annapurna

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Jnana. Will try to post the first shot soon.

  17. Asw

    Interesting keep going

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Asw.

  18. Berdilla

    Awesome dear friend

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks Berdilla for commenting.

  19. Kakali

    Wohooohooo Riaaaaa..!! Good to see you writing.! Finally you registerd..!! How are you and How is Shruthi?
    Well loved it..!! Continue soon..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Kakali di. Yep finally I am a registered member. And we both are just bindaas. And why you always write my name and my sis’s name’s spelling wrongly? You know whenever anybody writes my name’s spelling wrongly it hurts me a lot. It’s RIYA not RIA. And it’s SHRUTI not SHRUTHI. If I’ll write KAKALY instead of KAKALI how would you feel? Next time write the spellings correctly. And again thanks for commenting.

      1. Kakali

        Was the spellings wrong? Ok I Was WRONG Riyaaaa..!!
        I would feel nothing Riyaaaaa..!! You can say whatever you want, my name will not make difference in my personality, That’s all.!
        Say a HILO to SHRUTI..
        And yeah, dun worry about next time, I will make sure that I’M ALWAYS CORRECT ABOUT YOU.!
        Tc my sis.! Sweet dreams.!! ;-*

  20. Riya_Mitra

    Hey Ammu n Nikki don’t think tht nowadays Raglak ffs less. Bcz vthout a proper story no Raglak fans start 2 write. So don’t take tension. They r not lyk Swasan fans ki chalo story ho ya na ho likhna toh start kar de baaki baad mein dekha jayega. They jst want 2 write more n more n more. Btw Riya d intro was aswm. Continue it.

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Sorry guys this comment is not given by me. My sis gave it by mistake. Please don’t think that I want to increase the comments in my ff that’s why I am doing it. Please don’t think in this way.

  21. plz yar continue i love rags

    1. Riya_Mitra

      I’ll continue dear and thanks for commenting. Yeah I too love Ragini.

  22. Amul

    super……… riya
    waiting for ur story and raglak

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Amul.

  23. Interesting… Do Continue…

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting and I’ll continue…

  24. Awesome

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting

  25. Deesh

    My choti sorry queen!!!! So so glad that u too started a ts. And trust me, It is damn interesting. I just loved the characterisation of the leads. It’s just awesome riyu!! Eagerly waiting for the next part. Sorry for the late reply riyu. Rock on riyu!! Good going!! Loads of love to u ???

    1. Riya_Mitra

      My sorry queen!! I am happy that you have commented in my ff. I am sooooo glad to see your reply. And I’ll not say thanks because I know the result. And yeah you are asking sorry and telling that I am sorry queen? You tell me who is the sorry queen you or me?? Anyways I am very for your comment and it makes me smile whenever I see your comment in my ff. Thanks for commenting Deeshu(I am telling seriously). Love you too.

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Malu.

  26. Awesome

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Aleeza

  27. interesting

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting

  28. Superb start dear.

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Gayu

  29. Hello, this was an interesting start. I am having a rough time trying to think of sweet AP as a ‘goon’ ???
    Really looking forward to your story?

    P.S. Is Sahil negative?

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Hi Bela, Thanks a lot for commenting. I’ll try to post the first shot soon. And about Sahil then I have not yet decided about his character dear.

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  30. Sindhura

    Awesome

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thank you so much Sindhura di for commenting.

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting Monu.

  31. Fairy

    Riya tu hai …omggg?????wow wow wow…frst of all thnk god tu registered ho gai???????..wohoo!!!!? Superbbbb storyline dear…issh!!! Ap devi??? by god;!!really interestng…..hehe let’s see how laksh n rags wl meet up n fall in love????m soooo happpy to see u yaar sacchi? waitng eagerly for ur update..keep rockng n stay blessed sweetheart???loatz of love umaaah???????

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Haa hum hi hai. At first tell me how are you? Kitne barso baad humlog baat kar rahe hai haina? And yeah I’ll update the first shot as soon as possible. Love you too my di and thanks a lot for commenting

  32. Pathan

    nice story
    go through it

    i know you are shocked

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting. And yes I am totally shocked after seeing your comment in my ff.

  33. Mahavir

    hey chotiii….!! its really nice to see u writing dear…!! keep it up..!! nd all the best..!! love u :-*

    urs maha di,,

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Hey Mahi di how are you? Thanks a lot for commenting. Love you too.

      1. Mahavir

        i m fine riya how is sruthi nd u..??

    2. Riya_Mitra

      We both are fine. And her name is Shruti di.

  34. Adreen18

    Awesome… continue soon

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting

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