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Home»Fan Fiction»A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA (Shot 1)
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A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA (Shot 1)

Riya_MitraBy Riya_MitraJune 4, 201768 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi guys!! How are you all? Did you all miss me? I think no.. But I missed you all a lot and your sweet comments as well. Thank you sooooooo much for your lovely comments in the prologue. So without wasting any time let’s move to the ff.

Here is the link of the intro:
introduction

Link of the prologue:
Prologue

Recap-Laksh saw Ragini in the airport and got mesmerized by her beauty but she didn’t see him.

The episode starts with Laksh. He is totally awestruck after seeing Ragini.

Laksh-Who is she? Why am I so attracted towards her? Am I in love with her? I need every single info about her.

Laksh calls Sahil and tells him about Ragini.

Sahil-Oho, (in a teasing tone) let’s see who is in love… By the way what’s her name bhai?
Laksh-Her name is Ragini.
Sahil-Last name?
Laksh-Ummm…. Don’t know.

The scene shifts to Ragini’s house. Ragini reaches her house. A servant sees her and screams

Servant(screams)- Ragini Malkin you are here? That too today?

Just then a boy who is about 27 comes and says

Boy-Raagu!!

That boy is Daksh.

Daksh-Raagu weren’t you suppose to come tomorrow?
Ragini-Bhai, so you guys didn’t want me to come?
Daksh-There is nothing like that Raagu, now give me a hug!

Ragini hugs Daksh. After sometime they breaks the hug. Mansi comes from behind and scares Ragini. Daksh secretly takes Mansi to a corner while Ragini is talking to her parents.

Daksh-Mansi as you know…. Can you please help me by not letting Ragini alone? Because you know about my enemies…
Mansi-Bhai no need to say this please…. I’ll not let anyone to come near Ragini.
Daksh-Thanks Mansi.
Mansi-No need to say thanks.

After sometime Ragini is shown in a daycare camp where she is blowing and then telling a story. Then Laksh is shown in his bullet bike and is passing by the camp. Just then he sees Ragini and stops his bullet and then he takes a lot of pictures of her. When Ragini is distributing chocolates Laksh comes there from behind and asks for a chocolate and also asks to be his friend. She agrees. Mansi sees Ragini talking to Laksh and makes an excuse and takes Ragini away from there. Mansi tells her about Laksh…. She tells her that he is Annapurna Devi’s son and also a goon. On the other hand Sahil calls Laksh and asks to meet with him near a bridge. Laksh leaves.

At the bridge
Sahil-Bhai please forget that girl…
Laksh-Why? I’ll slap you then you’ll understand… Now tell me that what info you have gathered about her?
Sahil-She is a famous business man’s daughter. She came from USA. She has really good manners. She hates goons. So please bhai don’t pay a lot of attention towards that girl…
Laksh-But why? At least tell me the reason…
Sahil-Because she hates goons and the most important thing is she is DAKSH’S SISTER.

Laksh is shocked, but then he composes himself.

Laksh-I don’t care. I love her and I am going to marry her.

Saying so he leaves.

Other side Ragini and Mansi are in the bazar and are buying some accessories. Laksh comes from behind and holds Ragini’s hand and drags her close to him. Ragini collides with his chest. Immediately she jerks his hand.

Ragini-What the heck is wrong with you?
Laksh-Why? What happen?
Ragini-Sorry I don’t talk to goons so bye…
Laksh-But I talk to beautiful girls and you are one of them.

Ragini looks at him with disgust

Ragini-What do you want?
Laksh-I want to marry you…

Ragini is shocked.

Ragini-Are you out of your mind? What made you think that I would marry you?
Laksh-So you are rejecting me?
Ragini-Yes..
Laksh-Then just wait and watch baby what happens next.

Seeing Laksh’s determined face Ragini becomes afraid. She runs from there cryingly and comes to her house and goes straight to her room. Everyone notices her that she is crying and runs after her. Ragini closes her room’s door and locks it and starts to cry loudly. Daksh comes there.

Daksh-What happen?
Janki-We don’t know beta. She came cryingly and locks herself in her room.
Daksh-Don’t worry I’ll talk to her.

Everyone leaves because they knows that only Daksh can handle her. Daksh calls Mansi.

Mansi-I am so sorry bhai…
Daksh-Why are you saying sorry? What happen?
Mansi-Bhai… Umm… Errr… Actually Laksh…
Daksh-What that bl**dy rascal did again?

Mansi tells everything to Daksh. Daksh is totally shocked and gets angry.

Mansi-How is Ragini feeling now?
Daksh-I don’t know about her. But you don’t worry I know what to do!

After a while Daksh knocks at Ragini’s room’s door and Ragini opens the door. Ragini hugs Daksh.

Daksh-It’s ok I know everything.

He breaks the hug and now he is fuming in anger and he immediately leaves the place.

On the other hand Laksh comes to his house.

Annapurna-Beta you came, how was your day today?
Laksh-Mom today was the best day in my life. I think I fell in love with an angel. She is so pretty!
Annapurna-What? Did you tell her?
Laksh-Yes, but…

Just then Daksh comes there and holds Laksh’s collar.

Laksh-What the heck is wrong with you?
Annapurna-Get lost inspector!!
Daksh-How dare you mibehaved with my sister?
Laksh-What to do she is sooo beautiful!!

Daksh slaps Laksh. Laksh gets angry and loads his gun just then a girl stands in front of Daksh and Laksh stops. That girl turns out to be Uttara.

Uttara-Bhai what were you going to do? You know that I love Daksh then why?
Annapurna-Uttara, let this bl**dy die beta. He is not perfect for you. I already told you.
Uttara-Mom if he is not perfect for me then Ragini is also not perfect for Laksh bhai because she is Daksh’s sister. If you can accept Laksh bhai’s relation with Ragini then why can’t you accept mine and Daksh’s relation?
Daksh-Uttara this is not a proper time to talk about all these… You move out of the way. I don’t trust this person (points towards Laksh). He can kill you also for his ego.
Laksh-Uttara please you move out of the way.
Uttara-Bhai if you want to kill Daksh then at first you have to kill me..
Laksh-Fine. I guess today is not the day for this kutta (dog) to die.

He drops his gun. While leaving Daksh whispers in Uttara’s ear

Daksh-See you later!

The episode ends on the smiling face of Uttara.

So guys how was the first shot. Do tell me through your comments. If it’s too long then I am sorry. Comment guys… Love you all ??.

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    68 Comments

    1. Asw on June 4, 2017 11:23 pm

      Nice keep going

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:17 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    2. Mansi on June 4, 2017 11:28 pm

      Aww… Daksh came for Uttara..
      And what did laksh do to ragini so that she cried???

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:25 pm

        Laksh had done nothing dear. Ragini was afraid of him as everybody knows that Annapurna Devi and her son are very dangerous and they can do anything. So that’s why she was scared and cried. Anyways thanks for commenting.

    3. IQRA222 on June 4, 2017 11:55 pm

      riyu di!!! off cource i missed you!! how r u now?? everything fine??
      coming to the episode it was fab
      loved it
      ragu and lucky’s meet was full of tashan!! interesting
      waiting for the next part
      take care
      love you

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:31 pm

        I am fine Iqu. What about you? And yes everything is fine now. By the way thanks a lot sissy for commenting. I am too much happy after seeing your comment. You also take care and love you too ??.

      • IQRA222 on June 6, 2017 10:39 pm

        i am all fine too didu!! love you three four five!! he he

    4. tëìtō kUn on June 5, 2017 2:08 am

      Awesome…

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:18 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    5. lovely7 on June 5, 2017 6:31 am

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:19 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    6. Naagin on June 5, 2017 7:28 am

      Love it ????

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:19 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    7. Puni on June 5, 2017 8:07 am

      Superb interesting best please update next episode soon

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:20 pm

        Thanks for commenting and I’ll try to post asap.

    8. Guru on June 5, 2017 8:08 am

      Superb interesting best please update next episode soon

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:21 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    9. aleeza on June 5, 2017 8:08 am

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:29 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    10. amul on June 5, 2017 10:49 am

      awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:32 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    11. avika on June 5, 2017 10:50 am

      superr

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:37 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    12. Rehna on June 5, 2017 11:33 am

      Awesome dear

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:38 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    13. mark@lotha on June 5, 2017 12:16 pm

      awsme sis

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:28 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    14. Megha on June 5, 2017 12:56 pm

      Amazing

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:39 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    15. Bela on June 5, 2017 1:06 pm

      More than Raglak I am loving Uttara and Daksh???

      But a great episode???

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:47 pm

        Hehe that’s really very funny ??. But you have to like our cute and sweet Raglak as this is their ff. Anyways thanks a lot for commenting Bela. You know I am too much happy because the famous writer of TU has commented in my ff. I have read your drabble Ragini’s thoughts. It was amazing dear. But couldn’t comment dear due to my studies. Anyways again thanks for commenting.

      • Bela on June 7, 2017 12:21 pm

        Famous writer of TU? Ye zyaada ho Gaya????

        But thanks a lot for the love and I hope you read my other stories too???

      • Riya_Mitra on June 7, 2017 7:16 pm

        Hume nahi lagta ki yeh zyada ho gaya ??… Anyways I don’t read your other ffs dear as I don’t get time due to my studies so sorry.

      • Bela on June 7, 2017 8:31 pm

        Hahahahaha……same here. I start reading a story and I am hardly able to keep up because I am so irregular on TU. I totally understand. ??

    16. Arjuna on June 5, 2017 1:22 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:48 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    17. Sherin on June 5, 2017 1:30 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:49 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    18. Soumya on June 5, 2017 2:05 pm

      Superb di…post nxt soon

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:27 pm

        Thanks Soumya for commenting and don’t call me di. Again I am telling you as in TU everyone is elder than me except two or three.

    19. Aamy on June 5, 2017 3:52 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:50 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    20. Anju on June 5, 2017 3:52 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:52 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    21. Malu on June 5, 2017 4:21 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:52 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    22. Elizebathlovely on June 5, 2017 4:46 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:54 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    23. Ammu on June 5, 2017 6:51 pm

      Outstanding episode dear and eagerly waiting for Raglak love story. Please post next part ASAP

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:53 pm

        Thanks for commenting dear and I’ll try my level best to post the next part soon.

    24. gayu on June 5, 2017 6:56 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 9:59 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    25. Monisha on June 5, 2017 7:07 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 10:00 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    26. Ashly on June 5, 2017 8:08 pm

      Awesome amazing superb

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 10:01 pm

        Thanks a lot for commenting.

    27. Vennila on June 5, 2017 8:31 pm

      Superb update

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 10:01 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    28. Monu on June 5, 2017 9:16 pm

      Waiting 4 laksh’s plan

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 10:02 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    29. Vini on June 5, 2017 9:24 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 10:02 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    30. Pearly on June 6, 2017 7:21 pm

      Awesome

      • Riya_Mitra on June 6, 2017 10:03 pm

        Thanks for commenting.

    31. SabB on June 6, 2017 9:40 pm

      Auske baad kya hota hai… Aj i just opened it.. Kal bi aese hi dekhna haii… Bdw.. Nyc story.. I lkie it… Super..

      • Riya_Mitra on June 7, 2017 8:38 am

        Thanks for commenting. Hum jitna jaldi ho sake update karne ka koshish karenge.

    32. hemalattha on June 7, 2017 11:32 am

      N

      • Riya_Mitra on June 8, 2017 2:13 pm

        I didn’t understand dear that what you said…

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