A SIMPLE AND CUTE LOVE OF TWO LOVERS-A RAGLAK TS BY RIYA MITRA (prologue)

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Hi guys!!! Sorry for the delay. Actually my net was not working properly. I tried to submit this part for two times but the network was very bad. Anyways the prologue is here. Read it and tell me through your comments.

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A boy is shown driving his car in a high speed. It seems like he is in a hurry. Then after sometime he stops his car in front of an airport and comes out of the car. One boy is standing and waiting for that boy in front of the airport. He is continuously checking his watch.

Boy-Yaar, how much time he will take? I am getting late.

“You will not get late because I am here”. A voice comes from the back of that boy. The boy turns back and gets angry.

Boy-What is this Laksh? (Yes guys the boy is our Laksh) What’s the time? My flight is after 10 mins and you?
Laksh-Relax Rohan. I know I am late but why are you shouting like this? Still you have enough time. So chill!
Rohan-Enough time? Yes for you it is enough time but for me it’s not..
Laksh-Ok ok don’t get angry because you are going far away from me, from your best friend. So talk nicely atleast for some minutes..

Rohan-Ok. So why you got late?
Laksh-Arey for this useless traffic!!
Rohan-Ohkay. Achha sun I am getting late so bye. Take care of yourself.
Laksh-Ya bye yaar. You also take care of yourself. You are going to Australia for your papa’s company that too for the first time so best of luck.
Rohan-Thanks. I should leave now.
Laksh-Ya sure.

Rohan goes inside the airport and turns back and bids bye to Laksh. Laksh also does the same. Then he heads towards his car and remembers something.

Laksh-Oh shit! My car’s keys..

He goes to that place where he and Rohan were talking and finds his car’s keys.

Laksh-Oh here it is..

Then he turns to go towards his car but he stops and turns back. Then his eyes falls on a girl. She is wearing a printing long skirt, a yellow colour top and a red coat over it. She is having her earrings in her ears, light makeup and light colour lipstick. Her hair is left open. On her left hand she is wearing a brown colour bracelet. She is looking extremely beautiful. Laksh can’t take off his eyes from her. She comes outside of the airport and stands beside Laksh.

Girl-Oh god! Where is the driver? It’s too much hot..

Then a man comes and says

Man-Ragini malkin?
Girl-Yes, I am Ragini. (Yes guys she is our diva Ragini) And you are my driver right?
Driver-Yes mam. Come.

He takes her luggages from her and they both leaves the place. Laksh is just looking at the direction where the driver and Ragini are going. After their disappearance he comes back to his senses. He is mesmerized by Ragini’s beauty.

Guys how was prologue? I know it is not looking like a prologue but I thought to give this part as prologue. Pleaseeeeeee drop your comments in the comment box and do tell me how was it? Did you guys like is or not? Many more things are waiting. And again sorry for being late. I’m waiting for your comments…

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50 Comments
  1. Deesh

    Choti sorry queen…. It’s ok. Don’t ask this much sorries. Coming to the prologue, it is damn good riyu. And I just loved the way you described everyone’s characters. Your way of writing is just awesome riyu. Totally in love with this ff. Update soon riyu. Rock on. Love you riyu ???

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thank you sooooo much my sorry queen for commenting. I am sooooo glad. Love you too Deeshu ?

  2. Awesome…

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  3. AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  4. Awesome di

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting and don’t call me di yaar because here most of the people are elder than me. And we all are friends so call me by my name.

  5. Amazing dear

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting dear

  6. Awesome

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting

  7. Berdilla

    Awesome dear friend i loved it

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thank you sooooo much Berdilla for commenting.

  8. Superb dear

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  9. Naagin

    Love it

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  10. Aadya114

    It’s amazing

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  11. IQRA222

    Riyu di it is awesome
    Loved it

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Hey Iqu thanks a lot dear for commenting. And I am happy that I got someone in TU who is younger than me ?.

  12. IME

    Awesome
    Loved it
    Post soon!!

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting dear. And I’ll try to post the next part soon.

  13. Awesome

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks a lot for commenting.

  14. It’s interesting
    Superb dear

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thank you so much dear for commenting

  15. Elizebathlovely

    superb

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting

  16. superb part

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  17. Asw

    Amazing keep going

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  18. Lovely7

    Awesome

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  19. Awesome

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  20. Dharani

    awesome

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting

  21. Interesting prologue dear and eagerly waiting for Raglak meeting. Plz post next part ASAP

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting and yep I’ll try my level best to post the next part.

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting

  22. A.xx

    nice xx

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

  23. Superb dear

    1. Riya_Mitra

      Thanks for commenting.

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