Silent Love (Episode 2)

Those who didn’ read the 1st part here is the link : . Votes r as follows: Raglak and Swasan ==> 24 , Ragsan and Swalak ==> 13.Voting lines r still open. I request readers to keep commenting nd giving suggestions so that i can improve.I will try to give equal impotance to both the pairs.Also i will try to give some importance to parirsh nd uttarya so that nobody become -ve like in the serial(Wink wink πŸ˜‰ )…


Maheshwari Mansion:

A guy is shown sleep on the bed with a smile which indicates he is seeing a beautiful dream.Another guy comes nd tries waking him up.
Guy 2: Lucky get up yaar,we r gettin late.Yes,the guy sleeping is Laksh.Obvio,the other guy is Sanskaar.
Sanskaar: Get up Kumbhkaran.Tu aise nahi manega.He thinks of a way nd smirks.He starts caressing Laksh’s face
Sanskaar(Girl’s voice):Lucky,get up darling,hot breakfast is w8ting for u πŸ˜‰
Laksh(Smiles nd without opening his eyes):U also sleep baby.Saying this he pulls Saanskaar on bed nd tries to kiss him.Sanskaar get shocked nd starts screaming.Laksh wakes up nd he too is shocked.He leaves him nd Sanskaar sits on one corner of the bed nd acts like crying while covering himself with his hands.
Sankaar(acting):Chii Lucky,I never thought u had such bad intensions.Nd that also towards ur own brother.
Laksh:Shut up Sanky.Y did u wake me up soo early.
Sankaar:New college year is starting forgot?
Laksh:Oh haan,today freshers will be coming meaning new girls will be coming to our college,i should look good right.Saying this he goes to the washroom.
Sanskaar: Yeh nahi sudhrega.He remembers something nd becomes teary eyed.He takes out a diary nd write:

“Na jeene ki tammana hai,
Na marne ka iraada,
Kuch bayaan karta har panna hai,
Aur dard deta hai har adhura vaada”

He closes his diary nd goes to get ready.

Maheshwari office:

A girl is looking into a small mirror nd complimenting herself.
Girl:Monica u look hot,aaj toh woh khadoos tujhpe flat hoga :* . She walks backwards nd bumps into a guy who was drinking coffee.Coffee falls on his shirt.
Monica:Sorry Adarsh sir
Adarsh:Wth Monica now i have to change.Go bring Mehta’s file.He goes to his cabin.Afte sometimes Monica comes with the file.She was about to enter but stands there nd peeps inside.Adarsh was changing his shirt nd he was currently shirtless.She was looking at him with lust.
Monica(To herself):Omg he is soo hot.Nd he looks more hot when he is angry.God knows how he got married to that bahenji.He deserves someone like me like Monica.She smirks nd goes into the cabin after he is done changing.
Monica:Sorry for the coffee stain sir.Nd here is the file.
Adarsh:It is good that i had extra clothes.Next time be carefull.U come to office to work not to do fasion.Just then Parineeta enters with tiffin.
Parineeta:U forgot to take ur tiffin.
Adarsh:Arre u should have sent a servant.Anyways my shirt got stained so can u take it to home nd gove to the the servant. Nd yeah u don’t wash i don’t want ur beautiful soft hands to be rough.
Parineeta(Blushes): Aap bhi naa . Monica gets jealous seeing their love.


Swaragini reach the college.Swara is wearing a long red skirt nd black top with matching accessories nd her curly hair is left open.Ragini is wearing white top and shorts with her hair tied in french plait.
Ragini:Shona tu jaa main scooty park karke aati hun.
Swara:Main akele nahi jaungi.
Ragini:Kuch nahi hoga .Anyways evn though we r new in this college we r 2nd year students.So chill πŸ˜‰
Swara: OK While wakling she gets a call from Shekhar nd starts talking .While talking she accidently bumps into Sanskaar nd falls in his arm.The mobile falls from her hand.They both r lost in each other.After sometimes they realise their position nd compose themselves.Sanskaar picks her mobile nd gives it to her.
Swara:It is ok,it’s my fault.Laksh comes over there nd looks at Swara.He is mesmerised.
Laksh:Wow,ek second ke liye mujhe laga ki chaand dhaarti par utar aaya.What is ur name beautiful?
Swara(blushes):Swara Gadodia
Laksh:What a eautiful name.I am Laksh Maheshwari and this in my brother Sanskaar Maheshwari.You can call me Lucky. They both shake hands while Sanskaar is continuously looking at Swara.Ragini comes over there calling Swara.She gets shocked seeing Sanlak.
The screen freezes with shocked expressions of Sanlak and Ragini and confused face of Swara.

Guys i know my ff is not that good,but this is my first attempt nd it is just beginning so give me sometime.Nd i may not be able to upload long episodes as i don’t get much time. Do give votes nd suggestions to improve πŸ™‚


    • Shipra


      Em taking votes nd at present swasan and raglak r getting more votes so in the end these m8 be the pairs πŸ™‚

  1. Aami

    |Registered Member

    good episode….. short but beutiful……. nadkad ragini aur seedhi swara… ?? lyk it…. n gain i wnt swasan n raglak dear ??

  2. Naina

    U have bounded us silent readers to comment so that we nay get our fav pairs :p
    BTW Ragsan

    • Shipra


      Raglak is getting more votes.But pairs won’t be decided for the next few episodes.So u can keep voting till then πŸ™‚

  3. Aanya

    Shipra some people r voting jus changing dere names bt dere logo is same so u shud keep dat check….
    My vote goes to swasan n raglak

  4. Aanya

    Even janya ridhi priya sheetal richa r also same person so while counting u shud chck dis also

  5. Sitaram

    |Registered Member

    i hope you take what your heart thinks but i also hope you will take others heart too with your fff very lovely

  6. bresh

    ND plz keep in mind some people.r cheating by just changing their name and logo is same…plus reveal pair a as soon as possible

  7. little princess

    I would like to see swara n sanskar as pairs….swasan is really adorable couples… Love to see them together… I hope u will make swasan

  8. little princess

    I would like to see swara n sanskar as pairs…swasan is really adorable…love to see them as couples..i hope u will make swasan as pair

  9. amy

    swsan yaar…dey r d pair whch in onscreen….such a heavenly couple….my vote always goes to swasan…thousand times more dan dat….SWASAN IS BEST ALWAYS….

  10. amy

    ofcourse swasan….dey r d best onscreen couple…..such an heavanly couple……my vote always goes to swasan…thousand times more dan dat….SWSAN IS ALWAYS BEST…..
    (i dnt knw whtr it post twice…bcz i didnt see d first one ibwrote so i again post it…pls spare me if it post twice…)
    cmjg to stry it ws nice

  11. Shipra

    First of di….My name is Shipra too.Not real name..But I use Shipra name for commenting & I am in 7 standard… Please tell me any solution di.. Either U will change u r name or I change… BTW The di Story is Awwsome.. My pair goes to one and only Swasan &Raglak…

    • Shipra


      Thank u πŸ™‚
      And it’s ok if u use Shipra name for commenting.Many people have same name.My real name is Shipra so i can’t change.And u don’t have to change. πŸ˜€

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