Silence And Noise Of Love Life- Segment 17 final stroke


One month leap
Now suman is perfectly fine
Shr : Now its time to confess my love to suman
He goes office

At evening
A delivery boy comes with a parcel
Delivery boy: Mam parcel for mrs shr malhotra
Suman: Yes I m give it to me
He gives it to suman and leaves suman goes to her room and opens the parcel
The parcel co tains a beautiful black maxi with sleeves and back covered it also contains a diamond necklace with a note
Hey beautiful I have sent you something which I want you to wear in the evening so get ready I am waiting for you at the farmhouse come soon take care

Suman smiles seeing the note and starts getting ready
She was looking amazing in black maxi with diamond eating and brecelt with a beautiful ring and light make up with bunched hairs
Suman: Y shr ask me to wear this something something??? Hahaha lets see
She drives off towards the farmhouse
She reaches farmhouse it was very dark very very dark she as usual starts shivering and shouts : Shrrrr where r u???
Spot light opens and falls on the pictures she see them it was of suman from the childhood till date shr was also present with her in her marriage and after marriage photos
Suman smiles widely: Soooo sweeet Bt shr where r u???
Guitar strts playing and someone starts singing

Me pyar ton vadd,
Tennu pyaar kara,
Tennu sajda sohne lakh vaar kara,

Je din nu tu kehde raat maahi,
Ve me raat samjh aitbaar kara,

Main tere layi duniya nu chaddeya,
Tere layi door apne karre,
Ve mein tennu kinna chaandiyaan,
Eh gal teri soch toh paree,
Me sahan bin saar han sakdi,
Tere bina pall v na sare,
Ve mein tennu kinna chaandiyaan,
Eh gal teri soch toh paree

Guys it is Punjabi version of soch na sake I like it more
Suman turns to find shr and he was standing in front of her he places guitar aside and comes towards suman Shr: Ek baat kehni tho apse??
Suman smiles: I m listening with full attention
Shr bends down on his knees

Shr: I dnt know when how where and why I loved someone I m a akroo khadrroos still I fell in love with some one and truly madly deeply I m foolishly complete fallen for her I never thought I will love someone like that do you know who is she(??
Suman shakes her head in negative
Shr: It’s non other than my beautiful wife mrs suman Sr nalhotra sumn I really realm love u I will keep u happy always I will never let a tear come in ur eyes will you be mine forever????
Suman: Ammmm noooo
Shr: Why???
Suman: U scold me
Shr: Ok promise I will not scold u
Suman: U dnt take me on shopping
Shr: Promise I will take u whenever u will ask
Suman: R…………
Shr: I pro.ise I will do each and everything
Suman: Ammmmm let me think
Shr: My knees r paining come on answer me
Suman: Oh I m sorry come on get up
Shr: But….
She makes him Stand
Suman: Yes I love u and I will be ur forever because I love u more than u love me
Shr: Well that’s not true
Both laughs and hug each other passionately

Mil Jane de dil Jo bane ek dujhe ke vaaste
Shr: How was the surprise
Suman: It was ammmmaaaazzzzziiiiinnngggg shr should I sing a song for u???
Shr: It will be my honour
Shr goes and bring guitar for her
Suman starts singing
Khuch khas h kuch pass h
Kuch ajnabi ehsas h
Kuch dooriyan nazdeekiyan
Kuch Hans pari tanhaeyan
Kia ye khumar h etabar h
Shayed ye pyar h pyar h shyad
Suman places guitar aside
Shr: Bs…….

Suman nods Shr: Lets eat our dinner he goes and pulls chair for her suman sits shr also sit both starts eating looking into each other eyes suman moves her eyes and says : Dnt stare at me
Shr: My wife my eyes. What’s ur problem
Suman smiles shr still stare at her
Both finish dinner
Shr: Will you dance with me???
Suman: Yeah ofcourse
Tere sang yara…….
Khush rang bahara ……
Shr takes suman ham and starts dancing
Tu raaat Devani
Main zard sitara…….
They start dancing romantically
Ho karm khudaya h
Tjhe mjh se milaya h
Tjh PE mar kr hi to
Mjhe jeena aya
Ohh tere sang yara…….
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat devani
Main zard sitaraaaaa
Song finishes and dance also
Suman: Shr u know what u r the SILENCE. Of my love life
Shr: And u r NOISE. Of my love life
Both smile and together say
And both hug eachother
Scene splits on Sharman happy faces
The end
Hey guys what’s up????
First of all I m very sorry I didn’t commented on ur ff or one shot as I was ill sorry I m ill headache sore throat and burning I bb my eyes I read ur ff Bt can’t comment so sorry
Secondly thank u sooooooo much guys for supporting me till my whole ff u guys r superb
Just because of u I finished my ff happily
U guys r amazing

Thirddly Guys I want my all readers to comment on the last part silent readers also plzzzzzz comment and if someone is angry on me then I m realm very soorrrry
Ohk enogh of my talks
Take care
Love u lots

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  1. WeirdSister

    Hey ufaq…I started reading ur ff…some days back..I mean I read d previous epis also…I fell in love wid it….
    Ur ff was amazing…nd I beautifully u portrayed ur title…
    All d best for ahead…
    Love you
    Take care

    1. Ufaaq

      Hey WS
      Thank u soooooo much for reading it from start it was not of that worth Bt thanks
      Thank u
      Love u too
      Take care

  2. Me a silent reader

    1. Ufaaq

      Ohk thank u sooooo much for commenting u r good reader indeed thank u

  3. Hayo rabba … Kya ending this,…………. Mai to jhabra fan ho gai ….
    Plzzz write one more ………why did u end it so soon …..

    1. Ufaaq

      Yes ending thiss
      Hahaha thanks for being fan
      It was drag too much isliye end
      I will write Bt not bow later on inshallah
      Take care

  4. Ufaaq….
    It was superb…
    A cool and pleasant end….
    And the songs were so romantic…
    When u said the first sng was Punjabi version of such na sake…
    I tried to sing that in that music..I really enjoyed like that????
    Thanks and congrats for this complete ff…?????????????

    1. Ufaaq

      Thank u soooooo much
      It is amazing I think u should hear it in sandy voice
      Thank u soooo much
      Take care

  5. pretty preeti

    Hey ufffffffffiiiii
    Will miss this wonderful ff
    U rockeddd
    Lovely fffff
    YaAr soch. Ws amazing
    I loved it
    What a cute enddd. ???
    U Write marvellously
    I loved it
    Try to write one more
    Take care
    Love uuuuu

    1. Ufaaq

      Heeyyyyyy prrrreeeeetttttyyyyy
      Awww I will miss u guys too
      Thank u soooooo much
      I will try Bt just try ok???
      Love u too
      Take care

  6. Y.balamirra

    shraman ❤
    ur indeed a suberb writer

    1. Ufaaq

      Thank u sooooo much
      Ya Sharman love ❤
      Thanks dear

  7. Ufaaq !!!! Awesome !! Dope extremely awesome ff
    Loved it so much amazing story keep it up .!!!!
    Eagerly waiting for ur next ff??
    Do keep writing

    1. Ufaaq

      Thank u soooooo much

    2. Ufaaq

      Silent reader I guess
      I will try to end ur waiting asap
      Take care

  8. Rukhsar

    Hi ufaaq what happened sweety take care of yourself i hope u get well soon and i also love that punjabi version of soch na sake i am happy that u did well with ur ff actually its not only our support that u r able to complete ur ff it was ur hardwork and thinking that u made such an amazing epi i really really loved it u did justice to ur ff it was really great awesome and let me say it in my language it was super duper hit……. Ok now enough of my bak bak bye for noe and take complete rest dear and get well soon babye take care

    1. Ufaaq

      Hi naina di thori bemar hn thk ho jaon gi jaldi inshallah AP dua karo
      . Ya it is amazing
      Thank u sooooooo much di
      Thank u di
      Love u
      U too take care

      1. Rukhsar

        Ap ko kehny ki zaroorat nahi ha ma zaroor dua karon gi

      2. Ufaaq

        Thank u sooo much naina di
        So sweet of u

  9. ufaq di u are awesome. a huge thanks 4 this wonderful ff. stay blessed and come up wid a new ff soon. hats off to u di

    1. Ufaaq

      Thank u soooo much deo
      A huge welcome
      I will try to come asap
      Hats off to my readers
      Love u guys
      Keep smiling

  10. Marie

    Hey ufaq API…!! How r u..?? Ok ziada baat nai karoon gi bht mushkil se tym mila hai !
    The ep was so amazing fantabulous marvellous wonderful or bht Kuch
    Ye lafz bht kam Hain apki tareef Mai I knw but tym nai hai lekin plzzz plzz do cm with a new ff….!! Plz
    Acha ach by mama again….cmmnt Kia cause ye apka last ep tha it’s mast and zabardast
    God bless u…!!!!
    Love u so much
    Take care by by

    1. Ufaaq

      Hey love
      Now I m fine alhamdolilah how r u???
      Thank u soooooooo much
      I will surely write Bt later on Inshallah
      Thanks for commenting love
      Miss u
      Love u
      Take care

  11. Ariana

    Awwwwwwwwww….Such a romantic epi. Loved it from the core of my heart. It was sooooo sweet. Just like u. Can’t express in words. I have no complains at all from the way u ended it. Yes I’m sad that i’ll miss ur sweet updates but the way u ended it. Brilliant. Wonderful. U took my heart off me. It was an awesome journey together. Pls come back with some sweet shots/ff. I don’t wanna stop getting ur updates. I’ll b waiting for ur next shot. Till then…
    Stay blessed
    take care
    have a wonderful life
    keep kocking
    have fun
    nd….Love u beyond words..
    byee sweetheart

    1. Ufaaq

      Hey Ariana
      Kese ho AP???
      Awwww I m sweet??? Thank u
      Thank u sooooooooo much
      I m glad u liked my ff and epi
      I will write an os asap and will post so dnt worry
      Keep smiling.
      Love u too
      Take care sweety

    2. Ufaaq

      Helloooooo anju how r u???
      Oh Han I m ill Bt plzzzzzz dnt be angry on me u know na I love u
      So plzzzzz dnt be angry
      I wil take cre of myself
      Thank u sooooooo much anju thank u
      Love u too
      Take care
      And will be back soon

  12. Helloooooooooooo…..
    How is my sweety??
    Again ill!!!!! Kya yar y u dont take care of ur self go i,m not talking to u…………
    So now i,ll not talk i,ll write only about epi
    it wassssss out of the world
    haye!!!! The way u use the tittle loved it..,
    and all song were soooo adorable……
    I,m in love with this sharman …such a adorable couple…

    Love u loads take care and come soon with another story 🙂

  13. Beas

    Wonderful episode ! Will be missing this ff very much.

    1. Ufaaq

      Thank u soooo much
      I will also miss my readers love u

    2. Ufaaq

      Thank u soooo much sweeti

  14. very nice you are really great writer, awesom i like your song u can choose good songs

    1. Ufaaq

      Thank u sooooo much sweeti

  15. very nice amezing story awesom i like your song u can choose good songs

    1. Ufaaq

      I m glad u liked my story as well as my songs

  16. Such a lovely episode.
    It was really nice. Loved it ?
    Gonna miss your ff surely.
    You write so amazingly ?
    Do come back with another one soon. Waiting already 😉
    Loads of love. Take care ?
    P.S I am from Pakistan too. I asked you in which city do you live?

    1. Ufaaq

      Hey zainab
      Thank u sooooooo much sweety
      I will miss u guys too
      I will be back soon
      Love u too
      Take care
      And I m from lower Punjab and u???

  17. Hey Uffu
    I kno m super duper late
    M so sorry for that
    Plz maaf kardo Meri Jaan
    Coming to the epi or I should say the whole story
    U made me laugh cry happy romantic all in one ff
    This was awesome..
    M gonna miss it badly
    Hope u will come back with a new one asap…
    Lots of love
    Take care

    1. Ufaaq

      Hey Ana
      It’s ok no worries for being late
      Thank u sooooooo much ana
      I will also miss u guys
      Yup I will solurely be back

      Love u
      Take care

  18. LogaMegan

    Hi ufaq this is Loga and Megan we r silent readers of ur ff sry for commenting late dr
    Coming to ur ff it is amazing we loved it
    Pls come back with another ff
    Love u
    Bye Tc

    1. Ufaaq

      Hi loga and hey Megan
      Hw r u guys???
      Oh silent readers eeeeeeee thank u soooooo much for commenting
      Late …… No worries
      Thank u
      Love u guys
      Take care

  19. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hey ufaq dear !!!!
    So now this ff come to an end .. it was one of the best ffs I hv ever read ????
    Great dear ????
    From the start .. every time I waited for this ff’s parts .. cz ur story is really worth reading .. I enjoyed it from the start till the end .. u hv done a grrrrrrrrreat job ..
    Awwwwesome fantastic awwwwdorable spectaculous tremendous one yar ..
    Don’t hv words .. u r just amazing ..
    Nd soooooooorry sorry for being soo much late ..
    I only commented bcz u wanted everybody to comment here ???
    Stay BLESSED ..
    Take care ..
    Lotzzzz of love???

    1. Ufaaq

      awww fati u dnt know how much i mised u
      where wre u???
      i waited for u
      wl thnk u sooo much for commenting
      love u yar
      take care

      1. Fatimagulesarfraz

        S O R R Y again for being late ..
        Yar my classes hv started nd m a hostelite .. so no phone no internet ..
        That’s y m late ..
        From now on I will only b able to comment on weekends .. ok na ?

  20. Angel20

    For the first time I read it and luckily it was the love confession!! Loved it!!

    1. Ufaaq

      thank u sooooo much maria

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