“ShraMan-PreeKar” a LOVE story E-8

E-8

Hey everyone.. Are you all not happy with the twist? I felt so.. Anyways.. I’m not gonna drag this part a lot.. But new stories to come up… You know na.. Clg life masti.. Hehe

Precap: sumo suggests pushkar how to propose to preeti.. Preevan look at it and think that sumo and pushkar love each other.. Sumo falls in love with shravan. Lovely to propose to shravan

Shravan: sumo, tumne aisa kyu kiya?? Tum jaanti thi …

He had intense pain in his eyes… A tear dropped from his eye…
His eyes showed everything clearly.. Love, pain, betrayel, everything.. (Quite how namik expresses in edkv.. He shows the best expressions of eyes..love u namik)

Sumo comes out

Sumo: kal toh hum jaane wale the na… Tum aaye kyu nahi?
Shravan : sorry..
sumo: its fine…

She gets ready while shravan looks at her.

(Guys, one thing I would show shravan a supportive friend, whereas preeti as a jealous one..)

ShraMan are sitting in their class

Sumo had a dought.. So she asked shravan

Sumo narrated her dought n shravan smiles at her.. He tries to say something but she does not let her say… Shravan holds her.. Sumo! He shouted..

Shravan: this is where you did wrong.. You multiply 7 by 8 not by 9!
Sumo: oh..!!

She solves the sum and gets the answer. She gets happy and hugs shravan.. Shravan goes to hug her back but stops by remembering the proposal..

Sumo feels weird as he had never done this before and breaks the hug.. She smiles and gets back to her work… Shravan smiles faintly but he was in pain..

Sumo (in mind) kya hua shravan? Aisa pehle toh tumne kabhi nahi kiya… Tumhari aankhon mei me dard dekh sakthi hoon.. Par wo dard kis baat ka hai woh nahi jaan pa rahi… Kahin na kahi lagta hai ki meri wajah se…. Par mei nahi janti… Pls aisa mat karo.. Mei tumhe aise nahi dekh sakti.. “I love you” mei janna chahti hu ki kya hua.. Par.. Mujhe lagta hai ki puchke I will disturb you more..

Shravan (in mind) sumo…pushkar… Nahii!! Par I have to be happy.. Afterall, they are my friends… And sumo, mei toh usse pyaar karta hoon.. So I have to be happy for her

Meanwhile,

In canteen..
Shravan-pushkar are already sitting.. Sumo enters

Shravan (mind) ye toh pushkar ke paas baithegi.. Maybe they would tell us about their relationship as well…

But to shravan’s surprise sumo walked right past pushkar n sat beside him..
Shravan “ye kya hua? Anyways its sumo..”
He smiles..

Lovely comes and sits beside pushkar..

Pushkar: preeti kaha hai?
Sumo: pata nahi yaar.. Subah bhi jaldi chali gayi thi.. Kisi se dhang se baat bhi nahi ki…

They get concerned.

Lovely: I know this is not the right time but shravan, I like you

Shravan is shocked and sumo is in tears..

Shravan: whatt??
Sumo: shravan?
Lovely: yes…

Precap: preeti is found on the terrace..

Guys… I was thinking that the misunderstanding would be cleared but the confession not made… Chalega naa??

Plzz comment…

25 comments

  1. Shalini Naicker

    Okay it will be fine if they confess later but please clear the misunderstanding.

    I think when Lovely will Confess to Shravan, Sharavan will ask her abour her and pushkar and then he will get to know that Sumo didn’t love Pushkar.
    Am I right?

  2. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    chlega chlega daudega.. I guess u r too good at ur work.. no need to ask just go on .. n I loved the twist.. mujhe lga tha show me v pushkar ar sumo ki wjh se Shravan jealous hoga but asa hua nai.. anyway finally…???

  3. sona

    ChaLegal..chalega…and did right thing making shravan.. Supportive fend..I liked it..keep it gng on..aur ha..confusion ki jaldi mita show..confession..dher bhi lagey..tho no prblm..☺???

  4. maria

    Of course chalega yr!! πŸ˜€ confession hota rahe ga atleast misunderstandings clear ho gi… πŸ™‚
    u r an amazing n wonderful writer dear πŸ™‚
    Love u!! πŸ™‚
    Post nxt 1 soon πŸ™‚

  5. erika

    nice one
    i was a silent reader of your ff
    but u write so nice that u left no nice for me except of commenting
    u write very good

  6. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    ohhhh i had like that twist very much…. And epi wa really nyc sharvan,s pain πŸ™
    yup chalega that will be good..,.,,

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