“ShraMan-PreeKar” a LOVE story E-29 |[Last Episode]

Heyy.. Thank you for appreciating the episodes so much.. And here’s the last episode…. This is the last episode.. I know it was supposed to be 30 but then koi matlab nahi tha.. So here goes the last episode…

Rahul-C’mon answer me.. Do you love me?
Suman nods in no, as tears flow out of beautiful, yet sad eyes..
Rahul- you love Shravan?

Suman silently nodded and left the place crying.. As she was wearing a lehenga and heels, she ran off lifting her lehenga gracefully , removing the heels and holding them in her hand.. (Kinda cindrella scene.. Imagine na, red background and a girl running gracefully in grey lehenga)

She rran of to her room, cried all night..
Shravan came in..

Shravan looks at her, her face dug inside the gap between her legs and chest, and her hands wrapped around the legs.. She was sitting down her back supported by the bed side..

He sat beside her, she knew it was him.. She did not move, or say anything.. He was confused.. What is he supposed to say? To ask her did she love him? Or to apologize for being an a*s? He did not know what to do..
Numerous questions came on his mind.. Should he ask her what the R stood for? Should he apologize? Should he confess? What was he supposed to do?

Nothing could he do or say, he just got up and sat in front of her, his legs crossed and hugged her tight..

It was awkward for both of them, but they hugged anyways, as their position was weird, though comforting..

He could feel her tears being absorbed in his shirt..

Shravan- Suman..

He did not have the courage to say ‘Sumo’ right now, definitely not after what he had done..

She pulled herself off.. He finally saw her face.. Her kaajal all smudged near her eyes, tears flowing continuously and sadness in her lips..

Shravan- I’m sorry..
Suman- why would you do that? I mean seriously, why would you?
Shravan- Sumo, I misunderstood… Please…
Suman-(wiping her tears) how could you even misunderstand? How did you reach that conclusion anyways..??
Shravan- I saw you and Pushkar talking..

(He shares his flashback)

Suman laughed..

Suman-Shravann..
Shravan is confused..
Shravan- I don’t understand.. You said you love Pushkar, and he came to conclusion that you hate him??
Suman- we were playing truth and dare..
He gave me a dare to say things that were totally opposite..
So,
I hate shravan and his locket- I love shravan and his locket
I love pushkar- I hate pushkar

Shravan laughed and cried at the same time..

Shravan- how could I ?
Suman- so I guess you heard the half thing and disappeared…
Shravan nodded
Suman- Shravannnnn!

She hugged him tight, this time, sitting on her knees..

He sat up his knees and hugged her back…
They stood there was several minutes, unless they broke the hug by clapping of PreeKar.. All 4 hugged each other..

-Next Morning-

Shravan- GoodBye Rahul !
Suman- I guess I might miss you..
Pushkar- Buh Bye!
Preeti- goodbye my ex-fiance..
All 4- BYEE !!
They wave their hands as Manju pushes Rahul inside the train, and warns him, not to show his face to Suman ever again..

Suman- wait up..

She runs to Rahul, and everyone follows..

Rahul gets happy.. Suman goes close to him, then steps back.. She rubs her hand and then slaps Rahul as hard as she could..

Suman- Pushkar, promise pura ho gaya!

All laugh as Rahul’s train departures..

-Few years later-

‘Oh c’mon.. Kuch toh karo.. It’s our anniversary..’ said Suman..

‘I have job.. Goodbye’ Shravan says and leaves..

At night

Suman gets a text from Pushkar to meet at xyz place

Preeti goes, and looks at the decoration, then jumps up PreeKar and KhuRuv..

‘Surprise !! ‘

Shravan- Happy 2nd Marriage Anniversary
Suman hugs him happily, KhuRuv and PreeKar jump in the hug to..

And it ends here…

So how was the ff guys? Thank you so much for reading it, and most importantly commenting in it.. The episode might have been boring at times, or I might have been quite late in posting the episodes, but your comments have never gotten less.. And that’s something that makes me extremely happy.. !!

Thank you to Ariu Di, Mario di, Fatimah di, Sona, Neeti (leeti too) , sona, meri preettyy preeti, zainab, Shraman’s angel, Niya di, Erica, Kaya, khushi di, angel di, Laddoo, lily, rukhsar, Nandu, ruchi di, balamirra,joe di,and each and every silent reader..

Silent readers, do make this episode special and post comment

Love uh guys loads and loads.. And now listen, about a new ff, I’m not sure, but surely I have few Two-Shots coming up.. Okay? So I’ll be here.. Love you all!

Do tell your reviews
Nikita!

25 comments

  1. Rukhsar

    |Registered Member

    Wow niki finally sab thk ho hi gaya hamary shraman and preekar k beech ha i m happy that everything is fine now but i m sad too bcz ur ff ended waise hi ap itna kam post karti ho aur upar se yr ff b khatam ho gaya ha to…….ap hamy bhool to nahi jao gi na plz. Ap hamy chor k mat jana

    • Nikita

      |Author

      I know Ru, san theek ho gaya..
      Aww. don’t be sad naa….
      Sorry..!!
      Nahi… na hi mei bhulungi, nahi mei chod ke jaungi,
      I’m gonna be here.. chill baba

  2. Rukhsar

    |Registered Member

    Suman ne jab rahul ko slap kiya to wo scene best tha aur funny b jus tarah se sumo rahul k pass gai bhag k aur phir thaassshhhhhhh 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

  3. Zainab

    Aww this was super cute. 😍
    Loved it soooooo much 💜
    Gonna miss your ff a lot.
    Loads of love. Take care 😘

  4. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    OMG OMG OMG !!!!! Nikita !!!! This ep or should I say this whole ff was just .. just something awwwwesome awwwwdorable fantabulous fantastic spectaculous amazing fab nd alll the awesome waly compliments 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😊😊😊😊😘😘😘😘👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
    U r just amazinggggg writer .. I mean u r born to be a writer .. grrrrrrrrreat job girl😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 keep it up … up nd uppppp👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
    Stay blessed always ..
    God bless you ..
    Take care ..
    Nd upload ur next writings veryyyyy sooooooon ..
    Till then good bye .
    Lotzzzz of love 😍😍😘😘😘

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you so much..!!
      Thank you yaar.. means a lot di..
      Thank you for calling me an amazingg writer..
      Born to be one? woh pata nahi..
      Thank you so so much..
      I would for sure!
      Love you too!
      -Nikita

  5. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Before 1st start…take an imaginary warm hug from me…for including the Rahul’s slap part. 2ndly, take another imaginary hug, for Suman’s awesome rejection to Rahul
    Now let me start……The epi was….beyond words…I can’t explain how much I loved it. See not much of complementation. I loved every bit of ur ff. Though I joined lately nd rushed through the whole ff to cope up, nut I don’t regret a tiny bit of wht I did. Ur ff is worth reading.
    Now that u’ve ended this ff, I’m waiting for a new one. Come with more stories soon coz uk how ur ffs/shots make me smile. I need a sugar bomb on my life nd ur ff words enough. I’m waiting….
    Till then Take care nd remember I love u……
    Take more huggies nd kissies
    -Ariana

    • Nikita

      |Author

      *Hugs Aru di back tightly* oh thank you di so much…Hehe.. okay.. another hug..
      Thank you so much..
      awwwwwwwwww diii……..
      <3333
      i know, but it never felt like you joined late, you remembered, and thought this ff was worth reading, so you scanned through the episodes, that's big deal to me..
      I would come back soon promise !!
      🙂
      Keep waiting.. 🙂
      I'll be here soon..
      Love you to!!
      Huggss and Kisses to you too!!
      -nikita

  6. sona

    Congratulations..dear..
    For completing an ff…👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
    We all will b there support u all the time…
    This ff will b one of the memorable ff..😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Thank you
    Lots of love
    Sona😊😊😍

  7. Neeti

    ah firse sad ho gayi last epi naiii
    di bathroom me gana gati ho aur aunty kuch nai kehti hahahaha
    ab ye mat bolna ki ap Varun Dhawan ko mera jija banane wali ho hahahahahahaha
    my Sumo was crying so badly…..emotional and lovely….
    Meet u agle saal- Neeti

    • Nikita

      |Author

      aww meri neeti..sorry..
      Nahi, aunty ko pata nahi chalta naa,
      nai yaar, filhaal toh, jiju nahi banenge… he’s too big.. par thik hai na..
      Yep, Sumo’s emotional na..Sorry not Sumo, Suman… Sumo toh apni mahaan hai..
      Agle saal?
      Kyu??
      -Nikita *_*

  8. angel_pari

    loved it……nikki finally a happy end love it sooo muchhhhhhh

    sorry i cant cmnt long in a bit hurry

    but i read ur two shots what a amazing skill cutiee superb….

    And sorry to all as i didnt cmnt in any ff but just now i read all.,,and as always all were mindblowing 🙂 🙂

    Sorry

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you so much pari di..!!
      It’s okay, you read it, that’s enough for me..
      Aww, thank you so much..
      Okay di, surely would convey your message..
      Love you di loads !!
      come back soon!
      -Nikita ^_^

  9. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Nik
    hwz u dear?
    Amazing epi…
    bechara Rahul he was happy but sumo ne to uski chop krdi … Hahaha
    Shraman <3
    Loved it…
    So when will u write ur nxt ff on shraman…?
    take care…
    Love u!! 🙂
    Ruchi … 😀

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Hey ruchi di..
      I’m perfectly awesome! What about you?

      Haan, Sumo hai hi aisi..:p
      Thank you so much..
      Well not an ff anymore, but a 5-shot coming up.. Its named ‘Mujhe fraandship karoge?’ It will be up soon, intro already posted..
      Love you too!
      Nikita ^_^

  10. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Nikku!
    Perfect ending sisso!
    I so loved it!
    And ya…do come up with another story.
    And and and…my fav part in the whole ff, mind u, whole ff, was the slap which Suman gave to Ragul😜😂
    He deserved it…chhachhundar kahin ka…
    Chalo emotional tym hai…last epi….bye sweetie…love u…take care…

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Aww, thank you so much yar..
      Thank you !!

      Up with new story, well already posted the intro, to a 5-shot

      I know yaar.. My fav too..
      Wahi toh..
      Yep.. Love you loads.. Bae <33
      -Nikita

  11. Deotima

    niki last epi kamal ka tha!!! rahul ko sirf thappar !!! sumo should have beat him blue and black !!! love u nikki . when will u begin wid ur next ff ?? stay blest !!

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you so much.. Extremely sorry, I forgot your name in that list..
      Thank you..
      Haan, but Rahul ki train thi na, toh woh usko marti toh uski train choot jati..hehe…
      Love you too..
      And the next ff won’t be there, but I’ll be writing 1 or 2 shots..
      Thank you!
      Love ya!
      Nikita *_*

  12. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    ohhh nikko di i don’t liked it
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    infact i loved it this was something aww adorable rapchik out of the world stupendous fabulous ending my dear nikko di thnxxxxxxxxxxx for such amazing ff! nikko di now want a new ff from you jaldi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz and yup varun is only mine we are made for each other okay don’t u snatch my vd from me lol just kidding but i love everything about him i am just too crazy about him…! okay now how r u nikko di?? bye take care love ya nikko di<3333

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Ohh..!! Thank you so much…..
      aww… That’s so sweet sriyu !!
      Thank you..
      well naya ff ka pta nahi, but few shots ff coming upp..
      I love varun too..
      okay baba, we’ll share.
      me too, big fan <33
      i'm good,.. how are you?
      Love you too!!
      -Nikita

  13. pretty preeti

    Nikkkko yaar Teri ff ki bhut jaad aqyegi
    Maine ek ek epi padha itna aacha
    I loved ur fc a lot
    I m really sad bu t really happy reading ur chapter
    Air lambhi kr deti na
    Yar fab start and fab end
    IG was marvellous
    Love u

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