“ShraMan-PreeKar” a LOVE story E-28

E-28

Heyo !!
I’m back..

Precap: sangeet..

Few days later,

-KhuRuv’s marriage-

Sumo- jaldi karo !! Arre ye flowers waha hone chahiye !! Uff ye log bhhi na !!
Pushkar: ab kya hua Sumo?
Sumo: ye log kuch nahi kar paenge.. sab mujhe hi karna padega !
Pushkar: I’ll help you..

Rahul looks at thiss n gets jealous..

Rahul: pushkar, woh preeti tujhe bula rahi thi..
Pushkar: Preeti? Okay..
Sumo: arree.. Ab meri help kaun karega..
Rahul: mai hoon na.. Batao kya karna hai?
Sumo: okay, first hand me those flowers..

Suman keeps instructing him, he follows she does the work.. Shravan looks at this in jealousy…

Preeti: wow Sumo! Ye sab toh bohot pretty hai ! Lovely !!
Pushkar: haann yaar.. Tu toh sach mei “The Sumo” nikli..
Suman blushes..
Pushkar: ayye!! Gaal laal ho gaye mam ke
Sumo: shut up!
She beats him
Preeti: mere pati dev ko mat maroo!
Pushkar: pati dev? Isse kya ho gaya?
Sumo: pati dev, accha beta, mei batati hu..
Preeti runs and Suman chases her..
Shravan’s finally happy to see her smiling after the incident, and is glad that Rahul is not there..

‘Par rahul sangeet ke time kaha tha?’ Wonders Shravan..

Pushkar: waise Sumo, woh R kiske upar hai?
Sumo: woh, its my nanu’s name.. He’s the one who has supported me after my mom n dad’s death.. ‘Raghuvath Tiwari’
(Marie di, you were close enough)

Pushkar: oo.. Mujhe laga shayad Rah..
Sumo: sochna bhi mat, bolna bhi mat!!
Pushkar: okay !!
Sumo smiles..

-Wedding-

Everyone’s ready and uptight !!

Rahul’s again missing..

Shravan, Pushkar are sitting in the mandap beside Dhruv, and are all happy and smiling..

Voice from the crowd ‘Suman ne kitna accha sajaya hai na sab kuch?’

Pushkar: dost kiski hai aakhir.. Haina shravan?
Shravan nods hesitantly..
Pushkar hits his head..

Pandit: Dulhan ko bulaiye..
Pushkar txts Preeti, ‘Showtime’

Preeti and Suman bring down Khushi..
Dhruv , Pushkar , Shravan are mesmerized to see their ladies..

Khushi gracefully sits near Dhruv, and the marriage rituals start..

Pandit: ab var-vadhu phero ke liye khade ho jaiye

KhuRuv stand and take rounds..
With each round, PreeKar say ‘Qubool hai’ and ShraMan keep looking at each other.. The EDKV title track plays in bg..

‘Kyu kar rahe ho aisa?’ Suman thinks..
‘Kya karu? Tumne hi aisa kaha tha’ Shravan thinks..
‘Maine kab kaha aisa? Tum hi soch rahe the’ Suman thinks..

‘Vivaah sampann hua’

KhuRuv get up and touch their parent’s feet..
They hug PreeKar and ShraMan and leave in a car.. PreeMan are in tears..

‘Kabhi bhi apni vadhu ko dukh mat pohochana’ Pushkar remembers this promise from the wedding and offers Preeti his handkerchief.. Shravan wanted to do the same, but he couldn’t.. But when he took the initiative to do it, Rahul offered Suman his handkerchief..

Suman does not use it, and wipe her tears with her fingers.. She smiles..

Sumo: tum the kaha..??
Rahul: mere saath chalo..
Sumo: kaha?
Rahul: chalo to !!
He drags her hand and leaves..
Preekar and Shravan get worried..

They follow in car..

Rahul takes Sumo to a hall, where there are balloons everywhere.. PreeKar and Shravan peek through the open windown..

Rahul drags her in, places her in the centre, sits on his knees and says

‘ I LOVE YOU MISS SUMAN TIWARI.. WILL YOU BE MY WIFE ‘

Shravan gets a Flash Back of PushMan

Pushkar: start
Suman: I love Rahul, I hate Shravan, I hate Preeti, I love you, I hate the locket that Shravan gave me..
Pushkar: haww you hate me??
Suman: nai baba.. I love youu

-End of flashback-

———–

-No Precap-

Kaisa tha?? Enjoyed ?? Anyways..I gotto go, wrote this in a hurry, so avoid the mistakes..
Okayy byee
Why did Suman say that??
(Hint: Shravan here is like Shravan in the show, listens to half things, misunderstands, never takes the initiative to know the whole thing, bursts out his anger on Suman of HALF heard things)

25 comments

  1. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Hey Nikku.
    Down with fever, that I am. Couldn’t commentbon prev epi. Sorry. Marvellously written. U r a genius. Loved it. Love u.

  2. Marie

    |Registered Member

    It was so so……nah I didn’t liked it……
    Agar koi Asia bike toh Mai toh ski maan hi nikal loon…..!!! Bt I knw koi bloke dikha I Zara hahahaha
    I loved it…dear….!!!! The best ever n amazing ep…!!! Awww shadi…!!! Wow…!! Khruv hi sai rage shadi kar ek nikal liay……ek hamate shraman Hain larne se fursat nai..
    Ufff shr ok phir ghalat faimi ho gai…!!!!! Hahahaha Mai Kareeb Kareeb thi yay…!!!!!!!!
    Yr bht bht bht acha ep tha…..!!!!! N ye shr kabhi bhi Mai sudhre ga bheeeee phir sahi harkaten aadhi baat suni n Chaka Gaya….!!!!
    I think Jo flashback dekhaya tha maybe wo ye oh ke push ne Sumo se kaha ke…Rahul Preeti ke pee he hai toh tu much kar….!!! Or ye un ka plan ho preeker ke beech ki haddi yank Rahul ko nikal ne ki…..n jab sumo ne kaha oh ke I hate push n he asked haws u hate me..?? Or Usenet kaha ek I love u..,toh as a frnd kaha hoga na…..or shr bhaag Gaya adhi baat sun kar as usual……maybe that’s all a wild guess…….
    Hahaha anyways….!!! Post ASAP ASAP ASAP se bhi jaldi kyun ke precap nai dia…!
    Love u itna itna ke koi soch na sake …..!!!!!!!!!!
    By by
    Take care my dear

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Aww.. Get well soon.. No problem..
      Thank you so much !!
      Wai toh.. Ye shravan ko toh fursat hi nai hai.. Gadha kahi kaa… Aadhi bat sunkar nikal jata hai.. And shraMan ki shaadi ho jaegi.. Tension na lo aap..thank you for the wonderful answer.. Ap dekhenge kya hota hai!
      Love you too dii!!!
      -Nikkkoo

      • Nikita

        |Author

        Oyy di.. Woh TU babu ne laddoo ka reply aur ye mix kar dia.. And aap tension na lo.. Agar koi mujhe bolega ki ep bakwaas hai, toh aap toh ho hi na!!

  3. pretty preeti

    Nikko mai kya kaho itna aacha mera toh dil garden garden ho gya I liked it very much
    Post next part soon
    Yaar ff ki jaad aayegi
    Itni aachi ff ko na bhola paungi
    Sumo might said that so that shravo don’t get angry or misunderstand something
    Why no precap
    Hate u
    But love u
    Take care
    Byeee
    Post fast

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Meri preettyy preeti !! Chill babu..
      Thank yu so much..
      Chalo meine kuch toh aisa kiya jiski yaad aaye..
      Bhhulna bhi matt..!!
      Thanks for ur answer..
      Aww sorry..
      Love you too loads n loads
      Nikkita

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Aww thank you so much pari di..
      Samajh aa jaega, if you read more..
      Finally R reveal ho gaya hehe..
      Thank you !!
      Love you so much!
      Nikki

  4. Zainab

    What an episode 👏 Loved it.
    Post soon. Way too much curious to read the next episode.
    You’re an amazing writer 😘

  5. sona

    Nice episode..
    Didn’t get wts this flash back??😐😐
    Y no precap..😧😧😛😛😜😜😉😉😂😂😂
    Its OK..😊😊

  6. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Someone give me some veerta award. I was so brave after all. I fought with death! I missed the line where u say Shravan has a flashback nd thought Suman replied to Rahul tht she loves him. I nearly skipped a beat nd was gonna die fo sure.
    KK fine I’m trying to get over the jhatka now. Sooooo lets come to the epi……
    Brilliant….just like u…Girl ur story is sooooooo gd tht I can’t actually say something. I feel like my words r too low in front of it. Just take all the amount of sugar from bday cake nd imagine those r my words to describe the epi.
    Love u sooooo much
    Stay blessed honey

    • Nikita

      |Author

      Here’s an awards given to Ariana, for her excellent bravery !!
      *Applause*
      —–
      haha di!! Thank you so much..
      Not get over the jhatka, kyuki *Spoilers* next episode mei ek aur jhatka lagega..
      Thank you thank you so much!!
      Those really big for this !! But it’s very much appreciated by me! No, I won’t do that.. I won’t take the sugar, I’ll pick up the whole cake..hehe :p
      Love you loads di..!!
      -Nikita

  7. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    sry forgive dis Leeti….
    hahahahahhaha itna blush mat kar Sumo warna sirf gal nahi pura chehra lal ho jaye ga hahahahaha…..
    Pati dev hahahahahah….
    bt why Sumo said she hates Shravu…maine bhi adha suna kiuki apne adha bola….pura batado na….
    pst soon meri Nikki di….
    luv u – Neeti

    • Nikita

      |Author

      I forgive you Leeti.. Just like always !! I cannot be mad at you! You’re my small sissy..
      Thank you… Agar Suman abhi itna sharmaegi, to jab Shravan confess karega, toh kya hoga?
      Well, she said that because———–___
      Episode padhna padega tujhe!
      I uld!
      Love you too
      -Nikki di

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