“ShraMan-PreeKar” a LOVE story E-22

E-22

So ….. Glad to know you were excited to read it… Sorry for the delay, but TU had problems with this.. Anyways.. Now each episode will be posted daily, as only 3-4 ep’s left and I have written all….

Precap: shravan come to preeti’s house..plan shown of shraman to send away rahul. Rahul dancing with Sumo..

So , Rahul’s trying to dance with Sumo… But she’s uncomfortable…

Shravan keeps looking angrily at Sumo, who is very upset ….

A tear drops from Sumo’s eye.. That makes Shravan hell angry…
Now Rahul sees this, and touches her cheek and removes the tear…. This was enough for Shravan

Shravan: enough….

He goes to Sumo, removes her hand from Rahul’s shoulder, holds it tight, which gives Sumo a relaxation… He pulls her hand which makes her bang on his chest… Rahul steps back

Shravan dances with her… Sumo’s sadness turns into absolute JOY… Shravan feels a relaxation, to have her near him… After months…

Sumo: tt…thank you
Shravan nods in NO….
Sumo smiles…

They dance on Tere Sang Yaara Khush Rang Bahaara…

Shravan lifts Sumo up… And swings her around… He twists her and then pulls her close….

Preeti: matlab Shravan bhi…..
Pushkar: matlab Sumo bhi??
Preeti: tu janta tha??
Pushkar: haan… Tu bhi?

Preeti nods

Pushkar: in dono ko saath toh lana padega…

PreeKar dance for sometime, and then step back, as the spotlight falls on ShraMan…

They dance very well, and are lost in each other’s eyes..

Shravan twirls Sumo and bends her down…

He lifts her up gracefully.. They are smiling, and have a glow in their face, and such intense eyelock…..

They were very happy…

Everyone clap and hoot which breaks their eyelock…

ShraMan: thank you…

Other guests come and compliment them, which makes Rahul hell jealous…

Rahul: you must have performed before naa?? That you guys danced so well…
Preeti: nahi nahi.. Inki chemistry bhi waisi hai….
Pushkar: their friendship is very intense.. Tu nahi samjhega.. Kai baar, baatein kehke nahi, dekhke hi samajh aati hai.. Tujhe nahi aayi kya??
Rahul: matlab
Sumo: matlab ye kuch bhi bolta hai…
Shravan: yaar, mujhe toh bohot bhuk lagi hai…

PreeKar hi-fi

Pushkar: bas aise hi chalte rahega..
Preeti: aur thode dino mei 2 couples ki shaadi ho jaaaegi..
Pushkar: kaun 2?
Preeti: shravan-sumo and me and…
Pushkar: and..
Preeti: woh toh tere upar hai
Pushkar: tu pushkar nahi keh sakti.? Don’t you trust me?
Preeti: I don’t know

They sit down on the table… Everyone is confused on what to order…

Preeti: Rahul, tum yaha bohot baar aaye ho.. Tum hi batao yaha pe kya accha hai..
Rahul: Mushroom sizzler?
Sumo: umm no…. Shravan is allergic to Mushrooms…
Rahul: tumhe kaise pata??
Pushkar: They know each other more than they know themselves..
ShraMan smile..
Rahul: tum dono sirf 2 din pehle hi mile ho..
Sumo: kya baat kar rhe ho? We know each other since past 5 years…
Rahul: what?
Shravan: yea,we were college roommates.. Me, sumo, pushkar , preeti, khushi , Dhruv…..
Sumo: college roommates
Shravan: we all were very great friends…. And me and sumo toh were best friiends..
Sumo (murmures) and maybe something more..

Rahul hears this and gets jealous…
Rahul: best friends? Just like PreeKar
Pushkar was drinking water.. He spit it out..
Preeti: yep.. We were just best friends..

They eat food… And head towards the gate…
preeti: mei pushkar ke saath chali jaungi..
PreeKar leave in a car….
Rahul: chalo Sumo….
Shravan: Suman… Suman naam hai uska
Rahul: okay…
Shravan: yaar… Hum Delhi mei hai…
Sumo: happy realization Shravan…
Shravan: mangode??

Sumo: what…its 12?
Rahul: haan toh?
Sumo: shravan… College ke paas wale mangode!!
Rahul: what?
Shravan: yess… Wahi keh raha hu waha ke mangode bohot famous hai.. Woh abhi 12 baje hi aata hai.. Chaloo
Rahul : nahi nahi..
Sumo: mei jaa rahi.. Tumhe nahi aana, mat aoo.. Chal Shravan…
Rahul: accha ruk.. I’ll come..

Shravan walks further and opens the passenger seat…

Rahul: sumo ko nahi pasand koi bhi uske liye door khole
Sumo: Shravan is different..
She happily sits down and Shravan closes the door..

Shravan: I’ll drive…

Shravan sits in the front and Rahul sits at the back…

Sumo: PreeKar ko bhi bula le?
Rahul: PreeKar?
Shravan: haan, wo hum dono preeti – pushkar ko PreeKar bulate hai
Rahul: okay..

Sumo opens her bag and is searching her phone… She can’t find it.. While searching, she keeps her hand on the gear.. Shravan had to change the gear, so he just keeps his hand on Sumo’s and changes the gear… Rahul sees this…
Sumo looks at him…

Sumo: nahi mil raha mera phone…
Shravan hands over his phone..

Rahul: password toh bata de bhai..
Shravan: woh guess kar legi..

Sumo: let’s see….

She types “JamesBond” and it was correct…
Rahul: kya hai password iska??
Sumo: arre? Mei kyu batau?
Sumo invites PreeKar….

Pushkar: challo bhai, mangode khane
Preeti: tum mujhse gussa ho kya?
Pushkar: nai nai.. Infact, I’m glad that you’re getting married to Rahul..ab ek banda apne best friend ke liye toh khush hoga naa
Preeti: c’mon yar..wo nahi janta
Pushkar: yea right…

Precap: Goa..(Kyu, kaise , kaha? Sochte raho)

How was it now? Zyada toh nahi ho gya?? I know bohot saare scenes ho gaye.. Anyways, ShraMan scenes bhi zyada ho gaye kya??
And are you happy with this track, I mean 2 people are jealous because of Rahul.. And Rahul’s jealous of Shravan.. So are you happy or not?

26 comments

  1. Laddoo

    Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    I won’t give u a standing ovation today. I’ll just bow down before u and give u a bone crushing hug….
    I love u so much Nikku….jus stay happy and stay blessed.

    • Nikita

      Nikita

      |Author

      Oh my God.. This is the best compliment I’ve received till now.. Thank you so much.. I’m crying… But yea, don’t crush my fingers during the hug, otherwise I won’t be able to write then.. Thank you so much!!

  2. Sumo

    Sumo

    |Registered Member

    wats mangode? I don’t know dat?
    d ep was amazinggg nikster ! ( dat will be ur name from my side)
    n loved it completely I mean ” Shravan is different” 😍😍😍😘😘😘

    • Nikita

      Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you so much sumo di.. Well mangode is like umm.. Some dal’s fried in besan.. Kind of Pakode… Well, consider it a snack, which is fried and then served hot.. “Shravan IS different”

  3. Marie

    Marie

    |Registered Member

    Hello ji…!!! My pyaari pyari nikki….!!
    Yr d ep WS toooo gud…!! I loved it to d core…!! N I always love jrpealously track in ur ff…cause it’s awesome..! Well wat to say yr u r n amzingggggg writer my dear….shraman scenes were too good…..!!! I WS imagining it…. <3
    Plz plz plz post nxt prt ASAP ASAP ASAP …
    Btw when u gonna post nxt 1…??
    Plzz jaldi Karna….
    Ok take care…!!!!
    love u sooooooo much se Bhi ziada..! 😀

    • Nikita

      Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you so much marie di..!!
      Glad to know that you liked the jealousy track..
      next episode, 6th tak aaega…. 🙂
      love you too..!

  4. Neeti

    Neeti

    |Registered Member

    I can just say i love you Nikki di. Dont end it, everyone is ending ffs.
    And can i call you Nikku di, mar na mat pls.
    Epi was too good.
    RaMan (Rahul and Suman) ko dekh kar Shravan gaya jal,
    Shravan ko Sumo ke nazdik dekh kar hua Rahul ka bura hal. Wah wah, wah wah.
    Love from- Neeti

    • Nikita

      Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you meri pyaari bhenaa!!
      Well, im sorry to say, but this ff will also end, at the 25th episode..SORRY.. but don’t worry, im coming back with a new ff….
      Thank you for liking the jealousy track….
      love you too!

  5. sona

    Haha…this rahul was just like adhi as in serial..
    Par amazing ye hai..ye aaya…preekar ki luv story ka khanta bankey..
    Aur bana cupid shraman k😂😂☺☺😊😊
    Nice one☺

    • Nikita

      Nikita

      |Author

      Yep.. It’s kind of like that.. But here he’s a cupid as well as a negative character.. But yaha pe jaisa ho raha hai hone do.. Thank you for the wonderful comment..

  6. Anonymous

    I just love your ff 👍 And this episode was aah-mazing 😉 Loved it a lot. And please post soon, waiting anxiously 😃

    • Nikita

      Nikita

      |Author

      Thank you.. you’re a silent reader i guess, cause have not received much comments from you.. keep commenting now..!! Thanxx

  7. Nandini aka Nandu

    Too good nikki. Even i just love mangode. Do you??
    Well, the episode was amazing and yes u ofcourse standed on our exprctations. Great job dear! Keep writing. Lots of love. I am just loving this track. Its just too gud. Love u. Post soon. Know ki u will post on 6 but these tu waale take a lot of time to upload. So keep posting.
    ;);):)

  8. Sharmansangel

    Sharmansangel

    |Registered Member

    Hey Niki di what was this no you tell me what was this I didn’t expect this from u arre mazak tha Bhai mazak 😋😋😋 bahut acha tha bahut bahut bahut acha just waiting for the next one please please please post asap
    Lots of love💞💞💞
    Riya

  9. Prettypreeti

    Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Niki loved it
    I m very glad to read two parts in one day
    Superb Nikita g
    Superb
    Nice password
    Loved ur ff
    James bond
    Keep writing
    Post next sooon
    Loved it

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