Shraman ff (INTRO) :)

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Hey guys this is my first ff on shraman … Earlier i wrote an ff on Twinj (Tei)…
This is small intro of characters…

Suman Tiwari- She is a bit shy girl… Frank only wid her good frnd or wid people who she find descent… Lost her parents in a car accident when she was 11. Lives wid her mama & massi (both unmarried) nd her nanu…
Preeti Tiwari- Suman’s elder sister
KJ- Sumo’s bestiee… She is beauty wid brain loves her bestie sumo alot… Always fight wid shravan bcoz of sumo…

Shravan Malhotra- A rich polite guy… Has a crush on sumo when they were in class 8th… Kinda shareef…

plot-
So we see a hospital but what’s so special about that … A girl is seen crying there but who is she…
Is she some patient’s Relative?
No, she is not…
But then who is she…nd y is she crying…
oh she is Dr. Suman Tiwari…
she is sobbing hard nd speaking something…
Su- Y u come back again in my life… If u have not met me … U would have not suffered this much… Although i missed u alot in these years but no… I have to be strong… I will not let anything happen to u…

Now you guys think about whom she is talking…
nd plz guys do tell me that how it is…
Should i continue this or not…
🙂

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33 Comments
  1. Prettypreeti

    Ruchi into was so sweet as ur profile pic wow this seems to be interesting post soon dear

    1. Ruchi

      Thnk u Preeti… 🙂
      will try to asap…

  2. WeirdSister

    Oh ruchi II m so glad…u started as ff of ur own..it was vry good…nd I think d guy was Shravan….
    Post soon..waiting eagerly…!
    🙂

    1. Ruchi

      Hey WS…
      Thnk u so much… 🙂
      will try to post soon…

  3. Marie

    Wow ruchi dear…..!
    I loved d intro….its nice n simple…. <3
    N interesting tooo……
    Plzz continue…n i think d guy is shr….
    Or maybe hwr bestie kj….. 🙂
    Post soon…..m egrly waiting…
    Lots if luv….
    Maria… 🙂 🙂

    1. Ruchi

      Hey Marie…
      thnx dear… 🙂
      about the person u will get to know in nxt epi…
      will try to post asap…
      £ots of Love
      Ruchi… 🙂

      1. Marie

        P.S this cmmnt was also frm khushi ( due to lot of studiea she cant cmmnt ri8 now) 😉 🙂

  4. Ruchi

    Thnk u khushi…
    nd thnx for conveying frm her side Marie…
    Missing u nd ur ff khushi… 🙂
    £ots of luv
    Ur Ruchi di…

    1. Marie

      No prob Ruchi di anything fr my bestie…!! 🙂
      Well Ruchi di can we be frnds?? 😀

      1. Ruchi

        Yes Marie… I would love to be ur frnd… 🙂 🙂

  5. Nandini aka Nandu

    Interesting and i think the guys is our very own S. Malhotra. Please continue this one . Lots of love ruchi dear. Btw may i know ur age or are u in school or college so that we know how older u are from us , (only if u dont mind it) otherwise keep writing .

    1. Ruchi

      Hey Nandu…
      Thnk u …
      Why would i mind yr… M 18 year old wat about you…?
      Lots of Love
      Ruchi

      1. Nandini aka Nandu

        Well am jst 13 as of now. So now.onwrds ruchi ‘di’. Keep writing. Lots and lots of.love dear di. And yes pkease start posting the episodes jaldi please.

      2. Ruchi

        Hey Nandu dear…
        will try to post asap… 🙂
        Lots of Love…
        Ruchi

  6. LovelyLady

    hi ruchi …
    it was really a very nyc start….. u win in creating mystery….. i loved that a lottttt…….
    n yaaa u shd surely continue it….
    waise phli nzr mr wo persn shravan lgta h… bt agar tumne suspnse rakha h to itna,easy ans to ni hoga… it may be ki koi thrd prsn ki entry ho btwn shraman……
    i m excited a lott n shayad ye mere cmmnt me laga hoga tumko….
    waiting fr d nxt epi….. post nxt prt asap…
    🙂

    1. Ruchi

      Hi dear…
      m really happy wid the response…
      Thnk u so much yr… 🙂
      May i know ur age? If u dnt mind…
      I will try to post asap…

      1. LovelyLady

        ya i wll really dont mind …..
        i m doing bsc 1 st year….. n i m of 17
        youngr than u…… what r u dng? ?? i mean in study…

    2. Ruchi

      Coaching for entrance xams… Passed 12 this year…

  7. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Hello dear !!!! Very nice intro dear … nd yeahhhhh yeahhhhh u should continue it .. this is such a new story … I luv it … nd I think it would b sharavan .. the victim .. for whom suman was crying … 😊😊 .. BTW post first part ASAP!!!!

    1. Ruchi

      Hey Fatima …
      thnk u so much dear… 🙂
      will try to post it asap¿

  8. Of course..ruchi..continue..and nice intro
    .
    Welcome to edkv..
    And all the best for ur ff..😊☺☺☺
    Go a head..😊☺☺☺

    1. Ruchi

      Thnk u Sona… 🙂

  9. Hey ruchi..intro was interesting…ofcourse continue writing …will be waiting for it..

    1. Ruchi

      Hey Shiny…
      thnx dear… 🙂

  10. RANdomfANCreationz

    wow ruchi yaar u r back and r u the one who named me kab tak busy rahoonge 😛 and yeah interesting please do continue yaar 🙂 all the best

    1. Ruchi

      Hi Jo
      How r u?
      haha… No m not the one…
      Thnx Jo… 🙂

      1. RANdomfANCreationz

        I m fine yaar how r u?

    2. Tara

      hahahaha that was me jo who named u that

  11. Ruchi

    M also fine Jo… 🙂

  12. Tara

    hey ru finally u came up with a ff.. mg thanxx lol…
    it was cool cntinue dear.. muah

    1. Ruchi

      Hey ‘Ta’
      thnk u so much… 🙂
      Lots of Love
      Ru 😉

  13. Sumo

    it was interesting sumo being a doc ! m looking forward.. 😇

    1. Ruchi

      Thnks Sumo…
      will post soon… 🙂

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