Shraman ff (INTRO) :)

Hey guys this is my first ff on shraman … Earlier i wrote an ff on Twinj (Tei)…
This is small intro of characters…

Suman Tiwari- She is a bit shy girl… Frank only wid her good frnd or wid people who she find descent… Lost her parents in a car accident when she was 11. Lives wid her mama & massi (both unmarried) nd her nanu…
Preeti Tiwari- Suman’s elder sister
KJ- Sumo’s bestiee… She is beauty wid brain loves her bestie sumo alot… Always fight wid shravan bcoz of sumo…

Shravan Malhotra- A rich polite guy… Has a crush on sumo when they were in class 8th… Kinda shareef…

plot-
So we see a hospital but what’s so special about that … A girl is seen crying there but who is she…
Is she some patient’s Relative?
No, she is not…
But then who is she…nd y is she crying…
oh she is Dr. Suman Tiwari…
she is sobbing hard nd speaking something…
Su- Y u come back again in my life… If u have not met me … U would have not suffered this much… Although i missed u alot in these years but no… I have to be strong… I will not let anything happen to u…

Now you guys think about whom she is talking…
nd plz guys do tell me that how it is…
Should i continue this or not…
🙂

33 comments

  1. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Oh ruchi II m so glad…u started as ff of ur own..it was vry good…nd I think d guy was Shravan….
    Post soon..waiting eagerly…!
    🙂

  2. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Wow ruchi dear…..!
    I loved d intro….its nice n simple…. <3
    N interesting tooo……
    Plzz continue…n i think d guy is shr….
    Or maybe hwr bestie kj….. 🙂
    Post soon…..m egrly waiting…
    Lots if luv….
    Maria… 🙂 🙂

    • Ruchi

      |Author

      Hey Marie…
      thnx dear… 🙂
      about the person u will get to know in nxt epi…
      will try to post asap…
      £ots of Love
      Ruchi… 🙂

  3. Ruchi

    |Author

    Thnk u khushi…
    nd thnx for conveying frm her side Marie…
    Missing u nd ur ff khushi… 🙂
    £ots of luv
    Ur Ruchi di…

  4. Nandini aka Nandu

    Interesting and i think the guys is our very own S. Malhotra. Please continue this one . Lots of love ruchi dear. Btw may i know ur age or are u in school or college so that we know how older u are from us , (only if u dont mind it) otherwise keep writing .

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Well am jst 13 as of now. So now.onwrds ruchi ‘di’. Keep writing. Lots and lots of.love dear di. And yes pkease start posting the episodes jaldi please.

  5. LovelyLady

    |Registered Member

    hi ruchi …
    it was really a very nyc start….. u win in creating mystery….. i loved that a lottttt…….
    n yaaa u shd surely continue it….
    waise phli nzr mr wo persn shravan lgta h… bt agar tumne suspnse rakha h to itna,easy ans to ni hoga… it may be ki koi thrd prsn ki entry ho btwn shraman……
    i m excited a lott n shayad ye mere cmmnt me laga hoga tumko….
    waiting fr d nxt epi….. post nxt prt asap…
    🙂

  6. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hello dear !!!! Very nice intro dear … nd yeahhhhh yeahhhhh u should continue it .. this is such a new story … I luv it … nd I think it would b sharavan .. the victim .. for whom suman was crying … 😊😊 .. BTW post first part ASAP!!!!

  7. sona

    Of course..ruchi..continue..and nice intro
    .
    Welcome to edkv..
    And all the best for ur ff..😊☺☺☺
    Go a head..😊☺☺☺

  8. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    wow ruchi yaar u r back and r u the one who named me kab tak busy rahoonge 😛 and yeah interesting please do continue yaar 🙂 all the best

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