Shraman ff !! Epi – 1

Hey guys … M back wid the 1st epi of my first ever ff on shraman…
Srry guys as am going to change some part of sumo’s convo which u read in the intro…
Nd related to the intro of sumo nd shravu is of when they both were teenager’s…

plot

So we see a hospital
but what’s so special about that … A girl is seen crying there
but who is she…
Is she some patient’s Relative?
No, she is not…
But then who is she…
nd y is she crying…
oh she is Dr. Suman Tiwari…
she is sobbing hard nd speaking something…
Su- If u have not met me …
U would have not suffered this much bcoz of me u had break up wid ur love… I have to be strong… I will not let anything happen to u…This accident also happened bcoz of me…

Flashback scene…
A beautifully decorated room is seen Red balloons red flowers ,white curtains … Date kind of set up…
A girl was outside the room… before her entry the light were off…
The moment she enters the room she was surprised actually shocked to see the decorations…
G- Y he called me like this?
nd y these decorations?
She was calling a guy…
nd there he comes holding a guitar well dressed…
He was coming toward the girl nd singing …
Kaise bataon tujhe
dil mera kya keh rha
rahe na faasle hai jo apne ye darmiyan…

After the song the girl moves towards the guy…
girl-what is all this?
Guy- Sumo i wanted to tell u this from many years but i thought it is not the right time… But now i can’t supress my felling for u…
I love you Sumo…
Sumo u know what why i left the place four years bcoz at that time i thought that agr mai tumhare saath kuch aur samay raha to m apni feelings ko supress nhi kr paonga…
answer me sumo do u also feel the same for me?
Su- Sorry ,but u know dat i can never lie to u …
i dnt love you… I always considered u as my best buddy plz dnt take me wrong …
The guys was numb after hearing this… He left the place nd was walking like lifeless body…
He was not in senses…
nd then a loud sound is heard
ahhhhh
oh god he met wid a accident …
A car hitted him…
but it was a minor accident but he was injured…
The person who was driving the took him to city hospital…
he admitted him…
nd when he met the doctor …
both the doctor and the person were shocked to see each other…

#Screen freezes
keep commenting… 😉
Lots of Love
Ruchi 🙂 🙂

26 comments

  1. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Hy Ruchi di..!! 😀
    How r u?
    Oooyyyy hooyyy ep WS dammmmm awesome….!!
    Wid so much suspense….hahahah suspense hi suspense…!! 😀
    I really loved it….!
    U r amazing!! 🙂 🙂
    Plzzz plzzz plzz post nxt prt ASAP ASAP ASAP..!!
    Love u …!
    Take care….!
    Wid lots of luv..!
    Maria…. 🙂

  2. lovely lady

    ruchi i reallllyyy loved it.
    suspnse tha n us se bahut mza bhi aaya.
    u created really a nyc plot. hope to seepre interetng epi in future

  3. Nandini aka Nandu

    Kya yaar ruchi di! Aap bhi? It seems that marias suspense bug has bitten you as well. No offences. Loved the episode although it was short. Please post asap, pls.. jaldi,,lots of love. Keep writing. All the best and wishes for jr this ff. And dont worry we people r always here to comment. Lol

    • Ruchi

      |Author

      Hey Nandu…
      haha … Thx for cmmnting… 🙂
      srry for short epi…
      thnx for all ur love nd support…
      will try to post nxt epi asap… 😉
      Lots of love
      Ruchi 🙂

  4. pretty preeti

    Nice ruchi
    U describe everything very nicely darling
    Please post soon
    Will be waiting

    • Ruchi

      |Author

      Hey Nikita…
      Thnx dear…
      I also ur ff on shraman nd preekar… ur ff is amazing…
      post nxt epi soon yr…
      nd yes keep cmmnting… 🙂
      Lots of Luv
      Ruchi… 🙂

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