A SHORT STORY… RAGLAK OS BY SANSKRITI..

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hii gys sanskriti back…by the way my real name is janvi… guys its my first raglak os… sorry me if you find incomplete scenes…
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Her pov
i was scrolling down to see new feeds on fb…and i got a frnd request… i frnds request blog.. the request was of a boy named laksh maheshwari… it was mine senior… so i accepted his request…
as soon as i accepted his request i got a message…
hii from him…
i replied him… with hello…
and we set to talk…
we had chat for two hours… in the mean time he told a bit about him…
he was in final year… and martial art club head…
by his talks he seemed little bit flirty but a nice nature after all…
next day…
i was in canteen when he came… he acted to ignore me… i think he was just doing to attract my attention…and he was successful also…
we came and sat next to me… and we had chit chats…he cracked several jokes… and i was bursted in laughs…. the whole canteen was looking at me… it was such an awkward moment….
Now days passed..
he became my habit…like partying with him.. eating with him.. laughing with him… chatting with him… everything… even the whole college was doubting about me n laksh.. but i always said .. he is mine frnd…
one day
i was jogging when i got a call…
it was laksh
he said… i am going to Mumbai for a week…
i would be back soon..
i was unhappy…
tommorow moring he left…
and the one week was passing like a century… eberything became very boring without him.. even i had mood swings… i missed him so badly…then i realised that it is not frndship … it is love….

as soon as he came to delhi and college… i ran towards him and hugged him…
I said i love you laksh… i realised it when .. then you were not woth me… i cant imagine my life without you…. my life will became meaning less…
he pussed me away.. and said i dont love you…just go away… just go away…. and dont dare to contact me…
it broked me… it literally killed me…
i migrated to my uncle’s house…after 2 weeks.. i got a call…
it was my frnd..
he is in icu…
only that words were enough …. and i hurriedly catched flight and ran towards him…
it was city hospital…
my frnds…were on the entrance…
me: where is he…
they: icu on 4th floor..
i ran towards lift but it was taking time so i took stairs…
i was on fourth floor and rushed towards icu..
the doctor was outside..
me: can i meet him
doc: okk but dont take much time..
i been inside …
i said : laksh
he: ragini tum aagayi…
me: kyu nhi aana tha…
he: ragini can i say you something
he holded my hands…
me: sure
he: ragini for that day sorry … actually i want to confess something.. that i really love you…. i been to mumbai for tje check up … i have lungs cancer… and doctors said its too late… i dont have even a month…. ragini i dont wanted to destroy your life …. but wanted to live with you forever….but god cheated us….i reallyy lovvvv….vvveeeee y…ooo..uuuuuuu
his grip weakened and his soul gone to rest in peace of heaven….
i asked him to wake up but he didnt……. he slept…. he slept for forever……
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how was the os guys…i know its little emotional… i had teary eyes while wirting… hope you dont throw tomotoes on me by reading this stupid os….

guys one more thing.. my self janvi… sanskriti is just a false identity…

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55 Comments
  1. TeitokUn1718

    Superb & Emotional one…

  2. AWESOME AWESOME

  3. Jiyani

    Emotional dear

  4. Simply superb di

  5. Akankshanna

    Awesome
    …amazing…. Senti

  6. Nice

  7. Awesome dear

  8. Awesome episode

  9. Lovely7

    Happy ending unte bagundedi
    Nice

    1. Janvi_prabhas

      thanksss.. iknow that happy ending would be awesome

  10. Awesome

  11. Asw

    Nice

  12. Asra

    awesome dear…loved it alot

  13. Interesting os dear and loved Raglak a lot. It’s emotional also. Please post your ff soon and If possible write more Raglak stories. Love you dear and take care

    1. Janvi_prabhas

      thank you so much dear

  14. Nice dear

  15. Amazing part nd write more

  16. Laashya

    Lovely story

  17. Superb awesome emotional

  18. Good one, keep writing

  19. Fantastic dear

  20. Very nice

  21. IQRA222

    janvi !!! its fabulous dear
    totally loved it!!!
    it was too emotional and superb
    do keep writing more
    take care
    keep writing and smiling

    1. Janvi_prabhas

      thnk you sooooooooo much for the lovely comment

  22. Elizabethlovely

    Awesome

  23. Superrrrr duperrrrr endddd

  24. Sorry wrong comment, superb shot

    1. Janvi_prabhas

      ok ok …. thanksss

  25. So Janvi is your real name.U already said me Na that the sanskriti name was false.its k n u said u will post your ff after 21st now what’s the date???
    Post it soon.
    This was one emotional.i found this ending to be perfect as if it was a happy ending it wouldn’t have been good as it is now.
    Keep writing
    Hope u remeber my name

    1. Janvi_prabhas

      yaaa i willl i posted part 6 .. 3 or 4 days back check it…yaa my real nameis janvi…
      thankss … rufi di for a lovely comment…. but dii why you deactivated your acco. whats the reason…and of coure you are rufi tufi dii…?????

  26. Hemalattha

    A sentiment is. The ending too emotional. Loved it dear.

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