Short story contest ||swasan|| story 1


NAME OF THE STORY ;; Itna karo na muje pyaar……….
THEME ;; Sacrifice


Swara come home. Everyone welcome her. Sumi does her aarti. She asks swara to go and take rest in her room.She goes to her room and sees a letter. On the top it was written “welcome back swara”
Swara-oh thank you
But suddenly she realises through the handwriting that it was written by sanskar. She gets teary eyes.
FB starts–
Swara and sanskaar are the college buddies. The both are best friends. For swara its friendship but for sanskaar its love. Every time swara needed help sanskaar was there for help. He would sacrifice his sleep his food every thing. And everytime at last of any matter this convo happened.

Swara- why did u do this cant u say it to mecu always sacrifice everything to me
Sanskaar- i do it because maine kiya hai tumse pyaar
Swara- then itna karo na muje pyaar..
Swara would think he loved her as friend.
One day in the prom sanskar decided to tell the everything that he loves her.
Sanskar- ms swara bose i love u i really love u bt not as friend as my life patner
Swara was shocked to listen this. She got angry and said
Swara- what do u think sanskar i love u i always considered u as my best friend. I have goals to reach. And do u think that those little sacrifice would make me fall in love with u no never. U have not at all given me anything. When u give me ur heart that day i will see.
Sanskaar got teary eyes. Swara also saying this fell unconscious. Sanskar took her to the hospital . Doctor told that her heart was very week and if she didn’t get heart then she would die in 1 yr.
Sanskaar recalled swara’s words and says-

Sanskaar- m ready to give my heart take my heart doctor.
Doctor- we don’t have any problem bt what about u
Sanskaar- its ok doctor i don’t want to live
Doctor- ok we would do her operation tomorrow.
Sanskaar- pls doc just give me one day to meet everyone.
Doc- ok u may go
Sanskaar- thank u doc.
He goes from there and meet every imp person and then wrote a letter to swara.
He kept it on the desk.
And the nxt day he became a history.
Swara was kept in the hospital for 2 months after the transplant
FB ends———-

She read the letter———

Hi swara!! I am sanskar. You remember me ri8 naa. Actually i wanted to say something to u. But first see there is a CD with this letter see it.(it cointained sanskaar singing yahi hoon mai) I love u swara I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH And swara i proved it. Now you must be thinking that why am i not saying this because i know that ‘we are just friends’ and you have a dream. I don’t know when you would be reading this but i am not able to come to u and say it directy because i donated my heart to someone who was in need of it and u know who the person is. Its u swara its u. Yes i donated my heart to u because if my love is without sacrifice it is selfish. Such a love is barter , for there is exchange of love and devotion in return for something, it is a conditional love. But my love is unconditional. I thought to live with your heart till the time it was working but then everything has become so tiring, i would rather let go and rest because your something was my everything. You thought that my sacrifices were nothing but for me they were everything. And yes don’t feel i left u every sunray that would fall on u every wind touching ur lips remember swara its me. I would like to born again and fall in love with u again for infinite years and keep sacrificing for u for like this only. And yes i did this because Maina kiya hai tumse pyaar…………
Byee swara hope we meet in next birth

I love u swara

Tears roll down from swara’s cheeks and fall on the word love written at last in the letter.
Swara murmured- Itna karo naa muje pyaar………..


Ignore the mistakes plss..

Hi Readers…..You can judge the story and give marks……scheme of giving mark is

~Concept ;; out of 5 marks
~ Name of the story ;; out of 2 marks
~ Justification the theme ;; out of 3 marks


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  1. Mahavir

    it was awesome story and my marks for this is for stry : 4/5,
    title : 2/2 , theme : 3/3.:::total 9/10…

  2. Riyanjali

    It was nice… i would give 7

  3. Pooja26

    concept- 3
    name of story-2

    its awsm……

  4. Srusti

    It was a beautiful story and I give 9 marks to it

  5. Simi

    8 out of 10

  6. SparkQween

    li like it .
    concept :4/5
    story :2/2
    theme :2/3
    total : 8 points

  7. awesome but 6/10

  8. Total I would give 8 …. I guess it’s not necessary to divide the marks

  9. KrsytleS

    Superb Dr..
    I would be give 9/10

  10. I would give it 9 points

  11. Very nice yr Nd I give 7/10

  12. I would like to give 8/10

  13. She made me cry a lot but still…10\10…

  14. I would like to give 7/10

  15. Sweeta

    It’s really beautiful story ??
    From my side i ll give 9/10

  16. Vyshu10


  17. Nce 6/10

  18. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    I love it..

  19. concept-3/5
    it was nyc

  20. Arshaanya

    Nyc 6/10

  21. im giving 9

  22. Good.. will like to give 7.5 out of 10..

  23. Mirna

    It was short and emotional 8/10

  24. Rabia0032

    Awesome dear I gave u 8 out of 10

  25. Really gud

  26. Kakali#Rimpi


  27. nice story..7.5

  28. Soujanya

    Awesome… Emotional..????..I would give 8/10

  29. it was so emotional
    i loved the last part
    i will give it 7

  30. Aahana

    so nice ..

  31. Deeksha


  32. MickeyMouse

    Concept 2/5
    Title 1/2
    Theme 2/3
    So.. 5/10
    Because live donor transplant never happens…

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