Shivika TS : Anika Ka Sanskari Shivaay By Fenu (Pearl-01)

Hello Friends !! This is Fenil (Boy). First Work on Shivika Separately. Hope you will like it. Temporary its TS I d k how many chappies will be produce. Heheh….I’m not giving intro you will found each character’s nature by reading it self.

Happy Reading !!
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Scene01: Shivaay’s Room,Oberoi Villa

It’s morning

Shivaay woke up from his dreamy sleep and sits on bed then open his palms and joins them and close his eyes… started speaking morning prayer ;

“Karagre vasate Lakshmeehi Karamoole Sarasvatee |
Kara-madhye tu Govindah Prabhaate kara-darshanam ||
Samudra-vasane Devi Parvata-sthana-mandale |
Vishnupatni namas-tubhyam Paada-sparsham kshamasva me ||
Vasudeva-sutan Devam Kansa-Chaanura-mardanam |
Devaki-paramaa nandam Krushnam vande jagad-gurum ||”

(Trikal Sandhya-may be maharstriyan know it,its my daily routine)

And after finishing prayer rubbed his palms on his face,wears specs (Awards wala specs Pic toh dekha hi honga ) and bend down and touches floor(earth) and greets Earth and put his right feet down and went to washroom for tooth brush after sometime came out and took towel and cloths and went in for baath. We can hear again something like sholkas.

“Ganga Cha Yamuna Chaiva Godavari Saraswati, Narmada Sindhu Kaveri Jalesmin Sannidhim Kuru”

(River Ganga,Yamuna,Godavari,Saraswati,narmada,Sindhu and Kaveri)

Later , he get ready in white long sleeves shirt and blue jeans and came down.

Scene02:Main Hall, Oberoi Villa

Shivaay goes in temple and started prayers from different-different books in front of Lord Ganesha Idol; sometime later he came out and folds hands before his Dadaji & Dadiji’s photo for some minutes.

Scene03:Kitchen,Oberoi Villa

He goes in and takes blessing from his mother Pinky.

Pinky : Jeete raho mere here bête (long live my dearest diamond son); go in garden area Shaktiji must be there take his blessing also.

(Pinky’s Sanskari Shivaay-Mumma’s boy)

Shivaay nods and went to Shakti and takes blessing.

Shakti : Shivaay,Today is your first day in college, makes good friends and fright your future.

Shivaay : Yes Papa.

Scene04:Dining Table, Oberoi Villa

They sits for breakfast , they started speaking prayers.(Prayer before Eating)

“Yagna-shishtaa-shinah santo muchyante sarva-kilbishaih |
Bhunjate te tvagham paapaa ye pachantyaatma-kaaranaat ||
Yat-karoshi yadashnaasi yaj yaj-juhoshi dadaasi yat |
Yat-tapasyasi Kaunteya tat-kurushva madarpanam ||
Om saha naa-vavatu saha nau bhunaktu saha viryam karavaa-vahai |
tejasvi naa-vadhi-tamastu maa vidvishaa-vahai ||
Om shaantih shaantih shaantihi”

They are having breakfast and Pinky started her anmol advices to her diamond son…

Pinky : Billu, At the time of entering in your college use right feet and call me I will tell you on which time you have to enter.

Shivaay : Yaa mom

Pinky : Make good friends and mein toh kehti hun koi friends nahi bana na.

Shivaay : Mom, papa said make good friends and you are saying avoid friendship .

Pinky : Oky , but avoid girls oky.

Shivaay : Why mom ?

Pinky : Girl are too cruel , not good in nature , they are very selfish…I’m saying this to you since childhood .

Shivaay : Oky Mom (Lol…Mumma’s boy)

Pinky’s advice lecture continue……
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PRECAP : Shivaay-College-Anika & Too Much Fun.
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Hello Devi aur Sajjano (hey God Shivaay ke Sanskar mere mein aa gaye). I think its totally different shade of Shivaay.

Lets see what happened when Sanskari Shivaay enter in college world and what and which type of Raita failata hain his sanskar.

Do comments and share your precious views !! I’m sure mujhe roses or hearts hi milenge until some of my sister’s will think to pulls my legs and I’m sure One person will surely came here for the same. I forgot which sister gave me name “SANSKARI FENU BHAI”.

Keep Watching and Loving Ishqbaaz !!

Love yaa.

77 comments

  1. Naymaz

    Naymaz

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    bhai i loved it
    aap kitna mast likhte ho
    pinky oh god i toh just hate her
    I’m waiting for shivika’s khidkitod meet
    update asap and yess post do dil also soon
    i love it bro plzzzz post both the stories soon
    and plzz a request cud u include ishkara also here??????
    plzzz include ishkara , i luv them a lot

  2. Lauren

    Lauren

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    Amazing bhaiyu… NYC plot… unique n great thought… loved this different or I should say very different side of Shivaay… post nxt asap

  3. Sairish

    Sairish

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    heyyyyyyyy bhaiiyyyyyuuuu……
    ohhh my godd …like you told me you are writing a story on shivika separately..buttt this…😂😂sanskari shivaay..the title itself was soo catchy that I can’t resist to open it and read further..later I got to know after opening it that this has been written by you ……
    my goddd bhaiyya …u r very sanskari ..like wo jo starting me shlok/mantra tha …you chant it daily …that’s great …even I do but dua’ s as I’m a Muslim you know….but feeling great to have a bro like you ……
    pinky…”girls se door Rehna aur bechara mumma’s boii maan bhii gaya…😂👍✌”
    waiting for the raita to be spilled in college.
    ..and of course annika’s entry …
    PLSS post the next one soon
    love ya bhaiyyu
    your chhotu sisso
    Sairish
    ❤❤

  4. Sofiya. S.

    Awesome!
    We got to see shivaay from tadi to sanskaari mode 😂😂😂….
    Nice one…
    Waiting for shivika’s khidkitod meet😊…
    Want to ask is dadi not there?
    Post soon 😇…

  5. Banita

    Hey!!!! U remaind me my scl days….. In scl also we did these prayers including others….. Nd yeh ofcourse except d bath time prayer….
    Shivaay in this much saskari abtar….
    Can’t wait more plzzz post nxt part soon….. Eagerly waiting 4 shivika’s meeting…

  6. Navz

    Navz

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    It’s hilarious…Shivay in this sanskari Avatar…I didn’t get this thought even in my wildest dreams….superb…waiting for the entry of that raita phailana girl.

  7. Prajkta

    Amazing episode…. Sanskari Shivaay is funny…. Waiting for the next update…. Totally loved it… Superb

  8. Kashu

    Kashu

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    It was awesome.. And I m loving this Sanskari Shivay a lot. And I guess Anika’s character will be full of atitute and all……
    Post next part soon!!

  9. AnahitaAnnie

    AnahitaAnnie

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    Woow bhaiya.. To see our tadibaaz shivaay as a sanskaari boy is so cute.. Totally lobed the new shade and college AU’s are so fav.. And precap has already got me so interested.. Ur idea is so interesting and unique.. Can’t wait to read more.. And eagerly thinking how will our khidkitor Anika will be.. Loved the first epi..

  10. Aastha_Reddy

    Aastha_Reddy

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    Ha ha ha…He is not Shivaay Singh Oberoi because he is “Swami Shivananda” This Shivaay reminded me of UmaShankar from “Tu sooraj main saanjh piyaji…” Sanskar toh isme kut kut ke bhara hai.
    Even I do the same prayer every morning but the words varies a little in Andhra and we do a different bhojana mantra.
    Aap bhi meri aur Manya ki tarah paagal horahe hai Fenu bhaiyya. Sangat ka asar.

    • Fenil

      Fenil

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      Thank you so much Astha.
      Glad that u liked it.
      ohh you are too sanskari like Shivaay.
      Aap dono pagal ho mein nahi Miss.Reddy.

  11. Radhika.k

    Radhika.k

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    Fenu bhai ka aur ek roop mujhe aaj abhi patah chala…..OMG!!!!Aap SANSKARI FENU BHAI HAI???????
    Well,coming to the TS…
    I felt really very surprised at the start….bcoz mujhe thodi patah tha that u r SANSKARI…
    Shivay opening his eyes..joining his hands n reading karakre…….NICE…i used to do that bhai!!
    Shivay wearing that specs…..bada stylish lag raha tha SPA mein…but here bahut hi different hoga joh soch bhi nahi sakthi…..:laughing:
    Bathing n eating wala sholka bhi patah hai…….still my nani follows it..
    Shivay itna acha beta….joh parents se roz aashirvad le raha hai….its too unique bhai..thanks for writing something like this……SUPERB!!!

    Pinky advising shivay not to talk to girls bcoz they r cruel……mujhe sirf pinky khud yaad aayi…
    So shivay,going to go to his college for the first time just like me…..SUPERB…
    Too excited to knw abt the story..how this obedient guy is going to be in his college…..kaisa raita phailne wala hai…….how shivika r going to meet…..
    First work on SHIVIKA….N ITS REALLY AMAZING BRO….vaise mein aap ke liye roses n hearts toh lekar nahi aayi………………………..but bahut saara pyaar lekar aayi hui!!
    Keep writing bro….n do tell me when u post the next..
    Love fenu bhai!!!

  12. Aarti32

    Aarti32

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    Hey my God!! Ye what tha😆😆 (Ex-gkb effect)
    Shivaay Shivaay na rha!! Om Namah Shivaay ban gya😂😂
    Beginnings mein hi dis much funny make diya..aage wat wat hoga!!😨😱
    Update soon Bhai

    PS- u mentioned dat U’re a boy.. hilarious 😂😂 ROFL

  13. Soumya85

    Soumya85

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    Wow bhaiya superb
    Kahi yeh aapki kahani to nai😉😂😂sach boliyega!!
    Shivvay as sanskari it’s hard to digest so annika modern hogi I guess
    Yeh epi to matra se hi bhara hua tha 😂😂
    Post the next one soon

  14. Ananyagour

    Ananyagour

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    Fenil I must say u nailed it!!😂😂😂
    Great idea!! I never imagined Shivay in sanskaari boy 😂😂😂 and write foot 😁 stay away from girls 😁.

  15. Shrinjal

    Shrinjal

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    Bhaiyya ye episode to aadha mantra se bhara hai..😂😂😂..aap itne mantra bolte ho pata nahi tha..😛😛😛
    Awesome epiii post next soon and it should be long..❤

    Take care

  16. Archisha

    Archisha

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    Hehe bhaiya !! Shivaay to mujse bi sanskaari nikla ! Mai to uthne ke baad mantra to door mummy ko good morning bi kabi kabi hi bolti hu. And is this your daily routine ? Awesome one btw. Post soon and dont forget to send me the links ! Ok ?

  17. Sumitha

    Sumitha

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    A different shade of shivaay……Yeah when he meet anika I think he will change hana bhaiya???……interesting and unique plot…. post next asap

  18. Neptune

    Neptune

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    bhaiyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu…omg am rofl…he he he it was awesome bhaiyuu especially when pinky gave advice to him and he followed silently…
    waiting for shivika’s first meet…

    bhaiyu you are sanskaari fenu bhai?? uhuuuhuu…i didn’t know that.. he he just kidding don’t feel bad okay..
    waiting for the next part eagerly…
    post soon bhaiyuu…

  19. Shabana

    Shabana

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    omgggggg aappppp itne sanskarii bhai hai i didnt expect this
    and the amazing thing is u made my shivaay as sanskari shivay
    loveed it i loved it completlyyyyyyyyy it was nice uu too mummas boy i guesss hehehe
    soo sweet bhai

  20. Su_16

    Su_16

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    Lollllll😂😂😂 Bhaiyya it was amazing, on next epi make Shivaay wear religious vastra (whatever its called, the one Uma shankar in TSMSP) That would be well funny.

  21. Aadya

    Aadya

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    Itna sanskaari Shivaay! Haye Bhaiya were did you get this idea from?? Anyways story acchi lagi chalo ab padhne do warna last exam bilkul achha nahi jayega..

  22. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

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    Bhaiya !!!!
    Oh my god, Sanskari Shivaay, a totally different version of him, well I am hell excited to read the upcoming chapters. This one was very nice. Post soon.
    Love ya❤

  23. Hanifbar

    Hanifbar

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    waw………………………………….Superb………………………………….EX………………………………………….

    He is not Shivaay Singh Oberoi its like Shankar Singh Oberoi…

  24. Ankita27

    Ankita27

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    Sanskari shuruat… Amazing… Superb update.. New concept… shivay ne aam joi nanpan yaad awi gayu amne swadhyay ma sikhwadta aa…. waiting for the next update…

  25. Ishuyamjha

    Ishuyamjha

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    really bhai i didn’t expect this from u i thought ur shivika story will be full of surprises but i didn’t expected that u will give me heartattack on first episode itself u did oh my matha to me and it was awesome loving the different shade of shivaay

    • Fenil

      Fenil

      |Author

      After all bhai kiska hain WalkyTalky ka.
      Thank you so much.
      Glad that you loved the different shivaay.
      Take care.
      Love yaa.

  26. Confidential

    Confidential

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    Yeh saachi may tha kya…shivaay ka yesa side…oh god kabhi sapne may bhi nahi socha tha…itna sanskari…hamara tv wama shivaay toh bilkul bhi yesa bahi hae par jo bhi ho it’s awesome…enjoyed reading it…girls ko avoid haww kaun ladka yesa karsakta hae…ok post asap n do inform me….that’s a request…

    -Confidential

  27. Vanisha

    Vanisha

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    Awesomeeeee oggy bhai….shivay sorry sanskari shivay…wow new shade of shivay…im eager to see it…waise s.shivay ki tarh aap bhi sanskari ho….waise mujhe bhi nahi yaad aapko sanskari fenu bhai kisne bulaya…maine toh shayad nahi bulaya..hehe
    Post next one soooooon

  28. TUFriendsForever

    TUFriendsForever

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    Bhaiya I think I would die out of laughing today.Sach mein Aab itne sanskari ho😱😱😱 muje idea hi nahi Tha ki Aab sanskari ho.Madhuri mam se kya iratha?? Sanskari fenu bhaiya 😂😂😂😂 literally after reading this I have to accept that u r sanskari.I have heard adarsh bahu sanskari bahu but here sanskari beta Sach mein uma Shankar ka yaad agaya.

    Shivaay sanskari 😂😂😂😂 really hard to imagine but it will be interesting imagining💭💭💭💭💭.n touching the earth.i didn’t understand any of the prayers but I guess that they R off some good cause.Literally while waking up u say it that’s really a good habit Bhai.

    N pinky dinky donky here too🐴🐴🐴🐴 girls R selfish 😠😡😠😡 she herself is a girl.I would like to punch that pinky👊👊👊👊👊

    Ma ka hira beta kuch toh soocho college hai enjoy kar Na.Right leg time was just 👌👌👌👌 for this sanskari ff.

    Papa’s advise do friendship with good friends.But girls R also good.

    Precap khidki tod entry of anika I guess she will be modern.
    Sorry for the late comment Bhai if I would kill this exams I would surely kill 🔫🔫🔫 but kya karu padai toh karni hai 😞😞😞😞

    N thanks for writing on shivika.
    Keep writing bhaiiiiii

  29. Misbah4

    Misbah4

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    It’s just awesome bhaiya….. Loved this…. And thank u,thank u so much for sending me link😀 plz plz post fast as possible… Plz send me link in PM if I have written any ff or os… Becoz of 10th studies I can’t read that much stories.. if u send me links it will be good.😊

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