Shivika ss by nans (part 15)

Hi buddies

Shukriya vala thanks to all of u.I wont talk much as always.here it goes

Tej n om hugging anika.rudra comes n drags shivay to join hug.

After sometime,whole family is sitting near pool area.they started dumbcharades …..sitting round.anika is in btw shivay n om.they started playing passing pillow.om stops passing.

Om: I need to say something in front of u all.but first to anika.

He turns to anika n says “ I love piyu…”

All r surprised n happy for him.

Anika(smiling): I know om.

Om: so u r OK with it?

Anika: y r u asking like that? Ofc I am happy for u.U both r pure souls and also complete each other.so did u propose her?

Om: I will ……later.

Anika: y later?

Om: she just shared abt her life ,I want her to get completely out of that.then I will propose her.

Anika:OK om but ha don’t say painful shyari while proposing her (teasing)

All including shivay laugh aloud.rudra sitting next to shivay gives HiFi to anika.

Om: anika!!!! U…..(he takes popcorn bowl n throws popcorn on her.)

Anika takes glass of water n throws on his face.om also takes juice,but anika backs off it falls on shivay face.all get up laughing.shivay takes another glass n splash.tej face got wet instead of om.all cupped their mouth n r tensed.

Tej: (angry tone): rudra come here!!!

Rudra goes scared.tej throws juice on him.” U r so dry so I thought its necesarry!!!” Tej gives HiFi to om laughing.then what??? Water pool area became juice pool area.all oberoys r juicy juicy😂😂😂.

Then all wishing goodnight to each other left to their rooms.

After shivay changing,anika also goes n changes.she comes n looks at shivay holding her pills.

Anika: shivay!!!

Shivay: ani!! Promise me now u will stop taking this anti depressing pills.

Anika gets shocked: how do u know that….

Shivay shows pendrive: cabir gave it to me.

Anika: its….actually…….

Shivay: u don’t need to explain.I can understand.

He goes near her.he holds her face with both hands.

Shivay: ani….if u ever again feel to take this ,share with me.if the reason is me then u just punish me but don’t take these tablets.

Anika gets emotional.he kisses on her forehead with all his love n looks into her eyes.anika taking off his hands steps back.

Anika: shivay y u always confuse me?? U show this much love n care then y did u pointed finger on my character?

Shivay holds her hand n makes her sit on bed.he himself sits on knees in front of her on floor.

Shivay: ani!…..u r the only one who surprised me always.from the day I met u I got mesmerised with ur acts,challenges…..what not??? That day I said truth that I feel for u.next mng I was afraid to accept my feelings n I proposed tia to run away from u.when u got stalked tia provoked me against u that u r doing drama n I was just saying tia words to om.that’s nt my opinion.that money ,tia said its for some catering services.I know I hurted u always but I cannot even imagine giving bakshish to u.I don’t know abt that until I saw ur video.I am sorry ………(with tears in his eyes,anika is also crying but she is happy that shivay did nothing like that,she is happy that her heart is right.) Then that daksh talked rubbish abt u in front of me.he said he will use u n all….I even forcefully made u leave that night to protect u.next mrng he said he succeeded in his plan n paid u in return.he intentionally made u come n stay in his room for sowmya n then gave u laon papers in front of me.(anika gets shocked)I shouldn’t have believed him.I did a very big mistake.I promise that I will never broke ur trust.I am sorry…..

Anika gets up n leave to pool side.shivay follows her.

Shivay: ani…

Anika: shivay even if ur mind accepted what u saw ,atleast once u should have asked me……just leave me alone for sometime plzzz shivay plzzzz.I will talk to u mrng plzzzz

Shivay leaves from there to room.anika sits silently.she reminisces that day how shivay hurted his hand in anger.tears roll down from her face.shivay is just looking at her from room.she eventually sleeps there itself.shivay lifts her n makes her lay down on bed.
Next mrng:

Anika wakes up n looks herself on bed.shivay is not in room.she freshens up n comes out of washroom.shivay is making expresso n gives her.(with curious face )anika silently takes it n drinks it.

Shivay is abt to ask her something, but prinku comes n calls them for breakfast.

Dining table: whole family is talking laughing like a perfect family.shivika are exchanging glances.dadi is happy looking at evryone.then shakti takes shivay for a meeting.shivay has no option left.anika skips office the day.they all have imp work ,so they didn’t come for lunch also.

Evening: anika is with dadi in hall wearing night simple top n skirt.all ladies also talking in living area.shivay comes there.he thinks to call anika.before that,

Dadi: billu freshen up n come soon.I need to talk.tej,shakti u also come soon.

After a while all assemble in hall,

Dadi hold anika n makes her stand beside shivay.
Dadi: puttar!! Now everything is fine n perfect.I want to do ur marriage again with all rituals as pinky wanted.so what’s ur wish anika puttar?

All r happy.shivay is tensed to know anika answer.

Omru: anika/bhabi say yes soon na…

Anika: dadi!! I want divorce..

Shivay heart broke listening to this.he is just looking at her with teary eyes.all r hell shocked.

Anika: shivay forced me to marry him.I want to get free of this .

Dadi: puttar…..

Anika: after divorce,we will marry again.

Shivay tightly hugged her listening this in front of evryone.anika too reciprocated.all get happy.

Evryone: ahem ahem.

They broke apart.shivay is looking at her happily ,anika smiling all the while.

Dadi : OK then get divorce tomorrow itself.and evryone start prepearations from tomorrow itself.

Rudra n sahil started dancing.then they all dispersed to their rooms happily.

Shivika room:

Anika is standing near window smiling.shivay hugs her from back.he whisphers” thanks for forgiving me”

Anika: I did it for myself.I dont want to loose my love because of ur stupidity.

Shivay turned her to his side.
Anika: shivay remember one thing,next time if u do like this na…I won’t leave u but I will torture u.( she holds his kurta collar saying this)

Shivay smiles: I too want same Mrs.oberoy.(holding her by waist)

Anika wrapped her hands around his neck. She uttered “ I love you shivay!!!” Looking deeply into his eyes.shivay holder her face with right hand n kissed on her lips passionately.

Shivay: I love u too ani…..

Anika again kissed him.this time shivay got more wild with his intense love.he lifts her in arms n takes her to bed.he leaned all over her n started kissing her evry body part removing her clothes.they became one forever,exploring each other making promises soul to soul.

Morning: anika freshens up n wakes up shivay smiling.he pulls her into his arms.

Anika: shivay!! Lawyer will come soon,we need to sign papers get ready fast.

Shivay : on one condition.I need a good mrng kiss.

Anika blushes.shivay holds her more tight.

She comes close n they share a kiss again

Living area: they signed the papers on mutual consent happily making lawyer go confuse.they got divorce soon.

Marriage rituals started with tej jhanvi om piyu Aryan sahil on anika side.shakti pinky rudra prinku sowmya on shivay side.shivay didn’t allowed anika to stay in separate room.he even said to evryone,he won’t make anika far even for this small time span.omru pulled his leg but shivay happily accepted he can’t stay away from her even a minute making anika blush to core.

Shivika made each other ready for their own sangeet mehendi haldi n marriage.

And ofc these rituals made priyan,omiya,rumya romance more.Aryan started feeling for prinku.prinku already loves him n is helping him to get rid of alcohol completely.om is making piyu fall for him with his love.

Shivika married each other with kanyadhan done by tejanvi.whole marriage is shown to cabir by webcam.after shivika marriage ,om proposed piyu in front of evryone on his knees.piyu happily accepted.they got engaged same day.

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This is end of my ss but not their lives,its just their beginning.so guys how is my short story?????
I first discussed my idea with chocopie, ofc we always discuss each other views.she green signalled it,big thanks to piyu. when I started I thought u all may not like that much,but u all showed constant support. With out u all ,I couldn’t he completed this.Thank u so much guys.so its the last part do support me here also.silent readers drop just word or emoji in this part if possible….. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

108 comments

  1. Abc

    Hey.. i was a silent reader but yaa today ill comment i really loved your ff.. u are a good writer… i liked the ending… stay blessed and write more…☺

  2. Princess04

    Plz don’t stop here. Write more about their married life and kids.Ur SS and road to redemption was my favorite. If u also end urs what will I do.

    • Nansshivika

      Nansshivika

      |Author

      Thank u dear.but my story was upto this only.I will come up with season 2 after march coz my annual exams r on the way.I am really stuck with studying n writing work too.

  3. Pooja26

    Pooja26

    |Registered Member

    hawww u end dis…..
    too bad *sad pout*

    lovely part yr…… 😉
    awsm ff !!!!!!

    do come with more stories…
    promise me!!!!!

    keep writing lyk dis….
    bubye tc………

  4. Akshaya

    Akshaya

    |Registered Member

    Nandhu pie awesome episode. What about an epilogue???😉 Too cool and romantic shivika and Om. Are what about my ARYAN JI??😡😂 Piya with Om khidkitod jodi. Please write an epilogue na please please😍😘❤💋. Love you nandhu

  5. Nainaa

    Nainaa

    |Registered Member

    Umm.. what I have to say? Should I say the story which I admire most have made it to its end so soon or should I say it gave a constant happiness even in this short time.. I was hell confused on my emotions itself… let it be anything but I have trust on my Nandhupie that she will be back with another kidkithod story.. and Cutiepie will be waiting for it…😇
    I am so happy for you Di as you have made it in TU and I think feelings can be expressed perfectly in mother tongue So, I have to say this ‘TUSSI CHAA GAYI..” 😍😍
    Coming to this you have made it so perfect and I just don’t get it how you and ChocoPIe can write such good romantic scenes after all I am so dumb and numb in writing romantic scenes😂😂
    Trust me Di you are the finest writer in TU and no one can change the fact that you can do magics with your hands and I am just meant to wonder how can you be so perfect in everything like you impress your friends you impress your readers and there isn’t a word of haters as I know no body can hate you and if they do so it’s just that they are jealous of you and nothing more than that..😎
    I love you and of course we all love you Di..
    Be back soon after you complete all your practicals and record work..😍😘
    We’ll wait for your comeback..😊

    • Nansshivika

      Nansshivika

      |Author

      Thanks a lot cutipie for giving constant support n I know u will support me in future also.😍😍😍 love u too my cutie😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  6. Kavya347

    Kavya347

    |Registered Member

    It is amazing… Till now, I was a silent reader of your ff. It is awesome. Sorry for not commenting before. I have always loved it. Plz be back with a season two

  7. Liya

    Liya

    |Registered Member

    Its just awesome dear😘😘😍😍 shivika are too cute to handle…but You broke my heart dear,you ended with out showing priyan and omiya scenes💔you ended ff…I love Aryan very much,his character is really special.great work dear😊

  8. Anujohnson

    Anujohnson

    |Registered Member

    Awww….I loved this story …It is so sweet….and each episode was just like a serial playing in my mind…and I loved your concept of piyu,aryan,cabir and anika mystery….by the way, out ofmy curiosity I am asking….HOW DO YOU GET SUCH CRAZY IDEAS??? I have always wondered how you could write so well….you should not stay over here in tellyupdates….you shoupd rather go for script writing for actual tv shows or if you can movies also….I have never seen such a talented person in my life….thi not just a fact but the truth….you are a fantastic writer and you recreate your own stories in a different angle…when I or all other writers just go for simple topics like hatred to love, love to hatred etc. you have just made so many imaginary characters with such a connection even God would not know..and the best example is this story…..mindblowing story….I never want this story to end..but..hope you come back with another story…..till then…God bless you….
    Bye…tata…see you..

    With love
    Anu

  9. Bhavana

    Its awesome……👌👌👌👌👌Im really going to miss ur ss😢😢😢I am addicted to this ss but, like it is said all good things have to end one day or the other☺☺.Nd, have a happy new year….😊

  10. Nithu

    Nithu

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    Akkuu…enduku aapesavu..im crying…😢😢😢😢 kani epi bagundi…loved it.. 😢😢😢😭😭😭😭😢😢miss ua ff….

    • Nithu

      Nithu

      |Registered Member

      Ni phn no unte ippude call chese edche danini…ill miss ua ff akkuuu…love ua ff and u sooo much…(ik i bcam soo senti…nenu chala senti akka…)😢😢😢😭😭 again love u n ua ff again😍😍😍😘😘

  11. Kaayu

    Wow u rocked again….
    Bt soon come with another ff….
    I am waiting fr ur ff…ss…os…or anything else….bt come soon with ur update…
    From a silent reader…
    Kaayu…

  12. Pri_24

    Pri_24

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    My Nandupie you’ve super duper it idea dear and coming to update I loved family time and that juice splashing and Shivay’s explanation was awesome and Anika’s reaction is perfect and her decision for a fraction of minute even I am shocked with her decision and I hold my breath and cross finger that your magic will happen and it happen and I am happy and that marriage preparation is amazing and I loved that and their morning romance awww so lovely and fab and TeNvi are awesome and coming to PriYan I know you’ll come up wit their part in epilogue… (Greedy me saying you too come up with epilogue..😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 an I love you so much fir epilogue in advance…) And Omiya awww Om’s announcement in game time is amazing and Anika’s advice is nice and yet I am under bluch effect in my dreamworld with that last part of OmIya…😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊💝💝💝💝💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💝💝💝💓💓💞💞💞💕

    And coming to while story I loved Anika’s plan to expose Tia and I just love the way she did it in rage and Sahil’s state is worked perfectly for that and twist with Sahil’s comma is amazing and change in Shivay and his decision he take considering other is superb an ShivOmRuHil’s bond is mind blowing and Sahil’s cute jealousy and Rudra’s jealousy cause of is enjoyable and Anika’s grand entry woho I loved it confident and fierce and bold Anika treat to read and on cruise Shivay’s jealousy and Oberoi’s expression are worthy reading again ad again and PriYan and OmIya’s slow and steadily growing bond is good, their suicide plan give me goosebumps and Shivay’s that brainstorming slap to Anika for the first time I liked that Shivay slapped her and then Aryan and Cabby’s reaction are just awesome and their past is giving me michmichi and I am in love with Aryan and Om…😉😉😉😉😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘

    And you rocked throughout the FF and I am happy that my ideamate’s FF is hit and noe come soon with epilogue if you have time from records work and practical and love you a lot alot a lot my Nandupie…😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Nansshivika

      Nansshivika

      |Author

      Thanks a tons chocs.love u too a lot 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  13. Puvi

    Puvi

    |Registered Member

    It was awesome nandu u nailed it as always I felt bad tht ur ending this story 😢😢😢 but I am happy tht u gave happy ending I loved it so shivika 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 come back with epilogue

  14. Sanaya

    One more khidkitod episode….. I want it more but i m m happy that u r coming with another…….. Family time…. Juice scene…. Shivaye’s explaination….. Anika’s sudden decision….. Everything was, so perfect….. God u write so perfect…… Morng romance was awww❤❤❤❤❤anika’s jhakkas plan to expose tia… It was damm awesome….. Sahil in comma….. Amazing…. Shivomru were the best….. Sahils jealousy….. Rudra was also jealous…. That was so cute….. I seriously love ur writing skills nans….. I m sorry for not commenting in ur every episode….. But seriously for me u r the perfect writer…… U deserve more compliments than this…. But i just dont hv words…… 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘just write it like this….. Keep going nans…. Love u from the core…… ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  15. SamSun

    SamSun

    |Registered Member

    I loved it. awesome. but u r ending it, but pls post an epilogue. this is soooooooooo sweet.
    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

  16. Sofiya. S.

    Awesome episode nans. Your ff is just great dear. Pls do post it’s epilogue. You are a great writer dear waiting for more such ff’s.

  17. Mrunal

    Mrunal

    |Registered Member

    ohh my god…
    why…
    is it the end…???
    i want more..
    i become very greedy when it’s come to ur writing…
    why it’s ending…😭😭😭
    i skipped commenting on some previous parts but i was happily reading it.. and u broke my heart in pieces in last…

    anyways..
    which is started will end someday..
    may be timespan will be more or less..
    but it can’t continue to infinity…
    but in this small timespan also ur writing gave me lots of happiness.. & satisfaction…

    thank u dear for such lovely story..
    oopps short story.. i mean.

    love u nans…😘

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