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shivika os

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HIii…i am khusboo here…this was my first attempt to write this…hope u will enjoy it…

In previous scene ……when anika convinced shivaay for ganesh visarjan.. rudy went away from the vicinity to avoid shivaay’s scolding…bt he goes and joins dadi, priku, and his sumo who were standing little distance away from the convo place…
In the mean tym om informed shivaay that they came there to thank anika for convincing him for bisarjan…he also asked shivaay to thank anika…Anika was also curious to again hear thanku from her bagar billa…hearing the convo the other members also became curious to know whether sso will be say it this tym or just avoid it…
Bt to their disappointment shivaay skillfully changed the situation by asking anika to take his driver home to avoid crowd…

bt here anika being anika thought of teasing shivaay a little and said little bit loudly(unknown to herself also that it was audible to all)…”ha ha app kaise thanku bollenge…ego jo hai bhara para app mai…aheysan to app kisi ka man nahi…bas bari bari tadi hi mar sakteho…”.

This made shivaay go out of his mind…and forgetting the surrounding he snapped at anika and said rather justifying himself “hey u just cant say like that…shayad tum bhul gai ho…bt I have thanked and apologized for every thing…waise bhi tumhe kaise yaad rehega?…duniya ki number one bhulakad jo ho.. ”
“kya kha appne mai bhulakad hu…dekhiye mai manti hu ki appne thanku to bola tha par vo nase ki halat mai…nahi to hoso habas me app ke mu se thanku…vo to hati ko chaddi pehenane bali bat ho gai…”

“anika language…kaise words use karti ho…sunke bhi michmichi hoti hai…stop using those…”sso said in his style…bt on the other side dadi and her trope’s jaw was hanging as if it will touch the floor…they just cant believe the change in their perfectionist billu’s language…

“dekhiye mood mat bigariye…always language ka bahana marke topic se distract kar dete ho…dekhiye agar app ko mere words samaj nahi ata to app vo dictionary kyu bana lete…kya naaammm diya tha appne uskaaa(thinking little bit)…hain words by anika, hindi mai hindi sabdkos…”
“ohk ohk enough of it…us rat jo kuch bhi hua nase mai…noth..ing wa..s mea..nt to be…so use bhul jana hi behetar hoga…”shivaay said not making eye contact with anika.

“ohhhooo topic suru ki apne or dos ho gai mari…bhul to mai bhi jana chahati par sayad app hi ka kuchu dusra irada hai …rudy se to maine bari khubi se phone le liya tha…par app hi room mai chup chup ke video dek ke sab rewind kar rahe the…”anika said this in her total tapori style.

Hearing this shivaay with full rage said “dekho total credit apne upar mat lo…mai na hota to vo video replace bhi tum nahi kar pati…”
“phir suru ho gai tari marna…dekhiye yeh bat to appko manni paregi agar mai na hoti to appki banarasi paan ke chuskiya app ki family bale bhi le rahe hote…”anika snapped back…
This made shivaay go red…and he said…”aghhh…tumhe cute bolke maine apne life ki sabse bari galti ki laraku biman”
” hain hain mujhe bhi ganga me dubkiya lagani paregi appke kanji akhon ki tariff karne ke liye”…

“idhar khari kyu ho tab…jaona ganga mai dub hi jao…”shivaay said this by putting his index finger on anika’s nose…
“aghhh ganga mai dubki to mai lagaongi…par use pahele iss shir shir shir 108 kanji akhon bale baggard bille ki shadi karbaugi…dadi ko bhi rahat milegi ki unki billu ki shadi ho gai..”
“hey just stop calling me that…”
“Kyu billu ji app ko pata nahi iss billu nam pe mera or dadi ka copy right hai ”
“anika just stop calling me that or else I know my way to stop uu”

“nahi karungi stop kya kar lenge app…dadi ko phir se sikayat karenge…ki…’dadi maine apko kha tha iske samne vo…vo… nam mattt… boliye'(in total shivay style)…kyu billlu jii”
” just stop it anika…”shivaay screamed in the top of his voice..

“nahi karungi…nahi karungi…nahi karungi…billu ki shaddi hogi…billu ka sehera sajegaaa…by the time she could complete the sentence shivaay gave a small peck on her lips and walked away by saying that “age se bola to natija isse bhi bura hoga”…here anika got freezed in her plaace unable to emphasize what happened with her…
Spectacles of the show…cant believe what happened…
Our little priku behose…

Dadi” soumya puttar jara mujhe chute kat na…kahi mai sapna to nahi dekh rahi hu…”
Omru in unision “yehhh ho kya raha hai”

*sry for any grammatical mistake…
*actually i have posted this story in india foarms already……

27 Comments
  1. It was really amazing khusboo
    Keep writing dear
    take care

  2. Sahi mein kya mast likha hai yaar. Keep writing.

  3. Shivika

    Wat a todd os…..loved it……..pit nxt part for this too as i want to read it more

  4. Very nice ….keep writing

  5. WOW Darling. It was amazing.😚😚😚😚😚

  6. Dheemahee

    Wow wow wow Yar awesome one it was fab . Post next one soon if possible

  7. omg it was really cool yaar and very cute luvd it pls post nxt one asap

  8. Akshaya

    Cool yaar. I loved it.

  9. Awesome. Please post the next episode as soon as possible.

  10. Nithu

    It was super amazing waiting nxt part

  11. Epic loved it to the core

  12. It was amazing ep dear love it update soon………

  13. Khusb002309

    hey guyz….thanx fr ur comments…..but i am not a inborn writer……it was just a trial……..something just popped up in my mind and i wrote……bt anyways thanx….

    and another thing i never thought of continuing the story……….bt i will definitely try to write others…

  14. Its superbb……loved it…..update nxt part soon….😊

  15. It was nice u know it is avery cute fight i loved it

  16. Sat_9492

    Superb

  17. plzzzz cntinue it..
    it’s amaaaaazingggggg….

  18. Really superb

    1. Khusb002309

      thanku praash

  19. Khusb002309

    thanku everyone!!!

  20. Mukta

    Fantastic

  21. Hidden Sunshine

    It vs a Pesa wasul OSπŸ˜„ .. felt lyk asli IB writters ne hi isse bi lika hai … u really maintaind dr personality n represented dr actions in da same way as da show ☺

    1. Khusb002309

      Thank hidden sunshine

  22. write an epilogue

  23. Mrunal

    I’m speechless…
    superb amazing I’m able to say this only….

    1. Khusb002309

      Thank mrunal

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