SHIVIKA: My feelings towards you (part 1)

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Hiii friends… Actually after watching the saturday’s episode of IB, this thought striked my mind soo I’m here with this.
This is completely a different story from the serial & has no link with it. Hope you will like it.

Here goes the 1st part….

Anika’s pov:
It was morning, i was sleeping on my bed hugging my pillow. I can hear that my phone was ringing. When I saw the phone the screen flashed mallika’s name. I kept back my phone & opened the door only to see mallika standing there. By looking at me she asked whether I cried again. As usual I nodded in -ve but she caught me again. She just hugged me & assured that everthing will be fine. She asked me to get ready. I asked whether it is really necessary for me to attend the function. She nodded in +ve & hugged me again & said “Not for his sake, atleast come for our sake”. I broke the hug & went to the room to get ready for the function. Yes, it was the engagement function of the person whom I love with his lover. I’m unable to digest this fact, I cried silently & after a few min I composed myself & got ready. I went towards mallika & asked where our gang is??.

Mallika pov:
I was waiting outside & continously calling her for a long time but she was not responding. After few min she opened the door, I can see, her eyes are red & can easily understand that she was sobbing the last night. I can understand her feelings, it is really hard to attend the engagement of our love with other person. She was not willing to come to the function but it is a type of get-to-gether for our friends & also to get her out of this situation friends are the best medicine I guess. She went in & took a quite long time for getting ready, by this act I can make out that she was crying again. I called sid and said him about the situation, he asked me not to worry & bring her as they were waiting for us at the venue. I ended the call & saw her being ready, she was looking soo pretty in this attire, I wonder how that stupid missed this cute, sweet, crazy girl. She asked about our friends & I said her that they are already at venue. I took her with me but I can sense that she was still crying.
When we reached the venue I can see her somewhat relived but I guess this is not enough to get back our past anika. Yes, she was the happiest & craziest girl two months ago but now she lost all her charm. I hope god will send her medicine of happiness soon I.e the one who can make her the old anika & who can take her pain giving happiness to her.

Anika pov:
Finally we reached the venue. Now I must compose myself & act to be happy. I went to my friends gang & hugged everyone. We were meeting after many days, we were complimenting each other, sharing imp matter’s with each other & doing masti. I feel relived by being with them. May be they were the only reason of my happiness.

Shivaay pov:
Finally we reached the venue. The journey from Mumbai to Bangalore with my friends was a treat. We are here to attend this engagement of our best friends. The engagement is at evening but still we came early to meet our friends, tease them & enjoy with our gang. We went to them, wished them. As they were busy they asked us to be at the terrace & they will join soon. We came to the terrace & started playing some random games as usual. When we are playing anthyakshari & the turn is of me, to enlighten the situation, I started singing my fav song from ddlj.
“Tujhe dekha toh ye jaana sanam….
Pyaar hota hai dewaana sanam…

When I’m singing this I can hear a girl continuing my song. We started singing the whole song
I- with the male version.
She- with the female version.
Her voice is soo sweet, it caught my ears wanting more to listen of that. After completion of song I ignored my friends teasings & went to her & complimented her that she had a sweet voice. With a jerk she saw me, smiled at me & went off. How rude?? I complimented her but she didn’t even react. I just thought to ignore her.

Anika’s pov:
I, with my frnds came to him (Daksh) the person whom I loved but was getting engaged to another girl in few hours. We wished him, as he was busy with his relatives he asked us to be at the terrace & then he will be joining us. We stepped towards the terrace I can hear my fav song from ddlj. I don’t know why but I was lost somewhere in my dreamland & unknowingly started singing the song. After the song ended I was startled to see a person staring at me with his blue-green kanji eyes. I just gave a smile & left from there. I with my friends left to the other side of terrace & were having fun there. Like this doing masti with my friends, teasing them, the time was passing. Finally the time has come, the evening.I don’t know whether I can stay strong & watch the engagement but I tried my level best. When he was about to wear the ring to her I’m unable to control myself & left from there with tears in my eyes.

Shivaay pov:
Finally my friend was about to wear the ring to his girl. But the girl who was walking outside with tears caught my attention. She was the same girl who was singing with me in the morning, I just followed her. She was sitting on a bench & was crying vigorously, I went to her & tried to console her but she was not at all listening to me & also to my surprise she hugged me tight & sobbing. I guessed the matter & reciprocated the hug as she needs support now. I tried many ways to make her calm, distract & console but none worked I thought of an idea & took off my ring from my finger & put it on her finger & said “See now u r also engaged with me, stop crying now, else you fiancee will also start crying”. This act i done only to distract her but due to my sudden act she broke the hug & started scolding.

Anika pov:
I left from there & sat on a bench crying. A guy came to me and tried to console me. He is the same khanji eyed man. I need a support badly & not being in my senses I just hugged him. First he tried to console, support me but later he took advantage of this situation. He wore a ring to my finger & said that we are engaged. I was dumbstruck by his act I slowly got up from there and started scolding him, but to my surprise he was simply smiling. My anger is on peaks & I scolded him more but his words surprised as well as shocked me. He said with a cute puppy face “Why are you behaving as if you don’t like me, you also like me naa??” . I widened my eyes & started scolding again. He again said “If I was wrong then why are you still keeping my ring with you??”. With this I took the ring and throwed at his face & about to shout at him but mallika came to me and dragged me with her. When I was leaving I turned towards him only to find him staring at me with a smile, he winked at me & signed to smile. I turned my face to front & recalled the convo with him, a slight smile crept over my lips. This was the first smile I had after 2 sad months.

Mallika pov:
The engagement was done & suddenly I thought of anika & turned back only to find her missing. I informed sid about this & we both started searching her. After searching at many places I found her outside scolding a person & he was staring at her with a smile. I went to her & dragged her with me. When we were walking I’m really surprised to see her smiling. This was the first time I saw her smiling whole heartedly after these 2 sad months. I looked back at the person & saw him starring at anika with a smile.

So, done with my update. In this ff mallika & sid only know about anika’s love matter. In next part i will introduce anika’s & shivaay’s friends gang & their masti. Hope you like it. Please let me know about your views about this & whether to continue or not. Bye for now.

Signing off

Lalitha

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56 Comments
  1. Lalitha

    Sorry guys I don’t know what’s wrong with this.. The title of this was “MY FEELINGS TOWARDS YOU” purely a shivika ff…

  2. If you are writing a new story put it under a new name dont add you old story title it will get confusing expect the unexpected is totally diiferent from this story. Please separate them and update the correct part of the story

    1. Lalitha

      I’m sorry for troubling you but pls try to understand me. I posted with correct title but don’t know what’s wrong it was updated with the wrong title.

  3. Samm

    awww… so cute! 🙂 i like this shivaay 🙂 waiting for the next

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it.. Will post the next one asap.

  4. Lalitha

    Actually I posted it with the correct title only but don’t know what’s wrong with it, It was updated with a wrong title. & pls let me know whether to continue this ff or not.

  5. Shrutika

    It’s awesome. Please pay the next part soon!!

  6. Shrutika

    It’s awesome. Please Post the next part soon!!

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you dear?
      I’m glad that you liked it… I’ll post the next part asap.

  7. U dont need to ask us Lalitha.. Pls do continue.. Its fantastic.. SSO in his romantic avatar..?
    Do post asap..

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you so much dear?
      I’m glad that you liked it.. I’ll post the next one asap.

  8. Mrunal

    it happens dear….
    let it be….
    first of all i didn’t expected this at all…
    secondly this was amazing dear…
    so beautiful and unexpected in my case…

    precap is friends mast… is it a friends os… like shama i mean bhavi was gonna do…?? or the normal one..

    eagerly waiting for next epi….

    1. Mrunal

      *masti
      typo mistake…

      and i forgot…
      love u dear…???

      1. Lalitha

        Thank you soo much sis?
        I’m glad that you liked it…

        About the friends gang.. No sis only IB characters it’s normal one.

        I’ll post the next one asap &
        Love you sis???

    2. First of all I agree with ur words mru ….I never ever even for a minute thought that our lalitha the most silent but beautiful mysterious personality can write in such a way ( I mean its gripping storyline) I can see ur version 2 lalitha which is actually a romantic emotional personality….. See I loved ur storyline to the core as all the emotions were on peak which I love to read u know I can clearly visualize the scenario ….to that perfection u wrote sweetheart….

      As the days which pass u will get ur best version of u …..I mean I got to learn many things in my five months journey as an author or a person…

      And mru thanks for keeping me in ur head always that’s so cute move my sissy love u both…. And lalitha don’t ado just chillo 5 I mean chill ur story is good not to worry …..just go ahead and rock the floor …??…

      Love u …and if I don’t comment becoz my personal issues don’t think I am not there for you I am and I will always be…..

      Bye…
      ??

      1. Lalitha

        Thank you soo much sis?…
        This means a lot to me…
        I’m glad that you liked it…

        No issues if you are not able to comment, I can understand sis… I know that you are always there for me…. I’m soo lucky to have you sis…
        Love you???

  9. So cuteeeeeee dearrrrrr… Waiting for the next update.

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you dear?
      I’m glad that you liked it… I’ll post the next part asap.

  10. U must continue it…. It’s interesting

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…

  11. Ruksy

    Continueits fabulous

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…

  12. Wow…. it’s just awesome…plzz continue….

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…

  13. Vincy

    Interesting

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?

  14. Samaira20

    Superb one dear…. Excited for the next…Post soon….

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…
      I’ll post it soon

  15. Awesome…waiting fr nxt

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…
      I’ll post it soon

  16. It s fab… Continue n update soon..

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…
      I’ll post it soon

  17. That was absolutely stunning. I really really loved the episode and Shivaays antics just touched my heart! He was simply adorable and charming. While reading your work i could imagine Nakuul Mehta staring and winking with a huge smile and the scene was very overwhelming. I really can’t wait to see how this story progresses.

    Waiting for next!

    Awestruck!

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you so much dear?
      I’m glad that you liked it… After reading ur comment I can’t stop smiling..
      I’ll post it soon..

  18. Savera

    Amazing episode

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you dear?
      I’m glad that you liked it..

  19. Superb . plz continue. . n update next one asap

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…
      I’ll post it soon

  20. Superb… Loved it.. Waiting for the next..

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…
      I’ll post it soon

  21. Kehkasha

    Hey dear…
    This was super duper awesome….
    Loved it ….
    And plz don’t ask for continuing….
    Just do it…..
    Post more and more parts……

    And this was a surprise……for me….
    U know what the title of ur other ff is justified here…..
    EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED….
    This was unexpected…….but….now I am expecting a lot….

    Continue this amazing work…
    Bye tc….

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you soo much dear?
      I’m glad that you liked it…
      I never expected that this surprises you…
      I hope I’ll reach your expectations….
      Love you dear???

  22. This is written in wattpad, right?

    1. Lalitha

      Sorry, I’m not on wattpad…

  23. The episode was lovely ??. Loved it. Pls post the next episode asap. Can’t wait to read the next one ??.

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…
      I’ll post it soon

  24. Awesome….superbbbbb….loved it…. waiting 4 the nxt…update soon…

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…
      I’ll post it soon

  25. Maria

    Superb episode yaar I loved it…

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…

      1. Maria

        There was no reason for me to dislike ur ff ….it was superb….I REALLY ENJOYED It….Waiting for ur next update

  26. Ashwathy

    Superb dude……. It was amazing…… Plz update next epi asap……..

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?
      I’m glad that you liked it…
      I’ll post it soon

  27. Superb update…

    1. Lalitha

      Thank you?

  28. Nansshivika

    Really loved this story line I read just now three parts I thought to comment on third part but I thought a good start deserves a lot so I am again commenting Here.sry for being late. It’s really superb Yaar.

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