A SHIVIKA KISS BY PKJ (OS)

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Shivaay Singh Oberoi entered his room one day to see his room filled with unknown girls all over his bed,surrounding his wife,in center was his beautiful wife Annika..Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi.
“Bhaiyya”- two girls launched at his arm,”love you bhaiyya “.
“Astha,Ammu”- Shivaay hugged them back,”love you too my cute little girls”.
“Bhaiyya..not fair”-two more girls made sad pout,” you forgot us as soon as you meet Astha”.
“Annika(pkj Annika not his wife) and Pushpa..”- Shivaay smiled,”I always remember you..but this Astha and Ammu are crazy you see”.
“Its ok Bhaiyya..we love you”- Pushpa said and joined the group hug dragging the violet dp Annika with her”.
“Bhaiyya…”- Pushpa broke the hug,” you change,have your kaali coffee . we will be waiting down stair”.
“Haan Bhaiyya”- Annika(from pkj)agreed,”Waise bhi OmRu bhaiyya and Prinku are down stair”.
“I will change and we can talk then”- Shivaay opened his wash room door and soon disappeared behind the glass walls,”Annika my towel”.
“It is already there”- Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi shouted back,”its old trick..try some thing new”.
“Bhabhi..”- Astha felt awkward as his child sister Ammu is present hearing the romantic exchange of words between his brother and sister in law,”some of our other family members are coming here in an hour”.
“Oh bete ki”- Annika face palmed,”you have another family too. Seems like all the ancestors of Oberoi family were chuntumai to have several wife and offsprings”.
“No no bhabhi”-Pushpa protested,”dheere boliye..Astha can hear..then your gangaram is sure”.
“How many members are in your family”- Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi asked almost in a whisper.
“Almost 210 members are there”- Astha counted,”But one and only Renima di can give you the list”.
“Why are they all coming here today??”- Annika got happy to meet so many new friends.
“To help you..why else”- A loud sound came from behind her,”we are very eager to see some romance..solid romance in Ishqbaaz and you guys are very slow”.
“You can see our romance in Ishqbaaz??”- Annika show her all teeth,”Oh bete ki!!..I never know you all can see our romance. In fact you all are eager for that”.
“We are very eager”- Ranilya and Chavi shouted in unison,”Its almost one year and still we are aww…”.
“How can you girls see us like that??”- Annika protested weakly,” this very bad to see others romancing”.
“Question Kumari”- Anu smiled sarcastically,”now I can feel the poor condition of our favourite Mahi when you were troubling him with this questions all the while”.
“This is not fair Annikaji”- some girls shouted,” We all love watching it and you can’t stop is from it”.
“But your school”- Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi asked looking at the younger girls,” your study”.
“We are doing quite very well”- Sahabna got excited,” We will do the best in study bhabhi”.
” Some Aloo paratha for you all”- Annika ordered Manish, Munna and Gopal to serve juice and snacks for all,”aap sab khaiyye na”.
“Nahi….”- All shouted,denying in choros,”we are fine ..”.
“Why are you all not eating??”- Annika got confused.
“Annika didi”- Arpita tapped his sister on shoulder,”because they all saw Shivaay jiju eating the bhayanakly tasty jala bhuna paneer”.
“Oh..Let that Billu come down”- Annika promised ,”I will ask him to prepare tasty delicious snacks for you all”.
” Pinky promise”- again all shouted,” pinky promise”.
“You all know about Pinky Promise too”- Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi widened her eyes.
“We know many more things right from the beginning and are sorry to say that”- Archiya battled her eye lashes,” only Shivaay is kissing you on forehead, hands and you are not even returning even one kiss back to him”.
“All come close”-Annika dragged all the PKJ members close and make a circle just like players do right before a cricket match,”trust me..I wanted to kiss him back but I felt immense mich michi and a lot of raita when Shivaay come in front of my eyes”.
“This is called love”- Lax make some meaning,”just close your eyes and kiss Shivaay”.
“Don’t worry nothing will happen that way and a lot of things will happen”- Liji said,” I hope you understand what I mean..ahem ahem things between a husband and a wife”.
“Normal husband and wife not crazy like you two”- all shouted for the uncounted number of time by now,” normal..normal!!”.
“Ok I will go and kiss him right now”- Annika ran to their room,” I will kiss him back. You girls are so sweet and I don’t want to disappoint you all “.
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“Shivaay”- Annika ran to his arm,”You are so nice..Sweet Singh Oberoi”.
“This much of affection today”- The kanji eyed Billu kept the coffee mug aside to hug his wife back,”any special occasion”.
“Aise hi..can’t I hug my legally wedded husband”- Annika tightened her arms around Shivaay,”I feel like hugging you happy as your sisters and their friends are here”.
“Shivaay..suniye na”- Annika suddenly tried to kiss his cheek but at the same time Shivaay turned his face to his wife to look at her happy face.
“aww….”- Shivaay couldn’t express his feelings and emotions,” what the wuck!!”.
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“The group of girls in Rudra’s room gaped loudly, till that time all were watching the TV screen with out blinking and now all closes their mouth with palm,eyes widened,”yay yay yay yay!!”…
“Hey girls…”- Rudra felt happy to meet so many girls in his room,”I am Rudy boy”.
“Rudra Bhaiyya”- Astha, Annika(pkj), Sabana, Shree, Pushpa and Ammu disappoint poor Rudra,”Soumya is calling you”.
“How many girls are here”- Rudra is Rudy boy the lady killer,”I want to know all the beautiful names of such amazing girls”.
“Nivedita, Ranilya, Anu, Liji, Akriti, Shree, Chavi, Archi, Manya, Nikita, Gagathri, Bella,
Anisha, Shraddha, Nithu, Rajjo, kanfi, fordose, Vivikhta…..”- Renima took a break for taking a breath,” Arpita, Krishna, Riddhima, Bhavana, Navya, Sanaa, Piyuu, jerry, Ahsana, Bunny, Mehak, Niriha…..”( sorry yaaron I am unable to write all names here..very weak memory of Astha is unlimited damn thing!!) .
“And she..”- Rudra pointed to a corner,”a human shaped beet or a girl shaped beautiful tomato”.
“Oh that girl is our head of blush club”- All girls laughed at Rudra’s curiosity,” that is Mouni”
“Oh!!”- Rudra left the room putting logic,”how can a girl be so red”.
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“They all came for this work here”- Shivaay let out a cry that made no sense at all,”my sisters also”.
“So what!!”- Annika fought back leaving her pink face at back sear,”they wanted to see our romance”.
“And you make the world see this”- Shivaay pointed his lips then her,” we have to show our face to all of them now as soon as we meet them down stair”.
“They all only encouraged me to kiss you”- Annika defended her new found friends,” they directly asked as they thought you deserve one kiss”.
“Haan haan..Annika .I see they said and you directly..”- Shjvaay saw the mirror, his face turned red,”I..you..we..aww..” .
“What..I , you, we..”- Annika shyly smiled,”I kissed you on lips ..I was trying to kiss your cheek and this happened accidentally”.
“In that case..”- Shivaay hugged his wife side ways and they both came down smiling ,”I have to thank all your friends “.
“Huh!! app”- Annika pinched his arm ,” Shameless Singh Oberoi”…
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“We already know that you want to thank us”- the girls roared,” no need to thank us”.
“Actually..I personally”- Shivaay started.
“Just some times visit our home”- Anu gave the address,” we will be happy”.
“Don’t trouble my Khanna”- Liji threatened,” find us by yourd
self”.
“We love you Shivika”- Girls got up to leave Oberoi Mansion.
“Shivika??’- Shivaay frowned a little.
“Oh yeah..”- girls answer back,” we call you both as SHIVIKA.. Shivaay- Annika..your couple name”.
“We will visit you again soon”- the girls left from Oberoi Mansion,”with our wishes for Ishqbaaz”.
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“They are so nice”- Annika closed the door,”I felt very happy meeting them all”.
“I too meri jhansi ki raani”- Shivaay once again kiss her forehead with affection.
Again!!!

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85 Comments
  1. Archisha

    Nice one

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Archisha dear. Happy weekend.

  2. Mehakchalag

    O god i loved it.Ek kiss ke liya kitne betab h hum sab.Yeh idea apka tha di?Aww apne mera naam bhi liya thank u(woh mehak main hi thi na paaka).I m very happy after reading this.U r fabulous writer.Love u.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Mehak..that is you only. Yes we are desperate for a kiss. Thanks yaar. Happy weekend.

  3. Woww …Asthadi very nice..!!!! Mujhe parne ke saath pata chal gaya ki yeh apne hi lika hai…Aise aur likha kijiye

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anitaa..thanks yaar.
      happy weekend.

  4. Wow!!!!! Dii it’s Awesome….. Padhna ka waqt pata chal gaya ki ya meri astha di na likha hain…. Shivaay bhaiya become sweet singh oberoi… Luv it… Nd ap apna alien feeling kb post karana wala ho??? Wasa vi now a days all ishque feel d alien feeling in mahasangam…. Lol…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bunny…Thanks yaar. I will try to update alien feelings soon.
      Happy weekend.

  5. Surbhi Sharma

    Diduuuuuu …. sig sig boo hoo boo hoo..???
    Aap aisa kaise kar skte ho . Aap mere ko bhul gyi . So bad didu . Sab mujhe bhul gye na . ? . Mai thode days ke liye nhi aayi toh aap sab mujhe bhul gye . ??? . Not fair didu .
    Waise , ur this part was just amazing . Beyond imagination . Loved it to the core . And one of the best os I have read yet . Just Muahhhh . ????
    And , didu . Plzz inform na to everyone that my tu pg is isn’t opening today , I mean it’s opening but comment aren’t loading . So sad. ??? and I feel so so so angry , what to do .
    And , di post alien feelings soon . Waiting for it . ??
    Love you . ????? (But maaf nhi kiya ha??)

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi…This name seems familiar..hurraay(Rudy style) my choti ..I just missed your name not forget you..kaan pakadke sorry chhoti.
      Thanks and have a happy weekend.

  6. Awesome di.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks dwet dear.
      Happy weekend.

  7. Shraddha-DBO

    Awesome di, thank you for taking me to Rudy bhaiyya’s room?
    ( Even though I didn’t have a dialogue,its ok, but next time I visit OM, I will surely speak up, ok?????)

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Shraddha…next time dialogue sure. Rudy bhaiyya’s room tour lol.
      Thanks dear
      Happy weekend.

  8. Nita D

    Wow Astha baby….This is awesome….First Narbhi as a couple seeing Shivika and now all of us the fans at shivika’s place….kahan se laati ho ase concepts…..?

    1. Kanfi

      Xctly i m also wondering the same

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Nita..I was just sitting and you know khali dimaag saitan ka ghar.
      Thanks yaar..
      Happy weekend.

      1. Nita D

        Tumhara toh shaitan bhi sabko hasane ka kaam karta hai…sabka bhala karta hai…??

  9. Nita D

    Vese what us PKJ??

    1. Kanfi

      Yaa same same…i also want to know whats pkj

      1. Nita D

        Aaj sab kuch same same hi ho raha hai apan dono ke saath kanfi??

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Nita and Kanfi..aww.. you must know the meaning of pkj..it means Paglon ki jhoond…a group of mad girls..Ishqbaaz fandom on telly updates…

      1. Nita D

        Thx Astha. I hope even I m there in this toli….

      2. Kanfi

        Ohhh…paglon k jhund…aj khud ko pagal bolke bri khushi horhi h:-P 😛

    3. Kanfi

      Hn same same pagal b nikle hm dono:-P 😉

      1. Nita D

        Haha true kanfi??

  10. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome ashu dii…. Mind blowing…
    How are you and how is your thumb… Thank you for mentioning me….
    Lots of love and care dii….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nikku..I am fine a little after a short tour to hospital . damn that door knob.
      Thanks yaar. happy weekend.
      Love you too.

  11. Niriha

    Awesome…fabulous dear loved it ???????and update ur alien feelings ff soon waiting for it

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Niriha… I will update alien feeling soon. Thanks and happy weekend dear.

  12. owwwwwwwwwwwwwww thank u di fr giving me a chance to go fr obroi houuse and u made me speak with anika bhabi soo sweet of uu di i loved the whole part justt awsome

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Sabana…perhaps you don’t know but I was holding your hand tight when we all were in Oberoi Mansion..kahin tum uss bhool bhullaiyya mein khojaati toh!! lol.
      Thanks yaar and have a happy weekend.

  13. Zaveesha

    It is just out of the world…seriously Astha di ur sense nd style of writing is just fab….sb shivaay bhaiya nd anika bhabhi se milne hi pahunch gye…for just one kiss…wooww…u ideas of writing I’m becoming fan…keep writing nd entertaining us…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Zaveesha..
      Congrats for your registration on TU . you never know may be we will be visiting OM quite from now onwards. ha ha..
      Thanks dear.
      happy weekend.

      1. Zaveesha

        Thank u soo much di…don’t know why but i get myself registered on TU…
        Hoping that may we meet SSO and ASSO often nd demands our wishes…
        Happy weekends to u too…

  14. Madhuani

    While reading this I thought it must be you and see I was right.
    Only u can come up with such tablatodh idea .
    I really don’t like it ‘coz I loved it.
    Really we r so much impatient for this (kiss from anika’s side) (winks)

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Madhu…definitely we are desperate for a kiss from Annika(blush blush).
      Thanks yaar have a happy weekend .

  15. Thedreamsoul

    You are seriously something di , it’s awesome. Mind-blowing idea and the whole PKJ had a wonderful tour in Oberio mansion . You never fail to surprise us and love you dear ?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Saana…love you too. Thanks and happy weekend dear.

  16. Alekhika20

    Beautiful os

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Alekhika dear. happy weekend yaar.

  17. Nithu

    chala bagundiiiiiiiiiiiii

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nithu..lol (blushing).
      Happy weekend dear.

  18. Kanfi

    Ohh astha…
    What a fabulous work u’ve done yr…..
    I m just smiling through out reading n still smiling,,,,,
    Just loved it yr,,,whole ishqbaazians at oberoi mansion…
    U mentioned me,,,,i m sooll happy….
    I literallly thoroughly enjoyed it….
    From where u get all these ideas….!!!
    Love u yr.—–,,,
    U r the best..,most creative writer

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Kanfi…awww
      keep smiling always.
      Thanks dear.
      Happy weekend.

  19. Navz

    Awww……ur such a crazyyyyy and cutieee
    U brought whole pkj here…what a covos took place…lovely aastha.
    Really i get such a good feeling after reading any of ur writings..thank u for that.
    Kash mein bhi iss pkj ki member hoo…but i will not comment frequently noo…soo its ok .hahha

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Navya..you are one from pkj yaar.
      Always keep smiling. happy weekend.
      ha ha ha…love you yaar.

  20. Haridhra

    Hiiiiiiiii Astha di …. My god it was damn hilarious n by the way sorry for not commenting on Alien feelings , u know lack of time di,

    But I was regularly following it n I tnk tis Pkj clan with Shivika it was fully madness overloaded epi.. Its freaking awsm n u never fail in making us laugh with ur enormous humour sense.. U r really a naughty girl haan. I knw tis will be the wish of the whole Pkj clan tnq so much for this wonderful work..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Haridhra..Indeed I am one naughty girl as I am a part of pkj.
      keep laughing always dear.

  21. AnuluvsIB

    Aaaasthu gaaaru!!! My love!!
    I just loved it soooo much!! It was simply awesome!!???
    My favourite human shaped beet or tomato!!! Oh god mouni shudn read this!!
    I was all ????? while reading this!!

  22. Gayathri.visu

    OMG!! Whole PKJ members are in OM!!! Seriously di, from where did u get this concept? This is the 3rd time, I m reading this os.

    Wonderful concept! And very different too….
    And u mentioned my name too….yippeeee! Also I m so sad di. I m in OM, but I can’t able to do stupid pinky ponky’s OMM! Next time plz give that honour to me only di!

    How r u di? How was ur thumb? Plz di I want Alien feelings but if u r not feeling well then its ok di.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Gayathri..I will try to update alien feelings soon. My thumb is fine after this much of thumps up love from pkj.
      OMM of PPD by Gayathri..nice idea lol.
      Be happy always dear..throw all your sorrow away. keep smiling. Love you.

  23. Heading dekh kar mere ko pata chalgayithi ki ye paaka asthababy hi he…really kahan se laati ho ye ideas. .pura universe tod..
    I can’t stop laughing. ..specially mouni blusing quen?????
    Good job..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arpita Darling…keep laughing yaar. tumhari dialogue pasand aaya na?? mujhe pata hai you like that.ha ha ha..

  24. Renimarenju

    Haaye….haaaye…..Aastha …..This was really sweet, oh bete ki i can remember 210 names. ….no baaba…every time i miss any one; name …..as i said i need mentos and in pkj no one is giving me that……..oh my maata……this os was so sweet…….i enjoyed it dear…..so lovely …..dear….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Renima… only you can do that. Here I am sending you a box full of mentos..hope aap ki dimaagki batti jalegi kuch zyada se bhi upar. But I don’t think you need any mentos pakka.
      Thank you dear.

  25. Jerry_36

    Hey Aastha di. I hope you are fine. Thank you for mentioning my name, I am glad that you remember me?
    Coming to the os, its amazing. I loved it. Rudy is toh always flirting. And Shivika kiss? How you always get these new concepts. This one is fabulous❤

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Jerry…I am fine dear. Thanks yaar. Keep smiling always. Love you

  26. Amayaa

    He bhagwan kya karu mai apni is bahna ka
    Sabse different sabse unique one nd only AASTHA REDDY
    Baap re baap kisi ko nahi chora hamare bhaiya bhi 2 min. Ke liye shock ho gaye the ki ye unki ajibo garib bahne kaha se aa gai
    A BIGGGGGG BIGGGGGGGG BIGGGGGGGG THANK YOU AASTHU DI
    ( I know hamare beech no thank u allowed but for sometimes bhul jao because aaj to thank u banta hai )
    Aapne meri million dollar times wish puri kar di
    Whole pkj family meet with Shivika in Oberoi mansion too in one frame
    YEAH YEAH YEAH highest name taken AMMU along with her di AASTHA Really di I felt too awkward when we all standing in a row nd our bhabhi was busy in exchanging romantic words ( wink wink )
    Starting from AASTHA AMMU waah waah waah
    Anikaa ( hamari pkj vali ) aur pushpa di dono ke words GAZAB the
    Nd that reply of our bhaiya ‘ but this Aastha nd ammu r crazy u see ‘
    My god we r crazy me bhi craziest
    Mujhe to meri aapki Arpu ki Anikaa ki Anu di ki Liji di ki Rani di ki lax di ki pushpa di ki Renima di ki Sab ke dialogues khirkitor darwajator chattor ghartor lage
    Lekin Ek baat batao aap pkj se kaha gayab ho
    No reply on my comment ( which mentioned u too ) no reply on my pm to u
    Ye ho kya raha hai ( My usual style )
    Finger pain kam hue agar ho gaye to pkj me jaldi aao everyone is missing u especially me
    Mouni di blushing queen Anu di Maahimaniacs aur Liji di khannu club ki head h CONFIRM
    I hope we will visit Oberoi mansion Soon in future aur hamari car ( nahi nahi car me kaha se aayenge 210 members ) mera matlab h bus me ( bus me to aa jayenge na ) learn to drive bus too hamari bus aap hi ko chalani h
    Mujhe to pata hi nahi tha THANKS TO SHAB varna kahi mai miss na kar deti agar aisa ho jata to mai sabse unlucky girllllllll hoti is universe me HHHAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW Ammu missing Tia baby in presence of Anika bhabhi not fair ha
    Maine IB TU PAGE me starting from page 1 se title padhna shurru kiya
    Page 4 tak jab nahi mila to mujhe laga May be Maine piche hi miss kar diya but phir Maine socha nahi aisa nahi ho sakta because abhi tak to koi weird title vale OS aaye hi nahi h
    And then I finally found it on 5th page

    Okkkkkkkk done come 2 pkj
    luuuuuuvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuu containerrrrrrrrsssssss ??????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Ammu… official blabbering queen.
      Don’t worry I will drive the bus. I will come tonight to pkj page. tum thi na bhaiyya ko support karne keliye so…
      Love you..take care…stay happy.

  27. Riddhima

    Astha you rocked it yaaarr….
    How it is possible ..you took me to oberai mansion…
    Rudy boy was cool ???
    I serious wanna meet old om ???..
    Can I meet him and talk with him ..???,

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Riddhima…When we were busy on Shivika..only you were drooling over Om as he asked you to message his open hair by olive oil. And trust me you were blushing. I wanted to ask you then but Om is my brother so…I stay away from being a kawab mein haddi in between both your romance…ha ha.

      1. Riddhima

        Astha …. OM????
        I’m really blushing …
        ???????
        ???

  28. Chavi

    Astha..meri Jaan..awesome come back with ur beautiful OS..shivika kiss by pkj..?????..

    Really felt happy..u got fine …love u dear…

    So all our sweet…ishquies visited OM in ur os…n met shivika Rudy.. N made them to blushhh…n we too blushed …??Hmmm ???..thank u dear…for including all our names…

    Keep writing …meri Jaan..god bless u with all sorts of happiness ah..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Chavi. I saw our angel and what is the need to say now that “I love them” as you know that I loved them before too. they are cute and adorable. Take care my jhansi ki rani. Love you too.

  29. Pushpa

    Astha darling…u r owsm…. this is suoer cool & great piece…..i mean how on earth h hv this writters mind in u yaar..fabulous….please continue ye great work……?????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Pushpa..aww.. thank you yaar. I am blushing here.

  30. NICE ASTHA

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Chaithu dear.

  31. Fabulous… Amazing dear…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Ankita .

  32. Archiya

    Astha
    this was super duper khidkitod.. darwaza tod.. i was blushing all along an laughing like anything..

    1. Archiya

      i was really imagining all of us in shivika rooom… how nice na if v could really get a chance to visit shivika in their room(wink)

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Archu…we will have snacks with spin the bottle on poolside. Mazaa aayega archi. See even I am getting addicted to pool side.

  33. Poonguzhali

    nice ff akka. u na different from others

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Poonguzhali..aww…( blush blush)

  34. AMkideewani

    Crazily mindblowing??????❤❤❤???????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      May be somewhat like your name dear..crazy thought.

      1. AMkideewani

        ?not my fault

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Very funny..ha ha..

  35. Piyuu

    super se bhi upar….thune whole pkj ko lekar gayi om me ur os padne ke samay maine imagine bhi karthi mei ithni kushi hu tu soch bhi nahi sakti…loved it yaar…thank u so much for mentioning my name…shivika kiss is really awwwwwwww.thank u so much dear…keep writing..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Piyuu.. always wecome. love you too.

  36. Tanz

    Amazing, fantastic, awesome,fantabulous, khidkitod,darwazatod….and what not.Oh I really missed your works and I get this as a welcome, just mind-blowing. This is by far one of the best OS I have ever read.You really are a talented writer Astha Di and you prove it with each of your work . You’ve included Everyone I remember and that’s something incredible…If you can remember so many names (really many) then I believe you don’t have weak memory.??

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanzs..thanks yaar. If my memory is weak also I will manage by eating mentos..dimag ki batti jala de..ha ha ha..Renima di prescribed mentos for strong memory.

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