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#SHIVIKA #CONFESSION AFTER KIDS OS – SHRUTI

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GUYS THIS IS MY FORST ONE. SO PLZ TELL ME SHALL I CONTINUE WRITING MORE OR NOT. SO HERE I BEGIN..
IT WAS 7 IN THE MORNING WHEN A SWEET GIRL CAME TO A LADY WHO WAS SLEEPING PEACEFULLY AND KISSED HER ON HER CHEEKS.
GIRL- BYE MUMMA. M GOING TO SCHL. SEE YOU
LADY- SHIVIKA? O BETE KI! M LATE AGAIN. ANYWAYS DARLINGG GO NOW YOUR BUS MUST BE WAITING. BYE (SHE KISSES HER)
(THE LADY IS ANIKA)
SHIVIKA- LUV U MUMMA
ANIKA{A}- LUV U TO BABY
SHIVIKA LEAVES
A- WILL I EVER EVEN GET UP ON TIME. NOWADAYS TOH I DON’T EVEN GET UP UNTIL SHIVAYE OR SHIVIKA WAKES ME UP. BECHARE SHIVAYE. HE DOES EVERYTHING.
SHIVAYE ENTERS THE ROOM WITH TWO COFFEE MUGS
SHIVAYE{S}- YES, REALLY BECHARA ME. I HAVE TO DO EVERYTHING SEND MY DAUGHTER TO SCHOOL, WAKE UP MY KUMBHKARAN WIFE, MAKE BREAKFAST FOR EVERYONE AND THEN EVEN OFFICE. AND I DON’T EVEN GET A KISS FROM MY WIFE
(HE FAKE CRIES. JUST THEN HE FELT A TOUCH OF SOFT LIPS ON HIS CHEEKS. ANIKA KISSED HIM. HE WAS HAPPY!!)
A – NAUTANKI .. AB HAPPY?
S- SMIRKS AND SAYS NOPE
ANIKA UNDERSTANDING HIS INTENTIONS PUSHES HIM AND SAYS I HAVE TO GO GET READY. TODAY I AM GOING FOR SHOPPING WITH GAURI. SHE GETS UP TO LEAVE
SHIVAYE HOLDS HER BANGLES WITH ONE FINGER. AND PULLS ANIKA. HE KISSES HIS LADY LOVE AND SAYS –
S- NOW YOU CAN GO
ANIKA BLUSHES AND LEAVES
ON COMING BACK SHE FINDS SHIVAYE GONE. SHE IS SAD BUT FINDS A PARCEL ON HER BED WITH A LETTER-
ANIKA,
WEAR THIS SAREE AND GET READY BY EXACT 7 PM. TODAY WE ARE GOING OUT FOR DINNER. I HAVE ASKED GAURI TO TAKE CARE OF SHIVIKA
YOURS SHIVAYE
BY THE END ANIKA IS BLUSHING HEAVILY AND HAPPY .
A – TODAY I WILL TELL HIME THAT I LUV HIM A LOT. I WONT WAIT ANYMORE AS A NEW MEMBER IS GONNA COME. I AM SOO EXCITED.
EVENING-
ANIKA IS GETTING READY. SHE WEARING A BLACK SAREE WITH RED BORDER MINIMAL MAKEUP AND HAS LEFT HER HAIR OPEN ON HER HUSBAND’S WISH. SUDDENLY SHE FEELS TWO HANDS AROUND HER WAIST. SHE DOESN’T PUSH THEM AS SHE KNOWS IT IS SHIVAYE. { SHIVAYE WEARS A SUIT MATCHING TO ANIKA. A BLACK ONE WITH A BIT TOUCH OF RED ON THE COLLAR AND HIS SCISSORS BROOCH}
S- I TOLD U TO GET READY BY 7 IT IS ALREADY 7.10 SO I HAD TO COME UP TO CHECK
A – WO SHIVAYE ACTUALLY..( SHIVIKA COMES)
SHIVIKA{SH}- PAPA..
SHIVAYE PICKS HER UP IN HIS ARMS AND KISSES HER
S- YES MY PRINCESS..
SH- YOU BOTH ARE GOING LEAVING ME ALONE AT HOME
A – IF YOU WANT YOU CAN ALSO COME BETA
( SHIVAYE FREAKS OUT AND SHOUTS NOOO!! HE RECEIVES AN INTENSE LOOK FROM BOTH MOTHER-DAUGHTER )
( HE TAKES SHIVIKA ASIDE AND SAYS-
S- PRINCESS PLZ LET US GO ALONE ONLY NA YOU STAY HERE WITH YOUR CHACHI. I’LL GET YOU YOUR FAV ICE CREAM WHILE RETURNING. ( HE LOOKS AT HER WITH PLEASING EYES)
SHIVIKA LAUGHS AT HIM AND SAYS
SH- I KNOW DAD, YOU ARE GONNA PROPOSE MUMMA TODAY. I JUST CAME TO WISH YOU ALL THE BEST
( SHIVAAYE CONFUSED AT THIS THINKING HOW DOES SHE KNOW THAT. HIS THOUGHTS INTERUPTED)
SH- DAADDD!! ARE YOU GOING OR SHALL I COME WITH U GUYS?
S- SAYS NO NO PRINCESS M LEAVING TAKE CARE.
SH- FINE GO, BUT GET ME 2 ICE CREAMS
S- WHY TWO?
SH- ONE FOR LETTING YOU GO ALONE WITH MUMMA OTHER ONE FOR NOT LETTING YOUR SURPRISE OUT TO MUMMA
SHE WINKS
S- YOU ARE JUST LIKE YOUR MUM. HE GIVES AN IMPOSSIBLE LOOK . KISSES HER AND BIDS BYE
WHILE AT THE RESTAURANT SHIVIKA ARRIVE
A – SHIVAAYE! Y IS THIS PLACE EMPTY? NO ONE HERE?
S- THIS WHOLE RESTAURANT HAS BEEN BOOKED FOR YOU MA’AM.
A – SHOCKED AS WELL AS CONFUSED. OK LET’S GO
( SHE SITS ON TABLE BUT THEN SHIVAAYE STOPS HER AND SAYS)
S- OUR TABLE IS RIGHT OUT SIDE NEAR THE POOL
AT THE POOLSIDE
THERE IS A TABLE FOR TWO BY THE POOL. YELLOW LIGHTINGS HUNG OVER THE TREES. THE GROUND FULL OF ROSE PETALS AND SOFT COOL BREEZE BLOWING BY
ANIKA IS MESMERISED BY THIS AND SAYS
A – WOOOW SHIVAYE! I LUVED IT A LOT. ITS JUST AMAZING.
SHIVAYE HUGS HER FROM BEHIND AND SAYS
S- REALLY?
A – YES
S- THEN GET READY MRS. ANIKA SHIVAYE SINGH OBEROI. YOU HAVE THE WORLD’S BIGGEST SURPRISE COMING.
HE KISSES HER BACK AND COMES INFRONT OF HER. HE KNEELS DOWN AND TAKES OUT A RING FROM HIS POCKET. HE SAYS
S- ANIKA YOU HAVE GIVEN ME EVERYTHING. U GAVE ME MY SHIVIKA. YOU ALWAYS SAVED MY FAMILY AND ALWAYS STOOD BY MY SIDE. I ALWAYS HURTED YOU BUT U NEVER LEFT ME. THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS SUPPORTING ME ANIKA. I HAVE REALISED THAT I CAN’T STAY WITHOUT YOU. I HAVE GOT ADDICTED TO YOU, YOUR FRAGRANCE, YOUR LANGUAGE, YOUR MEANINGLESS TALKS, YOUR SMILES, YOUR EYES AND EVERYTHING. PLZ NEVER LEAVE ME ANIKA. YOU KNOW I CANT EXPRESS MYSELF WELL BUT TODAY I AM TELLING YOU THAT I LUV U ANIKA. I LUV U THE MOST IN THIS WORLD.
( BY THE TIME A LONE TEAR ESCAPED ANIKA’S EYE. SHE WAS SO HAPPY THAT SHE FELT LIKE CRYING. THIS MADE SHIVAYE PANIC.)
S- WHAT HAPPENED ANIKA/? WHY R U CRYING? DID I SAY SUMTHING WRONG? IF SO PLZ FORGIVE ME ANIKA…
SEEING THIS ANIKA SMILES AND HUGS HIM TIGHTLY. HE TO RECIPROCATES
A – BUDDHU SINGH OBEROI. I LUV U TOO. AND M NOT CRYING. M HAPPY THAT IS WHY MY EYES GOT WET.
SHIVAYE WAS ON CLOUD9. HE GOT SO HAPPY. HE KISSED ANIKA. SOON SHE TO RECIPROCATING. THEY SHARED THE MOST SWEET, PURE AND ROMANTIC LIPLOCK. THEN THEY RELEASED THEMSELVES FROM THE HUG AND ANIKA WAS BLUSHING HEAVILY. SHIVAYE SMILED AND KNEELED DOWN AND SAID-
S- MISS BLUSH QUEEN I LUV U A LOT. I PROMISE YOU I’LL NEVER LEAVE YOU ALONE. JUST STAND BY MY SIDE AND VEN I’LL STAND BY YOUR SIDE FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE. ( SAYING SO HE SLIPPED A RING IN ANIKA’S FINGER)
THEY HAVE DINNER
SHE WAS STILL BLUSHING
S- ANIKA, HOW MUCH DO YOU BLUSH SWTHRT.
ANIKA SMIRKS
S- AB YE KHIDKITOD SMILE KIS BAAT KE LIYE?
A – ISILIYE BECAUSE NOW U HAVE TO KNEEL DOWN LIKE THIS ONLY
S- NOW ONLY I PROPOSED AND NOW ONLY YOUR TADI STARTED HANN. NO PROBLEM I’LL KNEEL DOWN FOR YOU DAILY.
A – NOT FOR ME SHIVAAY.
S- NOT FOR YOU? THEN?
A – SHIVAAY AFTER I TURN FAT THEN WHO WILL APPLY NAILPAINT IN MY LEGS?
S- FHUT THE WACK? WHY ARE YOU GOING TO TURN FAT?
SHE JUST MOVES TOWARDS THE CAR. SHIVAYE FINDS A NOTE
DEAR DADDY,
I WILL MEET YOU SOON IN A COUPLE OF MONTHS. I AM EAGER TO MEET YOU AND MY SISTER . DO ALL YOUR WORKS IN THESE MONTHS ONLY BECAUSE AFTER I COME MUMMA WILL REST AND YOU WILL TAKE CARE OF ME. I LOVE YOU DADDY.
YOURS
SWEET BABY
SHIVAYE WAS FULL OF TEARS BY NOW. HE JUST CAME TO ANIKA AND HUGGED HER TIGHTLY.
A – SHIVAYE AARAM SE BABY HAI..(SHE BLUSHES)
SHIVAYE LOSES HER BELLY AND TIGHTENS HIS GRIPP AROUND HER SHOULDERS. HE THEN KISSED ANIKA’S BELLY AND SAID DADDY IS ALSO EAGER TO MEET YOU SWEETYPIE. I LUV U TOO.
HE THEN KISSED ANIKA AGAIN AND THEY LEFT.
IN CAR
A – SHIVAYE ARE YOU HAPPY?
S- NO
ANIKA GETS A BIT SAD . SHIVAYE CONTINUES
S- M TOOOOOOOO HAPPYY. ALL WILL ALSO BE HAPPY AND I CAN SEE MY JHANSI KI RANI IS THE HAPPIEST RIGHT NOW.
ANIKHA BLUSHES. SHE SEES SHIVAYE DRIVING TOWARDS THE ICE CREAM PARLOR SHE ASKS
A – SHIVAYE WHERE ARE WE GOING?
S- TO GET ICE CREAM FOR YOUR CHOTA PACKET BADA DHAMAKA. THAT TO 2
A – WHY 2?
S- FOR KEEPING MY SECRET OF PROPOSING YOU AS WELL AS LETTING US ALONE
A- GAVE AN IMPOSSIBLE LOOK AND SAYS ONE FOR ME TOO
S- WHY NOT MA’AM. YOUR WISH MY COMMAND.
ANIKA SMILES.
AT OM PARKING
ANIKA GETS DOWN BUT SHIVAYE STOPS HER. HE ASKS HER TO HOLD THE ICE CREAM BOX AND LIFTS HER IN HIS ARMS.
A – WHAT IS THIS SHIVAAYE I CAN WALK BY MYSELF NA
S- NO, YOU CAN’T WALK. FROM NOW ONWARDS YOU WILL DO WHAT I SAY. ONLY REST NO WORK
SHE SMILES
THEY GO INSIDE OM
INSIDE OM
S- OMRU, GAURI, SOUMYA, DADI, MAA, PAPA, BDE PAPA, BDI MAA EVERYONE COME FAST.
RUDRA- WHAT HAPPENED NOW BHAIYYA? AT MIDNIGHT WHY DID YOU CALL US HERE?DID BILLU AND BILLI FIGHT AGAIN?
OM- SHUT UP RUDRA! KYA HUA SHIVAYE?
S- I AM THE HAPPIEST ONE TODAY.. A NEW MEMBER COMING INTO OUR HOUSE. OM UR GONNA BECOME CHACHU AGAIN
ALL BEOME HAPPY
PINKY- “O MY MATA SHIVAYE ANIKA. ONE MORE GRANDCHILDRENS. I AM TOH VERY HAPPIES. CHLO MUH MEETHA KRAO SBKA
S- HN MAA I GOT ICE CREAM FOR US ALL
THEN JUST SHIVIKA ENTERS AND RUNS TOWARDS ANIKA AND ANIKA PICKS HER UP IN HER ARMS. SHIVIKA CRIES. ALL GET SHOCKED
A – WHAT HAPPENED TO MY PRINCESS?
SH- PUT ME DOWN NOW! IN AN ANGRY TONE
A SAD ANIKA PUTS DOWN SHIVIKA AND TEARS ESCAPE FROM HER EYES SEEING HER DAUGHTER NOT HAPPY IN HER ARMS. JUST THEN SHIVIKA KISSES ANIKA’S BELLY AND SAYS-
SH- MUMMA DON’T BE SAD. I DON’T WANT MY SIBLING TO GET PAIN THAT IS WHY I ASKED YOU TO PUT ME DOWN. AND I AM SO HAPPY AFTER ALL I CAN NOW ORDER ON SOMEONE IN SSO STYLE.
EVERYONE LAUGH AND SHIVAYE SAYS
S- U DO THAT EVEN NOW
SH- ACCHA FINE. MY ICE CREAM.
S- YA. HAVE THIS 2 ICE CREAMS
SH- SHIVIKA PASSES A DEADLY GLARE WHICH SCARES SHIVAYE
S- WHAT HAPPENED?
SH- NOW I WANT 3
S NOW FOR WHAT 1 EXTRA?
SHIVIKA SMILES AN SAYS BECAUSE OF THE NEWS THAT M GETTING A SIBLING
ALL SMILE AND ARE HAPPY
THEY ALL CHAT IN THE HALL. ANIKA AND SHIVIKA DOZE OFF IN THE HALL ITSELF. SHIVAAY ASKS OM TO CARRY SHIVIKA AND TELLS HIM THAT HE’LL BRING ANIKA.
SHIVAYE PICKS UP ANIKA IN HIS ARMS
A- I LOVE YOU SHIVAYE. THANK YOU FOR ALL THE HAPPINESS U GAVE ME. BUT YOU ARE THE MOST WEIRD HUSBAND EVER. U CONFESSED YOUR LOVE AFTER HAVING 2 KIDS. EVERY1 WILL REMEMBER YOU “CONFESSION AFTER KIDS”
SHIVAYE SMIRKS SEEING HIS LADY LOVE MURMUR HIS NAME EVEN IN DEEP SLUMBER.
SO GUYS, I KNOW IT WAS A BIT LENGHTHY BUT I GUESS IT WAS NICE.
PLZZ DO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS. AND TELL ME ABOUT IT. ALL CHAMELIS ACCEPTED. 

33 Comments
  1. awesome

  2. Awesome…

  3. Really amazing…

    1. Silverfish_trex

      thnks a lot. 🙂

  4. Ahaana

    u copied few scenes of mine ….
    kneeling down for nail paint … and letter part….
    NOT FAIR .
    but still.U wrote nice

    1. Silverfish_trex

      that is not copied frm u actually. these ideas were given to me by my sis. so m srry as i was unaware u know 🙂

    2. Silverfish_trex

      and yeah thanks. and anyways nice ideas are always copied 😉

  5. Surbhi Sharma

    Awesome

    1. Silverfish_trex

      thnx surbhii 🙂 🙂

  6. Awesome…

    1. Silverfish_trex

      thnx surbhii.. 🙂 🙂

  7. Superbb

  8. Yvonne Codner

    WooooW….Any FF which makes Anika happy, I am happy..She is deserving of all the happiness that her husband and family shower her with after all the trauma she has met in her life since meeting the Oberois..Thank you Silverfish_trex..Well done!!!

  9. Awesome….

  10. Gayathri.visu

    Lovely os…..

  11. Awesome

  12. very nice….waiting eagerly for the next part

  13. 😍Omg! It was lovely💕💕💕

  14. It is an awesome cute SHIVIKA story.

  15. Hemashri Balaji

    what a story yaar!!!!!!!
    soooooooooooooooooo nice!!!
    i like the way u express every ones feeling!!!!!!!!
    superb!
    cant wait now????????????
    i want nxt part very soon……………..

  16. Shivika

    Superrrr cute

  17. It is nice one dear…

  18. Aryaraju

    Good one..

  19. Cute yet lovelyyyy shivika story.I just loved it..😊💞💖👌👌

  20. Alekhika20

    Beautiful os,lvd it

  21. FABLUS, SUPERB, AMAZING, luv it dear……………….

  22. Cute OS

  23. Lulu_Ani

    Its not ggood…. itsss awesomeeeeee..

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