shivaay’s birth day party OS

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SHIVAAY BIRTH DAY PARTY”…

Night 10:00 p.mHALL….,
Shi:why Anika didn’t come till now…?? she just leaved morning..
she didn’t pick mycalls also…
after some times…,
Rudr crossing shivaay…and stopped to saw him…
()- this is use for mind voice….
Ru:(oh god shivaay bhaiya still here then how can we plan surprise party…wait he seems tensed…) bhaiya….bhaiya….!!!
Shi:haan….

Ru:what r u doing here…go and sleep na time is 10:45 p.m…
Shi:yes I know I just waitingfor anika only…
Ru:oh…what ??? Anika bhabi is not here???Shi:yes…
Ru:ok wait…I will call her…
Shi:no use…,
she didn’t attend…
Ru:oh..maybe she is busy…u go na she will come….
Shi:no u go…I will wait while she come…
Rudr sadly leaves…
corridor side…,
Rudr talking with himself…

Ru:oh no…bhaiya not gonna move lil without bhabi from hall..then where we plan….
Om comes…
Om:what happened….
Rudr explain everything…
Om:ok Shivaay didn’t come his room without his wife na the we plan party on pool area…
Ru:great…very seldom u r proving u just not only growing ur hair…u r growedlil amount of brain also…
Om:and u always proving ugrowing ur body only…

Ru:Ok enough of ur silly jokes…now time to work….
OmRu and PriSom started decorate pool side for shivaay birth day party…
Om:all set….
Som:I ordered cake…also told him don’t enter via ma
in door come through back door…
Ru:why???
Som:duffer…
Shivaay bhaiya in hall na…
Time:11:50….

Shivaay just wait for Anika….restlessly….and call her continuously…Finally she pick his call…
Shi:Anika where were u…?? I just tried ur phone since long…he just ask her million question in one go….breathlessly…
Ani:shivaay shivaay…wait…wait…I am fine…on the Way…I will reach soon…relaxe…
Shi:ok come soon…
shivaay phone battery dead…
shivaay enters his room…and put his phone to charge…
Time:12:00..
suddenly lights on….

“HAPPY BIRTH DAY “….
shivaay almost forgot his birth day….since morning he just worried for Anika….whole Oberoi Family wish him except Anika….
Jan:where is Anika???
Shi:some work…she is on the way
Pinky:(thank u Mata she is not in home…i wish she never come here)pool side…
pin:shivaay cut the cake na…
Shi:yeah i will…just a minute anika is on the way…
pinky get irritated…

Pin:shivaay where she went???
Shi:i don’t know mom…something important work that’y she went…
pin:kamal hai…she went mornings…now time is 12:10…she didn’t come yet…u said u don’t know where she went…which type of girl she is…without inform anyone stay outsideon late night…infact todays her husband birth day…shivaay she will come whenever she want times going u cut the cake…
All r feeling bad by Pinky words ..

Om:Shivaay cut the cake…
(Om don’t want Pinky insults anika any more)Shivaay about to cut….”SHIVAAY RUKIYE”-Anika said
Pin:Lo aagayi Maharani..where u r went??? u know the time is…
Ani:aunty ji…today not onlyshivaay birth day…another one also have ..
Pin:so u come from anotherone birth day celebrations…here shivaay waits for u…but u r busy in another birth day party..Wah!!!Ani:aunty ji i go to get him…
mahi comes behind anika…
all r shocked…

shi:what is this Anika??
Tej:Anika u r went for get this dangerous person here..??
pin:oh my Mata.., why r u take time here…r u mad…ur just spoiled my heera beta birth day..she bad mouth about mahi…
.mahi about to leave…
but anika hold his hand..

Pinky now more furiously..
pin:shivaay i already said na…u never listen to me…yeh ladki…
Jan:Pinky let her explain na…Anika u tell what exactly happened ???
Ani:Shivaay…u will celebrate this birth day with mahi….
pin:how dare u..u said like that…my son celebrate his birth day with this fraud…y??? kis haq se yeh mere bete ki saath janam din celebrate karega…
Ani:ek bhai ki haq se…
ALL R SHOCKED….

dadi:what r u saying anika???
Ani:Mahi is Shivaay’s twin brother…kamini kidnappedwhen he was born…so u guys that Shivaay only ur child…
Pin:no it’s can’t happened…shivaay i told u…its his new plan..and i think Anika also joint hand with him…u have any proof…

Ani:i have many proof…Anika shows DNA certificate and birth certificate….
All R Stunned…they don’t know what to do…Pinky crying….Shivaay didn’t come out from huge shock…he just reminiscences holi conversation with mahi…no one give any response…
mahi:i am sorry…i don’t want come here…anika ji take me here whatever i did…i really sorry for that…i know u guys hate me more till now people call me na jaiz… but i am not…this is enough for me whole life i am not gonna pressurize u to accept me…for u Shivaay only ur son…forever…

mahi turn to leave….but suddenly OmRu stops him….
Ru:i am sorry bhaiya plz don’t go.i really angry with u but nothate u bcoz u have my shivaay bhaiya face and also saved him…i didn’t hate u before then u r my bhaiya now how can i hate u….
he about to hug…and stops
Ru:i know u didn’t like hug…but bhaiya i am not that type of guy but yeh ummed aap Om se nahi rak sakti…

Om:shut up Rudr…
mahi hug him tightly and started crying like child a…Om also joins their hug….
shi:hey without me Oberoi moment is incomplete….
shivaay opens his arm….
OmRu runs towards him and hug shivaay…but mahi didn’t…
shi:hoi…tume nhi aana…mahi surprisingly saw him…shivaay waves his hand…
shi:come…
mahi runs and hug shivaay…cute Oberoi moments…Pinky silently shed her tears…mahi come to her….she hug him….

pin:i am sorry…..i am very sorry..i didn’t know about u…i did very big mistake…last 10 days u with us only but i can’t recognise u…i always failed as a mom…
mahi:no mom…i only thought wrong about u guys…i am sorry ..
rest of Oberoi members hug him and give warm welcome to oberoi family….Now Shivaay search anika who is missing….
Garden side…,
Anika stands silently….
Shivaay comes there…,

forgot urs again-he said…”come join me”
she inches closer…&as the heavens poured ,
they’re drenched….anika enjoys and playing with rain drops….
shi:y u r come out from party..?
Ani: i thought u r happy with ur family So i don’t want disturb u…
shi:u r also my family…
Ani:u know what shivaay… everyone i have ever cared for has either died or left me everyone except U
shi:So don’t tell me i can be happy with someone else without u…..
shivaay side her hair……
shivaay kiss her neck point….it’s posses some electricity on anika’s Spine…and it travelled whole body and make her nervous…she suddenly turns and hug shivaay tightly….
Other side….,

Pin:where is Shivika….we should cut the cake…..times going….
Om:wait i will call themOmRu comes garden and saw Shivika hug pose….
Om:”she was rain ,he was sun….yes they were different….. but together they always make up a beautiful rainbow….
“Ru:u know what O..which isactually real credit for good poet.
Om:tell….

Ru:one dashing intelligent over smart guy understand his poet well…in ur stupid poetic lines…this one only very good one…
Om:y???Ru:bcoz u r handsome dashing over smarted intelligent bhai understoodthis poetic line only in between ur useless shayari’s…
Om playfully slaps Rudr head…
Om:duffer kuch bhi…let’s go…they will come….
shi:i am incomplete without u…u r not only my family but ur half of me….so what is my birth day gift
Ani:i already gave……mahi is my birth day gift….
shi:nothing personal….
Ani:personal…ok ask something i will give…
Shi:u can’t….

Ani:i can…ask whatever u want…
Shi:whatever!!!!!!
Ani:wo…..wo….
ankia shyly turns about to go but shivaay wrapped hishand on her waist and pulls her closer…she hits his chest…he move near her ear….huskily he said….
shi:u r scared…..
Ani:scare hoga my new slipper.
shi:no u r scared….
Ani:no…maybe but i don’t accept.

shi:if i make u accept then…
Ani:if u did then i will give whatever u want….anything…
he move towards her face and rub his cheeks with her’s..she just closed her eyes…
shi:ur body hell shivering…don’t dare to lie….
Ani: shi….shi…shivaay all r waiting…
shi:just one day time i want my gift more than my expectations
Ani:hmm….
she smiles….

shi:let’s go….
pool side….
shivaay and mahi cut the cake and first feed eachother and next Prinku..,OmRu ,pinky .,
Anika and others…
they enjoys the party..

Anika to shivaay…..
Ani:shivaay i want to know what is ur expectation…
shi:y??
Ani:bcoz u only said u want gift more than ur expectation…
shi:u really want to know???
Ani:yes…
Shi:ur lip….
Anika just winded her eyes…
Shivaay Rocked!!!!!
Anika Shocked!!!!!

*******END*******
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Bye bye….
Take care…..

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21 Comments
  1. Yay Mahi got a family his family. Superb post

  2. Wow maahi got a family…..nice..
    Hole part was good except pinky ponky bak bak.but kya kare woh he hi asi…

    Last part was sooo romantic…. really Shivay rocked annika shocked….?????

  3. Thedreamsoul

    Such a beautiful concept , Anika bringing Mahi was unexpected I wish something like this happens in the show but Pinky will never be forgiven . Awesome and in the end Shivaye Rocked and Anika Shocked I was laughing at it . Keep writing dear 🙂

  4. Nila

    wow amazing Anah

  5. fantastic shot for current track..
    superb…..writer next part also plz….

  6. Ahaana

    so cute…. i m hell blushing with ur shivika romance…?

  7. Aryaraju

    Good one ?

  8. Niriha

    Awesome…

  9. Nice dr….

  10. Gayathri.visu

    Yippee…Mahi got his happiness which he really deserves! Omru’s little convo is funny. OMG!! Shivika romance….hmm not bad. Shivaay rocked…Anika shocked! Over all its beautiful os except stupid pinky ponky.

  11. wow amazing.
    super os.
    anah u nailed it.
    keep rocking dr

  12. Bt I think Mahi nd Shivay r Kaamini Shakti ‘s sons

  13. Pooja26

    superb……

  14. Plz write an epilogue with shivika scene. hot one

  15. epilogue

  16. epilogue plz

  17. Anu16

    Nice one… hope they show it on tv… do write an epilogue

  18. Interesting that Mahi too involved in Obro moment. Shivaay rocked….., anika shocked……No words 4 that…
    It was simply awesome….

  19. Very very nice

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