She and Her Kidnapper (5)

sorry for the delay. I was stuck with my other story Emerald. .

he leaned close to me.his breath was touching my ear.a sudden shiver passed through my body.he whispered to my ear:

“take my clothes”

I looked at him wide eye. “what”


“I am not ur maid mister.kidnapper” I pushed him off.

“u have to do whatever I say untill u r in my custody”

“if I don’t do, what will u do? ” I was angry at his behavior

“I will do whatever I want to do with u” saying this he came more closer.our body’s were rubbing in to each other’s. our noses were touching.

“okey, fine” I yelled.he took some steps back and folded hos hamd under his chest.I went to take his clothes from his closet.I took a blue jeans and light pink shirt.I forwarded I t to him.

he took his clothes from me and started changing in front of ME!!! WHAT THE!!!

“can’t u go to bathroom? ” I asked frustrated.

“I can change wherever I want, crazy woman” he assured

oh god…how many time he called me crazy woman??? I will smash his head one day for the way he was looking handsome in his pink shirt ๐Ÿ˜‰

“you are too interested to see a guy changing his clothes” he said with a smirk on his face.oii maa I was staring him and I forgot that I was staring him ๐Ÿ˜› but honestly I am not interested to see a guy changing. I feel embarrassed.

“I AM NOT” I rushed towards the door and unlock it.I didn’t look back.I went downstairs.


this woman is really a mess.when I came back from shower she was holding the iPhone which I brought for my best buddy Adam. actually it is not for him, it is for his boss.his boss trust him loads.

back to crazy woman.I am regretting the moment I kidnapped her.if she didn’t saw my face I never kidnap her.I don’t even think to kidnap a lady like her.

when I told her to take my clothes from my closet first she hesitate.why this girl always being stubborn? but I know how to make her agree. she afraid of my closeness so I take it as my she agreed.

she was staring me while I changing my clothes. this girl don’t has manners too.

“u r too Interested to see a guy changing his clothes” I asked her with a smirk.she looked frustrated.

“I AM NOT” saying this she unlocked the door and went downstairs. I laughed a little at her childish behavior. I don’t know how many times I laughed in few hours. she is a mess but she made me laugh which I never used to do for past 10 past…I don’t want to think about it nor want to think about my future.

I changed my clothes and went downstairs.she was sitting on sofa, hugging her knees.

I cleared my throat and said “I am going somewhere. don’t try to escape in my absence. otherwise. ..I didn’t complete my words. she was nodding but looking somewhere else and afraid too.I followed her gaze and burst out in to laughter. I couldn’t stop myself from laughing. I laughed until my stomach hurt.she threw a cushion at me.oh god her face was like…I do get any word to describe her facial express but it made me laugh again.she didn’t afraid of me who kidnapped her from her own home.but she is afraid of Rocky! !! ๐Ÿ˜€ Adam’s doggy. .hahaha.

Adam dropped Rocky kn morning for keeping an eye on this mad woman when I am not around her.his idea succeed. she really afraid of dogs..this time too I couldn’t stop laughing. why our stomach hurts while laughing? ??

my phone started ringing. it was Adam. I didn’t say hello or hai.coz I was laughing on my phone.

“Abeer, are you okey?” Adam’s voice filled with concern.he may thinks that I got mad coz he never saw me laughing.

“umm.yeah…haha..I…am” I said between my laugh

“then why r u laughing man?u know u never laughed like this”

his words made me stop from laughing. “its nothing buddy. .this crazy woman is afraid of Rocky” I told him while looking at her.

“don’t call me crazy woman..I do have a name mr.kidnapper” she hit me with the cushion. I can hear Adam’s chuckling on phone.

“for ur information I too have a name ” I mimicked. now Adam was laughing. .why would he wasn’t funny yet.

“what was ur name then?” god I never asked a girl her name.I am not interested in any girl.

“it is….zz….” I cut her off “what”

“it is flower” she said..flower? ?? can someone name a girl flower? ?? she is making me fool.

“r u kidding on me” I took two steps forward. she was still sitting on sofa so it won’t affect her.

“my name means flower” I asked her her name and she is giving me meaning.

“I didn’t ask u ur name’s meaning” I said frustrated and went to kitchen to grab the lunch bag.

“if u r a genius u can find my name” she smirked. .she know smirking! !! ‘u didn’t took the patents of smirking, Abeer’ my inner voice said.

“I don’t want to, crazy woman” I went towards the main door.

“ouch” something hit on my was a DVD. she threw a DVD at me.ME!!! I won’t leave her now.I placed the lunch box in a side table carefully and went to her.I grabbed her hands and pulled her towards me.this causes her to jump from the sofa.Rocky barked a little when she jump.she looked at Rocky then me.I tried not to laugh again.Rocky was like he got a robber.suddenly she jumped on me and clutched her hand in my neck and her legs wrapped my waist!!!!!


was it okey???? silent readers pla wake up and comment. I want to know how many of u like my story. .

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  1. It was really gud. Do make it longer and updt regularly yaar. One suggestion, i think it wud be better if u dont describe the same scene in boths pov, u cn make it like girl’s pov of one scene and the next scene through boy’s pov. This way evn the stry will continue.
    I do understand tht boths pov is needed, fr the same evnt bt then u will hv to write longer , coz we all want story to go ahead , we all commenters so curious abt the stry.
    Right guys?

    P.s love u loads …..updt soooon

    1. I appreciate your suggestion sasha.I will try to upload daily butbi can’t promise dr

  2. Hey its nice but can u update a long one.. .. if it is possible……………. and I always in love with ur ff… …………… tc

    1. next chapter will be long deeva.I wanted to upload long one.sometimes my mind stops working and it got blank lol ๐Ÿ˜‰

  3. I agreed with u sasha.. but I will say writer should b comfortable…..

    1. thnx for that dr

  4. I didn’t like ur story. Bcoz I love ur story dear..I am addicted to ur stories..Loved it loved it to the core…

    1. when I read the first line I was like why sindhu is saying this..then I read second line I got super happy ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. awesome dr

    1. thnx dr

  6. oh my God …di I was already your fan. this one is hilarious… love u and your off so much.

    1. say you are my sister not fan dr..I am comfortable in saying u as my sister

  7. superb yr but pls try to upload daily……btw i woke up coz till now i was a silent reader but finally i commented…..

    1. I know I am doing wrong to make u all waiting but now I will try to upload daily.

  8. i too agree wid u.but i luv d epi…

  9. abeer is quite interesting. wid u.& i luv d epi…

    1. thnq nimisha

  10. Ha ha ha superrr yaar

    1. thnx hayu

  11. What is the problem rubee late update?:-) your another story you will not update. iam a big fan of you:-)..:-)

    1. actually I was busy with my other story that’s why I didn’t update this one.

  12. Nice update ruby

    1. thnx dr

  13. after a long time u updated dear n about ur ff it was awesome n i hv no words to describe it but make it longer dear….

  14. after a long time u updated dear n about ur ff it was awesome n i hv no words to describe it but it was short dear….

    1. I will make next chapter long fact now I am writing chapter 6

  15. omg what a suprise u know i am waiting for ur ff but everyday u disappointed me but today i am very happy n make it longer dear n lastly i want to tell update one more part…….

    1. I am really sorry for disappointing you dear.I will upload one more chapter today it self and it will be long one.

  16. Awesome yaar WS waiting fr ur ff update everyday yaar its superb post soon

    1. thnx dr..I am thinking about posting regularly

  17. Ruby that’s a beautiful update.. I loved it dear… Keep going..

    1. thnq so much dr..I was missing you badly

  18. Awesome story ruby. ๐Ÿ™‚ I didn’t know this story of yours earlier ๐Ÿ™ Great writing skills. Waiting for next part. Good night ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. thnq sweetu..I already sent them next part dr..good morning

  19. First of all, I’m sorry for not commenting on previous parts. Each & Every part left me speechless.
    And coming to this update, OMG, OMG, OMG! It was ??????…
    Plssss update soon.

    Your Die Hard Fan Amu?

    1. don’t be sorry amu and say die hard friend not fan ๐Ÿ˜‰ thnx for commenting dr

  20. Hey yaar. Awsome work… superbbb…

    1. thnx anjel

  21. Omg… dog… me too afraid of dogs… whenever I saw dog, i hide behind my frnds… lol.Amazing kidnapper… awesome crazy women…ha ha ha.. I loved it…

    1. thnx dr.I am too afraid of dogs lol ๐Ÿ˜€

  22. Omg rubyyyy my dearrrrr friend it’s mind blowing, hilarious. …me too scare of dogs….loved this episode very much. …so his name is abeer n her Zahra. …wow lovely names….but why he came to step in her house? Still mystery his past….having so much fun reading the story. …keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads.

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