Shattered Soul (swasan ten shots) by Mars Shot 2

Hello guys!! Get ready to feel sanskar’s pain. This is first time I m showing his sufferings. Hope so u will like it.
Let’s begin:

Shattered Soul(swasan ten shots)
Shot 2:
Sanskar left maheshwari house as per Dp’s order. He seriously don’t know where to go. No doubt he has his own farmhouse after all he is owner of karma company but its quite far so he can’t go now bcoz firstly he wants to meet his Swara. He took his car and went to nearby park where he often comes with swara.

Bose house:
Swara’s room:
Swara is sitting on bed all lost in her thoughts. She is remembering the flashback when she get to know that today is Sanskar’s engagement.

Swara entered in adarsh’s room as he has called her.
Swara: bhai u called me?
Adarsh; come swara I want to tell you some thing.

Swara: yes.
Adarsh: u feel pity on Sanskar that he loves u truely but in turn u are doing drama bcoz I m saying.
Swara: yes bhai he truely loves me and I don’t have any doubt in it.
Adarsh(smirks): then let me tell you your so called true Lover is going to get engaged tomorrow.Did he told you??
Swara got shocked but still she said
Swara: then what i don’t care.

Adarsh: that’s why now I think u believe me that he is not innocent.
Swara: bhai I always trusted you. It was just after seeing his care I thought he really loves me but let it be. I will do what you will say.
Adarsh(hug her): u r really good sister.
Swara smiles and left from there leaving adarsh smirking.
Flashback ends.

Swara’s POV:
Hugh!! Sanskar, Your love was also fake like mine. It’s good u are marrying to someone else at least now I had to stop this drama. I don’t care with whom ever u marry but I really felt bad. U should have at least told me once. BTW why should it hurt me, after all I don’t love you.
Swara’s POV ends.

Sanskar reached in the park and called swara.Swara got the call and seeing the caller id she ignored it.When again it was coming, Swara got irked and received the call
Sanskar: swara where were u. I m calling from yesterday night.
Swara didn’t want to talk to him after knowing about his engagement.
She didn’t speak anything.
Sanskar(panick): swara u r fine. Something happened then plzz tell.
Swara: why u called Sanskar?
Sanskar signed in relief listening her voice.
Sanskar: I want to meet you now plzz come to park.
Swara thought that its the right time to end everything.
Swara: okay I m coming.

Sanskar(smiles): I m waiting and love you.
Swara: hmm.
She cut the call and went to adarsh.
Swara: bhai I m going to break my relation with Sanskar.
Adarsh: I support u swara. Go ahead.

Swara(smiles ): hmm
She left for park.
Adarsh: ohhhhh the great Sanskar maheshwari is going to lost his love. Pity on him.Now let me see who will stop me from ruling business world.
Adarsh u r very smart. What a weakness you found of Sanskar , my own sister.(laughs evilly).

Sanskar is desperately pacing here and there waiting for swara. Then only his eye fell on swara who was coming towards him.She came and stood in front of him.Without uttering a word, sanskar took her into bone crushing hug. He hugged her so tightly as it is the last one. Unknowingly Swara also closed her eyes feeling his touch but she broke the hug after remembering about his engagement.
Swara (directly): now with whom u r marrying sanskar?
Sanskar: I will marry only one girl and that is you.

Swara: today is your engagement and u didn’t told me.
Sanskar(cups her face): swara plzz don’t get angry. I also got to know all this yesterday night as everything was planned by bade papa. I was trying to contact you but u didn’t received my call.Swara I had not done engagement. Then he told all happened in the house.
Swara felt sad after listening it but then she thought who knows if he is lying.
Swara: I don’t care Sanskar.
Sanskar(confused): what u mean?

Swara: I don’t know.
Sanskar(smiles): okay leave all this. Now I want to say you something.
Swara looked confused while he moves little back and sit on his knee and extend his hand towards Swara
Sanskar: I love you swara. I had left my everything for you but I don’t regret bcoz u r my world. Will you marry me?
Swara is looking at him with wide eyes. She never thought sanskar will propose like this, all of sudden. Now she is in huge dilemma that whether to say yes or no. She remember the whole one year he spend with Sanskar, his care, his unconditional love, his possessiveness that was all for her and only her.

How much they used to enjoy, their cute romance. Was that just a drama??
A person can act for short time but for this much long time whether she was just acting or actually feeling the pleasure of his love. Then only one question comes in her mind Do I love him????? No, definitely not.
Sanskar is a mere stranger for her whom she met one year back but his bhai is fatherly figure for her. Ofcouse she will choose him.
Sanskar was looking at her as she is standing silently in her now dreamland.
Sanskar: swara.

Listening her name, she came to senses and said
Swara: I don’t love you sanskar.
Sanskar got shocked but then smiles and get up.
Sanskar (held her hand): don’t joke in this matter, I can’t bear.
Swara: I m not joking, I seriously don’t have any feelings for you.
Sanskar: u r lying swara!

Swara: why would I lie. I did this fake drama to take revenge.
Sanskar got speechless, his eyes got filled with unsheded tears. He was strong enough to fight against whole world but when it comes to his swara, he become weak bcoz he can’t afford to lose her.
Sanskar: which revenge??
Swara also don’t know which revenge bcoz she is just puppet of adarsh’a hands and he is using her.
Swara: I don’t know but adarsh bhai told me to do all this drama.

Sanskar(whispers): u made fun of my love swara.
Now sanskar’s tears can’t be holded. They flow down his whitish skin expressing how much he is hurt.
Sanskar(cups her face): don’t say like this shona I will die without you.
Swara’s eyes also got slightly wet seeing him pleading to her.
Swara: its nothing like that soon u will forget me when u will find someone.
Sanskar(shouted): nooo never I can never love anyone except you swara. May be it was drama for you but I love you with all my heart and soul and will love till my last breathe whether u will be with me or not.

Swara; u can never get me sanskar so don’t spoil your life.
Sanskar join his forehead against her and said
Sanskar: Swara if someone is forcing u to do this then plzz tell me I m there. We don’t need anybody as we are enough for each other.
Swara(jerk him): I don’t love you and no one is forcing me. It’s my decision to break this relation.

Sanskar shook his head in no. vigorously and said
Sanskar (pleading): no plzz Swara don’t leave me.I m all alone. How I will survive without you.
Swara can’t stand there anymore. He never saw sanskar in such a devastated state.Her heart is screaming that she is doing wrong but mind overpowered which is controlled by adarsh.
Swara: move on Sanskar don’t wait for me.

Saying this she ran from there leaving behind shattered sanskar.
Sanskar(shouts): swara plzz don’t leave me. I know u love me.
He fell on his knees and started crying. There was no one to see his pain.
Don’t know till when he remain sitting there and crying.
Who say boys don’t cry it’s just they don’t show.

Maheshwari house:
Uttara came inside and saw all are sitting silently in hall. She was not present in Sanskar’s engagement as she has to go with her Friend to hospital for her mother’s treatment.
Uttara:what happened??.
Ap:nothing uttara u go and change.
Uttara(looked around): where is sanskar bhai. Today I was not able to attend his engagement so I have to say sorry to him.

Sujata; sanskar is not here he left the house.
Sujata told her all that happened and due to dp’s condition he has to leave.
Uttara:how can u let him go. Where must be bhai now. I will go and see.
She turn to leave when dp shouted
Dp:uttara u will not go

But uttara didn’t listened and ran away.

To be continued…

Precap:Sanskar got depressed. Uttara confront Swara.

Thank you.


  1. NDSG


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    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 mera Sanskar. Sab gande h gande h… Mere Sanku ko rulaya… πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜­
    Love hurts a lot…
    Evil Adarsh😑😑😑😑😑😑😠
    Shona ne bhi dil k nahi suni bus dimag k suni… Bad ShonaπŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ I’m angry on U.

    I hope uttu will do something. Sanky tum easily Shona ko maf mt karna. But Jada bhi mat suna shona ko OK…

  2. Rosey


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    Ohhh No My sansku😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Swar a make fun of his LOVE that blo*dy adrash…using Swara…please let Swara show adrash reality…and make her guilty…and yes when she asks forgiveness he shouldn’t forgive her easily….
    And one more thing don’t make sanakaar to be depressed this much he loss his business in fact it should b like this he drowned himself in business and becomes totally ruthless and stone harted…please….

  3. Scooby


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    Amazing mars😍😍 loved it…. u have written well this part πŸ‘πŸ‘ hope swara realise wt she wants and uttara ws super duperb…. means fighting for her bro 😚

  4. Mica


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    Swaraaaaa…. :'( :'( don’t do this to your Sanskar.. i know you love him too, huh! you will regret it !!! mark my words

  5. Aakanksha Mishra

    Awesome part …loved it
    Nd swara how could she …
    I hope sanskar swara Ko maaf na kre at least avi toh bilkul nhi .plz make her guilty. Hate Adarsh. Plz show sanskar unconditional love ,woh avi v uski care kre protect kre bs MAAF na kre…

  6. Tamil


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    Awesome update… poor sanskar……he is in so much pain…..I am crying 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 hope swara will get know about adharsh evil plan…..

  7. Kanha


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    Awesome. Feeling sad for our Swasan😭😭😭😭 Jaldi se Adarsh ka sach Swara ke saamne lao😠😠😠😠😠 Swara ko apni galti ka ehsaas karwao. Sanskar pata nahi kis haal mein hoga😒😒😒πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯ I hope Uttara Swara ko acha sabak sikhayegi😀😀😀😀 Update soon dear. Loveeeeeeee youuuuu😘😘😘😘😘😘

  8. Rabia0032


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    Oh my god😒😒😒😒😒feeling bad for sanskar swara you did wrong by listing a adarsh….how can you do this to sanskar how can you….
    Ahhhh feeling bad for him please post soon…

  9. Gayathri.visu


    |Registered Member

    Oh god…..Swara u give so much pain for Sanskaar! Soon u will regret for it…
    Marssuuuu…….u broke my heart along with Sanskaar! Painful episode…

    And congoooooooo dear…… U won! U r the winner of os competition na……I m sooooooooo happy for u dear! Keep rocking!!!!! Sorry for very late wishes dear.

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