SHAMINI FF : CIRCLES OF LIFE, FATE & LOVE- Part 3 [By Renima]

Hello Friends, I am back 2 this page and sorry for making these much delay……First of all belated new year, sankranthi, pongal, lohri, bihu and maaghi wishes 2 all ….Hope this year have brought positive vibes 2 u…….It was so hard for me 2 write articles for a while as i was not feeling well….But now I am okay and hope if work not troubles, then i can give updates in time……..Thanks 2 all support which u guys give me in this page……Now without talking much, here comes the third part of shamini ff…..If u guys have forgotten the previous one, then pls check this one…..

http://www.tellyupdates.com/shamini-ff-circles-life-fate-love-part-2-renima/

Kindly read all parts and drop ur views if possible……

@ Surya Loka { Shani dev’s Kaksh}

Dhamini was keen to hear an explanation from Shani……But Shani remained like an idol without saying anything…..

Kakol : Devi Dhamini has asked her Karmafal, …..Why u are not answering her ??

” Karmafal Daata himself has went out of the way…..He is a puzzle which can never be solved……Then how can he judge one’s Karma ?? ” [The voice raised like a thunder and all gets shocked 2 see Devi Chaaya……]

Shani : Maa!!!

Chaaya : Address me as Devi Chaaya, not maa…….Puthri dhamini, why are u forcing him to give an explanation ?? Get up Beti…..

Dhamini : But maata….

Chaaya : U won’t obey ur maa’s words…….

Dhamini : Ji!!! [dhamini gets up and stares shani for a while]

Shani : Maa u have …

Chaaya : [interrupts] May i remind u what’s my name ?? [chaaya stares shani in anger]

Shani : Pardon me…..Devi Chaaya…….I forgot the fact that I am detached from every thing…..Even the right 2 call you as maa also…..

Chaaya : Shani!!! [devi chaaya looked shani with shocking eyes]

Shani : Devi Dhamini, Pls take care of ur maata……[ shani leaves the spot with teary eyes, kakol follows shani]

Dhamini : Maata Aap!!!

Chaaya : [wipes her tears] I am fine puthri……

Dhamini : Now u have started lying before ur puthri……Why u are keeping  distance from ur own son, shani ?? Why maata ??

Chaaya : It’s the game of fate and we are supposed to bear it……..

Dhamini : I didn’t get u maata……

Chaaya couldn’t continued her talks with chaaya, as in the midst a servant came and  informed her that surya dev wants 2 meet her in personal….. Devi chaaya leaves……

Scene shifts 2 jungle……

Kakol : Shani!!! Stop there……How long u will walk ??

Shani : Until and unless i find my goal, i need 2 walk, Kakol….

Kakol : Shani…….My friend, I am not able 2 walk with u like these……

Shani : Then why u are following me ??

Kakol : I am ur vaahan, shani…..Where dev goes, vaahan will be there only…….

Shani : Kakol…..[shani hugs kakol and gets emotional] U will get pain if u decided 2 travel with me….I don’t want it……

Kakol : Shani……A true friend is the person who stands both in sorrows and happiness…….Pls don’t leave me…….

Shani : U never feel regret for being close 2 a Dev whose drishti is Vakra, whose action is rigid and who utters the bitter truths only…….

Kakol : Never shani….In fact these facts make u as the unique among all Dev’s……U are the real dev and trust me one day whole world will worship u as u holds those hands who are good from heart, but often gets trouble……U will make them to realize what is life and how one has to face the situations…..Also u will cut those hands who are cunning and tortures others without any mercy…….Because u are karmafal daata, shani…..

Shani : I have messed up with this title …..”Karmafal Daata”……..I can’t bear this any more……..[Shani shuts his eyes with desperate mind]

Kakol : Shani!!!

Shani : I am going to meet Tridev……

Kakol : But why, shani ??

Shani : Kakol, U will get 2 know abt it later……[Shani disappears]

Kakol gets confused….

Scene shifts 2 surya loka…..

Shani arrives his kaksh again …….He lie down on the bed with much depression…….Shani feels some one was waving his forehead……. Shani says” Maa”……

Dhamini : Shani it’s me dhamini, not maata……

Shani : [opened eyes and raised quickly] Devi aap!!!

Dhamini : Why u break ur sleep, shani ??

Shani : Dhamini, Why are u here ?? I know u wants ur karmafal and trust me tomorrow’s sun rise will give u the answer……I am going 2 meet tridev tomorrow and I will tell them that shani is….

Dhamini : [ places her finger on shani’s lips] Sh!!!! How long u will keep talking and talking only ?? It’s late night and it’s time for u 2 sleep……[ shani raise his eye brow and stares dhamini’s eyes] Why are u staring me like these ?? I said u should sleep now……And i don’t want to hear any thing from u…..Got it ??

Shani nods his head in sign of “yes” and stared dhamini’s face…..Shani felt dhamini has become like an adamant kid who wants to make everything according 2 the way she wants…. Dhamini signs shani 2 sleep…..Shani slowly lie down on the bed…..Dhamini took her finger from his lips and smiles……She gently pat his shoulder and starts singing lullaby….”Neend nagar ke sapna batorke…..Dhunde re palkon ki chaaya…….Chanda ki Chaadar Taare Bichona…..Komal see baadal see Shaiya….So jaawon pyaare….Raaj Dulare……Lori Sunaye…..Teri…..”[dhamini stops singing in midst and finds shani has fallen asleep…..she smiles and waves his forehead…]

Dhamini : Shani…….U said I will get 2 know abt what my karmafal…..I don’t what is ur going on ur mind, but one thing i can assure u that my heart always beats for u……I want 2 become ur better half…..Shani……..Ur pains will become my pain, I will try 2 heal them……I will make this detachment as love and I will try 2 bring light in ur darkness……U are not alone, shani……I am with u…….[dhamini stares shani with wet eyes and smiles]

PRECAP : SOME TIMES THE DECISION WE TAKES CAN STAB SO MANY HEARTS…….BUT WE CONVINCE OURSELVES TO DO OT AS THE SITUATION DEMANDS US 2 DO…….WHAT WILL BE THE RESULT ??

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  1. Shraddha-DBO

    Hi renima Di, this is Shraddha?
    It’s a big surprise to see u writing ffs on shamini…I’ve been following this show forums r some time, but it’s the first tIm finding ur ff.

    This is so beautiful & I liked it very much, I’m waiting for upcoming parts of this ff….

    Hope you fine Di….& belated new year wishes too(actually I’d sent you new year wishes?)

    Bye Di????

    1. Renimarenju

      How sweet my shraddha, am not a regular follower of this show…But yeah, i do watch this show some times and i like this one specially for rohit khurana[grown up shani] And i was so busy yaar and i didn’t get leave for new year and all……few days back only i went home and i started updating articles…..sorry for wishing u so late and not replying u….My health didn’t favored me yaar…..Belated new year wishes 2 u too dear am glad u liked it

      1. Shraddha-DBO

        Thank you renima Di, ???
        I’m also busy with my studies, will be free in may only….
        Waiting eagerly for the next updates on all your ffs??

        Take care of your health….be happy always…may God bless you???

  2. Kamalanayani

    Keep going Renima di…
    Waiting for the next update…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lot dear

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