Shades of love # a shivika is episode 8

Hey ppl now a days I’m not getting that much response as I used to so silent viewers plz plz plz post your suggestions through your comments .
It means a lot when someone appreciate and someone teaches you your mistakes also!
All negative comments are also most welcome.
Plz do let me know where am I wrong so that I can rectify it.

Precap…….
Daksh revels the truth……

Present…..
Anika runs to the room
Shivay follows her.
Anika slaps him hard and says I regret loving a disgusting person like you
…………

Shivay is hell shaken hearing ” love you ” from ANIKA
He apologized but of no use.
Anika packs her bags and is about to leave when she hears a glass breaking

She freezes…….,…
Shivay broke the gloss into power and his hand is bleeding profusely………..
Anika drops her bag and runs to him takes his hand and says kya koi kisi ko itna chot pahunchata hai kya??????

Tear drops fall from her eyes on his wound

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He hugs her tight and says kya mujhe mafi dogi ???
Kya is Stupid Singh Oberoi se dobaara pyar karogi??????

He falls on his knees and cries.
Anika says my shivay was very strong…..he doesn’t ask things but takes them.
Who is he??? Her strong wall can’t break.

Hearing this shivay presses his lips with her and explores nook and corner of her mouth.
Unwillingly they pull out of their passionate liplock due to loss of breadth.
Anika shies away…..

Shivay sees her blushing and smiles.
They come out of their eye lock hearing omru, dadi , shakti and jhanvi requesting anika to stay back………………

Precap……..
Daksh kidnapped anika.
Anika rescued……….
Ishana n om come face to face……..

10 comments

  1. NAKHRU

    NAKHRU

    |Registered Member

    nice.
    but so short!
    actually you most write in so more line you mAY KEEP HE STORY SAME BUT JUST GO IN LITTLE DETAIL OR SOME MORE CONVERSATION AND EXPRESION DETILS.TO BRING THE FEEL.
    KEEP IT UP.
    BEST OF LUCK.

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