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SHAADI KE SIDE EFFECTS (One shot OS)

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SHAADI KE SIDE EFFECTS(EK BECHARE PATI AUR USKI SANAKI PATNI KI DASTAAN)

Marriage is finding the person who puts up with ur crap, admires ur weird little ways & still says they love u at the end of the day….Yes guys…its me…ur Priyanka(riya)….Actually I thought of writing something different b4 I post my 2nd episode of my ff…so here I’m with my 1st attempt on OS…hope u all will like this….

Place: New Delhi
A tall building is shown…moving forward, we come across a flat on the fourth floor with a name plate, “Mr.& Mrs Kabir Kapoor”….A man of about 30-35yrs opens the door of his flat & enters inside…Off course, he’s none other than our Kabir….
(Note.Kabir works in a reputed MNC, has a very good salary & the company has given various amenities like flat, car etc.etc….Kanchi’s parents r now living together in one house since both Kanchi had to leave & Kusum won’t be alone, so Jaya & Kusum r staying together….Kanchi r now happily married for abt 3 yrs….)

While Kabir was going to his room for freshening up, he heard a sobbing sound…on following the sound, he came to know, its his jaan, his wife….(yes yes u r right…)she’s our Sanchi….& she was watching TV & was crying like hell….On seeing her condition, Kabir gets tensed & immediately goes near Sanchi & sat beside her…

Kabir: What happened Sanchi???Why r u crying???(he was asking while wiping her tears)
Sanchi: She died Kabir….My Pihu died…(& she again starts crying)…..
Kabir was confused bcz as far as he knew, they don’t know anyone named Pihu…
Kabir:Who is Pihu???
Sanchi: Anandita’s daughter Pihu…

Kabir: Sad…But who’s this Anandita?? Is she ur new frnd???
Sanchi: Ufff…u don’t know anything…Pihu is Anandita’s daughter in the show ”Bhootu” …(Kabir gives her an unbelievable look)(this one’s specially for my Bhootu loving frnds;))
Kabir: Like seriously Sanchi….just a serial character died & u r behaving as if someone died in real…
Sanchi: Do u know how much Anandita loves Pihu??Now how’ll she live without Pihu….But tumhe kya?? U won’t understand(Kabir is really annoyed at Sanchi’s rubbish talks)..
Kabir(irritated):So what u want???…should I call the CVS & tell them to plz make Pihu alive coz my wife’s crying…(Sanchi again starts crying)

Kabir: Now who died???Why r u crying again???
Sanchi:Bcz u r shouting at me….(Kabir closed his eyes & takes a deep breath)
Kabir(holding Sanchi’s hand): Sorry Sanchi…..trust me, Pihu’ll surely come back in a few episodes..
Sanchi(excited): Really!!!!…..but how do u know??? Coz u r not the writer of the show…
Kabir: Arey baba…..every serial does the same thing(Sanchi nods)…Now will u plz give me something to eat…I’m really hungry….

Sanchi: Ok..u go & change, I’ll set the dinner…& she goes to kitchen….
Kabir goes to his room mumbling, “Pehle office mein boss ko jhelo &ghar aane par biwi ka melodrama… uff….pehle I’ve to cut the serial channels, saare fasad ki jad….& he went to his room…

Time skip(time to sleep, Kanchi in their room)
Kabir: Sanchi, could u plz wake me up early…I’ve an important meeting…
Sanchi: Ok….& she sets the alarm, keeps it near Kabir’s pillow & slept…..
Time…4 a.m….Alarm starts ringing…..Kabir gets up with a jerk…& says who the hell keeps the alarm almost in the ear??? Unless its Sanchi….(he stops it & sleeps…)
Time…4.15 a.m….Alarm rings again…This time Kabir doesn’t switch off alarm, he closes his ears & after some time when the alarm automatically stops, Kabir feels relieved..& he again falls asleep…

Time…4.30 a.m…Alarm rings again…This time Kabir is really irritated…he looks towards Sanchi, who was sleeping peacefully without being disturbed by alarm at all…Kabir got a doubt & he jerked Sanchi….Sanchi opens her eyes & asks why he called her…kabir was abt to tell when she took out cotton from her ears & said now tell…Kabir was hell shocked with this…
Kabir: Why u put cotton in ur ears & what’s this….why u set alarm which is ringing every 15 mins??

Sanchi: First of all, I put cotton in my ears bcz it was u who wanted to get up early, so why would my sleep be affected??? & secondly, I put so many alarms bcz if u don’t wake up by one, u would wake up by the other…that’s why…
Kabir: I said u to wake me up early….but that doesn’t mean u’ll wake me up in the midnight…I meant u would wake me up at 5.30 a.m….

Sanchi: But u should have specified this before…now its ur fault….
Kabir: Ok meri maa…u r right…as always…now r u happy???
Sanchi: Yes(with an attitude)….that’s like a good boy…& both slept till 5.30 a.m…(haha…)

Time skip….Next day afternoon…Kabir in his office…Sanchi, after completing her household chores, goes to her neighbourhood friend’s house(which was beside their house)…. Isha Malhotra, wife of Vishal Malhotra…(hehe)..Vishal & Kabir r working in the same office…Now, Isha was like a gossip queen…every afternoon, she & Sanchi used to sit & gossip abt various serials, their neighbours 😉 etc.etc…(some time skip)….
Isha: U know what Sanchi I did shopping & got a necklace set, just wait, I’ll be back in a minute…She returns back with the box that contained the set….

Isha: See…its nice na?? Vishal said that this necklace was indeed made only for me…Sanchi was giving a fake smile…& Isha was busy in flaunting her necklace all this while…
Sanchi’s pov-Self praising….Huh!!!….After some time Sanchi left…
Same evening(7.30pm)…..Sanchi was walking here & there in the hall & was
mumbling….”What does that Isha think of herself??? I can get a necklace even better than the one she has & anyhow, my necklace is gonna be better than her….Let Kabir return….I’ll send him to the jewellery shop & buy the best neck-piece….”(she said with a lot of attitude on her face)

Door bell rang….Sanchi immediately rushed to open the door(for Kabir)….Sanchi gave a big smile to Kabir….Kabir was a bit shocked coz everytime he returned from office, Sanchi would be either watching her daily soaps or would be ready with a complain regarding a neighbour….(Kabir’s pov…beta Kabir aaj ka mausam kuch theek nehi lag raha hai, Sanchi’s smiling, something is cooking up in her mind… aaj zara sambhalke)….
Sanchi: Kabirrrrrrr(she said very sweetly)…U go & change…today I’ve made all ur fav dishes…. Now Kabir has already realized & he was damn sure, Sanchi’s over sweet, over caring nature came out all of a sudden bcz she wants something…Kabir came near Sanchi & held her hand…
Kabir: Sanchi….(he said politely)

Sanchi: Hmmm
Kabir: Why r u buttering me so much today???
Sanchi: So my love for u is buttering….
Kabir: I didn’t mean that Sanchi(Sanchi showed fake anger)…Ok sorry baba, dekho kaan bhi pakad li hai…(Sanchi still not convinced & turns to opposite side)….Acha now u tell me, what shall I give my Sanchi so that she’ll be convinced???
Sanchi: U r sure na???(Kabir nods)….Ok…I want a necklace…that too better than Isha….U know what, today she was flaunting her neckpiece in front of me….I want to show her that I’m not less than her in any aspect…(Kabir’s pov…So, I guessed it right…she wanted a necklace, that was the reason of her buttering all those time…)

Kabir: But u already have so many necklace sets….(Sanchi became sad)….but it’s fine…I can get another one for my lovely wife…(Sanchi was very excited…she thanked Kabir & gave a peck on his cheeks)..
Next day Kabir went to the jewellery shop & bought a beautiful necklace….Sanchi got really excited on seeing it….she immediately wore it….
Sanchi: How’s it looking Kabir???

Kabir: Hmm….nice….
Sanchi: Just nice???
Kabir: Ok…..earlier it was nice but after u wore it, its looking amazing…Sanchi became very happy & hugged Kabir….after some time she broke the hug…
Sanchi: But Kabir…..
Kabir: But what Sanchi???

Sanchi: Actually I want to show my new necklace to everyone….Can we go on a dinner???
Kabir: Yes….why not(Kabir in mind, as if I had any other option..)
Timeskip…Sanchi was trying to wear her fav outfit, but it had got a bit tight in fitting…so to check out she came in front of mirror…& started checking herself….
Sanchi: Kabir….do u think I’ve put on some weights these days???
Kabir: No…not at all….(u can guess even if the answer would be yes, who would dare to say this to his wife…)
Sanchi: Kabir…plz be honest….actually this dress….my fav dress, its not fitting me…tell the truth…

Kabir: Actually yes…(& Sanchi’s face was worth watching…she was glaring at Kabir)….what happened Sanchi???
Sanchi: U called me fat…..how could u Kabir???(Kabir closed his eyes, took a deep breath, came near Sanchi & held her hand)
Kabir: Sorry Sanchi….I didn’t mean to hurt u…..Arey look(Kabir shows her his watch)get ready fast, else we’ll be late…afterall u had to flaunt(Sanchi gives death glares to Kabir)…I mean, u wanted to show ur new necklace to everyone na……..Finally Sanchi gets convinced & they leave for dinner at abc restaurant….They had their dinner & then returned back….
Sanchi: Kabirrrrr….
Kabir: Yes Sanchi….
Sanchi: U saw that girl at our side table, she was looking so weird…her dressing sense was so bad….
Kabir:No sweety, I didn’t saw anyone else coz I was looking only at my beautiful wife(Sanchi blushes)

Sanchi: But u should have a look around so that u can know how lucky u’re to get a wife like me…
Kabir: Ok meri maa….henceforth I’ll check out all the ladies around…now happy???
Till that time, Sanchi had started crying loudly while Kabir was tensed for what did he do now…
Kabir(putting his hand on her shoulder): Sanchi….what happened???why r u crying???
Sanchi: I’m crying bcz of u….bcz u said u’ll check out on other girls…..How can a wife tolerate that her husband is checking out on some other girl???
Kabir(holding his ears): Sorry my sweet heart….But first of all plz stop crying, I can’t see tears in ur eyes….Alright, I’ll never say this again….

Sanchi: Promise
Kabir: Pakka promise…..& finally kanchi hugged each other….

THE END

Actually friends, every time we see kanchi as a happily married lovey-dovey couple, I somehow wanted to add a different taste to it….more or less, a reality check about what goes through in a couple’s life after marriage…..I know, what I wrote is just a crap….& sorry in advance for this….& lastly, I just hope, I could be able to bring even a slight smile on ur face through this story….my first OS….Now enough of bak bak by this chatterbox friend of urs….

So guys, I’m eagerly waiting for ur comments…..Plz forgive me if I was unable to meet ur expectations…..but somewhere I hope I’m able to do so…fingers crossed….luv u all…
With lots of Love,
Priyanka

37 Comments
  1. Dhruti

    it was so different and i really enjoyed a lot the way kabir try to happy her lady love and sanchi’s melodrama was hilarious………that i start laughing loudly and my daddy and mumma were gave me a dead glare(it was final warning for me) and my bro called me that are you mad why are laughing like this way ? (because i was not helping them in diwali preparation) and they asked that you were not helping us and enjoy reading or watching something hmm…..
    ok ok stop my bak bak but this was super duper wala os…………….gn……….tc………….love you a lot………and a big hug and a lots of kisses for you……………..

    1. Riyarocks

      Really!!!! I’m really glad ki u liked this…….actually mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki maine kya likha hai….jo mann mein aaya, likhti chali gayi…..haha…..thnx a lot sweety for liking it & also being a regular commentor on all my writings….this means a lot…….luv u dherrrrrrrr saaraaaaaa……… gud nt sweetieeeeeee……

  2. It was so funny……. I couldnt stop laughing…. Poor kabir….. It was mindblowing …… Loved it very much

    1. Riyarocks

      thnk God……my mission is successful….I could bring a smile on ur face……thnx for being a regular reader & commentor in all my writings……luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeeee…….gud nt…..tc….

  3. Priyu..i loved it….i m speechless…has hass k tummy m dard hone lga…mummy puch rhi thi mobile m aisa ky padh rhi h jo itna hass rhi h(mne bola watsapp pe joke aaya tha😂😂😂😂…mummy ko thodi na bataungi ki m tellyupdates padhti hu)…enough of my bak bak….it was sweet os dr…love u lotsss

    1. Riyarocks

      haha…..I’m really really glad that main tumhare face pe muskaan laa saki….thnk God……actually I was confused after posting this, coz maine ise post karne se pehle check nahi kiya…..aaj hi dimaag main aaya….so likha & post kardia…..haha…so stupid of me!!!!!! anyways…thnx for being a regular & commentor…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee…….gud nt…tc….

  4. Rajnandini

    OMG!!! Kitna mindblowing concept tha yaar!! Loved it a lot!! Yesa laga hi nahi ke os tumne pehli baar likha hai…. har ghar mai yahi toh rona hai…..patina ka pati par aatychar aur khas kar ke emotional aatyachar!… hahaha!!! Aur kanchi ke comedy scenes ki krupa se mujhe pet dard ki dawa leni pad rahi hai…matlab bohat amazing tha meri MRP!!! Mission sabke chehre par smile successful captain riya!! Happy diwali dear…aaj se shuroon ho gai diwali….love u loads meri pyari MRP..

    1. Riyarocks

      haha……..thnku meri CVR:) for liking this………& haan….tumne sahi bola….ye har ghar ki kahani hai….meri bhabhi bhi kuch kuch aisi hai…..matlab jaise iss os mein sanchi thi;P…..isiliye mujhe ye likhne mein zyada dimaag use nahi karna pada……I’m glad ki tujhe ye pasand aaya……….luv u shona……….

  5. Hi sweetie yeh kya tha. It’s was totally different just mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more and beyond beyond beyond everything. I loved it. I read this i dnt how many times. I was still laughing. Amazing yaar too good. Love you loads

    1. Riyarocks

      yaar Ashu…….u just made my day with such lovely comments……..waise ek baat bata, tujhe hua kya tha?????why were u hospitalized???????….ab tu theek toh hai na????????…..plz yaar, take care of urself……….& I was relieved ki I could bring a smile on ur face through this os…………luv u a lot shona & apna achhe se khayaal rakho,ok……….

  6. Awesome riyu fabulous I was laughing like anything bechara kabir saanchi only told him to see and she will only cry after 😂😂😂 too funny dear lovely

    1. Riyarocks

      thnku thnku thnku sooooooo much for liking this……….& sahi bola, bichara kabir, apni biwi ki nautanki ka shikaar;P…..thnku sweety for being a regular reader of my writings……it really means a lot……luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeeee…………

  7. omg… hahahaa
    what to say yaar hilarious
    loved it

      1. Riyarocks

        thnk u sooooooo much Alia for commenting…..no……in fact, thnx for being a regular reader & commentor throughout all my writings…….this really means a lot….sachii……luv u a lot sweetieeeee…….

    1. Riyarocks

      thnku sooooooo much swetha dear for commenting(I’m also happy coz for the first time u r commenting on my post….so thnx a lot for that…)….I’m really glad u liked it……..luv u sweetieeeeee………

  8. RuCh23

    😂😂😂 loved it Riya 😍😍😍 what a couple they are? 😀😀😀 poor Kabir…. Every time he say something, he ends up in trouble whether it’s good or bad 😀😀😀 awesome dear 😘😘😘

    1. Riyarocks

      bilkul sahi hai….bichara kabir…..ab kare bhi toh kya…..aakhir har ghar ki yehi toh kahaani hai…..biwi ka palda hamesha bhaari hai…haha………thnx for commenting & a constant supporter…….luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaa…………

  9. Priyanshipp

    Maine ise raat ko 1 hi baje padh liya tha. Network problem ke karan mera type kiya hua lmba choda comment delete ho gya tha.
    First of congo for ur first os. Tumne to hasa hasa jaan hi nikal diya. 😂😂😂😂😂 mujhe to sach me shaadi ke side effects dikh rhe the. Mai sach bata rhi hoon raat ko kisi tarah muh daba kar lekin pure dil se has has kar pagla rhi thi. Kyuki us waqt hasti to sab uth kar mujhe marte or sbko pata chal jaata ki mai telly updates padhti hoon or sdch or kaanchi ke liye pagla gyi hoon. Kasam se band hi baj jayegi. Now enough of my bak bak.
    And how dare you say this a crap. Agli baar ye bolne se pehle sochna zaroor. …kyuki or koi kuch kare ya nhi mai pakka teri band baza doongi. 😂😂😂😂
    OK sweetie come back soon.
    Till then take care.

    1. Riyarocks

      abeo…jaan nikalne ki baat mat karna….agar tumhe kuch hogaya toh meri writings pe comment kaun karega?????;P….soch rahi ho na, ki ye ladki kitni kamini hai…..but kya karein, dosti mein kameenapanti bhi toh zaroori hai ki naa?????……haha……..& haan sahi boli tune….gharwaalon ke saamne hamesha TU padhte waqt jab koi comedy scenes aa jaye toh bahut mushkil hojata hai, apni hasi ko ctrl karna…I know that feeling……..& & main aage se bolne se pehle sochungi..theek hai…….ek badi si jaadu ki jhappi…….& luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaaa……..

  10. Nyc,,os.. Wanna 2 see 2nd shot..plz

    1. Riyarocks

      haha……thnku soooooooooo much for commenting…..I’m really glad that u liked this……luv u a lot………

  11. Negisanyukta

    Ur first os is fantabulous.I just loved it to the core.😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Keep writing dear.

    1. Riyarocks

      awwwww……..ur comments bought a big smile on my face……thnx for liking it…….luv u a lot sweetieeeee…….

  12. Khamoshi

    Priyanka yaar..it was hilarious.. main has has ke mar jau..but chill zinda hu..bhootu nahi hui ab tak 😉😂 kya band bajayi hai kabir ki.. behen tum Patni virodh sangathan ki sadasya ho kya? 😂😂😂 biwi ko zaalim banaya or pati ko patni pidit.. hahah amazing OS dear..yeh try thi to professional article kise kehte hai yaar? Too good

    1. Riyarocks

      awww…Mitu yaar….tumhare iss comment ko padhke mujhe aisa lag raha hai jaise main hawaaon mein udd rahi hoon……..itne saare tareef…..dear main itne tareef ke laayak toh nahi bani hoon, but anyways, tareef sun na kise acha nahi lagta;P…..haha…..(soch rahi ho na ki main kitni badi kamini hoon…but dear, dosti main kameenapanti toh banta hai na boss ;)..haha )…..a big teddy hug for u……..luv u a lot shona………

  13. It was fabulous and it was funny amazing and u gave the exact definition of marriage and whatever u have wrote is the reality as I have also heard many times and don’t say its a crap if ur husband is like kabir it’s reality what u have written and I like the way u always begin ur writings by small messages so dear it was perfect and unique one

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku soooooooo much Sanu dear for commenting(infact, thanks for commenting for the first time on my writings..)…I’m really glad that u liked this plot….thnx for ur compliments……luv u loads sweetieeeee…..

  14. Aafiya

    I was just smiling from starting till the end… It was fabulous..

    1. Riyarocks

      I’m really glad that u liked this……thnx a lot dear for commenting…….luv u a lot sweetieeeee……

    2. Riyarocks

      oops bhool gayi….thanks even more for commenting first time on my writings ;)……luv u…….

      1. Aafiya

        My pleasure… Luv you too…

    3. Riyarocks

      luv u more Aafiya dear…..:):)

  15. Niyaaa

    Hey prinku late hun i know per kya karu meri mummy hitler ki nani ban gayi h or diwali per mera diwala nikle bina nahi rehna wala..aaj to mmy ne mera phn hi chin liya ki kaam kuch karna nahi ab kya kahun hmesha sare ghar wale yahi puchte rehte h kya karti h har tym phn me agar ye bola ki telly update pdti hun to soch skti ho kya hoga.. Ye mmy or ghar wale jaan lekar hi chodenge.. Btw epi is mindblowing superb hilarious m to sanki patni padte hi hasne lagi thi.. Or yaar sabke samne padh bhi nahi skti ek to ghar wale pehle hi kahte h kya krti h uper se hasne lag jaungi to sochenge bachchi bigad gayi h..hahaha.. Lovv u sweety aise hi hasate raho nd ghar walon ki chinta mat karna unhe handle kar hi lenge raat h naa ab shanti se akele room me aaram se padhne ko mila.. Bhala ho bhagwan ka..ghar wale so gaye .. happy diwali in advance tc bye warna meri bakwas yun hi chalti rahegi…

    1. Riyarocks

      haha…..yaar main toh darr hi gayi thi ki tumhe shaayad ye pasand nahi aaya, isiliye comments nahi ki….but ab I’m relieved…..& gharwaalon ka toh bolo hi mat….arey, bachhe agar khush ho rahe hain, toh achi baat hai naa…lekin nahi….unhe reason jaan na hai….& hame kya paagal kutte ne kaata hai jo hum reason batakar apni pair pe kulhaadi maare….chodo…..ab kya kehna….agar bolne nikle toh poora din kam pad jayegi lekin shikayatein khatam nahi hogi…… haha……..luv u dherrrrrrrrr saaraaaaa……..gud nt….tc……..& a very HAPPY DIWALI in advance…….

  16. So sorry di for such a late comment…..Sanchi is hillarious…hehe….awesome….lots of loive & a big hug to u di.

    1. Riyarocks

      oye….tu pehle ye bata tera fever ab kaisa hai?????tu ab theek toh hai na?????…….ab zara apna kaan pakadle……….teri himmat kaise hui sorry kehne ki;)………dosti ka usool bhool gayi kya???????? & waise bhi koi apne diii ko sorry bolta hai bhala??????choti… main janti hoon teri tabiyat theek nahi thi, else meri Niyu comments karne mein late hojaye, aisa kabhi nahi hosakta………tu apna achhe se khayal rakh………a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u & luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaa……….

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