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Home»Fan Fiction»THE SEPARATED SOULS- SS (SHOT 2)
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THE SEPARATED SOULS- SS (SHOT 2)

NilashBy NilashJune 11, 201743 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hey people NILASH back with the next shot. Thank You to all of you for all your support and love. The link for the previous part:

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“okk now stop this rona dhona and all this senti stupid antics” Mahi spoke allowed breaking the hug. Anika and Gauri wiped away their tears and looked at each other. “For what reason you two were sobbing when I came?” Mahi asked raising his one eyebrow. Anika looked at Gauri and then looked down. “it’s ok Bhojai if you don’t want to say it infront of me fine” Gauri said looking at Anika. “Ek jhaap me deewar pe sat jaibe….. if you repeat this again” Anika yelled at Gauri for her stupid misunderstanding. “Who said I was uncomfortable? Why can’t I share my pain with you? You may be think me as your jethani but you are my sister and not devrani so just stop behaving like one”

Anika answered. “actually i…” Gauri tried to explain but our khirkitor Anika interrupted “no actually you are my sister and never dare to repeat that”. “Hmm.. you two carry on if you end then we can talk…. Till then let me have a sweet nap” Mahi said yawning. “no no ok I am saying” Anika said. “Thank God…. Please my dear bahena start” Mahi answered with great relief.
Anika started “I saw him today on Mishra ji’s daughter’s mehendi party…..he..he..” her voice chocked. Tears made their ways through her cheeks. Soon she wiped away the tears and continued “ he came there along with a girl… may be he will marry her… the girl was holding his hand…. And he looked happy with her…so…” she now stopped and looked up to Mahi and Gauri. Both were silent searching for words to console her but they knew no excuse or sentence can console her at this point of time. Soon an idea sparked in the brain of our Gauri Kumari Sharma.

“Anika bhojai tomorrow Saahil is coming for a holiday of a week so any plans about it?” Gauri tried to lighten the atmosphere, Anika also understood the purpose of the question so she let go her thoughts. “Anika… my dear question kumari see I know it’s hard to forget someone you love so you just go and tell him the truth” Mahi tried to figure out the solution of the problem. “No Mahi… I can’t do that or else… o..or else he will get shattered after knowing the truth of his illigetimacy.. I can’t let that happen” Anika said in one go imagining the consequence of disclosing the truth. “Mahi bhaiyaa leave it my Anika didi… ohh I mean.. Anika bhojai……” Gauri was speaking but again got interrupted by Anika “Anika didi suits better” “haannn??” Gauri did not understand what Anika tried to say “I mean Anika didi suits better from your mouth than Anika bhojai…. I felt my chutki is calling me…” Anika answered remembering her chutki. “Chutki? Who is that? You had a sister also? Where is she?” Gauri asked in one go. “Second question kumara of my life” Mahi said sarcastically. “Relax Gauri… I… I had a sister but I lost her… where I don’t remember but I just remember somebody adopted her from the orphanage…. I lost her” Anika replied softly. “We will find her together” Mahi assured Anika. “Hmmm” Anika just nodded her head knowing the irrelevancy of their search operation.

The scene shifted to the pool side of Oberoi Mansion. Our great Shivay Singh Oberoi was lost in thoughts of his wife. Om came and sat beside him. “Shivay don’t you think Anika bhabhi should return now?” Om questioned lost Shivay. No answer came from other side. Om again asked the same question but again no answer. Now Om looked upto Shivay who was leant against the tree present over their pool side and slept. Om brushed his hand through his brother’s hair and noticed the peaceful Shivay sleeping holding the mangalsutra. “you love her Shivay, you again became SSO for world but for her you are still her billu ji” Om assured ownself and was about to leave but decided to sat beside and look at his brother for some time. Om was staring him and he woke up as he slipped from his position. He opened his eyes to look Om already staring him. “What?” Shivay directly asked Om. “Mangalsutra” Om replied. Shivay tried to hide it but failed. “Shivay you are trying to hide that it’s fine but please don’t try to hide your feelings” Om calmly gave a try to make his brother realize. “Om I think I should complete the presentation there is a meeting tomorrow” Shivay tried to ignore Om’s words and opened the laptop that was lying on his side. “Not only is the desktop but your mind and heart also ruled by her images” Om again spoke up pointing the desktop wallpaper of Anika in Shivay’s laptop.

“Om let’s go to the kitchen not feeling like working” Shivay again tried to ignore Om’s words. “Hmmm… let’s go” Om nodded his head and a faint smile covered his face. The brothers went to their best hanging out place. Rudra was already present at the kitchen eating a carrot. “Rudra” Om called him. “Yeah?” Rudra responded and looked sharply at his brothers. “why are you eating this? Some time ago you had your protein shake right?” Shivay question his brother. “ Actually was feeling hungry” Rudra calm and shocking reply really shocked both the brothers. “Dumbbell Singh Oberoi feels hungry as well?” Om tried to pull Rudra’s leg. “okk boys what should we prepare for dinner today?” Shivay questioned looking at his watch. “Aloo Puri” both Om and Rudra replied in unison. Shivay’s face changed but he tried to hide that. “Bhaiyaa don’t try to hide your feelings na please” Rudra pleaded making puppy eyes.

“Today I saw her” a cold reply came from Shivay’s side. “What?” both Rudra and Om’s eyes bulged out of their eye sockets. “Yes she was the event manager at Mishra ji’s daughter’s mehendi party. Busy engrossed in work but was staring me through the corner of her eye but she was very much trying to ignore me” Shivay completed. “And you again ignored her?” Om questioned becoming a bit curious. “No I wanted to see her jealous so…” Shivay smiled at the corner of his lips and continued “so.. I became adhesive and stick to Priya to make her jealous” “wow… my bhaiyaa is becoming flirtatious.. hmmm” Rudra again applied his logic. “Shut up Rudra” Om scolded him. “Shivay have you gone mad you know Anika bhabhi can’t tolerate you with some other girl and you did that?…. wait let me call her and clear the misunderstandings” Om took out his phone but Shivay took it from his hand “No Om please she was okay with it…. No marks of jealousy were there on her face… but…” Shivay took a pause that was like stopping of time for both the brothers waiting for the completion of the sentence. “but…” Rudra tried to make Shivay realize the spot he stopped. “….but she ran out from the ceremony….

she thought she ignored me but when she took her last step into that ceremony she was broken and was trying to explain the importance of leaving the ceremony to Mrs. Mishra and after that she left.” Shivay completed and again stared at the mangalsutra he was holding in his hand. “Ohhh…. Nowadays mangalsutra also became an ingredient for alloo puri…. Om you knew that?” Rudra asked Om raising his one eyebrow. “Rudra when will you grow up?” Shivay cross questioned him and put the mangalsutra in his pocket.

The brothers made alloo puri and tasted one by one. “hmm.. nice” Shivay said praising himself but soon stopped looking at the stare of his both the brother. “what?” Shivay questioned. “Missing bhabhi’s khirkitor smile bhaiyaa which she was to give after tasting the alloo puri made by you” Rudra explained the reason and hugged his Shivay bhaiyaa. Om also joined them. Shivay’s eyes got filled by tears but he wiped away making sure that nobody noticed. “Boys relax she will of course return after all this is her house and I am her husband so just wait for the correct time” Shivay tried to give them hope and assure his ownself. He believed that Anika and he share an eternal connection which can’t be broken. He was happy he kissed the mangalsutra and looked at his brothers who was staring him lovingly at his cute antique.

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    43 Comments

    1. Shraddha-DBO on June 11, 2017 9:13 pm

      Superb nilash, I love all ur stories.
      Waiting anxiously for next??

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 10:31 am

        Awwwwww… Shraddha Thank You so much for this love. I already posted the next part dear hopr TU uploads it soon. please stay tuned dear.
        Missed you and specially your appreciating words

    2. Aashi on June 11, 2017 9:15 pm

      khidkitodh episode
      absolute dhamakedaar
      update soon

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 10:51 am

        Thank You Aashi
        I already posted the next part dear hope TU uploads it soon. Please stay tuned dear.

    3. Sagithya on June 11, 2017 9:16 pm

      Wow yaar…loved it…. awesome n fantastic…. Waiting for the next part.. post it soon

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 10:53 am

        Thank You Sagithya… I am really very happy that you liked the part.
        And I already posted the next part dear hope TU uploads it soon. Please stay tuned dear.

    4. Dhar on June 11, 2017 9:18 pm

      Superb , fantastic, i dont have any words , plzz do post the next update ASAP

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 10:54 am

        Thank You Dhar… you praised me so cutely dear Thank You for that.
        And I already posted the next part dear hope TU uploads it soon. Please stay tuned dear.

    5. Sairan on June 11, 2017 9:37 pm

      Lovely..so sweet to see that shivay is soooo understanding..

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 10:56 am

        Thank You so much dear and let’s hope this understanding nature of Shivay continues. will be waiting for your appreciation on the next part also.

    6. Sam on June 11, 2017 9:43 pm

      Speechless!! ❤❤❤

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 10:57 am

        Awww… Sam Thank You so much for this… please stay tuned dear

    7. Charitha on June 11, 2017 9:47 pm

      Super

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 10:58 am

        Thank You Charitha
        please stay tuned dear

    8. kanfi on June 11, 2017 10:07 pm

      Ammazinggg yrr…
      Loved it….
      It means shivaay still trust her….!!
      Khidkitod update….
      Waiting for next

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 11:00 am

        Thank You Kanfi… yeah Shivay still trusts her but not sure what is waiting for them in future i just hope this trust remaines intact.
        And dear I already posted the next part hope TU uploads it soon. Please stay tuned dear.
        Thank You again

    9. Ashwinee on June 11, 2017 10:17 pm

      Very nicely written.

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 11:01 am

        Thank You Winee
        And you can call me by any nickname you want. If you do so another nickname of mine will get registered in my dictionary. Waiting for the new name of me.

      • Ashwinee on June 12, 2017 11:24 am

        Fine then I’ll call you ASH or NILU . you call me WINEE . And you remind me of WINEE THE POOH ??.

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 12:11 pm

        Okk Winee you can call me ASH then one of my friend Gayu (Gayathri) also calls me by that name.
        And I will always make you remember WINEE THE POOH promise.

    10. Niriha on June 11, 2017 10:31 pm

      Awesome….

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 11:02 am

        Thank You Niriha
        Please stay tuned dear

    11. pooja26 on June 11, 2017 10:42 pm

      awww billu 😉 😉
      loved d whole chappy…….
      post asap……
      tc,…..

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 11:04 am

        Thank You Pooja… Thank You again
        And I already posted the next part dear hope TU uploads it soon. Please stay tuned dear.
        Take care
        I learnt a new word “chappy” Thank You for this also.

    12. Anju on June 11, 2017 11:07 pm

      Awesome.. waiting for next part

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 11:05 am

        Thank You Anju……..
        I already posted the next part dear hope TU uploads it soon. Please stay tuned dear.

    13. Jerry_36 on June 11, 2017 11:22 pm

      Hello Nilash di.
      So I am back with commenting and I hope that this time I am on time?
      So this chapter was so so cute and awesome. I don’t have many words in dictionary but when I praised you I really mean as you literally shocked me with this side of yours.
      You know if you would have been in Rustom movie its name would be Chupirustom??, okay I know this joke has already been portrayed by Rudy, still it fitted the situation.
      I loved this chappy as well, so adorable. Shivaay’s cute gesture always rake my heart away?
      And he is toh cheapda, Anika ko jealous karra raha that, still I loved it. Poor Anika, and that gauri awww, everyone was perfect at their places.
      Eagerlyyyy waiting for the next chapter, try posting soon as this one. Waiting for the misunderstandings to get clear
      Love yaa very much❤

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 12:27 pm

        Love you loads dear. Thank You for all the praises dear. I have already posted the next “CHAPPY” waiting for TU to upload it. Thank You for this new word “CHAPPY” to my dictionary.
        And I forgot that joke and you reminded me of it thanks for that dear. More cheapdapan of Shivay is awaiting dear. Thank You again
        Love you so so so much.????????????

    14. kashaf on June 11, 2017 11:23 pm

      Wow it was nice. By the way ur in watt pad. If you are there please give me ur ID. If not its OK. And I hope the next part has Rumya and rikara in it.

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 11:33 am

        Thank You Kashaf.
        Yup dear i am there at wattpad my id is Nilanjana07. but why did you ask this?
        dear Rumya will be there but after some more parts so very sorry for it and yup rikara is there at the next part. I already posted the next part dear hope TU uploads it soon. Please stay tuned dear.

    15. Arpita on June 11, 2017 11:28 pm

      Hwwwww nilash dear ,? tum yahan.and TU page pe gayab. Not fair hann.cum se cum hii hello toh bolti anyway this part is awesome as well as emotional. ..

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 11:31 am

        Hloooo… yaar hamari didi to bahut zyada rone waali hai tumne apne aap ko wo dekhne ke liye prepare kar liya??
        Haan mujhse aur CVs ka torture bardaasht nhi kiya gaya to ek SS hi likh daali. And mai PKJ page par wapas jaaungi but exams hai so isiliye IB bhi nhi dekh paa rhi hu. And jab mai wapas jaungi sirf Hii Hello nhi 1000 words ka OS type comment post karungi pakka.
        And Thank you.

    16. Banita on June 12, 2017 2:28 am

      Hey Nilash!!!!! I hope u remember me…. At 1st a biggg sry 4 not commenting on pre. part becz i just read it…. It’s Superbb dr….. Nice 2 read ur another ff….. Nd coming 2 today epi it’s AWESOME dr…. Waiting 4 nxt post ASAP….

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 11:29 am

        Banita how can I forget you… you are so close friend of mine.
        Thank You dear for all the love and support you shed on me. And dear love you loads.
        I already posted the next part dear hope TU uploads it soon. Please stay tuned dear.

    17. gayathri.visu on June 12, 2017 5:00 am

      What is this Nilash? Where is my Ash? She is writing something, that too very emotional!! I can’t believe this! But in prev part, u didn’t mention ur name in starting?! Why? Bcz of this I almost missed that part. Just now only I read it.

      One side u make me smile, other side u make me very emotional! What u have done dear?
      I loved it! I loved it! In ur ff, ur jiju still trusts ur didi right? Amazing concept dear! All the best Ash… Love u dear!!

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 11:27 am

        Hey Gayu… hiii… Yaar I am the same Ash believe me. Yup she is breaking her own rules these days. Yaar very disturbed after reading all the spoilers so just calm down i wrote it. Actually I was not sure that will I be able to continue with this or not so I just skipped of my name but then decided it to continue.
        You have been very supportive all throughout from the initial days and see I can’t thank you and this is not done. Can we keep our deal aside for ff purpose??
        Yup he do so in my ff but not sure what will CVs do in real. Hey when is our class today??

      • gayathri.visu on June 12, 2017 4:49 pm

        NO! Don’t u dare to broke our promise…ok! Even our pkj also disturbed bcz of those stupid spoilers. Really this is good concept dear. Today is leave for u Ash bcz I m busy. But tomo pakka! And time…..asusual anytime I m ok!

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 8:34 pm

        Okkk dear I will never ever dare to ask this question again. Holding my ears.
        But I again forgot what you taught. So you have to teach me again from beginning.
        I will be waiting for you on fb tomorrow

    18. nikita_jai29 on June 12, 2017 1:29 pm

      It is awesome… My rocking girl… Love you a lot…

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 8:15 pm

        Thank You so much my Nikki dear….
        Love you loads.

    19. Madhuani on June 12, 2017 5:36 pm

      awesome di…
      yes,it was emotional and tablatodh.

      • Nilash on June 12, 2017 8:22 pm

        Thank You Madhu
        yup dear very emotional and dear the next part is also uploaded you can go and check that as well. Please stay tuned dear.

    20. Neha-17 on June 14, 2017 4:37 pm

      Great one..dearrr..Hehe..As I have readd next partt..I am love with this FF now
      Totally fabulous!
      LOve ya!

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