THE SEPARATED SOULS- SS (SHOT 11)

Heyyy… NILASH back and this time seriously I am late I know. Actually my mumma was sick so could not manage time to write. SORRY… but now see the last part is ready. I will write a small EPILOUGE over it as requested by my friend ANSHI. The link for the previous parts is down.

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SHOT-11
The morning peeped through the curtains of the Oberoi brothers’ rooms. Om got up rubbing his eyes just like kids. He then looked at his side to look for Gauri but she is not in the room. Om’s eyes went to the window. He noticed the soft rain kissing the earth so rhythmically. He went towards the window and stood there for some time to enjoy the beauty of rain. He was keenly noticing the rain falling on every leaf, grass and flowers of their beautiful garden. Soon he realized Gauri is not there at the room. He searched for her at every nook and corner of the palace Oberoi Mansion. He then went upto the terrace though he knew she would not be there as it’s raining heavily.
But to his surprise Gauri was there. The rain is at first kissing her beauty and then touching the well furnished floor of the terrace. He was mesmerized seeing her dancing, jumping and enjoying the rain to the fullest. He took out his phone and played the song “HAR GHARI BADAL RAHI HAI…..” she stopped dancing as soon the song reached up to her ears. She turned to look from where the sound is coming. She noticed Om standing four steps away from her and staring her. Blood ran through her cheeks noticing the admiring look in Om’s eyes.

She turned to go but Om held her hand. He pointed towards the phone kept inside the shade. “May I have the pleasure to dance with you beauty?” he asked sitting on his knees. Gauri nodded. Om got up and held her by her waist, while Gauri held him by his shoulders. They started following the soothing tone of the song playing. They danced together looking at each other’s eyes. The song got over exactly after 4 minutes and 51 seconds. They were so much lost in each other that they continued to dance with the rhythm of the rain.

“Hey you both come inside or else you two will also get cold” a voice came breaking their trance. Both of them looked towards the voice. It was Shivay who called them. “I know Shivay maybe you are jealous that I and my wife are spending a romantic moment in rain because your wife is sick so you can’t do that but why are you disturbing us like this?” Om asked Shivay with an annoying look still holding Gauri by her waist. “Omkara ji leave me…” Gauri whispered looking towards the floor. Om left her. “At first you two come inside and change these clothes, then we will continue our argument” Shivay said showing concern. “No no I can understand your feelings bro….” Om now teased him while getting in. “Okk enough of understanding… just go inside and change” Shivay again said. Om quickly hugged Shivay tight. “Fhat the wuck…. I just got freshened up now again I have to change my clothes as well” Shivay cried rather shouted. Om soon broke the hug and ran towards his room laughing mischievously holding Gauri’s hand. Shivay smiled at this innocent antique of his brother and went to change again.

The scene shifted to Rudra’s room. Rudra the great muscle building freak and fitness freak was doing pushups. Soumya entered his room and smiled looking at her Rudra. Soon Rudra’s eyes also fell on her and he started to hum a song “AISE NA MUJHE TUM DEKHO SEENE SE LAGA LUNGA….” Soumya blushed a little. Rudra got up and walked up to her. “What?” Rudra asked “nothing” Soumya answered and turned to go but Rudra the lady killer held her wrist and pushed her towards him. Soumya twirled and landed up on Rudra’s chest. Rudra wrapped her around his chest. “I loved my old fatso Sumo not this one, see yourself so fit and fine” Rudra said which made his Sumo to smile. They broke the hug. “Ohhoo that time you had problem with me because I was fat and now you have problem with me because I am fit.”

Soumya said and stared at Rudra angrily. “no I mean Sumooo…” Rudra again pulled her leg “now stop it you Stupid Singh Oberoi” Sumo replied back. “Stop calling me that” Rudra said making a pout, “I won’t stop…. Protei Shake Oberoi” Sumo again said “Wait you fatso….” Rudra completed and threw a pillow towards Soumya; she caught it and threw it back to Rudra, another pillow landed on Rudra along with the first one. They ended up having a pillow fight and they stopped after murdering all the pillows present over the bed. Both of them burst into laughter. They understood they are not just friends but more than that. They promised to each other that they will never leave each other whatever happens and again hugged.

Shivika lastly got the screen space and the scene shifted to Shivika’s room. Shivay has changed his cloth. While the other two O’bros are happy with their wives here Shivay is yelling at his wife “Anika get up it’s already late” “More two minutes Shivay…. Please” Anika told softly. “You have been repeating the same from past one hour now just get up” Shivay said and removed the duvet from Anika. Anika got up angrily. “Now open your mouth….” He said filling some syrup in a spoon. “Noooo… please no Shivay I promise I will never get late to get up but please not this syrup please” she requested her bagad billa. “It is required, or else how will you get fine soon?” Shivay asked her sitting beside her. “Please no…” Anika was shouting while Shivay held her face, opened her mouth forcefully and put that spoon inside her mouth, she gulped down that syrup immediately. “Uuuurrrrgghhhh….” She yelled making an annoyed expression.

“Anika how will you control our kids if you also behave like a kid?” Shivay asked her in a teasing tone. “What do you mean by kids… how many you want fifty?” Anika asked raising her eyebrow. “Why only half century?? We can go for century na…” Shivay again teased his wife. “Nooo… we are happy with two bhaiyaa… only Shivika and Ansh” Rudra said after listening his brother’s plans. Shivay got up feeling embarrassed while Anika blushed highly. The entire youngsters group OmRi, RuMya and Mahi entered their room. Soumya and Gauri went towards Anika and occupied both the sides of her. Rudra continued “Mahi bhaiyaa we can arrange the first night of bhaiyaa and bhabhi what say?” Rudra said while looking towards his Mahi bhaiyaa…. “Yeah actually a good idea” Mahi replied back. Rudra was not over yet “Wait wait why only bhaiyaa and bhabhi we can also arrange the first night of O and Chulbul bhabhi…” he smirked. “Shut up Rudra…” came the reply from ShivOm. All of them laughed out loud. The four brothers hugged each other. LAFZON KA YEH RISHTA NAHI….. played at the background. The screen froze at the laughing faces of all of them.

Yaaayyyyy!!!!!! See done with my SS. Decided to post an EPILOUGE maybe tomorrow, will try to post it soon but not sure. Now want to confess something before writing this and the previous episode I HAD TO LISTEN TO THE ROMANTIC BOLLYWOOD SONGS to get the feel and do you know while I was writing that suicide thoughts of Shivay humma humaa song was playing. Hehehehe…. Whatever done. Now comment fast and the AUTHOR’S NOTE BELOW IS VERY IMPORTANT.

Thank You to all of you for your immense support. LOADS OF LOVE TO ALL. Okk now writing the most special friends’ names down the way I call all of you.
ANSHI…….. SANJANA……… MEHAK……… AASHI……… ANGLE……….. LAUREN………. NITA……….. BUNNY……… AISHA…………… ARYA……….. WINEE……….. ARPITA………….. ANITA……… FRIENDSO (FFFAAN)………… GAYU………… SAIRAN……….DHAR…………. UF…………….. JERRY………….. MADHU…………. ANOUSHKA……….. NIRIHA…………. DHEE………… NIKKI DEAR……………. POOJA…………. SAGI………. ALEKHIKA………. ANKITA…………. MRUNAL…………. NEHA………. DEBDUTTA……….. ZAHRA………. KANFI…………. KASHAF………… TWINKLE…………. RAKSHA……… AHRA………… CHARITHA………… RASIKA……….. ARWA………… SHIVANYA…………. ANNIKA……… TANU………….. SANYUKTA…………. SHRADDHA………… ARTHI……… SAM………. ANJU……… SHIVIKA……… MEGHANA………………… loads of loave to you all and thank you so much for all the support and love.
NOW FOR THE SILENT READERS. I know you may have liked the plot that I created but never commented. See it came to an end at least comment one word for it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. If you all consider me as your friend then you have to comment. See I am blackmailing you all. Arrre just drop your comment yaar. LOADS OF LOVE to you all also.

And for the readers of THE O’BROS LOVE STORY…… I WILL BE BACK WITH THAT ONE AFTER A WEEK. So please drop all your valuable comments over there as well. BYEEE…. Will again try to write one emotional piece soon. TILL THEN GOOD BYE.

71 comments

  1. Ashwinee

    Ashwinee

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    last but not the least but this the best episode of the whole ss. love you ash come back soon with a bang . (i mean the new one) and your previous one, waiting for that also 🙂

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Thank You Winee. Will surely try to come back soon. I hope you will like that previous one as well.
      Love you too dear.

  2. Fffan1234

    Fffan1234

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    Superb episode dear. Looking forward to epilogue. My name is Dipti But my friends call me Asmi. Would love if you call me the same Nilash…

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Heeyyyy Asmi…. hiii dear. Will love to call you by your name. Thank You so much dear for supporting me all throughout.
      Loads of love

  3. Mehakchalag

    Mehakchalag

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    Amazing di.Happy ending.And i m again saying stop saying sorry to us.U considered us as friends so no sry and thank u.Blushing blushing and songs r sune par suhaga.Century naughty singh oberoi hehe.U r awesome writer u wrote scenes very nicely whether it is emotional,romantic or humour.

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Okkk Mehak will try not to say sorry but not sure.
      Actually I said na for writing last two episodes I had to listen to Bollywood songs then only these two songs I decided to put in.
      Thank You so much for all these praises.
      Yup seriously Naughty Singh Oberoi… now CVs should also return back our Naughty Singh Oberoi on screen

  4. Anitaaa3

    Anitaaa3

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    Super sw bhi upar wala episode Nilash di….Plzz jaldi The Obros Love Story poat kijiye…..Miss u so much….

  5. UF

    AMAZING BEAUTIFULL CUTE EXCELLENT FABULOUS GREAT MIND BLOWING SUPERB👌👌👌😍😘😍😘😍😘💖💞

    Dear nilash
    Thank you so much accepting me your special friend.waiting for your O bro’s love story.

    Take care of your self.gud luck.come back soon😊😊😊💐💐💐👍

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Thank You so much
      But why are you thanking me??? You are my special friend na so no need of thank you.
      Will surely try to be back soon with that one.
      Take care too bye

  6. Niriha

    Niriha

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    Awesome….fabulous part loved it to the core 😍😍😍😍😍😛😛😛….waiting for the epilogue dear.

  7. Annika51

    Amaing ending dear..
    Loved it.
    Come soon with a new story.
    Waiting

    Sorry as I am too lazy to log in but I am registered member here:)

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Thank You Annika… I know you and also I know that you are a registered member.
      Will surely try to be back soon dear.
      Thank You

  8. Raksha104

    Raksha104

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    yaar…it was an extraordinary one…..i loved it baby till the end…..pls write a new one…continue yaar pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! see i’m blackmailing u…if u dont continue ur writing then,i will surely write a complaint letter on u to bhagwan and also a copy mail to tellyupdates …remember!!!!!!
    Never ever try to think even of stop writing……just for fun…..lol…….
    But,seriously love ur updates so,continue ur writing dear….bye!!!!

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Thank You Raksha… okk as you blackmailed me and I got scared so will surely try to post a new ff soon.
      Now I am extra scared please no letter to bhagwaan ji please.
      Okk I will never think to stop writing but I can take a break na???
      Will soon be back
      Thank You soooo much and Love you

  9. Dhar

    Dhar

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    Amazingly fantastic episode dear 😍😘 loved it to the coreee, superb ending , but do come back with another dose of ur writings

  10. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    My old dramebaaz Ash is back!! hilarious! Beautiful Rikara part.. Cute Rumya n ur jiju n didi…….so sweet n naughty part. Eagerly waiting for next part dear.

    Humaa humaa n that suicide thoughts……u r really unique piece. And u pinched me hard na now see I also gave PUNISHMENT for u….. hehehe! Enjoy ur punishment dear………. Tata! Love u dear!

    See today I forget to ask, Auntyji is ok na?

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Yupppp yaayy… yes see I am back…
      Now what can I do if that suicide part idea came during Humma song. Not my fault na… hehehehehe
      Okk but see I am following your punishment my EXTRA MUGAMBO… wink wink. But you are verryyy sweet.
      Naan unna kadhalikkiren…
      Love you loads dear
      Aunty ji is okkk dear infact super ok after I stopped having Paani puri

  11. Pooja26

    Pooja26

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    hey nilash !!!!!!
    ending of a beautiful journey…… really enjoyed each & every chappy…..
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
    loved all d chappies…… 😉 😉
    post epilouge soon……
    waiting eagerly…….
    bubye …… dear….
    tc….
    come soon with a new ff !!!!!!

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Thank You Pooja… yaayy I am glad that you liked all the chappies… will try to be back soon. Pakka
      Dear the Epilogue got posted.
      Loads of love
      Take care
      Buhhbye

  12. Arpita

    Amazing nilash dear ,….but yes plz come back with obro love story..i am missing it very badly…

  13. Lauren

    Lauren

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    Amazinggggg dii…..it was last part m really sad for dat as I got addicted to ur ff…but will often talk to uhh….
    Love uhh dii…
    N yeah dii come up wid the new story soooooooon Will be waiting for your nxt…..

  14. Madhuani

    Madhuani

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    Awesome…
    Happy Ending after all yippeee🍝🍝🍝
    Okay now u have to make a pinky promise to me that u will be back soon otherwise I will not talk to you (katti) ok.😖😖😔
    See I know I’m blackmailing you but you don’t have any other option left so come back soon.😆😊😃😉
    Love you too di…😍😘😍😘
    Post epilogue soon.

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Okk baba no katti please I will soon be back. Now abbi???? Okk I am scared of your blackmail I will surely be back soon.
      Pakka wala Pinky promise….
      Chalo tum Yipee🍝🍝🍝 khao tab tak. Epilogue is posted dear
      Bye
      Love you too and love you so much.

  15. Dheemahee

    Dheemahee

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    Ooo khatam ho Gaya…. Koi nai hope u will be back with another great work of yours…
    Today a beautiful journey of yours came to and end… This was really an awesome journey of the separate soul… Really love it..good bless u Yar..take care…no words for this work of yours..but it was a beautiful. One… Cya…hope to see u soon..bye.

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Yup will soon try to be back. Thank You so much Dhee….
      Thank You very much for this sweet appreciation.
      Will miss your comments verryyy much.
      Thank You

  16. Jerry_36

    Jerry_36

    |Registered Member

    Hello Nilash di.
    Well you don’t need to be sorry, take care of aunty, okay..?
    Coming to the update I loved it, seriously I am not getting words. You are an amazing writer and nobody could change that.
    The way you penned down the emotions is just wow..
    Earlier you wrote comedy fun filled writings but you tried this one too and believe me I really appreciate your efforts, I brilliant writer indeed.
    All the chapters were marvellously written and this one was toh super duper awesome.
    All the couples were amazing at their places. You rocked it di. Proud to have you as my bestie and a big sister. Try coming soon with another one.
    Love yaa very much ❤

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Thank You so much dear. Baapre so many praising sentences thank you so much. Now what should I reply in return tell me. You are much more awesome than me. Waiting for your next part.
      Loads of love dear and again thank you so so so much.
      Will surely try to come back soon.
      Love you too

  17. Kiki

    Kiki

    |Registered Member

    I am a silent reader of your ff. Sorry for not commenting earlier. 🙏
    I really loved ur ff. Waiting for the epilogue. And many more ff

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Thank You and it’s okk dear I am glad that you liked it.
      Epilogue got posted dear. Will try to write more dear. Thank You

  18. Naina

    It was such a wonderful ff. I have been reading it since start but never got the time to comment but since you requested so much and i can’t see anyone sad so i m commenting…..it was a great journey….i really enjoyed it gonna miss ur ff ❤❤❤

  19. Mrunal

    Mrunal

    |Registered Member

    fabulous…
    shivaay and his family planning…😜😜
    poor annika…😂😂😂
    amazing series…
    and as usual u rocked it dear…
    love u…😘😘😘
    comeback soon with such a khidkitod ff again.

    • Nilash

      Nilash

      |Author

      Thank You Mrunal
      But not done before I post the next I want your ff to get posted. Or else pakka wala sure my head will burst out due to the thinking procedure of your couples. Post soon pleeaasseee
      Now Shivay is as always naughty I can’t help it.

      • Mrunal

        Mrunal

        |Registered Member

        Hey buddy sorry yaar..
        But actually I’m habituated to type on my lappy… & I’m finding it difficult to type it on my phone…
        Plus the episode to hell long… So can’t help for the delay…
        U have to wait for two more days so sorry yaar…
        And upar mere phone usage pe bhi restrictions hai…😭
        Pata nahi ye ek mahina kab khatam hoga aur meri ankhen normal ho jayegi

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