Sensitive love (RAGLAK) OS

Hii guys The OS girl here
Again with her ff
So again the poll goes to raglak and only one for swasan
As i told you pls comment and give couples poll for i will sure make on any couple – because i love them all
Well you can also change my name to the raglak girl gee this is my third raglak

Ok so here are my previous ff
Name and type
Both – raglak
The gaana love and the ultimate love
And now presenting The sensitive love
I love love so i always add a love wala love Okay now lets get in the story

Ragini- police lady
Laksh-theive
Swara-a bigger theive from laksh (Sorry guys i know everyone love swara and hate to see her in neg )

One day
Officer- ragini you have been appointed on the senior post because you have alot of hard work and a succesful police officer
Ragini-thanks alot sir , i am greatful
Officer- you should be
Saying this the officer goes away
Ragini take a deepbreadth
Next day she gets the medal of the senior post and she gets happy she appoints a party
But in the party there enter theives and very cleverly they stole her batch
After the party ragini went into her room and saw a note in which it was witten- ragini if you have dare then get the medal
Ragini looks for medal but can’t find she guessed who is behind – SWARA
ragini ran to police station – it was a private matter – it was saturday and sunday
Ragini took permission to go to jail
Laksh is here or not -she asked an officer
yes maam he is lyinng in there –
ok release him , i have taken permission –
Are you sure ma’am –
yes i am realese him at ones –
THe officer opens the door and she saw laksh sitting lifelessly she goes to him , her heart start to beat she take him to coller and ask- madad karegana (you will haelp naa ?)
He didn’t give response
ragini-Ok so this is the plan she tols him in her house
Laksh-ragini pls release me ?
Ragini-why should i you criminal
Laksh- you knolw that i am not the one
RAGINI-but you are now you have spent 3 years in jail
Laksh-if i get your batch you are gonna release me
Ragini in vain said yes
They both retrive the medal
In exictment ragini hugged laksh tightly but laksh also hugged her back
they both look at each other and then apart
Laksh-ok now i am free
Ragini-no you arn’t
Laksh- i was told right ?
ragini-it was a lie fool
laksh-now how many lies are you gonna say
Ragini remember the time she made laksh criminal although he wasn’t for her profit – how she pushed him in the saddle –
She remember that once they both loved each other true love – but suddenly her ambition took place in her heart for her parents – for her family who has nothing she remember she got a plan to make laksh a criminal although she murdered the guy – she rememebered everything – she always felt guilty about this – seeing him open she hugged him and criend on his chest – i am sorry laksh , i am selfish even now i am selfish i was born seldish even my class mates called me selfish , i am laksh i made yoour life hell for my benefiet and i am sorry these 3 years were bad for me aswell . i am bad girl i should go to jail not you she smoothen her voice and then apart him

Laksh gets happy seeing her realising her mistake – mistake happens from everyone ragini some realease and some don’t – you have realese it this is your forgivness – i forgive , i was never angry just a little sad

bOTH SAID TOGETHER – TRUE LOVE NEVER DIE

ragini- i wanna stay with you forver
Laksh-we can’t but can our souls
Ragini-then i will prefer that
Laksh-are you serious
RAGINI-YES
ragini happily throwed a gun in his hand
Ragini then get her gun in hand
Ragini start to refill it so does laksh
Ragini – ok play boy on the count on three
Laksh and ragini take the gun infront of them and they both are standing infront of eachother RAGINI- 3 , LAKSSH-2 RAGLAK-1
THEY SHOOT TOGETHER IN THEIR CHEST AS THEY WERE GOING DOWN THEY REACH THEIR HANDS TOGETHER AND BECOME ONE EVEN IN DIEING POINT , THEY WERE SMILING AS THEIR EYES CLOSED AND THEY BOTH HEAD TO HEAVEN

NEXT SCENE
WE COULD SEE RAGINI DANCING IN CLOUDS (IN HEAVEN ) ON BHIG LU TERI BAARISH MEI IN WHITE SLEVELESS GOWN AND LAKSH IS SITTING ON A CHAIR OF CLOUD HE IS WEARING A WHITE PANT AND SHIRT AND THEN STANDS UP AND THEY BOTH START TO DANCE IN CLOUDS HAPPILY AND HANDS TO HANDS

i know this is a bad story but we are on vacation i am a regular updater , pls comment and tell me poll if you don’t like this story i will make one more on raglak , i love to write i am telling you
Ok byee and pls comment
pls tell if iys good enough or should i make one more in replace (its just because of vacation forgive me guys i didn’t have time i just wrote what was in my mind )
-The OS girl

Credit to: The OS girl

18 comments

  1. lovely

    try to write long stories, explain their feelings more, it’s just my advice

    my vote is always for raglak, ragsan also ok

    • Isha

      Sure dear , I always try to but see what have I return but I told you naa I was on vacation and that’s why I wrote this one
      Thanks for the advice

  2. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    hey os girl it’s nice but i dnt like ragini being selfish, btw the os was tooo good.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!n plzzz make another on raglak n no selfishness plzzz

    • Isha

      Hahaha I think you don’t like ragini in negativity at all same here sis but what to say the story was based on past love that was hidden in both lives just the lover stands with her love while she took chnce but always had a guilt in her face buried
      She was not THAT selfish neither do her friends call her (maybe) it was a expression about for bad she did to him that’s it and she gave a reason to why she become like that

      Gee…….. Why do I always say so much
      Damn sorry you are also right siso

  3. The OS girl

    Hey guys 5 raglak 2 ragsan and 1 swasan is up for poll
    Raglak wins but I will make for all
    Request complete but pls I need little time too because I am gonna make 3 OS for you

    πŸ˜‰

  4. Anu Ann

    Hey dear.. Can you plzzz change dp and conduct voting b’coz only raglak and rags an w’ll reabtstory abt raglak.. Many of swasan fans w’ll ignore it.. I too ignore it bt just wish to go through it and I find abt voting.. Many of us where unaware about it

    • The OS girl

      You are right dear it happens with me too you can’t imagine which one is about the poll
      I will try so and thanks for the advise

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