Sense of belonging to love (KKB) Chapter 50

Abhi was really annoyed with Pragya’s punishment….Abhi, What is she thinking ah? Like seriously she never even proved me what she had to but she is giving me a punishment like this!!

Abhi told Pragya to first prove then only he would do her punishment. Pragya was annoyed by that but she knew he was right.

Then one day,

Pragya went to Abhi’s room secretly when he was not at home. Pragya, Thank god! He is not at home, Aunty is sleeping and Uncle is out too! Now I can do this….She went to his closet and arranged something and came out of it. She was shocked to see him suddenly!
Pragya, Oh god! How did he came here? I thought he said he will be out for the whole day na….
Abhi with a suspicious look asked “What are u doing here?” Pragya started to stammer “Wo…here..i…mean…here…just…” Abhi “Hmm…don’t say u are here to just see!” Pragya in a loud voice said “Haan! Yes I am here to just see!” Abhi raising his eyebrows asked “See what?” Pragya fidgeting with the ends of her duppata said “ Oh I came to see how is this room…I mean going to be our room na…that’s why….” She gave a very pleasant smile trying to manage as much as possible. Abhi “Really? Very difficult to believe….you are so much interested to see this room ah?” Pragya walked closer to him and seductively said “Of course as u are going to be mine and I should know na….like how to manage u in our room….” Abhi “So now u are not mine?” Pragya “Not like that….but officially u are going to be mine….” She wrapped her hands around his neck making Abhi to feel nervous!
Abhi “Move away!” Pragya “Why AB? U don’t like me closer to u ah?” Abhi “I like but u are now playing with me! I know that!” Pragya now hugging him said “So smart u are! I only have u to play with na….That’s why….” Abhi “After marriage u will have our kids to play with… Now leave from here….” Pragya blushed hearing that and broke from the hug….Pragya “I am waiting for that AB….” She said that and walked backwards just by looking at him….Abhi “You are completely crazy….” Pragya was keep on smiling and said “Always for u….I will only leave from here not from your heart…..” Abhi was also smiling in joy.
Pragya, Oh my god! Never did I expect that he would come like this suddenly! But great job Pragya u managed it so well….Now I just have to make sure he doesn’t follow me…..If he followed then my plan to prove will fail again!

From that day onwards, Pragya was trying to go out more often especially when Abhi is not around at home. She thought no one will tell him as she had told about her plans to Aunty and Uncle…But unfortunately Robin had mentioned to Abhi that Pragya have been going out frequently which made Abhi curious.
Abhi, Today I will follow her and I will know where she is going these days….

He purposely left house early so that Pragya also can leave early. Abhi managed to follow Pragya while she was walking on some crowded streets….Abhi, Why is she here? It looks so crowded and what if she gets lost?

In a crowded place, it is very difficult to keep track of a person’s activities and that’s what happened. Abhi, Now I can’t even see where is she!!! I lost track of her now!!
Pragya was in fact following him as she had saw him through a mirror in the street shop. Abhi suddenly felt someone patted his back and he looked back. Pragya “What are u doing here?” Abhi “Nothing and by the way why are u following me?” Pragya asked “Very funny! I followed u?” Abhi smiled sheepishly and didn’t tell anything…..Before Pragya could tell anything, Abhi said “Don’t tell anything…Just follow me….” He said that by pointing his hand towards a direction. Pragya looked at there and was shocked. Abhi held her hands to follow them.

Pragya “Is that Aunty and Uncle following us?” Abhi looking at their direction “Ssshh…” Pragya got annoyed by him making her silent and she had no choice but remained silently to follow them. Pragya was only thinking, How long will they walk like this…..I am already feeling tired!
Abhi and Pragya hid behind a street shop and Abhi was hugging Pragya while still looking at his parents.
Pragya “Why are we here now? Why can’t we just go and ask them?” Abhi “Ssssh…just follow me!” Pragya got irritated now but couldn’t do anything about it too.
Abhi whispered “I thought they were following us….but no…they are going somewhere…” Pragya “Ya u are right! Look there they are entering the house there….” Abhigya were keep on observing them and waited until they left the house. They left the house locking the door.

Abhi looking at Pragya said “Come let’s go and see what is inside the house!” Pragya “Are u sure?” Abhi “Yes! Ma and Dad have never hide anything from me until now….But now if they are hiding something means it’s something not right Pragya….” Pragya agreed to him by nodding her head in response.

Abhigya came in front of the small house and looked around if anyone is looking at them. Pragya “It’s locked right? How are we going to enter now?” Abhi was thinking and looking around. Pragya “What are u looking for?” Abhi “Ssssh…just follow me!” Pragya “Why are u keep on saying the same thing? It’s so annoying yaar…” Abhi “I am annoying Abhi na so I will only talk like this….” Pragya had nothing to say and just followed him. Abhi took a small rock over there and was trying to break the lock with force. Pragya asked “May I help u?” Abhi looked at her mockingly and asked “Like seriously? This is not the time to joke with me….” Abhi by saying that managed to break the lock and both entered the house. Pragya “It’s so….so…dark here…” Abhi “Haan ya…” She was holding his hands very tightly in nervousness. Suddenly something dropped on the floor which made Pragya to faint in fear and Abhi hold her before she was about to fell onto the ground. Abhi, This LF is so weak…just for a sound she fainted!

After a while,
The place was still dark and Abhi made her lie on his lap and tried to wake her up. Finally, she gained consciousness. Pragya “Where are we AB?” Abhi “How would I know? Only thing I know is this is somebody’s house…” Pragya “Huh? You also don’t know where we are? Then how did we ended up here?” Abhi “You followed me…then I followed u….after that they followed us….and when we followed them we ended up here!” Pragya in a puzzled look said “Now I don’t follow your words….I just feel so scared now!” Abhi “You think I am not scared? I am also scared LF….that’s why I am holding your hand so tightly!!!” Pragya “I know u are literally pinching my hand in fear!”
Abhi made her stand up and both tried to figure out where was the switch to on the lights. Pragya “I have a doubt now…” Abhi “Is this the time for your doubt? Ssssh…just follow me…” Pragya was stubborn and didn’t want to walk further…Abhi “Why are u so stubborn now? Just follow me…” Pragya “Answer my doubt first! Then I will walk with u!” Abhi “Ok baba…just ask your doubt!” Pragya “Do u have your phone with u?” Abhi “Haan…why?” Pragya “Then use the phone’s flashlight to see the things clearly here….” Abhi “Oh ya right!” He used the flashlight in his phone and both managed to see some switches and tried to on the lights. The light came and they were stunned to see whose house was that. Abhi walked towards the portrait that was hanging on the wall and kneeled in shock. Pragya too kneeled down beside him. She looked at the portrait with a lot of thoughts….
It was a portrait of Abhi but that was not revealing whose house was that but the signature on it revealed that it was drawn by Tanya…..Tanya used to draw portraits of her loved ones and gift them as a present….

There were also photos of her and Abhi in the house making it obvious that it was Tanya’s house.
Pragya saw him being lost in thoughts but something caught her attention in the house and she slowly not disturbing Abhi made her way to a room there. Pragya took it hide the paper by folding it multiple times.

She went out and saw Abhi crying holding onto the portrait. Pragya consoled him and said “Come let’s go….” Abhi “No….why Ma and Dad came here without informing me? I myself didn’t know where was her house until now….She never mention anything about where she lives….she always used to say she wants to live with me in my house….as she said in her house there is no sense of belonging to live…..” Pragya “I know AB….She always tell me the same thing too….Because she was living alone…she was eager to live with u….But then…..” Abhi “All that shouldn’t have happened Pragya…..she needed me badly….” He was keep on sobbing making Pragya also in tears and they stayed there for a while until Abhi said “Let’s go Pragya…Today I will ask my parents why they didn’t tell me about Tanya’s house when they knew where it was!” Pragya “But AB if they are hiding it means there should be some reason na….try to understand!” Abhi in a stern voice said “Whatever reason it is….it’s not fair of them hiding this from me!” Abhi walked away from there and Pragya too followed him…..

Back in the car both were silent and Pragya was just hoping that he shouldn’t be too harsh in his words while questioning Aunty and Uncle…..
Abhigya reached their house and Abhi rushed to his parent’s room and stopped at the door step hearing to his parent’s conversation. Their room was slightly opened and their conversation could be heard. Shanti ma “I know we are hiding this from Abhi but…..if we told him the truth then he will surely hate us!” Ram “Shanti…He is an understanding person and he will surely understand that it was not our fault!” Shanti ma “I know him better….he loved her so much and u saw him right? How badly depressed he was until Pragya came in his life recently….We shouldn’t have gave our car to the rash driver and the worst thing was Tanya’s accident happened because of our car!! We killed our bahu! What can be worse than this??” Ram consoled Shanti ma who was in crying heavily and Abhi was shocked to the core hearing all this……
Ram “Shanti…yes I know we are one of the reason for her death…but it was not done purposely….I too have regrets but now u see fate has made Tanya to be in the form of Pragya….that is what matters….Even initially u disagreed Pragya to be our bahu….but then u agreed seeing the same love that was present in Abhi for Tanya…..You felt that now Pragya is in the place of Tanya….For now what we can do is taking care of Pragya just like the way we wished to take care of Tanya….” Shanti ma “All this I know but please don’t tell Abhi about the accident…and how Tanya wished us to take care of her house….” Ram “Ok but one day he will surely get to know about all this….That day we have to face him and accept the truth….” Pragya was also there beside Abhi hearing all this and both were speechless….
Pragya stopped him from entering the room and pulled him to his room. She locked the door. Abhi “Why did u stopped me? I wanted to talk to them!” Pragya “What u want to talk to them?” Abhi in anger said “How can they hide all this until now? They are so…..” Pragya “AB they are so scared of losing u….if u think u have lost Tanya because of them then it’s wrong…..What happened is even a shock to them and that too until now! At least u have recovered from your shock with my presence….but look at them AB….they are still regretting for the mistake that they are not even responsible for….yes the car was theirs but they didn’t drive na….AB if u still want to talk to them then it’s up to u!” Abhi “Ok I won’t talk to them….but….don’t u think I should let them know that we know this truth?” Pragya “For what? To make them feel bad?….didn’t u see how sad Aunty was feeling…If u still insist maybe we can tell this to Uncle but not to Aunty as she doesn’t want u to know about this….I know how much u love your parents and please let them live peacefully by just forgetting that we know all this….You know that their happiness and peacefulness all lies on our relationship towards them….After all they only have us to rely on….” Abhi hearing that was emotional and hugged Pragya…..

After that Abhigya, decided not to reveal that they knew the truth to Shanti ma and Ram as they felt sometimes leaving a truth that is known to be unknown is the only way to live life peacefully…..

After a few weeks,

Abhigya were happily married and one fine day, Abhi was yelling from his closet….
Abhi “Pragya! Pragya! What have u done here?” Pragya rushing to him asked “What have I done?” Abhi “When did u hide all my childhood photos here ah?” Pragya “Oh…For this u are shouting like this?” Abhi “Of course! And that too the photos that I look fat!” Pragya “Excuse me! It’s not fat…It’s called chubby!” She was keep on smiling making Abhi annoyed again. Abhi “Why did u keep all this here ah?” Pragya with a hesitation said “Wo….it was part of my plan to prove…..” Abhi with curiosity asked “How?” Pragya “You remember I went to the storeroom that day…it was to collect this photos and I thought of saying to u with the photos that I want kids like u….for that I have to live with u forever…..” After telling that she turned crimson red and looked at Abhi with shyness….Abhi chuckled hearing to that and hugged her. Abhi “Actually I know u didn’t prove until now but it’s ok….this proving plan is also interesting…..”

Abhi “Ok I shall take part in your proving plan once I am back from work! Until then wait for me!” Pragya “ U first get ready for work and stop thinking about this!!!” Pragya went out of the closet and Abhi smiled widely at her shyness.
Pragya, I didn’t want to prove him after reading Tanya’s letter…It was a letter which made me understand that AB is still the same just like how he was with Tanya…..I felt that it would be better if I followed Tanya’s words…..

Tanya’s letter:
I don’t know why I am writing this….just felt like writing this to express my feelings….I always have this habit of expressing my feelings through writing or drawing….Today I felt like writing this letter….Abhi today asked me to prove him how much I love him! I was surprised by that question….He said he will wait for me to prove….I am also trying hard to prove but I felt why do I need to prove? I belong to him only… whenever my heart beats it’s just his name that I can hear….That much I love him….If I tell him all this in words it sounds very unreal….I can’t say to him that I don’t want to prove him as he will give a sad face that makes me sad too…Funny guy he is! He always trap others with his facial expressions….What I want to do is show him that I am going to live with him with all my sense of belonging to love him…. Only to love him…..
End of letter

This is what was written in the letter that Pragya took from Tanya’s home and hid it from Abhi.
Now Pragya was loving Abhi to prove that all her sense of belonging is only to love him. For that she decided to live with him without leaving him forever…..

For everything we love to do or love to live with, we always have the sense of belonging towards it. Without sense of belonging it is difficult to live with love and it is very easy to leave the love. We should feel we belong to what we love. In that way, Abhi’s strong sense of belonging to love Pragya made him not leave her from his life…..As for Pragya now her sense of belonging to love Abhi will make her live with him in his life…..That is how the sense of belonging to love explains how much it plays a part to live with loved ones and to leave loved ones….

THE END

That’s about it to this ff and I am not sure how u all feel about the ending….maybe it’s not that satisfying but hopefully it makes sense and thanks for all the support! Coming up with new ff or finishing the pending ones all depends on my brain’s capacity to think….Thank u for all the valuable comments and hope to see silent readers’ comments! Once again thank u for the wonderful support!

63 comments

  1. Aliza

    Amazingly written!😍😍😍😍😍It was a perfect end!💕💕💕💕💕 Specially the last few lines were💞💞💞💞 will miss this FF a lot! It was really a rocking one! I enjoyed and loved each and every episode of it!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Hope that you will comeback back with a new one!😊😊😊 And yes congratulations for your 50 fantastic episodes🎉🎉💜💜💛💛 take care! LOVE YOU😘😘❤️❤️

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Thank u Aliza for the wonderful words and will also miss your comments for this ff! I really enjoyed all your comments too😊😊😊😊
      Take care love u too!😉😉😊😊

  2. Mokshi

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ i didn’t expect sissy abhi’s parents will be a reason for Tanya’s death but the way pragya consoled abhi s just lovely💞💞💞💞💞💞❤❤❤ abhi pragya awwwwww just loved to the coreeeeeeee😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘 my sense completely belonged to ur writings and ur wrds abt hw sense of love belongs to life to live with loved ones s so lovely 😘😘😘 u just made my day sissy loved to the coreeeeeeeeeeeeeee ❤❤❤❤❤😘😘😘😘😘😘😘gonna miss my fav ff love u lotzzz sissy u just nailed it 😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Maya

      Maya

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      You always made my day with all your lovely commente Mokshi sissy😍😍😍😍😊😊😊😊I really like the way u express how much u had enjoyed reading this ff!! Thanks for that sissy😊😊😊

  3. Sowji

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    Excellent Maya actually I am a silent reader of your ff…I learning lots of things from u…your the best writer…actually this is the 2nd time I commented for your ff.. thank u for your wonderful ff…we always expecting this kind of good story…we are eagerly waiting for the next story…finally u ended sense belonging to love…congrats…this ff is very beautiful…that’s y u got viewers support…

    • Maya

      Maya

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      So sweet of u Sowji to appreciate this story as well as reading this😊😊😊Thank u for the beautiful words!! 😊😊😊

  4. prabhi

    i love it such a great ending i want another one i just love you you are great i am gonna miss this ff waaah waaah

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Thank u for the great compliemt Prabhi!! 😊😊😊Love u too friend!!😉I will also miss this ff just like all of u😕

  5. Ashika

    I have really no words di!!! U ended it soooo beautifully !!! And I really love the message u gave at the end that was really very true!!! Ur ff was really one of the best n I would really say this.U r always rocking maya!!! Every line u wrote n every epi was awsome!!! Hatts of to u fr this wonderful ff u have given . I can never forget this ff nor can I forget u!!thank u sooo much di fr giving us this beautiful ff!! Will be waiting fr your next ff!! Will really miss u till then di!!! Try to write another ff if u r free!!! Take care di!! Love u soooooooo muchhhh!!! Keep writing!!! 😀 😉 😀 …

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Aww as always your comment made me speechless Ashika sis….😍😍Thanks for all the love and support towards this ff! 😊😊😊Yes I will also not forget u too sis!! I will consider sis about another ff and take care too sis!! Love u too!! Keep reading all the ffs here sis!

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Thank u Varsha for all the valuable comments u have given so far for this ff! 😊😊😊Will try to come back…parkalam

  6. vinu

    hi di my name is vinu.i am a very big fan of urs.i read almost all ur writing.and comings to this ff i am speachless.i am commenting fr the first time in tu.luv u alot di

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Hi Vinu! I am humbled that your first comment is for my ff and thank u for that😊😊😊 I am also humbled that u had read all my writings and it really means a lot to me😊😊😊

  7. Minu

    superb ending di with nice justification to the title loved it I am going to miss this story so much……. especially abhigya’s cute antics conversation and many more you really rocked!!!!!! di. Each and every scene is awesome you really made all the characters realistic with your amazing writing skills I really felt happiness while reading this story it made my day I really can’t forget this story I am once again going to read it from the beginning💖💖💖💖 a💖💖💖
    Congrats for the 50th completed episodes I really feel the story ended so soon This is your second story na that completed 50 episodes and thks for writing beautiful story and you always thank me for the comment na it is really my pleasure to comment in this wonderful updates. keep rocking with your wonderful writings love you di

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Glad that u find the ending justified the title as i was keep on feeling unsatisfied with the ending 😂😂😂 your words and all the other comments makes me satisfied now😊😊😊 I am happy that u felt happiness reading this story and yes u are right this is my second story that completed 50 episodes after my first ff here….so it’s very special to me in that way😊😊😊And u are going to read this again from beginning? That’s my pleasure too😍😍😍

  8. Anusha

    Nice ending. Sence of belonging with u r story is amazing and ur sence of writing this ff is soo nice. I love ur ff I am sensing ur feelings through this ff. While imaging all story, my Sence is with ur new ff now. Actually I am a silent reader of ur ff. I am big fan for Sence of belonging with Love. I love ur sence about this story I am expecting one more story from u Maya.
    Thank you for giving nice end to this ff

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Your comment makes me really overwhelmed Anusha! 😊😊😊Thanks for reading this story and glad that u could sense the essence of this story….it really means a lot to me!

  9. Akshaya

    No words so say dii…when I read this update I was dumb stuck…really its an epic….abhigya bond is unique… you r such a great writer… the ending also very much beautiful and nice…. and congrats for your 50 th update…waiting for your next workings…keep rock it and take care dii….

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Thank u Akshaya for the wishes and i also have no words to express my gratitude for u all reading this ff….Its really nice to see your love towards this ff! Thank u for that and take care too sis😊😊😊

  10. Reshma_Pradeep

    Reshma_Pradeep

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    CONGRATS for ur 50th Episode dearrrrrrrrrrrrr……….Awesomely written…………Beautiful Ending………..Loved it soooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Thank u Priyanka sis for considering it as your fav ff and also for the lovely support all this while….😊😊😊 Oh that one…i am still not sure about that😯

  11. kalaiesai

    Hi maya wow what a episode yaar and its ending was also beyound the boundries the messege you gave at the ending is also super dear the way to love and the way if sense to the loved once with us till our end oh…..superb but you end it.it is feeling bad to miss this but i hope you will be surely back with your news oncea or the pending once ya i waiting for it to come no mater how long it take but you should come with your crazy ideas in your writing and i will wait till that.TAKE CARE UNTIL THAT….BYE……

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Hi Kalai! So sweet of u😊😊😊 it’s just a simple thought and nothing big friend….coming back all depends on my brain again…let’s see how it works…Hope to see your ff too friend as I just got to know that u write ff! I guess u are busy now…hope to see ur writings soon and i am waiting for it too..btw thanks for ur wait and until then take care too and bye friend😉😉😊😊

  12. SURBHI

    SURBHI

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    hayeee 😘😘😘 this was the perfect ending in perfect style by a perfect writer and perfect person 😍😍😍😍 I loves it that letter enclosure is just something differently different fantabulously fantabulously fantabulous spectacularly spectacular uff tareef karun ka kya uski jisne isey likha haha its long time I have dedicated song to you so let’s do it today 😘😂😂😂😂 so here I go
    Tumhe pata to hoga ke mere dil me kya hai chalo kahey deti hun kabhi nahi chhupa hai tumhi mere har pal me tum aaj me tum kal me hey shona hey shona love you 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍

    • Maya

      Maya

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      This much of tareef is too much to take into my mind and that too from my fav writer…lost for words…and song dedication too now makes me like this😍😍😍😍 I know u won’t accept thanks so I just have to say I really appreciate your precious compliment…😊😊😊😊 seriously lost for words yaar😂😂😂

  13. B.k.maha

    B.k.maha

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    Superrrrrr……. I didn’t expected this ff was end so early…… But I loved this ff….. Waiting for next ff…… Please update soon Dr…..

    • Maya

      Maya

      |Author

      Thank u Maha! 😊😊😊 I can’t think further and I don’t want to strain in thinking too and that’s why I ended this ff. Thank u for loving it😉 Next ff? That really depends on my brain’s activity😂😂

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Thank u Haripriya!😊😊😊 Glad that u took ur time to read all the updates frm mn…it really means a lot to me and once again tks for loving it😍😉

  14. Maahi

    Maahi

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    Hands, put ur empty hands in mine and scars, show me all the scars u hide.
    And hey, if ur wings r broken pls take mine so urs can open, too bcoz I’m gonna stand by u!!!!

    Oh, tears made kaleidoscopes in ur eyes nd hurt, i know ur hurting, but so am I and, LOVE, if ur wings r broken borrow mine until urs can open, too bcoz I ‘m gonna stand by uu!!!

    Evn if we r breaking down, v can find a way to break through.

    Evn if v cant find heaven, i’ll walk through hell with u.!!

    LOVE, ur nt alone, bcoz I ‘m gonna stand by uu.
    Yeah, ur all i nvr knew i needed, nd the HEART, smtimes it’s unclear y it’s beating and, LOVE, if ur wings r broken v can brave through those emotions, too, bcoz i’m gonna stand by u!!!

    Oh TRUTH, I guess truth is wat u blv in and FAITH -I think faith is hvng a reason, and i know now,

    I’ll b ur eyes, until urs can shine nd I’ll b ur arms, i’ll b ur steady satellite nd ven u cant rise, well, I’ll crawl with u on hands and knees!!!

    Bcoz I’m gonna stand by u
    LOVE, UR NT ALONE, BCOZ I’M GONNA STAND BY U!!!!!! nd My IB dizz is wat stroke my mind after njoying ur sensible magic by losing my senses at the doorstep of ur magic UR AMAZING IN ALL SENSES amazing story with a rocking a end U Rocked it in evry update thts ur unique style I know tht Ur a Stupendofantabiliuslyfantastically magical soul😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍UR MY ENDLESS HOPE, LIMITLESS DESIRE, ND ETERNAL LOVE!!!!Nd srry fr being a silent reader fr a part of ur magic But ur sensible thoughts was the healer to my senseless stress evryday Thnk uu fr evryrhing nd U nd Ur magic is the best thing in my life

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Omg MM 😍😍😍😍😍 That’s so sweet of u to be always with me in different ways and this truth is really heart touching to me….I know we are very far from each other but as usual your words makes me feel u are very near my heart😊😊😊 Don’t be sorry MM! I know u are busy….as i have told many times its more than enough for me if u are silently reading….and I know u will but i didn’t know it heals ur stress…in that way i am glad! All the best for all ur ventures in life😊😊😊 as u r the magical person who deserves it😊😊

  15. Asmithaa

    Asmithaa

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    Superb diii… Awesome wonderful… It was such a beautiful ending…. U r such a good writer Indian Shakespeare… Waiting for a story from u… 😍😍😍😘😘 love u😘😘😘😍😍😘

    • Maya

      Maya

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      Indian Shakespeare again? 😂😂😂😂 thank god Shakespeare is not alive now to hear this😂😂😂 but jokes apart thank u for the lovely comment😊😊😊😍 and another story it all depends on brain again😉😉

  16. Riya

    I am so lost. Feeling Lucky to have you as The Princess of My Life. Truly deserving person. And I don’t Want to tell more. Let me make your understand through the following.

    YES YOU ARE !

    Like the Blossoming rose,
    Like the Rays of hope.

    Like a deer in the forest,
    Like an athlete full of zest.

    Like a lamp in temple,
    Like the life feeling ample.

    Like the feel of the dawn,
    Like the grace of the swan.

    Like the melody of sitar,
    Like the rage of guitar.

    Like a group of angels in the sky,
    Like the pot that makes you high.

    Like the silent talk,
    Like the wine from Medoc.

    Like the colors of life,
    Like the music from the fife.

    Like the calmness of the cold wind
    Like the beauty of the hind!

    Magical. I mean it’s Truly Deeply Magical. Marvellous! Awesomeness.! Cuteness.! Perfectness! Fantabulous!
    THIS IS E.V.E.R.Y.T.H.I.N.G.
    I am in so love with this ff.
    Congrats MTMP. So glad and being so Damn happy as this is My Second Favourite sense of belonging that I got becoz of u. 50 Amazingly Written sensible as well as superb one!
    Hats off! Your updates always made me in aweee or amuse me.
    Proud Fan! Saying: My MTMP: Maya The Magical Princess hamesha is The True Princess of My World!
    Forever Bestie. Forever Sister. And I wish I be your Forever Cutie.
    I Love u and I am not being sorry for disappearing most of the times. As I know My Sister would understand that her Cutie would always be reading her works silently.
    And and I wanna tell u another thing too. you being the best sister of mine never failed to identify me. And u would always find me. In that case your doubt was right once. I wish you here it from you what I am referring to now.
    And again I am Always there to support u here. Silently/surprisingly. I love u so so much.
    That was THE PERFECT SENSE OF ENDING THIS SENSIBLE AND CRAZINESS FILLED FF.
    LUFE Maya Di. Sayonara!

    • Maya

      Maya

      |Author

      I am so lost in your comment too and you are one of the cute sisters that I got here and how can I forget your cute comments? Never can I forget them so whichever name u appear I can find u with the cuteness that u had shown me😊😊😊Now u know y i call u cutie😉😉
      Thanks for this lovely comment and I don’t know how to describe as beautiful as u….but like always u gave a cuteness filled comment😍😍

  17. Lotus

    Fantastic ending Maya dear…. but I am really sad tat u finished it so soon….. shall I call u as crazy Maya….? Cos I love to be mad in your craziness….. I will miss this FF so much dear………..

    • Maya

      Maya

      |Author

      Thank u Lotus 😊😊😊 and sorry if u think i ended it soon as i really can’t think anything further! Haha sure u can call me that way as a lot of them here are already calling me that way😂😂😂😉😉😉 I will also miss this ff and its memories so much too😕😕

  18. Prathi

    Prathi

    |Registered Member

    I really want to copy all the 50 chapters , make a book keep it with me. It was so lovely awesome ending my dear CS,Random queen… Waiting for my head braking other ff if you know what I mean 😉 continue inseparables na??

    • Maya

      Maya

      |Author

      That’s so sweet of u Prathi😍😍😍 i am overwhelmed again😊😊😊 Ya i can understand what u mean and i did upload inseparables ytd night but now i have to change the title due to some issues

  19. Monesha

    Monesha

    |Registered Member

    Wow…. wow…. wow…. wow…. wow…… 😍😍😍😍 What a story. You killed me 🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡 how can you always kill me like this???? You making me CRAZZZZZZZYYYYY really i love it to the COREEEEEEEEEEEEE…. You made my day. Hats of to you my dear princess rocking….. Akka 👸👸👸. You know what your each and every words impressing me. The words you gave OMG no words are coming from me. You proved that you are best. I am in love with you and your AWESOMEEEEEEE ff. I am really sorry for my irregular comment Akka. It is coz of my exams. They are keep on conducting exams. Cyclic test, monthly test, weekly test, daily test, now half yearly. My head is rotating. I think they will start to keep bike test, Aeroplane test etc… So only i couldn’t Akka. In between my friends too torchering me so only. But your Awesome ff gave me a boost to study. Love you a lottttttt….. 💗💗💗 Loads of huggggggggs and kisses to you ummmmmmaaaaaaaa……. 😘😘😘 Keep ROCKINGGGGGGG….. My dear Rocking princess akka.

    • Maya

      Maya

      |Author

      Mone sis u said no words are coming from u but your comment have so many words😂😂😂 Pls don’t be sorry as i can understand u are busy with numerous tests… but ya i hope u don’t have bike test and aeroplane test in the near future😂😂😂 My ff gave u a boost to study ah? Thats something good to hear and i don’t want to kill u sis haha but as usual ur comment makes me high😊😊😊Love u too Mone sis😊😊😊

    • Maya

      Maya

      |Author

      So sweet of u Abiya and surely will be back and I guess i am back too! 😊😊😊 Thanks for loving my story😊😊😊

  20. Lokha

    Lokha

    |Registered Member

    First of all please forgive me for not commenting. its because of my exams. But I read all episodes ,unable to comment.!it’s AWESOME end maya akka.💖 just loved it to the core of my heart. Hope you remember me? ? ? 😞 😌an

    • Maya

      Maya

      |Author

      Of course I remember u Lokha sis! 😉😉😉And no need to be sorry I am more than happy that u read all the episodes😊😊😊 Hope u did well in exams and thank u for loving the ending😍😍😍

  21. Saranya24

    Saranya24

    |Registered Member

    Tat was damn superb dii loved it actually i was loaded wit ffs to read afyr tat cyclone nw oly i read all ur epis awesome di love u😍😘😘😘😘

  22. PrincessesMadhu

    PrincessesMadhu

    |Registered Member

    Oh, di It was totally amazing….when I say it was amazing I don’t mean your writing or writing style or creativity (even they are but) I mean your thoughts…it’s beautiful! I love how every single story you write it has a deep message and reason that you want people to teach and understand! I feel like god made you when he/she thought ok this is the time to put another angel to earth to teach ppl beautiful things that could change their life! I may not make sense but all I really mean is whenever Pragya was trying to do something to prove him I was thinking of what is going to do next oh god…oh god…never thought what is the necessity to prove him when I actually completely belong to him probably she wouldn’t be able to prove either because love is something you should feel not show you know what I mean I am sometimes bad at explaining my thought 😛 excuse me for that! but Thank You for giving out this wonderful messages to readers every time I finish reading your story there is at least of me that becomes a better me! 🙂 🙂 Like I haven’t seen you and you haven’t seen you already made me pagal with your thoughts di….I wonder what happens when I meet u 😅 Haha…and by the way so sorry for late reply I read your story the day u published only but I read it in phone and I didn’t know my password to log in! And my laptop was like shut and that had the password! and i couldn’t be bothered….becuz it is very slow sometimes then I got busy and forgot… 😛 so that’s why sorry…oh I know you don’t like me saying sorry (hopefully) but it’s ok di we need to learn to be sorry sometimes.. 🙂 Anyway tc di…bye 😀

    • PrincessesMadhu

      PrincessesMadhu

      |Registered Member

      when she* completely belong to him! not me! haha…he is my bro…probably I belong to him in a sisy way! haha I so wish I can meet shabbir sir and sriti di!

    • Maya

      Maya

      |Author

      Aww Princess Madhu!! I am actually lost for words for how u have described how much u have enjoyed this ff and this ending too! 😊😊😊😊😍😍😍Angel? That’s something big and unexpected 😂😂😂😂Ya i don’t like sorry from u too!! What I can say is thank u for the love and support😊😊😊Tc sis and bye😉😉😉

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