THE SECRET LOVE OF OUR HEART..KKB..OS

Hii guys …Maahi again !!!firstly thank uuu all of u fr ur huge love fr my previous update that means a lotttt to me humbled at ur love.Thnx to silent readers too fr bearing my stupid thougts in peace thnxx uu all fr evrything nd mostly many of u remember my writings tht means a lott…here i am again with some other thoughts hope u all vil like diz one too…

Lets get into the story…..

Its been 3months around i was searching fr them.ya fr them who made me crazy with their love..I wished to be a journalist nd as per my wish i succeeded too…i was a successful journalist by then but in deep somewhere i was intrstd in love based articles.So one fine day ven i was turning my sunday magazine there in tht moment their love started fr me nd my craziness grew diz much tough enough fr them tht i was in full misson of finding out tht amazing lovers who was behind the screen.ya they nvr mentioned their names one was with identity BEING IN HER LOVE named THE SECRET LOVE….. nd the other was named as THE LOVE IN MY HEART which was given with the identity TO MY LOVE…i wondered tht how come the story of both tht articles match in evry scene nd evry flng but the toughest thing was none of them mentioned neither of their names in it.IT WAS COMPLETELY FILLED WITH LOVE nd nthng else both the articles hv been published in diff magazines but still same thoughts same flngs same love i flt venever i read both tht magazines…… So i was so excited abt their love story as by reading both their articles one thing was sure fr me tht both of them was dying in each other absence but they dragged me to the edges by their secrecy….. Ya in both of their articles it was writtten in it they failed to reveal their love fr each other nd by now i was soo intrstd in it bcoz in one article it was stopped at the guy reaching to his love to tell her abt it(THE SECRET LOVE) nd in the other it was stopped at the girl regretting fr nt telling her love to him before tht black moon day in her life(THE LOVE IN MY HEART) nd now i am sooo excited to know their past to know the secrecy in their love!!! I being a journalist smehow managed to get the details of him(BEING HER LOVE) as he was running a NGO for women protection so i thought to interview him so tht i could knw abt their past bcoz frm past 3 months they stopped their articles nd me being desperate started the mission of SECRET LOVE to reveal it I smehow managed to knw tht the article of him was being posted frm tht NGO mail ID so today i reached here to c the face of her love but wat i saw was shocking to me …..Ya i met my childhood buddy the funny mystery of our grp Purab …i saw him nd was surprised nd to my surprise he didn’t recognize me as i was too chubby during my childhood..v r four in a gang always rocked our world but unfortunately as dad got transfered to US i too left India ven i am 13 but he looks the same…so thn v had sme chit chat as i said him abt me nd he too was vry happy to c me after long time nd thn i askd him abt the article being published frm dizz NGO nd i also askd him abt the reason behind diz NGO thn he said tht he was nt the one who started it but their frnd who was waiting fr his secret love started dizz as she left him nd evn diz city fr facing tht much insult being a model nd actress nd she left the city bcoz her co actor made her bad infront of the media fr not accepting his proposal .He produced sme rumours nd fake evidences proving tht she tried to seduce him so being a self respected woman than being a model she left the city as the society believed in tht ROHAN MURTHY fake witnesses so she left the city in helplessness but the bad luck was ven our frnd abt to propose his secret childhood love fr her till thn nd his flngs towards her all this mess hppnd nd she left without informing to anyone ..being a loyal frnd than being a secret lover he proved tht she was innocent nd pure nd evn started diz NGO in memories of their cute frnsp in a view tht no other girl shld b so weak to give up with society so easily which she did nd left both of us all alone in the memories of our frndsp .So now i am here to reveal the identity of tht secrt love.So me nd my frnd purab r gng to meet him who is maintaining eternal secrecy in his love till now but both of us knw hw much he love her by his writings nd by his desire towards gvng respect to women. Purab said tht he was managing tht NGO in behalf of him as he is nt ready to gv his identity fr stilll mainatining secrecy in his love!! God knows y these two r maintaining secrecy in each other’s love.Now he is in his concert itseems I vil dfntly get answer fr his secrecy in love thn i hv to even take permission fr using his article…

A rock concert is shown…
(Guys imagine Abhi in still of RJ’s entry in AASHIQUI2)
He is there started his song saying tht he is dedicating it to his secret love remembering their mastii roaming in roads playing with her hairs nd wvn being famous celebs both used to nag at parks at eachother …he started singing…

Tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.
Friend with you
It is spring of happy colours
You’re affectionate night
I am yellow star
O karam Khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai.
These are blessings of God
That I meet you
I discovered how to live
After dying on you
O tere sang yaara…
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara
Friend with you
It is spring of happy colours
You’re affectionate night
I am yellow star
O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Main tera ho jaaun
Jo tu karde ishara
Friend with you
It is spring of happy colours
I will be yours
If you indicate once
Kahin kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushboo se takraaun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwaab tu…
Whenever I go
I meet your fragrance
At every night what dream
I have, is only you
Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu…
Your and my meeting is our destiny
I have light inside me because of being you
I am like a silent sky
You are moonlight
Mehtaab is an Urdu word which means light of moon
O karam Khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
O it is my luck
That I meet you
I discovered how to live
After dying on you
O tere sang yara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.
Friend with you
It is spring of happy colours
You’re affectionate night
I am yellow star
O tere sang yara
Khushrang bahara
Tere bin ab toh
Na jeena ganwara.
Friend with you
It is spring of happy colours
I can’t live without you now
Maine chhode hain baaki saare raste
Bas aaya hoon tere paas re
Meri aankhon mein tera naam hai
Pehchaan le…
I left rest of the paths
I came to you only
My eyes have your name
Recognize this
Sab kuch mere liye tere baad hai
Sau baaton ki ik baat hai
Main na jaunga kabhi tujhe chhod ke
Ye jaan le
Everything for me is after you
The whole this is that
I will never go leaving you
You must know
O karam Khudaya hai
Tera pyar jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai.
These are blessings of God
That I meet you
I discovered how to live
After dying on you
O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.
O tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Main behta musafir
Tu thehra kinara.
O friend with you
It is spring of happy colours
I am flowing traveller (river)
You are stable bank….

He said tht he is waiting fr his secret love to cme back tp him nd he signed off frm the concert nd thn me nd purab met him nd i told abt myself nd v shared a frndly hug nd thn i askd abt his love he remained silent again nd as a frnd ven i yelled at him he said tht He is madly in love with her but hesitant to say his flngs to her in a fear of losing her frndsp so he nvr did itseems nd tht day ven he is brave enough to tell his love to her he failed bcoz she left the city without informing anything to anyone as the incident affected her self respect itseems so she left without leaving any clue!!!!

Nd i askd him abt reusing his article as she wanted to make it a perfect love story which matches with other story nd he replied tht I can use it bcoz atleast in tht way his incomplete love story vil get a figure atleast as a story fr smeone nd i smiled at him nd said him tht i vil meet hom after a week as i am gng outstation being a journalist so me purab nd abhi shared a frndly hug!!!! Nd i left .I am determined to find his love to bring smile in his face which glows only with her presence. Being ajounalist i used all my possibilities nd finally found tht frm where those letters of her with name ( TO MY LOVE) nd i found her in DELHI changing her identity now she is nt a model anymore .she is maintaing a dance school nd living to herself nd i met her.To my surprise she recognized me nd thn v shared a lovely hug nd thn i askd abt her writings firstly she denied but ven i was strong with my arguement she agreed tht she was the one who was writing those letters nd ven i askd her to whom she wrote tht she simply said to the love in her heart nd finally after so much of convincing her she said his name her frnd’s name her secret’s love name as abhi nd askd me to not to tell to anyone nd still i dont understand y she wants to maintain secrecy in it nd she nvr agreed to come back to tht city where ppl blvd in fake rumours nd insulted her! As i hv my own plans of making their love story cmplt i smiled at her nd took permission frm her nd she being my frnd told me tht i can use anything of hers but askd me nt to reveal her details nd i assured her nd she said tht although abhi proved her inonence she still feel uncomfortable to cme to tht city so she said tht she would b frst thankful to her frnd than her secret love.So i hugged her again nd left frm there nd now i made their love story as my article named THE SECRET LOVE IN OUR HEART!!!! Finally i made their union in their articles too using both of their article names.

2 weeks later…….
Today i hv function i our office fr providing awards to all of us fr our works nd i invited purab nd askd to get abhi smehow there as ven i invited he refused cmng nd i invited her too to execute my plan but she nvr agreed to come but i used most powerful weapn of Blackmailing which works strongly in frndsp nd finally it worked out nd she said tht she would cme hiding herself…. Nd the most awaited evng came nd the function started as prmsd trio of my frnds came but she nd he r both in opp sids nd didnt recognised each other as both of them were covering their faces nd now it was announcd tht The winner fr lovely article goes to TANUSHREE MEHTA nd i am on cloudnine nd i received the award nly bcoz of their love story nd now i dedicated tht award to those two ppl whose secret love got blossoming colours in love world.Nd finally the party got over but both of them still dont knw tht both of them r at same place now nd as preplanned me nd purab got both of them individually to park saying sme excuse nd i left her there in the park nd purab left him at the same place nd nw both of them r still in masks facing opp tp each other nd as v left both of thm at a time removed their mask on their Secret Love nd me nd purab was watching them frm sme distance…

It was cmplt silence fr smetime they both were staring at each other with tears..nd finally they broke the silence with their hug it seemed both of them were missing their frndsp than their love..oops secret love!! Haha still they both dont knw abt their love to each other .

Abhi- A single bye,a single bye !! Duffer wat would hv hpnd if u said a single bye to me before leaving!!!

Pragya_Sry abhi ,i was in such situation tht i didnt got anything in my mind before leaving as i was soo much afraid of the tantrums of diz society.

Abhi_Society?? Pragya ur talking abt society but y duffer y did u gv imp to society.The society which cmnts on others nly ven it is free, it doesnt worry r care abt othrs ven it is itself busy in its works.Ppl around the society find time to cmnt on othrs nly ven they hv nthng to do with their lives ,ur bothering abt dizz ppl nd u left ur profession ur passion of acting ur frnds ur native ciry evrything nly in fear of society!!

Pragya_i was so scard abt being with u all as it may affect u too

Abhi_ duffer dosthi kiya hei tujhse tho nibavungi bhinaa u thought tht i would leave uu thinking abt society.I made frndsp with uu nt with society idiot how could u evn tell like tht i wantd tp b urside in both ur happiness nd in ur sadness too but ur selfish u nly thought abt uu u nvr cared abt our frndsp just go idiot go to hell(tears rolling in eyes).

Pragya_ yes i am selfish i thought tht my frnd shld nt suffer fr anything so nly i left uuu dammit.

Abhi_ who said u i vil nt suffer ven u leave me u know here i am craving fr ur frndsp but u nvr undrstand tht duffer uu stone hearted girl.

Pragya_ srry fr hurting uu diz much i didnt mean it( by hugging him tight).i prmse u i shall nvr leave without sayind to uu.

Abhi_one minute wat u said ur leaving again!!!

She remained silent..

Abhi_answer me dammit!!

Pragya_ abhi i am sry i cant face those ppl again who vil pull my legs.i just cant!!!

Abhi_look at me,do u hv trust in me??

Pragya_ looking into his eyes said yes with determinaton!!

Abhi_ thn let the society go to hell ,u exists in my world oops our frndsp world cme with me i vil nvr let anything to happen to uu i vil b the saviour of uu nd its a prmse on our frndsp!!!

Pragya_i blv uu nd i vil b the one in our frndsp world thanq uu fr everything.

Abhi_ pinch me yaar.

Pragya_ yy??

Abhi_is tht u who said thnq uu is this my duffer.

Pragya_ abhiiiiiii…giving hom a stern look!!!

Abhi_ kkkk leave it tell me how come u r here i mean did tanu invited uu??

Pragya_ yes she met me 2 weeks before nd askd me to attend her party nd sje blackmailed too so no other go.

Abhi_she nt evm informed me tht idipt naa…

Pragya_ abhi I nly askd her nt to tell it to anyone dont blame her.

Abhi_kk atleast in dizz ur back nd thts much enough to me.

Nd they r talking tp each other fr smetime nd me nd purab being irritated as till now they hvnt revealed their secret love to each other so v went nd yelled at them…

I said _(pointing to pragya)so ur nt ready to tell ur secret love to him!!

Purab_(pointing to abhi)there is no point in hiding ur love fr hwr abhi plzzz tell it now tell to her tht u started ty NGO tooo in her memories tel her abt the ove which u hv fr her plzzz..

Both abhi and pragya r signing purab nd me nt to tell to each other of them abt their hidden lve but v r nt ready to accept their secrecy anymore which doesnt hv any use by hiding it so i just shouted at pragya to tell to abhi tht she loves him nd wrote tht article too fr her love nly nd at the sametime purab askd abhi to propose pragya which he failed to do before as she left he askd abhi to show his ocean of love in which evry drop is of her name nd me askd pragya to tell him abt her world in which she filled nly his memories nd dizz time v left them really to reveal their secrecy of being in love of each other nd thn

Abhi_ pragya they r joking yaar u dont mind it.

Pragya_y r u still lying abhi y u didnt tell me before abt ur lve u knw i too had the sameflngs fr uuu but i didnt told uu bcoz i expected u to say as i can njoy tht spcl moment but u was too late bcoz till thn a lot of things hppnd nd i left uuu..

Abhi_ bcoz i was in fear of losing ur frndsp so i cant afford my frndsp fr my onesided love .

Pragya_abhi i dont knw tht whether best lovers can b gud frnds r not but i dfntly knw tht best frnds r always bttr soulmates.i want u to cmplte me abhi,I dont want anyone as my soulmate bcoz my soul resides within uuu,I LOVE UU !!!WILL U FILL MY WORLD OF UR MEMORIES WITH UR PRESENCE???

ABHI_ I LV UU TOO ,UR MY OCEAN OF LOVE!!! THNX FR CMNG INTO MY LIFE AS A FRND ND THNX FR ASSURING TO CONTINUE IT WITH ME AS MY SOUL…nd they lived happily ever after as their secret love got revealed fr each other…

So guys if u love smeome thn let them know it!!!!nd evryone of us hv secret love.In tht case I hv many yaar hah bcoz love is nt tht v hv nly fr opp gender right v love our dad mom bro sissy frnd aunt uncle almost evryone nd i hv a funny incident guys actually i hv a frnd named TEJU i love her hairs a lott haha but secretly i always use to stare at her hairs secretly although she is my bff i nvr said it to her nd one day she sent me a photo of her in which she made her hairs tooo short like baby cut lol by cing tht i just cried haha funny right but yes i cried bcoz i love her hairs tht much nd i yelled at her fr cutting too short but till thn also i didnt said abt my love fr her hairs nd 5 days v had no chat as i lost my sim nd the 6th day ven i vent to clg after holidays my eyes r nly searching fr her lol actually fr my love(her hairs) nd wat i saw was shocking to me she nvr cut her hairs but it was her plan to make me confess my love fr her as she came to knw abt tht frm our mutual frnd itseems haha she pinned her hairs such tht it looked tooo short to me lol nd ven i askd her abt dizz she said tht she got fun in making me confess itseems lol thn both of us laughed like mad ppl in clg haha silly right.So guys if any of u hv secret love fr anyone plzz do tell them before it gets too late r if u knw tht smeone hv secret love fr uu fr any thing of uuu thn make thm confess it u vil get masti haha srry if i hurt anyone nd guys

I dont knw whether diz OS is upto worth of ur time fr spending on it r not bcoz i am sooo confusd myself fr wat i hv wrote nd i am confusd tht whether he song matched the situation r not nd evn confusd with title too if it matched the content r not lol its a confusd day fr me nd u guys plz clear my confusion nd i vil nt ask whether its boring r not bcoz i got many warnings haha nd i got my final warning tooo frm smeone so i cant dare tht nd guys if u all feel it worth cmntng do cmnt guys hope u all vil like dizz one love uu alll keep smiling keep caring nd keep Rockinggggggggg guys stay blessed loads of love…byeee nd thnx fr evrything guys.

35 comments

  1. Saranya

    Hey darlu u r really marvellous hw cme u alone get such ideas and dnt evr dare to say it as bore again seriously its out of levels loved it darlu love u loads😍😘😘😘

    • Maahi

      |Author

      saruuuu darling thnq uu fr such lovely cmnt kk i shall nvr say tht again lv uuuuuuu to my darling keep rocking muaahhhh

  2. Riyuuu (Forever Honey of My Santa)

    Omg!!!Omg!!!Omg!!! Where??? How????What???? What ever u told truly happened in My case! I will tell u abt it in the end! Now…… I wanted to tell somethings imp…… Seriously U know something I Love u Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo SΓΆooooooooooooooooooooo Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo soooooooo sΓΆooooooooooooooooooooo sΓΆooooooooooooooooooooo Much……
    U R tooooooooooo Amazingggggggggggggggggggggg………Tooooooooooo Awesoeeeeee Eeeeeeee Out of The World! Kya World…… Out of the Universe!!!
    I am wishing to see U as the 1 st and the Last Wonder of This World!!!
    U r seriously Such An Incredible Person yaar!! Babe No body can even Hav such Beautiful Thoughts!!! U Hav Become My Memorable Maahi Di now!! I am truly telling u something……I am in Love with U and your…..No words to describe……..Mind Blowing Thoughts!! U are already Very Special to Me! But now even if I think to replace your place in My Mind….My Heart I can’t…. Its Never Ever gonna be possible as Long as I am Alive! U r Forever and Ever Special To Me!!! I would not even compare u with My other Sissy…… U R WERE SPECIAL TO ME…. U R SPECIAL TO ME…& U R GONNA BE SPECIAL TO ME TILL MY LAST THOUGHT!!!!

    Actually I Hav no words to tell abt your this Os…. And I know u would post another Maahi style Os today! like I thought U posted too…..
    I will always comment truly on all the posts that I read here….
    But today My Heart….Mind….. Thoughts nothing is working!! Or in MTMP’s language I can even tell that After reading your this Os MY MIND IS UNDER MAINTENANCE!!
    U know what I am whole heartedly telling U….
    U r Perfectly Best Hai!! Actually something Best in the Whole Wide World is My MAAHI Di!!!
    And now coming to what?? Where?? And when??
    I had recently shortened My hair and guess Wat I came to know that I Hav My whole class as My secret Hair lovers…… Each and every min I would get scoldings from my frnds…..
    Truly speaking Many ppl are now mourning for My shortened hair!!
    What a coincidence!! in this case too My Maahi Di has become special to me!!! Just wanna shout out……….. Love U My Super Star Santa………….
    U r The Most Precious Special Person In My Life!!! THANQ for Everything!!!!
    And for this Special Os too!!!
    With Tons of Love and Happiness striking your heart – Your Honey!!!

    • Riyuuu (Forever Honey of My Santa)

      Amazingggggggg thought with an Superbbbbbb Title written by My Santa…… In My Life No Secret Love her after……Kya Secret Love…. U r My Open Love Santa!! Always and always!!
      I am soooo happy today Becoz of u!!
      With sooooo much of Love uuuuuuuu
      From your honey aka Riyuuuuuuuuuu!! Stay Happy and Blessed forever!! And don’t worry My god ji will take care of that part!!

      • Riyashri

        |Registered Member

        I can’t control myself from dedicating something for u !

        Pyaar tune kya kiya
        Chain mera liya

        Pyaar tune kya kiya
        Chain mera liya
        Bepanah ishq se
        Vaasta ho gaya

        Tera hi chehra
        Ab toh dikhe hai
        Naam tera hi
        Labh pe mere

        Pyar tune kya kiya
        Khwab dil ko, naya de diya
        Pyar tune kya kiya
        Khwab dil ko, naya de diya

        Hum toh chupke
        Tum ko dekha karte hai
        Baatein teri
        Bas socha karte hai

        Hum toh chupke
        Tum ko dekha karte hai
        Baatein teri
        Bas socha karte hai

        Dil kehta hai
        Sun ja tu humnava
        Dil ke aangan mein
        Aaja na ek dafa

        Tera hi chehra ab toh dikha hai
        Naam tera hi, lab pe mere

        Pyaar tune kya kiya
        Khwab dil ko, naya de diya
        Pyaar tune kya kiya
        Khwab dil ko, naya de diya

        So My All Time Fav Song …… Dedicating it to the Most Prettiest Person Of My Life ! I am wishing that U get The Happiest Life and You Being The Queen of Your Happy World ! Hope I get a chance to be a part of it !
        Love u Maahi di !! The Most Imp thing is I loved the Song in this Os …. It was Perfectly Perfect But not as My Santa ! Continue Rocking Bestriter !! And Good Job Bescomoto ….. U r being supportive in all cases for all the authors here ! Love for that too !! And I am not forgetting another face of yours…. Hmm….. Stubbeen ! U too Great Job da ….. Last Para ….. How many times should I repeat myself haan ??? Idk !! Uffo U won’t ever change ! I really don’t want My Stubbeen to change …. As in 100 percent only 1 percent is made up of Stubbeen ….. And the rest 99 percent is full of Magical Elements consists of Magical Personalities !! The List is Never Ending so will mention it later !! See u soon with another Maahi Style of My Santa ! Till then Take Care !! Love u …….. And U know how much I do !!
        😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

      • Maahi

        |Author

        ohhh srry darling my reply was posted at the bottom but tht was actually fr uuu hope u dont mind reading itttt once again lv uuuu darluuuuuuu sooo wala much

      • Riyashri

        |Registered Member

        Lathika Ji Don’t need to be sorry for this and all …….. U r always special to me ! And I know how and what your reply will be to your Honey’s comment !! So no worries !! The Best Part is Your Replies are tooooooooo Sweet and Special tooo To Me !! Love u Lasanta !!😘

    • Maahi

      |Author

      omg u tooo cutted ur hairs haa uu idiot y do u alll do tht man u know i love long hairs but i nvr got tht lol viramin deficiency itseems but u too just like my silly frnd darlu u make me go crazyyyyyyy with ur love always blesssed to hv ur love i am ur open love haaaa UR MY VAST OCEAN OF CRAZOVE(CRAZINESS+LOVE) EVRYTHING SEEMS PERFECT IN DIZZZ OCEAN OF MINE OF UR THOUGHTS LV UUUUUU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH UR SMTHNG “INCREDIBLE” IN MY LIFE!!!!I CANT AFFORD ANYTHING TO TAG UR LOVE FR ME ND IN RETURN I LOVE MILLIONTH LIGHT DISTANCE HAHA CRAZYYY PHYSICS SISSY TELLING U DIZZZ LV UU FR EVRYTHING

      • Riyashri

        |Registered Member

        Aww now what will I tell ??? I can’t becoz U and Your Words are just making me CrazOve U more and More !! Thanq soooooooooooo wala much Lasanta ! And by now U can guess what Lasanta means (La…+Santa) Ok Hope U like another name from your UCMC ! U know I Love everything in U and ofcourse now your name too !! Actually I thought of keeping it as Maata…..(Maahi+Santa) but it sounds like as if I am calling u as My mom !! LOL !! I would be gifted to hav a Frnd cum Angel cum Sissy cum Mom but U r not in that age to be mature enough to take care of this crazy kid (me) As u yourself is the Sweetest Kid I had ever seen !!But now I am wondering what does UCMC means !!

  3. Abhigya

    It was fabulous!!! how can these ideas come in ur mind!! I loved it to the core!!! Keep rocking!! Love u!!😍😍😘

  4. Reshma Pradeep

    Such a FABULOUS OS!!!!!! Actually you know what? My Exams are going to start from Tomarrow onwards……So for a last time after my studies , I opened this site just to read something for relax my mind…….Surprisingly, I saw ur OS & cant able to keep me away from Commenting……….Soo My last Comment is for You Dear……..Such a BEAUTIFUL Story!!!!!!!!!!!Your Writings are AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE yaar!!!!!!!&The incident you shared na…..abt ur Secret love(ur frndz hair)………My frnd also Played Same Prank on me………You Reminded me that………This OS na…….I LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCHHHHHHHHHH…………….BYEβ™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

    • Maahi

      |Author

      Reshuuuuuu dr thnx a lotttttt fr suxh awesomeeeeee cmmt dr it means a lottttt hope diz gv u sme kind of relaxation ALL THE VRY BEST FR UR XAMS DR GO ROCKKKKK IT DARLING!!THNQ UUU SOOO WALA MUCH AGAIN LOADS OF LOVE

  5. Prathi

    |Registered Member

    Finally my wait is over.. Awesome one.. I wanna confess something I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR OS.. 😘😘😘 Worth it !? It was amazing I enjoyed it to the core lovely OS.. Some ppl are like this they never reveal thirty love for each other and hurt themselves.. I have seen it, my friends I made them confess finally… That was no easy task but I made it somehow phew! I think I am in writing mode now gotta complete my OS oops it’s a 3 shot.. Waiting for your next OS SWEETY..

    • Maahi

      |Author

      omg u was waiting haa it means a lottttt to me dr nd srry fr making uu wait nd thnqqq uuu sooo much fr dizzz lovely suporrt fr ur SWEETY AWW THTS SOOOO SWEEET OF UUUU DR LV UUU SOO MUCH well u made them confess haha thts a great job dr!!!!

  6. pinky

    Super!!!! Its worth reading!! I’m reading with mummy knowing that I’m using phone because tomo I hav exam but seriously its worth reading!

    • Maahi

      |Author

      omg girl frst cmplt studying darlu fr xam nd thn nly anything but instead of tht u cmtd tht means a lottt to me thnqq uuu dr nd ALL THE BEST FR UR XAMS DR ROCKKK IT

  7. Monesha

    Omg sisy always showing magic and attracting all the one to you. I also one of the member who couldn’t escape from your magic. How can you write like this sisy. Ok now I am announcing that best writer, magic and intelligent award goes to maahi sisy. Imagine all are clapping and i am giving gift. Now i am going to name you sisy. Bcoz I like to give name for my favorite writer sisy. Your name is magic of writing di shortly i will call you as magic sisy. I hope you like that. If you not like that also I will not change bcoz this name is suit for you. Love you a lotttttt sisy. Loads of huggggggs and kisses to u ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

    • Maahi

      |Author

      omg monu dr magic haaaaa thts sooo sweeet of u darling nd ya got the best award ever thnqq uuu fr all ur love my cutiepie magic sisy is sooo sweeet calll me watever u wish bcoz i am in lve with uu nd ur cuteness lv uuu sooo much darlu

  8. SURBHI

    |Registered Member

    this was spectacular dear I loved it very much πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

    • Maahi

      |Author

      dinka chika dinka chka dinka chika hehehe a cmnt frm u my god thnqq uuuuu soooo much diiii i am on clud nine now thnx again a lotttt lv uuuuuuuu soooooo wala much ur AWESOME DIIIII

  9. Sharaya

    |Registered Member

    Maaahii diiiiiiii!!!!! Another super duper os from you seriously its so awesome first when I saw this os I thought to read on night because mom gave me some work but whole doing the work I was all thinking this os so I gave the work to my sister and started reading this os really this one shot is super duper hit really awesome and how are you? Its been a long time since we talked! And I hope you are doing good and bye take care now I have to stop blabbering because my sister is barking at me lol

    • Sharaya

      |Registered Member

      Before going I have to say that my secret love is your awesome thoughts!!! Yes I’m in love with your thoughts as well as you! Seriously its awesome!!!!!!!!! And you are my SL (secret love) now I’m eagerly waiting for your next one shot I’m so eager to read the awesome thought of yours!

      • Maahi

        |Author

        sharuuuu dr ohhh no my baby is working haa but ya work frsr right nd haha u gv work to sissy haa lol u silly girl u can read after cmlptng naaa s darlu long time since had a talk i am all fyn darlu how r u dng??? hope u had great vacation lv uuuu soooo much nd AWWW I AM UR SL HAA THTS SOOO SWEEEET OF UU DARLU ND UR MY OL(OPEN LOVE) LV UU SOOOO MUCH

  10. Maahi

    |Author

    riyuuuuuuuuu now wat vil i tell uu yaar such a beautiful song fr me i am in love with dizz nd u actually know tht I am in lve with uuu haha yaaa howmuch ever i control still stubeen comes out smehow manufacturing defect darlu nd MAATA….lol yes u said tht i am a kid naaaa u knw amma still yells at me fr being a kid bcoz venever my fav advertisement r song r dialogue comes naa i use to shout louder with tht haha Amma always nags at me nd dr LASANTA is so sweeeeeeeet watever u call me UR MY CRAZIEEE ND I LOVE BEING UR SANTA CUM IDIOT CUM LASANTACUM BESCOMOTO CUM BESWRITER CUM STUBEEN…..welll its a big list but my shades of love fr uuuuuuu is more bigger than dizzz lv uuuuu soooo much nd dr UCMC means U CRAZYY ME CRAZYY in MTMP STYLE SHE IS THE ONE WHO STARTED DIZZ WORLDS CRAZIEST GIRL HAHA LV UUU BOTH NLY BCOZ OF U BOTH I AM ABLE TO GET DIZZZ LOVE LV UUUUUUU INFINITY!!!!!

    • Riyashri

      |Registered Member

      😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚 I AM Very Proud TODAY only becoz of My Miraclely Mind Blowing Maahi Di – Mera Sweet Heart ! U know I am seriously thinking of the reason to live …. U know what Now I hav got the Perfect Reason to Live My Life !! As I hav My Blissful Maahi di as My Life ! If I achieve My Dreams then it would only be becoz of the Magical Love showered on me by My Santa ! I LOVE Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu more than U do ……. Teeke !! Stubbeen U r very Bad ma !!! How can u tell that U love me more than I love u …. Haan !!
      I am telling U ………. Do Remember !! I Love U Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
      Much* Zillionth Time !!!
      Hmm Sorry na ! For sooo many sooooooo……. !
      And Hifi Me too ………. Doing Dinku Chika Crazy Dance and I would be come the Pop Singer if My Fav song comes on Tv !! I wish U remain as My Sweet Heart Pyaari Kid always !! I wanted to take soooo many births again and I also want to get My Special Santa Hamesha forever and ever !! Love u Maata πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Lasanta !!

  11. Trisha

    |Registered Member

    Omg Maahiiii…..this OS totally rocked! 😍😍😍😍😍
    Such an awesome storyline and I loved Tanu’s role. It was absolutely superb sweetheart…loved it….😍😍😍😍….
    Expecting another OS from you soon…take care my darling…love you😘😘😘

  12. HARITHA

    |Registered Member

    Sorry maahi for late comments… actually I have a doubt from where you got such different ideas yaar… I like the story very much… but one thing…. I like the previous os.. I am falling in love with success kkb.. it doesn’t meant that it not good.. but that is… touches my heart a lot… maahi.. is your real name is Lathika???

    • Maahi

      |Author

      dr nvr say srry again u cmnt fr me thts sooo much enough fr me nd yaar nd thnqq uu soooo much fr ur sweet cmnt dr nd i am glad tht u loved my previous OS nd u still remember it dr nd haha no Lathika is my other name as many call me in tht name dr thnqq uuu again

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