My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 5

Hi guys Rithika here
I’m back with the 5th episode read it soon

Sona was still beating him with cushion while Dev catches them and smiles teasingly and throws it on her and runs away
Sona : (shouts) Dev!!!!!!
She follows him out angrily and yet again the kids and Ayan look at them finally Dev stops and takes break and breaths heavily
Ayan : Got one nice from ur wild khargosh hahahaha
Dev : Hahahaha lol nice joke…..I’m not like u getting scared of 4 foot 2 inch girl

Sona stands behind him and looks on angrily and kids and Ayan giggle
Dev : Dude what happened r u mad..
Ayan : Ya look behind
He turned behind and widened his eyes seeing Sona because he completely forgot about Sona
Ayan : Hahahahahaha now what happened Dev
Dev : Nothing happened. Oh hello Ms. Sona stop staring at me I know I’m handsome and no girl can resist staring at me ok but I don’t like u staring at me ok
Sona : Oh is that so……but I don’t think ur handsome Obhodro
Kids and Ayan burst out laughing
Ayan : Hahahahaha Obhodro hahahaha suits u hahaha

Dev gives him a glare and looks at Sona
Dev : Oh 4 foot 2 inch wild cat
Sona : Hey u stop calling me that
Dev : Same here u also stop calling me that
Sona : Huh! U r a Obhodro
Dev : Then ur a 4 foot 2 inch wild cat
Sona : (points finger) Hey listen
He holds her and pulls her closer and winks

Sona : Stupid..Idiot leave me
Dev : Never
They continue their fight while kids and Ayan watch their fight as a movie suddenly grumbling noise comes from Ayan’s stomach and the kids look at him
Ayan : Ahem…ahem bye people’s I’m going and eating and u people also go instead of watching these useless creatures

Kids look at Ayan then at DevAkshi and slap their heads and goes
Sona : Go to hell
Dev : U also come with me
Sona leaves angrily and Dev leaves

Next day

All the elders of Bose’s and Dixit’s were in the lawn discussing about something while Vicky and Elena were there with a blushing face just then Dev and Ayan come there
Dev : Good morning people’s…..what’s going on
Ishwari : Arey Dev beta we r discussing about Vicky and Elena’s engagement
Asha : Haan it’s high time we should get them engaged na
Dev : Ya that’s great….oh my blushing love birds come here and give me a hug
Vicky and Elena smile and hug him
Dev : Congratulation folks

Just then Sona comes and hears their talks
Sona : Really Elena and bahi’s engagement
Ishwari : Haan Shona
She hugs them
Sona : Wow!! So happy for u both congratulations
Dev : Engagement is fine but when is the date
Bejoy : It’s tomorrow
Sona : Tomorrow!!! Itni jaldi
Asha : Haan beta if not tomorrow then after 1 month so better tomorrow
Dev : Ya tomorrow is a good day
Ishwari : Asha chalo there’s a lot of work to do
They all leave from there
Dev : How was ur night haan
She gets angry hearing him
It was night Sona was reading a book when a strange noise came
Voice : Woooooo….ooo
Sona got scared hearing the noise just then Dev comes dressed up like a ghost but Sona thinks he is a ghost
Dev : Oooooooo…ooo I’m here to eat u up ooooo
Sona : Lea…leave me alone…..wh…who r u
Dev : Ooooo I’m a ghost woooooo
Sona hears this and runs from there to Vicky’s room and knocks he opens in sleep
Vicky : What happened Sona
Sona : Bhai there’s a ghost in my room
Vicky : Sona if u don’t stop irritating me then I’ll turn into a rakshas now go
She got scared and went from there
Dev : Ooooo….now where u’ll go wooooo
Like this he scared her the whole night
Dev : U didn’t tell me how was ur sleep
Vicky : Obviously she slept peacefully because she disturbed me
Dev : Haw Sonakshi u should not disturb others like that
She gives a glare to him and steps on Vicky’s foot angrily

Vicky : Ah!!!!!!! Idiot girl
Dev and Ayan gulp in fear seeing her reaction
Ayan : I’m too young to die I’m toh going

He goes and Dev pulls him by his shoulder
Dev : Hey stop y r u getting scared of a 4 foot 2 inch wild khargosh
Sona :Obhodro it’s better if u get scared
She says and goes forward
Ayan : Hahaha Obhodro. Dude it really suits u
Dev gives him a “I’ll kill u” look and Sona comes forward
Sona : Oh obhodro dear won’t u be a baby and do ur daily angry drama
Elena and Ayan burst out laughing. Dev gets irritated and pulls her closer
Dev : Stop calling me that
Sona : Nah! Ur a Obhodro so I’ll call u one
Dev : U know u should stop calling me obhodro and start calling me only dear it will be useful in future
Sona : What?
Dev : Nothing darling
Sona : Ugh! Stop calling me that
Dev : Ok Wild khargosh
He says this and kisses her on the nose with out anyone’s notice

Dev : Ayan come let’s go to office or we’ll here dad’s lecture
He says and they leave from there
Elena : Come let’s go
Sona blushes but then get angry
Sona : Idiot buffalo donkey
Elena : U and bhai r impossible
Sona : It’s ur bhai Elena duffer doesn’t leave a chance to irritate me
Elena : Leave that lets go ur romeo must have kept a letter
They leave

They reach the college
Sona : Hi Nats
Natasha : Hi Sona hi Ele
Elena : Leave that take the letter


Jab kalam liya haath mein
Ghazal bann gaye tum

Jab bhi nazar uthaayi
Nazaara bann gaye tum

Jab bhi kuch kehna chaha
Ishaara bann gaye tum,

Doob raha tha jab jazbaat ke samandar mein
Saahil bann gaye tum,

Kehne ko tha bahut kuch
Parr kuch naa kah saka main

Bina kuch kahe
Bahut kuch kah gaye Hum

Jab bhi saans li maine
Hawa bann gaye tum

Jab bhi dua mein haath uthaaye
Dua bann gaye tum,

Jab bhi chalak gayi aankhen,
Aansoon bann gaye tum,

Nahin jaan saka main’
Jaane kab meri dhadkan bann gaye tum.

Your Admirer ?

As usual she blushed reading his words
Elena : Seriously ur admirer loves u alot
Sona : Ya me too now come lets go

They leave from there

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  1. Aarti32

    Oh it was so cute, poetic & sweet altogether

    1. Rj12

      Thanks aaru

  2. So sweet poem..I loved it

    1. Rj12

      Thanks richa

  3. Manya

    Awesomeeeeeeeeee as always❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Love DEVAKSHI’s cute fight❤️❤️❤️And those lines??????
    Post soon
    Love love❤️❤️❤️

    1. Rj12

      Thanks ayushi

  4. Niki645

    And the lines are just superb!!!!!
    post soon!

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Niki

  5. Eeshi

    loved it such a cute fight and the lines were also beautiful???

    1. Rj12

      Thanks eeshi

  6. Erika

    nice one

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Erika

  7. This was really superb….. And the admirer is dev…. I can bet….
    Reason1: he said to sona…..u should say me dear only…as it will be useful in future
    Reason2: in the poetry…. Bina kuch kahe boht kuch keh Gaye hum…. Means the reason no 1…. He said in hidden words…..
    And as always….. I loved the episode and the poetry too….

    1. Rj12

      Thanks maleeha
      I like ur confidence about the admire and let’s see who’s it

  8. Anjali333

    Wow ritika ….kya likhti ho tum.
    Loved it to the core. Poetry was too good.
    I have become addicted to this ff.
    This story is amazing….. Seriously I have no words to describe how was it.
    Bas maza hi AA gaya.?????????????????

    1. Rj12

      Thanks so much Anjali glad u like it

  9. Amazinggggg!!!!!

    1. Rj12

      Thanks anshita

  10. Saasha123

    It was great but could u give us lo her updates pls pls pls

    1. Rj12

      Thanks saasha
      I’ll try and post more long


    Amazing as always rithika….and ur poetry is awesome……kaise itni achchi likh leti ho yaar….main toh kabhi na likh paun…..

    1. Rj12

      thanks shaheer

  12. Awesome

    1. Rj12

      thanks princess

  13. As always so cute n Devakshi fight I just love that

    1. Rj12

      thanks riddhi

  14. Bharti123456

    Amazingly awesome loved it

    1. Rj12

      thanks bharti

  15. Simplesweety1

    Oh My God! What A Cute Update! I Loved Wild Khargosh And Aubhodro’s Nok – Jhok Lol! And Dev Kissed On Sona’s Nose!? That Was Cute! <3 Elena Aur Vicky Ki Engagement !? woh bhi ek din mein!? woohoo! party time yaa! update soon! i'm waiting eagerly! 🙂

    1. Rj12

      thanks simplesweety

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