My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 17

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Hi guys Rithika here
Thanks for ur views in the previous epis

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Next day. All the elders of Bose’s and Dixit’s r sitting in the lawn area just then Elena come there and serves them tea. Soon even Dev and Ayan come there

Dev : Good morning guys
Bejoy : (smiles) Good morning Dev, u sound quite excited today
Dev : Haan ab baat hi kuch aisi hai father-in, ahem..ahem I mean uncle
Asha : Haan okay jo bhi ho baat , aao have the tea (smiles)
Ayan : Haan auntie Dev doesn’t drink tea, give it to me, on behalf of him I will drink

Dev raises his eyebrows and all laugh while Ayan looks on confused. Just then Sona comes there

Sona : (smiles) Good morning
Rohit : (smiles) Good morning Shona beta, how’s ur studies going on
Sona : It’s fine Rohit uncle
Ishwari : (smiles) Shona I’m making ur favorite paneer tikka for dinner, toh don’t forget that u should come and dinner at our place
Sona : How can I miss ur handmade paneer tikka auntie, I will surely come
Ayan : Yummy, auntie me too my mouth is watering

Ishwari laughs. Sona feels Dev’s gaze on her and she looks at him, Dev smiles looking at her but she turns her face giving an angry look to him. Dev goes towards her and stands beside her

Dev : (whispers)(smiles) Good morning sweetu
Sona : I’m not any sweetu weetu so stop calling me that

She say’s this giving him a death glare but he gets happy that at last she spoke to him

Dev : No u r my sweetu only
Sona : Ugh!!! Waste to talk

She turns her face giving him an angry glare and he smiles

Dev : Accha listen I saw a beautiful dream today, me and u with our ten babies

Sona mouth widens

Sona: (mind) Ten babies, seriously???
Dev : Y?? Is it less??

He winks at her and she closes her mouth & gazes at him angrily

Sona : Just shut up
Dev : Have some patience darling, after our marriage I will not only put up my shirt but ur’s ahem….ahem u can understand right
Sona : Stop irritating me or I will kill u
Dev : Huh! I’m not scared of u 4 foot 2 inch wild khargosh

He starts laughing loudly and all look at him confusedly, while Sona gets irritated and throws cushion on him and he catches it and laughs

Sona : Arg!!!!! Stop laughing
Dev : I’m not Hitler like u 4 foot 2 inch wild cat
Ishwari: Asha what happen to these two all of a sudden started fighting
Asha: I don’t know (confused)

Dev was laughing holding her stomach whereas elders were looking at him confusedly and Elena chuckles while Sona began to beat him with her tiny soft hands

Sona : Stupid….idiot….Fool, stop irritating me

He laughs more and she gets angry and pushes him, he falls on the floor and all widen their eyes seeing their fight

Sona : Ele come let’s go we r getting late (looks at Dev) this monkey will never change
Elena : But Sona…
Sona : (cuts off) Ele come na

She holds Elena’s hand and drags her while Dev gets up from the floor and smiles

Dev : Y wild khargosh got scared huh!?

Sona who hears him gets angry and removes her sandals turns and throws it on him. But in meantime Dev moves and it hits Ayan’s head

Ayan : Bullet!!! Ah!!!

He faints and Dev laughs, Sona looks at him angrily and leaves from there. Dev looks at Ayan and pats his cheek

Dev : Get up dude

He jerks and opens his eyes

Ayan : Ah, Dev someone shot a bullet on me, my life is in danger let’s go and inform police…
Dev : Don’t overreact, no one is interested in killing a gone piece like u, u r not any PM but a BM
Ayan : (confused) What is BM??
Dev : Bhukad Master !
Ayan : Is that so!!
Dev : Yes dude, now come let’s leave we r also getting late right

He signals something and Ayan nodes, both leave from there

Asha : Ishwari, yeh shona and Dev didn’t change at all. They r fighting like before and we thought ki….
Ishwari : Arey Asha don’t worry, whatever it is shona should only be my Daughter-in-law
Bejoy and Rohit : (smiles) Haan
Asha and Ishwari smiles

Sona and Elena were going, just then Elena’s mobile rings

Elena : Sona, Sona stop

Sona stops scootie and both get down and Sona looks at her questionly

Sona : What happened Ele
Elena : Woh Sona it’s Vicky’s call, please let me attend it na..
Sona : This stupid bhai na huh! Okay but please finish it soon

Elena smiles with a nod and goes little far

Sona sits on the scootie looking at her watch just then a boy whose face is covered with a cloth goes towards her and stands behind her, he slowly keeps his hand on her mouth, Sona widens her eyes in shock. She tries to move his hands from her mouth but he tightens his grip and takes her both the hands in his one hand backwards and ties it with a cloth. She struggles and looks at Elena who was standing little far away but wasn’t able to call her as her mouth was closed. The boy takes her towards a bike and makes her sit on the back seat of the bike, he takes off his hand from her mouth and she starts shouting angrily

Sona : How dare u..

Before she could complete he starts the bike and Sona gets shocked and looks at Elena

Sona : Elena….Elena.…Elena

She shouts but Elena was busy enough not to hear her. Sona tries to get down from the bike but wasn’t able to do so cause of her tied hands. They soon leave from there

Boy : U r kidnapped!!

Sona gets angry

Sona : How dare u kidnap me, leave me otherwise u don’t know….
Boy : (cuts off) What huh!
Sona : U don’t know my boy friend if he comes to know that u kidnapped me he will kill u
Boy : Oh! Is that so, who is that fool??
Sona : U r a fool, bl**dy fool, not my Dev
Boy : Ur Dev huh!
Sona : Yes mine now stop the bike and leave me
Boy : Nah! I will not leave u darl…I mean u

Sona gets angry and kicks his leg by her legs

Sona : Who the hell r u. Remove that cloth
Boy : U will come to know soon…

Saying this he enters a room and Sona gets scared because the room was dark. He stops the bike and helps her get down and unties her hand. She was about to beat him but he wasn’t there anywhere

Sona : Hey, where r we and where did u go

She say’s this with fear, just then the spot light falls. There he comes our hero, DEV DIXIT with a smile on his face Sona widens her eyes and opens her mouth in “Aw!” He was dressed in a black trouser and white shirt, sleeves folded till elbow and with top two buttons of shirt is opened showing his clean shaven hard chest making him handsome (Look peoples there will be many romantic scenes in the next few episodes and Note : I DID NOT….NOT WRITE ANY OF THEM, my crazy friends wrote them, even the romantic scenes in the previous episodes they wrote it not ME!! But ya I wrote all the lines and poems 😏). Her eyes were still widen in shock he smiles and walks towards her she comes to her sense and whisphers

Sona : Dev??

Dev : Day I made u happy,
The day I made u angry,
The day I made u smile,
The day I made u cry
I had never thought,
If you would had gone of my life,
How would had I survived.

{He walks towards her expressing his feelings in the beautiful words, while she was staring him hearing each and every word of him which is so true}

I had never expected,
I could love a girl this much,
Trying hard to forget her, I would get my heart crunch
For a mistake, I would be sorry,
From Jan to Dec

{ He stands in front of her. They share a cute eye lock, he express his mistake of slapping her asking her apology}

You hate me less, u hate me more,
My love and care for u would multiply into four.
You cannot be so rude and arrogant, u can no more ignore,
Give me one last chance, love care and affection, all shall I pour

{He smiles and caresses her cheeks lovingly expressing his feelings in the above lines }

Times have changed, things as well,
We have grown a year old
After too long, I have been able to be bold enough, and ask,
Oh my love,darling,shona,
Will u be mine for the rest of your life

{He sits on his knees and givez his million dollar cute smile by saying the above lines while she was just staring him, her heart was jumping in happiness waiting for those 3 magical words. He smiles and takes a chocolate from his pocket, forwards it still sitting on his knees }

Dev : I have the ‘I’ , I have the ‘L’, I have the ‘O’, I have the ‘V’, I have the ‘E’ , so can I have “”U””

Sona’s eyes filled with tears of happiness. She nodes with tears and goes down on her knees and hugs him tightly he smiles and releases the hug

Dev : U didn’t reply me

He say’s this wiping her tears. She let out a laugh and hits his chest by her tiny hands

Sona : I LOVE YOU TOO Dev!

He smiles and hugged her. He was just feeling to fly, he was feeling so happy because he got his true love whom he loved for years is finally loving him back finally his love said those magical words which he was longing for. After a long yet filled with love hug they release the hug

Dev : Arey u didn’t take this chocolate

He forwards the chocolate and she takes it and unwarps it

Sona : Chocolate in proposal, that too so choto sa eclairs, kanjoos

He smiles and pulls her closer by her waist

Dev : It is a return chocolate from Obhodro to his 4 foot 2 inch wild khargods which this Obhodro snactched from her years ago when she was eating the chocolate

He takes the chocolate from her hand and keeps near her mouth. She smiles and opens her mouth, he feeds her the chocolate

Dev : The same chocolate u were having that time then u r kanjoos!!

She opens her mouth in “Haw!” and starts beating him with her soft hands ….while he laughs

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How’s it guys please give ur views

It is true it’s my b’day and thanks for ur wishes

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42 Comments
  1. Awwwww…. I’m simply awestruck by the proposal…. Damn cute and romantic episode….of course with a pinch of comedy….. Those lines were seriously amazing….poetry…. And proposal was the best one 💘
    Happy Birthday once again…. 😘💕
    Love,
    ❤❤❤

    1. Rj12

      Thanks so much Maleeha 😄😄

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Dev

  2. Wish you many more happy returns of the day Rithika🎁🎁🎁
    By the episode was awesome
    I loved the proposal scene ❤❤❤
    Post next one ASAP

    1. Rj12

      Thanks so much Hafsan😄

  3. Heshine

    Its really awesome dear….!!!😘😘😘😙😘😙😘😍 ….. Oh my gosh….!!! Those magical words were again and again hitting me leaving me just unnotice to any….!!!😊😊☺
    It was really awesome…..!!! Oh Dev’s proposal was up to the core…!!! That any one could melt….!!! Really loved ur poetic
    lines….!!! Its really a gift on behalf of u fa ur
    wonderful day….!!!

    Yeah dear its time….I knw….its almost gonna next day in few hrs….!!! But I should say….!!😘😘😙😘😍
    “You aren’t too older..
    But you are too cute, too sweet, and too smart.” 😘😘😙 something that I could…..hope its not such boring….
    Anyways dear ….Wishing u a very happy Birthday….!! I knw its late….!!!but pls manage….!! 🎁🎁🎁🎊🎊🎉🎂
    Post the next epi soon dear….!! Waiting fa devakshi’s scenes…..!! And scenes to be compiled by you….!!
    Happy birthday once again…💓💞💟💟💕💟💞💓💝💝💘❤
    Love….💕
    Heshine…!

    1. Rj12

      Bap re baap such a big comment😅

      Yes this episode was somewhat a return gift to u all for ur love and care 😊 Thanks so much for ur wishes and precious comments 😄 And in the next epi there will be romantic scenes 😍 but not written by me but my friends 😉 but it will be compiled by me 😜
      I’ll try and post soon too!!😃

  4. Priya12

    Rithu, superbb…tat lines I have I, Love And I want u….tat was fabulous….tat proposal….oh god…..and that chocolate wala scene….luved it …u rocked it…pls post the nxt epi soon dr

    1. Rj12

      Thanks so much Priyu 😄

  5. Manya

    Awww❤️😘😍❣💘😂😜😝❤️😘😂😍😍
    Super cute☺️☺️❤️❤️❤️❤️
    And that poem😎😎😎💘💘💘and the DEVAKSHI fight😂😂😂Bichara Ayan humesha phass jaata hai😜😜
    Post soon❤️❤️❤️
    Love❤️❤️

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Ayu 😄

  6. Happy birthday dear…I guess this episode was a birthday treat for us from you..Nice proposal. Post soon

    1. Rj12

      Thanks so much Richa😃 And this epi is somewhat a return gift from me to u all becauze of ur wonderful love and care

  7. Happy birthday onces again. Awesome awesome awesome awesome episode dear plz post the next episode soon as possible.

    1. Rj12

      Thanks so much princess 😊 I’ll try and post soon

  8. Anjali333

    Happy birthday ritika🎂🎉🎉🎉🎁🎊🎊
    Awww…..so cute nd unique proposal

    Their fighting scene was soooo good
    Overall chapter was fabulous
    Love it sooooooo much
    Once again happy birthday

    1. Rj12

      Thanks a ton Anjali 😃 I wrote tjis uniques proposal all thanks to my crazy friends who gave me the idea cz romance is not my cup of tea 😅😁

  9. Awwwwww thats suoer cute yr plzz post the next episode soon♥♥♥

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Akshita 😊

  10. Simplesweety1

    Wow! Awsm Episode! Loved It! Update Soon! Happy B’day By The Way! Sorry For The Late Wish! 🙂

    1. Rj12

      Thanks a lot Tanvi 😊
      And I really didn’t mind that u wished me late

  11. Happiee b’day Ritika…Sry fr d late..It was awesomeee dr😍….Very very cute proposal ever😘😘😘…I love it very much… Post d next one soon….

    1. Rj12

      Thanks so much Anu!!

  12. Aarti32

    Throughout my reading, I was only saying..Oh so cute..So u know how was d episode..Right!!

  13. Aarti32

    Happy birthday..Belated!!

    1. Rj12

      Thanks a ton Aarti 😄

  14. Niki645

    It was such an amazing episode 😘😘😀😀😀
    I was smiling throughout the episode!!!😘😘

    The poem😍😍😍😍….. Omg just fab😘😘😘

    Loved their fights as well!!!

    Entire episode was marvellous 😘😘😘

    U r an amazing writer😘😘😘😀😀
    Post soon😘

    Love❤️❤️

    1. Rj12

      Thanks a lot Niki 😄

  15. V.V.harshita

    Hey rithika happy b’day……and the poem when he proposed and the proposal was really really amazing I hav no words…..and plzs post soon 😍😍😍😍

    1. Rj12

      Thanks so much Harshita 😊😊

  16. Angel20

    First of all I’m very sorry for the late comment! I don’t know how I missed reading your ff. Anyways the proposal was rally very cute😍😍 those lines were amazing😘😘 seriously loved it very much!! Post the next one soon!!

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Maria!
      And I really don’t mind late comments cz at times even I’m late in commenting😅 So I shouldn’t mind anyone being late 😊😊

  17. Chanpreet0815

    Ritika this part is best. 4 foot 2 inch khargosh. Lol😂😂😂😂😂.

    That line made me laugh too much.
    poem is too good. I liked it.
    Post next part soon.

    Many Many happy birthday Ritika. GBU.

    Happy Birthday to u🎂🎁🎉
    Happy Birthday to u
    Happy Birthday to dear Ritika.
    Happy Birthday to u.

    Happy Birthday Ritika be lated.

    1. Rj12

      Thank u so so so much Preet 😄😄😄😄
      I’ll try and post the next part soon

  18. Anjali333

    Hey ritika!
    Please tell me dear when r u going to update the next part
    Can’t wait

    1. Rj12

      Not any time soon as my exams just started

      1. Anjali333

        😱😱😱😱😱
        So for how long we have to wait for???

      2. Rj12

        Idk 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

  19. AnShIta

    Hey Rithu,
    Firstly, I’m so sorry for the late comment. I dunno how but I somehow skipped this post😅 And I just saw a comment of yours in the ‘Recent Comments’ section, thankfully. Anyways, this episode was damn cool! I so badly loved it!☺️☺️ The poems were literally amazing!😍😍😍 I seriously loved them!🙂
    Please do post the next one really soon, if you can. And, best of luck for your exams!🙂

    1. Rj12

      Thank u Anshi
      That actually happens to me too at times I don’t know how I miss epi’s
      I have finished typing just going to post it now

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