My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 10

Hi guys Rithika here
I know u people r really mad at me for being late, sorry so sorry I had a lot of school work and projects but I hope this is good enough

DevAkshi were facing each other in the bus and Dev was lovingly staring at her while Sona was just staring at him. The bus jerked and started and Sona fell on Dev because of this her eyes were closed in fear, he smiles and stares at her lovingly, her beautiful face, her nose which was always had anger on it made him more crazy about her….but the strands floating on her hair made it difficult to get a view of his love, he smiled and tucked it behind. She felt his touch and opened her eyes and looked at him who was staring at her lovingly and deeply. She avoided the eye contact and frees his shirt from her clutch

Sona : Woh..where is Elena?
Dev : She might be on the other side with Ayan (smile)
Sona : Hmm..
Dev : (smiles teasingly) Waise u r standing so close to me aren’t u feeling anything haan?
Sona : Don’t u have any other work rather than irritating me
Dev : Arey u don’t know?? I have a lot of work dear, our marriage, our first night with our kids
Sona : Arg!!!!!!!! Waste to talk to a idiotic creature
Dev : But this idiotic creature is urs na

She turns away angrily. He smiles seeing her anger because he loved to irritate her to see the anger on her cute nose while she turns behind and blushes slightly hearing his talks and she wanted her blush to be unnoticed by him

Sona : (mind)(smiles)Pagal

On the other side Elena was chatting with Vicky and Ayan was eyeing an auntie, he was staring at her continuously the lady notices it and slaps him hard. He holds his burning cheek and stares at Elena

Ayan : Ah!!
Auntie : Don’t u have any manners
Ayan : What I did
Auntie : Idiot…don’t u have any shame..and don’t keep this bhola bhala face haan, chi I’m ur mothers age and ur staring at me. Idiot

She leaves from there

Elena : What happened bhai, y did that auntie scold u??
Ayan : Ele (hugs her) Look na everyone is mouth was watering seeing that aunties tiffin box, so I looked at it but this cruel world…that auntie thought I was staring at her…..aaaaaaaaa

Elena slaps her head and shakes her head in ‘impossible’

On the other side Dev was continuously staring at Sona from the side, she feels it and gets irritated

Sona : Can u stop staring at me

He smiles and pulls her by her waist, and her back hits his chest, he goes closer to her ear leaving his hot breath on her soft shoulder and whisphers in her ears

Dev : My wish dear, waise bhi I’m staring at my property only

He winks at her, she gets angry and struggles to free herself from his grip but the more she struggles the more he tightens his grip

Sona : Leave me
Dev : Never in hundred lives, my dear wifey
Sona : Arg!!

Dev smiles and places his hand on her milky bare belly which is visible as she was wearing a crop top, her eyes widen in shock as she felt a current passed through her body. He smiles naughtily and caresses her milky belly passionately. She breaths heavily closing her eyes and feeling his touch. He makes circles on her belly button with a naughty smile while she bites her lower lip to control her moans, he smiles teasingly and pinches her belly hardly and takes his hand back she immediately opens her eyes Dev chuckles and pulls her cheeks. She looks at him angrily. A man who was standing next to them stared at Sona lustily

Man :(to Dev) Hey there

He taps Dev’s shoulder while he turns and looks at that man confusedly, the man smiles like a lusty devil

Man : (whispers) maal mast hai (keeps his hand on his shoulder) dekh bhai till now u were enjoying with that hot girl, now it’s my turn so u stand here and let my stand on ur place and enjoy with her (lustily looking at Sona)

Dev’s eyes turned red in rage, he clutched his fist in anger and shouted


The bus driver stopped the bus and Dev held that man’s collar

Man : Ay..leave me

He shows him his finger in anger, Elena and Ayan who were on the other side came to his side hearing Dev’s shout…Dev dials a number while all three of them look at Dev in confusion

Dev : Hello Tina send a car immediately to Xyz bus stand
Tina : Yes sir

Dev looks at the man with bloodshot eyes and drags him outside and pushes him on the floor while everyone on the bus got down seeing him

Elena : Bhai what r doing
Ayan : Ay Dev what r u doing? All of the sudden bhoot chadh gaya tujme

Dev kept quiet he was just staring at that man angrily. Just then a car comes he looks at it then at Elena and Sona

Dev : Ele, Sona sit in the car now..(calmly)
Elena : But bhai..
Dev : (cuts off)(calmly) Please sit in

Elena nodes and gets in

Sona : I’m not going..driver uncle start the bus, I’m getting late for the college

She was about to get inside while Dev holds her hand not letting her go and looks at her

Dev : Sonakshi show ur attitude later but now get in (calmly)

He drags her towards the car while Sona looks at his angry eyes and wonders what happened to him

Sona : (mind) Arey what happened to him just now he was romancing with me all of a sudden kya hua

He makes her sit in the car

Dev : Bhaiya drop them to their college

Driver nodes and leaves from there and Dev looks at that man angrily

Man : Ay hero stop

Dev doesn’t stop and beats him while his friends come

Men : Ay beat him

The goons came towards him and get beaten by him while Ayan gets bored and sits on the stone just then a boy comes seeing the scenario

Boy : Bhaiya (to Ayan) u know that bhaiya
Ayan : Haan he’s unfortunately my friend
Boy : Then stop him
Ayan : What stop him!! U want to see me dead or what
Boy : Hen??
Ayan : Nothing go

Just then Ayan sees a chocolate in his hand and takes it and eats it while the boy cries. Dev still beats them black and blue

Man : Ay what I did..I just asked u..y
Dev :(cuts off) What u did?? That girl is MY girl understand u ba**urd

Dev keeps beating them showing his possessiveness for Sona the men hold his leg

Men : Stop please

He kicks them in their main part they scream and all close their ears and they both go from there

Dev : Lets go

They go when the phone of the goon ring

Man : Ah! Haan bhaiya ji
Bhaiya ji : Kya hau Birju y r u screaming anyway I’ll send u a pic of the boy whom we have to take revenge from
Man : H..aan

He gets the pic and sees it and gets shocked because it was Dev’s pic

Birju : Ay he’s the same boy oh God! (to other goons) Come all let’s find info of this boy now


How was it I know I said I’ll post a long episode but sorry I was lazy to write so much ? but please give ur views

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  1. Rithika, superbbb….this epi is fully funny, lovely, , romantic, action………fantabulous….splendid…post soon dr

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Priyu

  2. Alka

    Yaayayayay thank u for posting the epi ?? … Today’s epi was cho cute ????
    Post soon ?

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Alka

  3. Priya12

    Di, superbb….., awesomeeee…….this epi is fully funnny, lovely, romantic, jealous, possessive, action…..fantabulous…splendid…post soon dr..

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Priya

  4. Anjali333

    Mind blowing update???????????????????????
    Dev romancing with sona…..and then angry young man avtaar. Totally loved it????????
    Thanks tumne kal ki bajaay aaj hi update kar diya.?????
    Pls next update ke liye zaada wait mat karwana. Pls????

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Anjali

  5. Awesome ? but please try to write long episode dear when you post the next episode

    1. Rj12

      Thanks princess
      I’ll try and post long episodes

  6. Heshine

    This was really awesome Rithika…juz la bed it.. ..devakshi moments……..Dev’s dialogues…..!!!?????????????it was juz amazing……u write awesomely…..!!!?????after reading the sneak peak…..I was juz wondering wat will hpn to our dear devakshi…..pls do update soon…..eagerly waiting….and yeah …y did the goons were in search of Dev….!!!???I too have hell lot of questions ….but hope will get answers…in the upcoming episode…!!!
    Post soon….dear…!!??????

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Heshine
      U will surely get the answers for all u questions

  7. Manya

    Especially woh last wala???
    Post soon
    Love love❤️❤️❤️

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Ayushi

  8. Chanpreet0815

    Ritika. So romantic our dev is. I loved it. And vry much excited to know now what sona will do.
    Dev pr gussa hona kab band kregi sona. It’s superb?????

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Preet

  9. Chanpreet0815

    Ritika I just want to ask u that. My secret admire and sneak peak is different or what. I m little bit confused

    1. Rj12

      No it’s not different
      There are just some scenes of the next few episodes reavled

  10. Superb and mind blowing one rj….. Loved it like always….. U did amazing dear….. It was a full fledged package of humor, romance, action, comedy….. All in one…. Marvellous

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Maleeha

  11. Simplesweety1


    1. Rj12

      Thanks Tanvi

  12. Shruti710

    Nice episode rithika di
    Post soo

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Shruti

  13. Mind blowing episode

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Riddhi

  14. Niki645


    1. Rj12

      Thanks Niki

  15. Erika

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi loved the romance and the action too update asap…………………….. eagerly waiting for the nxt one……………….

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Erika

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