My secret admire »DevAkshi« Episode 1


Hi guys Rithika here
Thank u for ur support in my previous ff I’ve come up with this episode so read and comment

Asha : Ramu(servent) Call Vicky for breakfast
Just then he comes down on his own
Vicky : Ma I came
Asha : Achha have breakfast come
Vicky : Where’s baba
Asha : For walk he’ll come in sometime… thing u’ll do for me beta
Vicky: Ya ma what
Asha : Wake up Shona know
Vicky : No I won’t wake up that kumbkaran
Asha : U told u’ll do what I say now go
Vicky leaves for Sona’s room
Vicky : Sona…..Sona wake up u don’t want to go to college get up kumbkaran(he shakes her)
Sona : (sleepy voice) Which monkey is waking me up so early
Vicky : Ur Vicky bhai
Sona :(sleepy voice) Vicky…bhai don’t irritate me go or I’ll kick u
Vicky : (anger)Sonaaa just wake up nowwww!!

Sona jerks and gets up
Sona : Bhai u here go let me sleep
Vicky : Just get ur college is starting today don’t u wan’t to go
She gets up happily
Sona : Thanks for waking me up bhai… love u
She hugs him
Vicky : Now go get ready
She goes

After sometime she comes down ready
Sona : Good morning ma, baba
Asha : Shona come eat breakfast
She finishes her breakfast and leaves
Sona : Ok now bye everyone
Vicky : Sona come with me I’ll leave u till the gate
He drags her outside where her eyes fall on Elena
Sona : Ele….
They share a hug
Elena : U know how much I remembered u
She elbows her
Sona : Me or bhai waise leave this let’s go
She makes her sit on the scooty
Vicky : Hi Elena
Before she could reply
Sona : Bye bhai
She starts the scooty and drives off just then Dev comes there
Dev : Hi Vicky
A smile comes to Vicky’s face and he hugs him
Vicky : U finally came after 4 years from London and didn’t tell me even Elena didn’t
Dev : Chill yaar I thought of giving u a surprise and where does Elena remember me she only roams around u na. Hmph!
Vicky : Shut up
Just then a fatty comes(Ayan) and hugs both of them
Vicky : Ayan what r u doing keep calm yaar and come we r getting late for office
Ayan : Dude Dev just came from London let’s hang out like before
Vicky : Come on lot of work is there Dev u joined?
Dev : Ya waise Ayan u reduced ur eating or no?
Ayan : Y do u all eye my food
Dev : Ok sorry let’s go in my jeep
They sit in the jeep and leave for office
Ayan : Waise Dev any girlfriend in London
Dev : No
Ayan : I thought girls will fall flat on u because ur handsome
Dev : There were many who fell for me but they were not my type
Vicky : Then who’s ur type haan
Dev : He has already decided
He said looking towards the sky

In the college Sona parks the scooty in a hurry and goes towards a small mail box in which there was a letter beautifully decorated with hearts
Elena : Utha jaldi take it read it and stop blushing
She blushes and takes the letter

Tu hai meri geet
Tu hai meri jeet

Hai mujhe tujse pyar
Jald karoonga tujse mere pyar ka iqraar

Agar tu ne mere pyar ka kiya haan
Le jaoonga tujhe mein ek dusre jahan(planet)

Jahan mein barsaoonga tere upar mera pyar
Kya yaad rakhegi meri yaar

Ki har janam mujhe hi apna sathi banana chahogi

Yours and yours only


She blushes even more reading the letter just then Natasha comes
Natasha : Oh ho again the secret admire strikes
Sona and Elena : Hi Natasha
Natasha : Leave that he has been sending u letters from 6 years still didn’t come in front of u and u still love him
Sona : So he always expresses his love through these beautiful letters which r always kept close to my heart and physical presence doesn’t matter to much as long as he sends these letters to me
Natasha : Stop ur lecture better is to blush
They all laugh

How was it please give ur views

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  1. Too good yaar..was desperate to read… please post next episode soon.

    1. Rj12

      Thanks richa

  2. Manya

    Awesomeeeeeeeeee di❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Especially those lines❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Post soon
    Love love?????

    1. Rj12

      Thanks ayushi glad u like the lines I did so much hard work to create them

  3. Heshine

    Hey Rithika…how r u….hope u r fine…!!!I’m really sorry fa not cmntng in the previous parts of ur ff…..!!!as there no network at all…!!it was juz a big mess…here so hope u wip understand….!!! and yeah….u hve ended ur ff….No matter……oh…?…but no prob will be in touch wit this new
    one…..okok….I knw I’m boring…..but coming to ff….
    Ohhhhhhhhh…..!!!its juz awesome….!!!I loved it…….really….!!amazing…..I’m stuck….its really different….!!!?????????
    U really nailed it witbur new plot….!!!I’m eagerly waiting fa the next epi……(note: so desperately ..??)..!!!yeah of course y not… really seems interesting…!!???pls dear update the nxt asap….I’m waiting ….!!though its filmy tats the truth…!!!
    Take care ….bye…..

    1. Rj12

      Thanks heshine I will update the new epi soon

  4. Superb start friend. Lovely epi.

    1. Rj12

      Thanks dolly

  5. Awesome dear desperately waiting for the next episode..

    1. Rj12

      Thanks princess

  6. Awesome episode post soon

    1. Rj12

      Thanks riddhi

  7. Anjali333

    Amazing ritika
    Totally loved it
    Each n every thing was soo perfect
    Please next part jaldi SE update kr do
    Bilkul wait nahi ho raha
    Please update very soon
    I am eagerly waiting

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Anjali

  8. It was too good yr can’t wait for next episode post soon

    1. Rj12

      Thanks akshita

  9. Varsha94

    Looks very interesting yaar.. I hope sona gets to know who s it soon.. Awesome work..loved it..?❤???

    1. Rj12

      Thanks varsha

  10. Amazing and awesome dear……really loved it….. Dev must be the secret admirer* of sona…..?

    1. Rj12

      Thank u maleeha you’ll find out soon who the admire is

  11. Erika

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Erika

  12. Hey Rithika di!
    This was amazing! Every thing was amazing really! FANTABULOUS, I’d say!
    Please do post the next one soon!
    Love ya!?????

    1. Rj12

      Thanks anshita

  13. Bharti123456

    This was totally awesome loved it post soon

    1. Rj12

      Thanks bharti

  14. Simplesweety1

    Wow! Awsm! Update Soon! *Claps*

    1. Rj12

      Thanks simplesweety

  15. Alka

    Wwowowowowowowowo …..epiiisode was very good. ….???

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Alka



    1. Rj12

      Thanks shaheer

  17. Toooo Oooooo gooooodddd yaaarrr. ……
    Eagerly waiting for next part
    I guess ADMIRE = DEV

    1. Rj12

      Thanks mahi you’ll find out soon who the admire is

  18. Erina

    D way u present ur ff is awesome dear nd specially those words of letter was awesome I loved those line ?????nd well I know whos that secret admire as u told in ur intro nd I hope u will not change that ….. ???just kidding dear ….

    1. Rj12

      thanks erina
      glad u liked the lines it took me so much time to create it

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