Sec..rrret…??Ha..ha..I ‘ll keep.. 4(Devakshi)(Ishqbaaz)

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Hi Frndzz..Tiz is H..4th Love Strts..
“Tanqqq”..Shivaay smiles..
“Once Upon a time” Dev read..
“Draw anything”Om said..

Now…

Shivaay holds the girl doll n smiles..
“Tanqq”He smiles..
Anika smiles..
Shivaay’s legs slowly left from Anika’s house..

His foot travel on the steps on entrance..
Anika see Shivaay’s going n close the Door.

Shivaay left hand fingers hold the doll..n his foot travels..

Shivaay(mind):”I need to hide U”


“A clown masked Guy lived”Dev reads..(Loc:Dev’s house)..

Om see the mask n wear tat..(Loc:Om’s house)..

Dev’s house..
Dev(mind):”Something Happened to Shivaay..”..
..
Dev see Up from lying..
LordShiva as LittleAnime..
Dev magically Disappears..

Om took the mask from face and see painting brush..Opposite,A Big FaceSeeingGlass..
Om:”Aaru..(Om’s LittleBoy(Mm.Student!!)..
I ‘ll be on Ten mins”..
Brush plays Beethoven’s Symphony fastly on Colors..
YellGree.. .Blu….oww..
Colouring on Mask..
Om’s fingers on cheeks..
Om(mind):”Mmmm..???I think it’s gud now”..

Om wears…n comb his hair..
Little BonyTail..

Om:”Kathakali(Kerala’s Traditional Dance)..Lets start”..
Near him Chenda Melam (Instrument)..is seen..
Om took the sticks..
Sticks r going to touch Chenda Melam..
Sticks on air..
Nano secs..
….

Shivaay’s fingers (CameraShot)..
Loc:Shivaay’s house
His fingers touch the door lock..
Shivaay(mind):”Someone is here already”..
His Ears Hear TV Sound..
Shivaay(confuse):”Tom&Jerry”..
Circles the lock to Open..
….
…..
……..
Loc:Sona’s house..
Liyaa on Sona’s laps..
Sona hide her face on Liyaa’ s back..Her Eyes lightly slept..
(2:22 of EdSheeran’s “GalwayGirl” on bg- My Apsara Pencil going to be my extra mark Secret)(Mm..Perfectly sync..Lil think)..

ThunderSound from TV..
Sona’s Eyes suddenly conscious..
Scooby Doo gang opens the door of a Big House..
The Lock circles n opens..

Loc:Shivaay’s house
Music Still Again on bg..
Shivaay see Someone is sitting on top of the Sofa..
See the floor..
ChessBoard,TV Remote,Dev’s StoryBook too on floor..
In Shivaay’s Eyes
All chess coins on air..
Steadily seen like arranged on Board..
..

Shivaay(mind):”Who is this?”
Slowly he take his move..
Shivaay (shock):”What???I m unable to move”..
The Mystery Guy (None other than Dev!!!)
moves the coin n the King of the Opposite goes up n going to fall below on floor..
Bt Didn’t fall..
He whistles…
Shivaay:”Dev..????”

Loc:Anika’s house
Whistle of Shivaay’s Juliet..
Anika see Teddy..
Anika:”Who is he??Is he Ur frnd”…
Teddy-Big Silenceeee
Anika:”Tell.. ”
Her lips smiles..
Neo (Anika’s little cat-mmm..Is the Meow’s name Crct..Sorryyyy..I forget) pull Teddy’s left Hand..
Anika:”Neo..Time to Sleep..”..
Anika holds Neo on hands n put him in a basket..

Neo travels in it..
Loc:Om’s house..
Ishaana travels to Aaru (Little Boy!! )..n see his drawing.. .
Ishaana:”What is ur name??””
Aaru see her..
Aaru (smile):”Aara”..
Ishaana:”I m Sshhh(her fingers on lips)..Ishaana”(smile)..
Both turns by hearing Sound of Chenda Melam..
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-To be Continued…
Hi Frndzz..Hope U like tis Frndzz..
Comingggg Sooonnnnnnn..Waiting for Ur Cuckooss..After readingg,Don’t forget to Send Cuckoos..Tanqqq..Take Care Frndzz..

3rd Luv

Sec..rrret…??Ha..ha..I ‘ll keep.. 3 (Devakshi)(Ishqbaaz)

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23 Comments
  1. Awesome update..

    1. HarSHaN

      Tanqq Ankita..

  2. Anah

    amazing anna

    1. HarSHaN

      Hi Sissy!!!Hw R U????Tanqq Sissy..

  3. It’s awesome Bhai ???

    1. HarSHaN

      Tanqqq Sissyyyyy!!!!!☺☺☺☺

    2. HarSHaN

      Sissy..Dont miss the nxt..Lord Buddha too comes☺☺I hope U like that while reading..A little plot for story comes in mind while eating now..I didn’t know Y the reply comments notif is not appearing for me??

      1. Oh wow Bhai.. but Bhai how is Lord Buddha related to the story? I’ll surely read it. And I like cuteee cat…so adorable.. cuty cuty cuty cuty cuty pie.. love u kitty .. if I was there I would surely taken kitty to my hands and would have hugged . And u call him “meow”!!it’s so adorable ..

    3. HarSHaN

      Sissy!!!!!!!Mm..Its Secret for me too..Still didnt Strt thinking for the nxt..Mmm..Meow is Cuteeeena..Meow ‘ll be seeing U n revolve its Eyes…”Anika”or “My Sissy”..Sissy..U have Cat in house??!!

      1. Yes Bhai I have two cats.. and they are twins.. ??

    4. HarSHaN

      Superr Sissy!!!!!Twins????

      1. Yes Bhai twins.??

  4. awww its amazig and u brought a ew cat i love cats u knoww heheh and nice update

    1. HarSHaN

      Tanqq Saidha!!!Me too Sissy bt little fear of their Eyes Sissy?

      1. oooo u get fear of their eyes but its the best part i like in them hehehe

      2. HarSHaN

        Ss.. It’s the best part..Bt Fear too?☺

    2. Fenil

      Same I loved cat’s eyes.???

  5. Neha_Pheonix

    Ohh Ed Sheeren’s Girlway Gang..and Apsara pencil…well, you surprise me..everytime…last tym Scooby do..I liked every different scenes…Nice update..still the mystery is unfolding..

    1. HarSHaN

      Tanqq Neha!!!Mystery is on the next!!!!!

  6. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

    1. HarSHaN

      Tanqq Alekhika!!!Tanqq for Readingg..The next ll be on Soon..Sorryyyy for the late…

  7. Fenil

    Awww Tom and Jerry
    Fantastic chppy.
    Great unique style.

    Bro why u didn’t send links…I know I didn’t reply u but u Guess that I m not interested sorry. I was busy with exams that time and I also knew that u send 2nd chppy links.

    Waiting for next.

    1. HarSHaN

      Tanqq Bro..Sorryyy Bro..I forget to sent..Hey..Not like that dude..How about ur exams??

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