In search of her-OS by Aditi

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In search of her:
Hey guys Aditi here I know many of you are waiting for next part of my FF but I just felt to write this I hope you all appreciate it as much as you love my FF
And guys please do tell your sweet aur spicy reviews ??
So here it goes:
Man: good morning Mr omkara singh oberoi
Om whose mood instantly got spoiled seeing the man but he kept quiet.
Man: what happened Mr oberoi why are you upset of me it’s my right I am not the one who killed your brother,I am not the one who stole your fiance I am not the one who sent you to jail it was you and I have come here for a pay back remember the old formula? blood for blood and so brother for brother (man said with an evil grin)
Om pulled man by his collar :kaali thakur if anything happens to my…
KT: oh no I am so scared but I think it’s too late now to say goodbye to your cute younger brother. I warned both of you brothers I will make you cry blo*dy tears.
Om’s eyes widened he left kaali and called rudra.
Scene changes shivru are in car shivaye is driving and rudra is playing game.
Shiv:rudra shut that damn tune it’s irritating.
Rudra : I will never lend you my car again you don’t let me drive and now asking me to shut my game(phone rings ) see it’s om I will tell him next time something happens to your car he will give his car ..
Shiv: shut up duffer and answer the call.
Rudra: oh yes!!(he picks the call but due to some problem couldn’t talk)
Shivaye: what happened?(rudra shrugs) ok we’ll call later…oh shit!!!!
Rudra sits up: what happened ??(he was horrified to see expressions on shivaye’s face.)
Shiv: brakes are failed
Both brothers were thinking some way out suddenly some vehicle hit their car from back the car was on the edge of the cliff and shivaye hurriedly pushed​ rudra out.
While the car toppled down the cliff.rudra rolled to the shrubbery nearby and got hit by the tree and fainted due to the injury he had sustained​.
Meanwhile om traced rudra’s phone and reached the spot with Khanna and few of his men. He saw rudra and stopped the car and rushed to him.
Om:(picking him up) rudra !!rudra open your eyes!(he became semiconcious)
Rudra: Bhaiya! shivaye Bhaiya (he pointed where car had fallen).
Om was shocked: shiv.. shivaye was with you(rudra nodded) y..you don’t worry I will see you go to the hospital with them.(called his men)
Om reached the spot and was dazed to see car’s condition which was burning furiously.as the valley was not very deep or steep he ran down tears had blurred his vision when suddenly Khanna shook him and pointed somewhere .
There was shivaye lying in the pool of blood but alive . Omkara rushed both his brothers to the hospital the negative thoughts clouded his mind: what if anything happens to them? What will he do ? (He came out of the thoughts by a call it flashed chulbul)
Ch: hello! Omkara ji where are you since morning jahnvi mam was searching for you?
Omkara broke down chulbul got scared: wh..what happened?
Om told him the whole incident.
Ch: I will tell the family
Om: no! I don’t want Kali to know anything.
Ch: but omkara ji
Om: ok do one thing just bring soumya and Anika bhabhi here quietly.
Chulbul agreed. After sometime​ all three anichulya we’re at the hospital.
Everyone were pacing in the hospital corridor waiting for the doctor.
Doc: don’t worry they both are alright rudra sustained some minor injuries and shivaye also got saved maybe due to the airbags and other advanced features of the car.
Om: can we meet them.
Doc: sure but I have given them some sedative they are unconscious you can take them home when they regain conciousness.
Om: thank you doctor(they went to the room where both shivaye and rudra were Anika nd soumya ran inside to their respective loves om turned to leave but was stopped by chulbul. Om: chulbul I will kill him. Ch: I am not stopping you but look at this time they need you more.( Om looked back and felt chulbul was right).
After sometime​both brothers regained consciousness and asked for each other and then for their love.(yes guys rudra too).
Om: I knew it when my brothers will wake up they will need to see their wives in front of them (he winked at somya and she blushed)
Rudra: sumo I am so so sorry I know I have hurted you so many times​ but today when I felt I was going to die I couldn’t think of anything but you I realized how much I love you even more than my dumbells and protein shake please will you share rest of your life with me.
Soumya didn’t have any words to respond: she just nodded and tears were filled in her eyes and she hugged him.
Rest: awwwwww… (Shivkara acting to wipe their fake tears ) ab rudra bhi paraya dhan ho gya.
Rumya became red and broke their hug.
Scene changes to night at OM:
Omkara entered the hall puching kaali repeatedly Everyone gathered and tried to stop him. om: you all don’t know what he did …I will kill him today.
Voice:om!!!!! (It was shivaye Everyone looked and got tensed looking at sivru’s state and went forward to help them and make them sit shivaye narrated the whole incident?)
Tej: but why would kaali do such a thing?
Shivkara at the same time: because in a fight with us his brother died/because I married his fiance.
Everyone was in utter amazment and looking from shivaye to om to Kali(while he was been dragged by the security and he grinned (I will be back oberois).
Even shivaye was looking at om. After some time everyone was seated and shivkara had narrated the whole story that happened in bareilly there was pin drop silence then dadi got up and slapped om hard.
Dadi: I thought you were the sensible one but no you were the same. Now you will go tomorrow and bring that girl here.
Om: but! Dadi: now you will question me?(om nodded) good tomorrow you will go.
Then she left along with all the elders.
Shivaye : I think om you have not learnt anything from my story. Did you ever try to ask that girl her side of the story?
Om nodded . Anika: is this the same Gauri with whom we talked on phone (om nodded) om she seemed to be a nice and honest girl if she was a con she would have ran away with your phone when she found it.
Om had flashes of memory of when he was with memory he found he had always assumed things and never actually tried hearing her.
Om burried his face in his hands : you all are right I have done very wrong.
Shi: don’t worry on tomorrow we all will go along with you and get her.(he smiled)
Gauri heard this and was about to go to om to reveal everything.but was pulled back by someone. Gau: jahnvi ma see my omkara ji is searching for me I have to go to him.
Jahnvi: no!(Gauri: confused) see I have done this mistake with tej I was always so readily available that he never valued me now this won’t happen with you let om go to barreily then he will know the truth and fully realize his mistake.
Gauri: but if someone told him wrong info. Jahnvi: hmm.. so we will follow them tomorrow.(Gauri hugs jahnvi: you are the best ma?and jahnvi lovingly pecks on he forehead they are about to leave when they see Anika)
Ani: don’t worry jahnvi aunty I believe everything you are doing is correct I will help you.
Jahnvi smiles and leaves.
Next morning they reach bareilly and ask the villagers​ they tell them the whole story that has happened with each detail om was plunged deeper into the pool of guilt. Soon they reached Gauri’s house jahnvi and Gauri followed the company the whole time.
Gauri was sad seeing her husband but jahnvi stood resolved by her decision.
Om:(to her mother) Aunty ji I want to meet Gauri.
Gauri’s mom:(cheerfully​) are you don’t know she is married now and lives in a big house in the big city with her husband.
Om(confused) : husband?
GM: yes some big businessman oberoi in Mumbai I have not met him yet due to my health but I am happy till she is happy.
Om was confused he came out of room where he met Gauri’s friend who told her Gauri went to Mumbai to search him and had lied to her mom as she could not see her mom sad she requested om not to tell anything to GM and leave. They leave and as the dusk was set the settled in a hotel.
In the hotel room:
Shivomru and somya were sitting and Anika jahnvi and Gauri were outside the room evesdroping the conversation and om was crying: I could have at least heard her it’s all because of me,and my stupid ego.
Shivaye: om it’s ok.
Om: how can it be ok shivaye? You have heard what Gauri’s​friend said she is alone that too in city like Mumbai I mean she could​ hardly make ends meet and she’s​ sending money for her mother too I hope she hasn’t​got into some big trouble.
Shi: so if you find her will you accept her?
Om: of course I mean after hearing everything she’s just perfect the girl I always wanted strong caring honest and most importantly she knows the value of family.
Shivaye smiled : anika!! I think I’m has learned his lesson it’s enough now come!
Everyone looked shocked to shivaye.
Even jahnvi chulbul and Anika entered the room clueless Everyone in the room stood up shivaye went forward and pulled chulbul’s wig and cap and pushed him towards om : here now apologize and take your Gauri with you.
Gauri fell on om who supported her and they had an intense eyelock.
Both of them cried and the eyes said it all.
Everyone else smiled seeing them after some time they settled shivaye sat and pulled Anika towards him and made her sit in his lap similarly om too did somya looked at rudra
Ru: what?? Soumya my legs will snap.
She gave him and angry look he smiled and and pulled her beside him and sat side hugging her.
Jahnvi was glad to see her children happy.
Anika: waise billuji how did you know our plan.
Shi: my dear I am shivaye singh oberoi ..
Ani:haha have you shown your tadi now tell .
Shivaye: remember that time we were in Gauri’s house and I received a call.
Scene is shown:
Shivaye is going out of the house and Anika sees it and gets tensed that he will know the secret so she acts to slip.
Ani:ouch !?
Shivaye cares for her but sees her signal someone and she doesn’t let him see the person.
Shivaye has an idea and takes out his phone and thrandough front camera he could see jahnvi and chulbul running and then he called his contacts and found out every thing.
Scene ends.
Ani: haww why didn’t you tell me.
Om: bhabi you too didn’t tell you all were just seeing from distance na.and shivaye you?
Shivaye: how could I it was afterall badi ma’s plan and I too felt it was needed.
Gauri: wow bade Bhaiya aap to bahut intelligent chirote ho.(you are very intelligent” chirota”)
Shi: thanks wait what? Chir..
Gauri: are chirote means boay.
Om: laughed: she means boy
Shi: first anika and now she hamari language ki to oh my mata honi h.( They will do oh my mata of our language).
Everyone burst into laughter.???

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42 Comments
  1. awesome

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks anaya

  2. Awwwww on Rumya hug was mind blowing. And finally they lived happily ever after(hopefully on the same floor 😉 :p

    1. Aditi9

      Haha I love rumya they are cute

  3. AWESOME EXCELENT AMAZING SUPERB????????

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks dear

  4. Nithu

    superbbbbb di…..

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks nithu

  5. WOW!!!!!!! Excellent os dear……

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks banita

  6. Excellent. Aditi dear, keep writting.

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks arpita

  7. Verna

    Its really good

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks dear

  8. Thedreamsoul

    Wow Aditi , this is awesome . Loved it and keep writing dear

    1. Aditi9

      Thank you so much dear

  9. Himani_816

    Awesome

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks dear

  10. Niriha

    Awesome ..fabulous os dear

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks niriha

  11. Nice dr and jhanvis point of view is nice

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks arthi

  12. Alekhika20

    Asum updt

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks dear

  13. Somya

    Superb

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks somya

  14. Gayathri.visu

    Fantastic os….

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks dear

  15. Madhuchhanda

    Awesome hope the truth comes out like this in the show too and omkara should accept gauri

    1. Aditi9

      Hehe me too?

  16. Just awesome superb fabulous

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks dear

  17. Anu16

    Superb loved it

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks anu

  18. Nice. Om accepts Gauri… That was really superb . Hope IB mein bhi aisa hi ho

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks Parvathi well I too hope so??

  19. Haridhra

    Hi Aditi di☺☺… It was an awsm OS.. N Shivaay naa chupchaap baite but knows everything n waiting 4 his biwi to say? ..But a small disappointment u didn’t add Shivika confession..?? but fine n a big wala Sry 4 late comment..

    1. Aditi9

      So sorry for late reply dear but thank you so much for commenting and dear ya I too thought of it later that I had missed some shivika scenes but it’s ok shivika are made for each other and it didn’t need words to convey that??

  20. Jayanti

    awesome os….loved it….why can’t cvs also show something like this…this story is very cute…specially gaurikara’s scenes

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks dear jayanti I too hope CVS show something like this

  21. Nivedita

    Nice to see the Obros together in DBO! ??
    And Rumya! ?

    1. Aditi9

      Thanks Nivedita

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