My search ends in you (episode 1)

Hi I just wanted to try this……..plzz do tell me if it is bore…

The Sun rose in the east filling the world with happiness and giving everyone a hope for a better tomorrow. The flowers in the garden smiled at the Sun’s rays falling over them. There was a cool breeze to wipe out the dark images of yesterday. Overall it was a pleasant morning. It was a kind of day when people preferred being out of doors, especially in the garden soaking their skins with Sun’s heat, rather than being indoors.
A house comes to our vision. It is something which catches our eye. With its well maintained garden filled with flowers of different colour, it has a certain charm. It reminds us that whatever dark phases you had in your life there is always a dandelion of new hope. Hope that our life will have a colorful phase.

Though the house filled our hearts with joy it did not radiate happiness. It has a window that opens to the beautiful garden. It is adorned with curtains in green (signifies hope). Peeking through the curtains that are now fluttering in the soft breeze we could see a young man in his mid twenties lying on the bed fast asleep unaware of the changes that happened around him. He has very handsome features and a face which you will not forget so easily. He is that handsome. But his face lacks happiness happiness and it reveals his agony. He has his eyes shut tight and he is tossing his head on the pillow trying to ward of the dream that had crept into his sleep. He had been seeing this for over a week now. Suddenly he woke from his slumber screaming: “ Radhika……………….”

So how is it?????? I thought to walk through the trodden path which Arjun took to get back his life Radhika………plzz tell me whether I should write more of it or should I stop here ??????

Credit to: aastha

61 comments

  1. Supriya

    Hii my assthu……loved it…..u know even I wanted someone to show Arjun’s struggle to get Radhika back…..darling amazing plot….but I want rads to be rude…..i hope this z continued from the day rads left arjun… m I r8?????plz plz plz do update soon assthu….. Loads of love….tc???

    • aastha

      Hey my cutie pie…….happy that you liked it……..Rads may not be rude…well I dont know….I’ll try to post as soon as I can…………

      • Supriya

        Thanks for the reply assthu…… Now tell me wen z the next one I can’t wait to praise my assthu again…… Love you dear…..

      • aastha

        I don’t know dear………….but I’ll try to write and post sooon………..most of the times I simply waste my time by watching TV………that’s y I’m not regular…………love u dear……….

  2. Ammu

    Aasthu..it is nice dear…u described morning perfectly..epozhm parayunnathu pole ee scenes okk really kanu nnathu pole thonni..waiting to see Arjun walk through d right path for his love..tc dear

    • aastha

      thanks ammu chechi…………mrng scenes really kannunathu pole tonne enno paranjappol othiri santhoshamayi………………..love u….tc………..

      • Ammu

        Aasthukkutty..nk thonnunu resultnte karym orthu tnsn undenn…dont b tensd..ma lil sis..

      • aastha

        chechike ariyilla ente avastha………….enikk pediyavunnu………..mark kuranju poyal enikke clgil admission kittila…….atorthe tension aakunnu…………..

    • Ammu

      Aasthu..i dont knw what 2 say…nthayalm nalla collgl thanne eng lit. Adm kittm..njanm inganok thannayrnu karuthyath..pne aasthu vnte writing style kanumbol aryam ethre talentd aanennu..

      • aastha

        Thanks chechi…..ente result ennanu varunnath………………nallatanengil njan parayam………………and thanks for the comment on my writing style…………..love u……….

      • aastha

        hey ammu chechi………….enikke 87 percent und………….happy aanu bt sad coz I din’t get the expected mark for maths ……athiu kuranathukond ente total percentagum kuranju……………pakshe physicsinu expect cheyatta mark kittiyatil othiri happy aanu……………..2 days njan evide undavilla……….njan oru resedetial coursenu pokuvanu………………..bye……………..love u………………thanks for the comforting words…………………..chechi padikunna clg etha ???tvmil aanenu ariyam bt name ???????? wich year ??????

      • Ammu

        Oh..congrats dear…its a nice percentge.nk 85 aayrunu.pinne doubl valuatn allayrno?reval uation kodukan pattila lo?degreeyk ernaklm clgs thanneyano udheshikunne?njn ippo 4th sem aanu..xams in june. Pls check fb dear if u can.

  3. Gianna

    Aasthu wow wow wow what a suprise but why so short it’s like putting a chocolate cake infront me and telling me not to eat it. I want more post soon my darling. Loads of love ????

    • aastha

      well I din’t kow whether you guys would like it…..so I thought instead of boring you guys I would write a short one………….happy that you liked it……..you know what di ?? you put me in the clouds……love u…………….

    • Yaar I am so sorry I wrote soshort comment… Actually it was midnight and my battery was just 2% lol…. And my charger is not at my bedside but i really wanted to comment …so just…
      And lemme tell you I loved your narration !! If its first try then seriously loved it! Lookingforward 🙂

      • aastha

        thanks Roshi………I’ve always loved to write narration coz its something whichI like and I think I’ve got some talent to write…………….and don’t be sorry for the short comment….short or big you had commented which itself is a great thing coz encouraging sme1 is really gud thing……………….love u…………TC……

  4. Rg

    Hi really nice. So yes u should continue. The way u described d morning was too gud. And I would love to c arjun s through ur eyes.

    • aastha

      glad taht you liked the morning description………….I’ll continue………….

  5. jade

    OmG!! You should definitely continue this story! It’s so beautiful and the way you narrated it is exceptional!! I’m your fan already! Plz update soon!

    • aastha

      oh Jade , I’m very very happy reading ur comment…………I’ll try to post sooooooooon………..

    • aastha

      thanks suga…………..your comment pushes me to write more…………love u…………

  6. Is this the same aasthu dear or another aastha…totally new pack…Arjun pain or in panic??? Or nothing like that m dreaming only…plz continue…update soon?

    • aastha

      hey Rosie di…………its me……the same aasthu………………happy that you liked it………..well Arjun is in pain……….coz Rads went away……………..

  7. Hey aastthu dear..good start pls gohead…thanx another story…love u ..tc..all the best for good result…stay blessed..

  8. Gauri

    Hey Aastha very nice thought….please continue…will love to read it …load of love 🙂

  9. nisha

    hey aasthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    sweetheart

    the writing what u had started here is serene

    totally I like the way you portrayed this story

    Search ends hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm where do you want this search to end
    huh.

    Nice character of arjun here dear

    Lovely I never knew you write so awesome I loved it dear

    do post next part keep smilijng aasthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    Once a friend always a friend

    • aastha

      nishuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu I’m smiling now tension free for the first time this morning reading ur comment……………….coz tday my results r coming……..it was supposed to come yest bt they posponded it……………..I never tot you would comment………and I feel as if I’m in the clouds………………love u a lot and lot…………….ONCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND………….

  10. nisha

    hey aasthu just get to know about ur writing so I came

    as i said before Once a friend always a friend.

    hey aasthu check enemies from childhood there also I gone and share my heart.

    love u dear all the best for results and I am on cloud 10 that I can reach you now in your own home your own page

    love u aasthu tight hugssssssssssssssssssssssssss keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend.

  11. nisha

    love u aasthuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

    hey check enemies from childhood too

    I got there to read and comment

    love u aasthu and all the best for result

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend

    • Roma

      Omg ….nishaaaaaaaa. …where were you honeyyy????????…I missed you sooooo sooooo soooooooo muchhhhhh. ….how many msg I left for u….u haven’t replied to any of them….plz reply now n let me with you and aastha and alll my lovely friends. …I wrote a short story on my mom…My Super MOM – Happy Mothers Day (OS)….plzzzz read it n let me know your feedback. …here is the link…
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/super-mom-happy-mothers-day-os/

      Love you soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeethearttttt musical friend. …muaaaaahhhhhh lots of hugs n kissesssss. ..

  12. aastha

    hi di…………sorry for the late reply………I had gone to a class…………I have good results…..bt I’m sad that I din’t get the expected mark for maths…..but then agai happy that the mark I got for physics was unexpected………………….thanks for the wishes…………..I’m going for a residential class for 2 days……..so I wont update or be here for 2 days………………anyway I’m very happy that I got to chat with u after a long time………….di are you there on FB ??…………. love u……………….ONCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND………………………….tc……………..

  13. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww lovely aastha….it’s very beautiful start …arjun’s struggle for rads very nice plot…n your narration MashaAllah. …very beautiful. …plzzzz continue dear. …I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh 😉

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