school love part 24

Hey guys ridhima here…hope u all missed me…thanks for ur immense love nd support….it really means a lot to me….sry for nt replying individually…??…
Nd shreya plz tell me the name of ur ff….i wud love to read it…??

Here we go

Part 24

Scene starts with twinj coming to the hall….tw was sitting on the chair wid blindfold…. kunj aftrr smetym removed the blindfold….nd
Kunj- HAPPY ANNIVERSARY JAANN……
( they were standing in the middle of the heart shapped glasss chamber….rest all the hall wss covered by pink nd white balloons….wid a sweet fragrance in the air….)
Tw face turned into a happy one seeing this…bt the very nxt second a tear dropped down her eye… yes a tear….nt of happiness bt of helpnessness…..she felt ssoo bad that tymmm…on the very important day of her life she is sitting like a lifeless body….she jst cant tell her husband what she is feeling now….hw much happy she is seeing all this…. bt on the other hand thinking of her condition…she felt as if smeone is stabbing her continously….she thought….if there wud have been smeone else inspite of kunj then she must be dead till nw or the person cud have thought of her as burden nd she wud have been lying on a bed in hospital…. bt this man..kunj….in this condition of hers jst wnted to give her extreme happiness… she was feeling proud of her love bt ashamed of herself…..either it is nt her fault bt stilll….
As she was busy thinking all this….kunj saw a tear falling down her eyes…as if he undrstnd thru that only that wat situation she is caught in….. THIS IS TRUELY SAID LOVE DOESNT NEED WORD…IT IS JST THE LANGUAGE OF EYES…..IN LAST TEN MONTHS ONLY HER EYES WERE A SOURCE FOR HIM TO TALK TO HER…ya for a few months she didnt communicate wid her eyes too….as if she if miffed wid him for sme reason….bt then after a 4 months…..she started speaking wid her eyes…bt still her body parts refused to work…. bt he never left hope….
Kunj settle himself to the height of tw…- holding her face in his palm…- jaan….wat are they….pointing towards the tears which he collected on his fingertips….( acting angry….)- hw cud u do this..???? Hw cud u waste this precious pearls…..??? And today…??? Like seriously…( pouts)…i thought u will like this bt its ok if u dont like this i will think smething….

At this tw wanted to say him that are u an idiot…??? Who will nt like tis..???

Kunj- ( wiping her tears completely…)…- i know tw what u must be thinking nw…. i know i cant change the destiny….bt i promise u i will make todays day as u wanted….. i will make this important day a unforgettable for us…. bt for that i need ur support that is ur smile…nt this tears…..
On tis statement tw smiled a little……

Kunj- okk so madam dont u want to see ur gift…..OH SHIT!!!!! sry sry sry i m soo much big bhullakad…. heheheh…lets cut the cake first….

Kunj brought a trolley inside the chamber nd on it a small cute cake was placed…offcourse specially made by our kunj for his siyyappa queen…..after the strruggle of 5 hrs…??… he brought cake near her….??…
He held herrrrr hand nd they both cutted the cake….
Then afterr the cake ceremony…..kunj picked tw in bridal style….nd took her inside a room….
Rooom
It was beautifully decorated wid only nd only tw’s photo in oneside of the hall…2nd wall wid kunj’s photo nd third wid twinj’s together….
Nd one wall was empty….
Kunj kept tw carefully on a chair in the room….
Nd sat on its arm….( chair ki..??)..
All the while her eyes were glowing….
Kunj- so mrs.sarna do u liked it…bt u know wat 4 this wall is empty….
Tw made an confused face….
Kunj- ok i will tell u….( pauses) wrapping his arm around her shoudler….)…..for our children…. actually i thought on our 25 anniversary… i will place our children photos over here….nice na… i know i m soo good….
He keeps on blabbering abt himself….
Whole the while tw was jst looking him….wid lots of love….
Finally his speech abt himself came to an end nd he carried her to there room nd both slept peacefully…..

Next mrng…..

Evry mrng covers the darkness of the last night…it explains that darkness can never be forever…it will end either fast or slow….sometyms the dark phase of life is like that of winters which is long….nd smetyms likr summers which is small… bt the common thing b/w them is that it will end….either now or later…. we wish that the dark phase of twinj’s life end soon….as it has now exceded the tym of winter nights….??….

Kunj sleeps get disturbed due to sun rays….he opened his eyes only to his life sleeping beside me….he turns nd was jst busy in adoring her beauty while sleeping….
He thought…- nw this is enough i m giving lots of hope to tw…bt the thing is that nw i m also losing all my hopes….i cant seee u like this anymore it kills me tw….
His thoughts came to an end wen he saw tw opening her eyes….he plastered a smile on his face nd pecked her lips…wishing her gd mrng…nd happy anniversary….
Later on he gets ready nd makes tw ready as well…..
Then they both left the house…nd reached kunj’s academy…this is the same academy where kunj used to teach others…..after winning the competition nd making albums… he never felt himself high…may be this is the reason…he still works over that place….as he feels teaching others the things we have is the best way of charity…. bcz no one will have to beg for money or other materialistic things….if they have the real valuable thing that is talent… or the education, knowledge abt any field….

He took sme papers and then left from their…..
After smetym of driving they both came to a big mansion type place…..( think of sarna mansion in real series..)..he took tw inside on wheel chair…. he handed over that paper in the hands of tw….
Kunj- see tw i said na i will make ur smll wishes cme true…see i bought this for us…. isnt it beautifull… he picked her up nd showed each nd every corner of the house…..

At last…..in the room…( twinj’s room…)…
He made her sit in the balcony….nd left for attending a important call….. wen he left the room…tw tried to move her hand nd leg wid full force…..she tried to stand once bt fell down….again nd again……..

after smetym kunj entered the room….
he was shocked to see the view…he felt as if his soul left his body…. his legs started to shake nd started sweating badly….

To be continued………

hw ws it??? Wat happened at last any guesses…. ???
vaise guys dont u ppl like school love…wanted me to end this…??….????
Okk leave this….vaise ek ques puchon…???
Whom do u think is the real culprit behind all this…?????
ND ALSO TELL ME WHICH FF U WANTED NXT…?? I M CONFUSED…??….

Love u alll….??

29 comments

  1. Callmenazu

    |Registered Member

    hey ridhima d epi nyc will be waiting ti twinj reunion and plzz post d nxt epi of ur ff “LOVE STORY IN HEAVEN” and “ITS ALL ABOUT ME” asap will be waiting!

  2. Kruti

    |Registered Member

    Awesome epi ……might b twinkle stood up or she has fallen down on the floor which made kunj react so
    And pls don’t end the ff ya we never want u to do that
    And pls give an epi of it’s all abt me asap….eagerly waiting

  3. Dreamer...arundhati

    |Registered Member

    Ridhs dare u end this one
    Its damn good
    I m jut like when will the next epi come
    Post soon
    Plz post this and its all about me and that heaven one..Ik ..lol I told all bcoz I want them all

  4. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    hey ridhima so emotional yrrrrrrr loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! dnt end it dear. it’s amazing.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  5. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Awww…..rula diya yrr …Kunj’s emotions was so beautifully portrayed….
    No Riddhi we all love ur ff a lot not only this one but every ff ..it’s just that u asked us to guess which one u r going to end so I took a guess nd replied that might be it’s School love but plzz don’t end this one …
    I think Rt is real culprit nd next one then Love story in heaven …plzzz..

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Aww…..so sry dr..main rulana nhi chahti thi…. really sry…
      Awww…thanks for loving my every ff….nd i know that was a guess….
      for knowing abt the real culprit read new epis….
      love u re…

  6. Ria

    |Registered Member

    It’s going on nice.. please don’t end it
    Btw Ridhima if you get time, try reading my fan fic. It’s called “I Love You” – A Twinj journey

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Thanks dr…
      will try to continue it…..
      and madam i always have tym for my friends….i tried reading ur fiction…lekin kafi epi miss kiye na…isilye samaj nhi ayi…sry..??…. if u feel ok then plzzzzz……can u give a short recap of the d story….plz…..a humble request…only if u r free..

  7. Lovely

    |Registered Member

    Reaaally Awesome ridhi di..I think I should call u di only… Sorry Maine pehle bohot ridhi ridhi kiya hai…vaise ending it or not I leave that to you….and thanks for ur reply..
    Actually I am 13+..few months and I will be 14…
    And yes my ff is Yehi hai ishq
    And on the coming Sunday I am going to start one more ff …vaise toh Maine kisi KO title nahi bataaya but I a telling u
    Its ‘ Our Love Story’
    If you wish you can read that too
    I can’t assure that you will like them or not but I know itne bure bhi nahi hain…
    Loved the epi
    Love the ff
    Love you
    And yes
    Love me…?

    • Ridhima

      |Author

      Are wah ridhi to ridhi di….waise madam u can call me anything u want….i love it alll….nd hw dare u say i will nt like it…i will love it…bcz it is written by sissy….i will surely read it…nd thanks for giving the name…of ur ff…nd u told me first i m soooooo happy…??….
      nd also if u hve any sort of confusions abt romance nd all or words…then ask me… ???….. i will tell u jitna mujhe pta hai….lekin mail krio….???
      Nd ya love u toooooo….soooo much..??

      • Lovely

        |Registered Member

        Are my shweetu ….itna sweet reply …kaise toh mujhe comments bhi nahi milte…and I seriously hope that U will like it..and plz mujhe apni I’d dedo..I don’t have that…may be main apko message kar di..but still if you wish to dedo becoz mere pehle chapter main hi Romance dalna hai..

  8. baby

    hey ridhima di sry fr being sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo late it ws amazing osm episode di srsly luvd it

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