school love part 20 (Romance and shock)

..part 20….

twinkle( wiping smthng from her face)…rain..??

yeah it started raining making the environment more romantic nd pleasant…

twinj gets startled first seeing the rain bt very nxt moment started enjoying it….
they forget for a moment tat they were angry or pretending to be angry on eo…jst they cared is to dance like kids over their….??…. they were jumping, singing, to the fullest….

after sme tym the natural shower came to a halt….means rain ends….
then twinj pouts….??…
bt suddenly tw sneezes….oops… and again sneezes…. kunj became tensed and came near her….
kunj-( concerned)- are u fine????
tw- ye( sneezes again)….yessss..( rubbing her nose)..

kunj’-(angry)- ya i m able to see hw much fine u r…who asked u to play in rain wen u know tat u will catch cold….
tw- bt no one stopped also…( innocently blinking her eyes)….
kunj melts nd then his eyes land on a small house nearby…
kunj( pointing towards the house)- see tw their is house we can get sme help from their….
tw nods nd both started towards that house….
kunj knocks the door no response…again….no response…he gets frustared nd kicks the door….nd hell it wss open already….due to which kunj directly enters the house nd fell down…nd tw laughs seeing himmm…..
(guys i have a confusion…yaar sari empty roads nd houses inhe hi kaise milte hai….i never get soo??)…
tw- kunj u think urself as daya….????( laughs)

kunj- standing straight- ooo…plz i m far better thn daya…. nd i think the house is empty….( nd sees the house clearly)…i think we have enough rooms…u can stay in tat nd i will in tat….( nd started to move)….
tw – bt kunj we can stay in sme room….
kunj- its ok tw…no need…i wnt sme peace…( searching smething in almarih)…. see here are sme clothes change them otherwise u will catch cold…..( saying this he passes her a red clored saree)….
nd leaves the place…..
tw felt bad bt she went to change the saree nd goes to terrace instead of room….

# another room

kunj- ( in mind)- yaar tw u stopped ur pati manao mission very bad bt i will w8 for ur nxt step….

after sme tym…

the windows in the room started shuttering nd making sounds due to which kunj’s sleep gets disturbed….( wahan biwi tension mein hai…aur yeh mr… soo raha hai….??)…
then it started raining again….kunj became worried as he know tat tw is scared of this sounds nd all…
he leaves the room nd goes towards tw room bt ws nt able to find her….he became more worried…then he saw tat the gate of terrace is open…so he left towards terrace….their he find tw standing holding the railing nd in tat red saree…nd was crying..kunj feels bad for her nd angry on himself for this stupid behaviour….

then he goes towards her nd back hugs her….
kunj- i m sry tw..i think i over reacted….
tw turns towards him….her eyes were red due to continous crying….
tw- u think mr.sarna seriously…
kunj- i know i overrrrreaaaaacted sry tw…..i know u must be busy…bt i m dumbo, idiot, donkey…
( pyar mein log sachi pagal ho jate hai…see him…apne aap ko gaaliyan nikal rha hai…??)…
tw- i know ths long back…i hate u…
kunj- i love u…
tw turns away nd ws abt to go bt kunj holds the edge of saree pallu…
tw stops….then he slowly slowly moves towards her nd placed his hands on her bare belly nd rested his chin on her shoulders….nd

kunj- i love u tw…( saying this he touched his lips on tw’s earlobe sending shivers in her body) bt tw tried to free herself from his grip bt he held her more tightly…

boond boond karke mujh mein girna tera
aur mujh mein mujhse zyaada hona tera (x2)

kunj started kissing her left side of neck…this tym tw didnt resist bt enjoyed her husbands touch…..

bheega bheega sa mujhko tan tera lage
aaja tujhko peelun mann mera kahe
main naa bachaa mujh mein thoda sa bhi
dekh tu naa bachaa tujhme bhi
jalne lagaa garm saanson se main
tu pighalne lagaa mujhme hi

he make her turn towards himself….nd started kissing her forhead, eyes, nose….chin…nd allast leaned towards her lips…. wid in no tym…boths lips met nd they strted tasting eo lips as they have never did before……

tw hands were roaming in kunj’s hair while kunj’s one hand was caressing his milky belly nd other wss busy pushing her more towards himself…..

qatra qatra main jalun
sharm se tere milun
jism tera moum ka pighla dun…
karwatein bhi tang ho
raat bhar tu sang ho
tere har ek ang ko sulga dun…

bheega bheega sa mujhko tan tera lage
aaja tujhko peelun mann mera kahe
main naa bachaa mujh mein thoda sa bhi
dekh tu naa bachaa tujhme bhi
jalne lagaa garm saanson se main
tu pighalne lagaa mujhme hi

kunj picked her up in the bridal style..nd took her in the room….nd placed her on bed slowly nd again leaned towards her….nd kissd her..wid more passion nd love than before…

hone de kuch ghaltiyan
rengti yeh ungliyaan
jism ke tu darmiyaan thehra de
lamha koi garm tu yaa ubalti barf tu
mujhpe hoja kharch tu yun aake

bhiga bhiga sa mujhko tan tera lage
aaja tujhko peelun mann mera kahe
main naa bachaa mujh mein thoda sa bhi
dekh tu naa bachaa tujhme bhi
jalne lagaa garm saanson se main
tu pighalne lagaa mujhme hi

they consummate.
after sme tym….
they both were sleeping…tw was resting her head on kunj’s shoulder….nd was playing wid his hand fingers….while kunjs other hand was below tw’s head…

tw- kunj vaise u r a gr8 actor???
kunj stopped playing wid her fingers nd looked towards her….shocked…
tw- dont act soo shocked…i know u were acting of being angry wid me….bt why u did soo..u know i wss dieing of guilt….
kunj- hey stop it….i m sry tw….actually i was angry on u…bt seeing u doing things for me…i felt happy nd started to tease u…bt i dont know tat i will make u so much sad… vaise hw u know tat i was acting( raised his one eyebrow…)

tw- gunhegar jitna bhi shaateer ho koi na koi galti zaroor krta hai…( hw much sharp the criminal is…some or the other mistake is done by him)…
kunj- really…
tw- ye….she was nt able to complete her sentence as kunj captured her lips in his…nd again came over her….

next day….

@ music competition….

on stage…
host- so ofcourse as today is the finale of our competition….and all is going awesome…so to make it more awesome…we r going to welcome ofcorse the killer the heart of many girls none other then kunj sarna….

( note guys this is a final round nd they have to sing in couple….)….

lights gets dimmm…..
their we can see kunj sitting in the centre of the stage….

nahi jeena tere baaju
nahi jeena, nahi jeena
nahi jeena tere baaju
nahi jeena, nahi jeena (x2)
(tere baaju: without you)

main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere bina lagda jee
main tenu samjhawan ki
na tere bina lagda jee
tu ki jaane pyaar mera
main karoon intezar tera
tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

main tenu samjhava ki
na tere bina lagda jee
tu ki jaane pyaar mera
main karoon intezar tera
tu dil tui yon jaan meri
main tenu samjhawa ki
na tere bina lagda jee

mere dil ne chun laiyaa ne
tere dil diyaan raahan
tu jo mere naal tu rehta
turpe meriyaan saaha
jeena mera.. hoye
hun hai tera, ki main karaan
tu kar aitbaar mera
main karoon intezar tera
tu dil tui-yon jaan meri
main tenu samjhawan kee
na tere bina lagda jee

while singing song kunj was all lost in the eyes of tw who was seen singing wid him nd sitting beside her…. then he slowly gets up from his chair nd went near tw nd sits on knees in front of her….. tw also stands up nd strted moving round nd round of kunj……

ve changa nahion keeta beeba
ve changa nahion keeta beeba
dil mera tod ke
ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
ve bada pachhtaiyaan akhaan
naal tere jod ke
tenu chadd ke kitthe jawan
tu mera parchhanvaa
tere mukhde vich hi main taan
rab nu apne pawaan
meri duaa.. haaye
sajda tera kardi sadaa
tu sun iqraar mera
main karoon intezar tera
tu dil tui-yon jaan meri

main tainu samjhawan ki
na tere bina lagda jee…

at the end kunj wss all in tears….nd tried to touch tw’s face bt suddenly the lights came nd it is revealed tat the girl was nt tw…it ws some one else….

the jury started giving their comments abt the performance bt whole while kunj wss lost smewhere nd was having tears in his eyss….

as soon as they freed him…he left for his green room…nd cried hard closing the door….

then his phone rings….
( see guys vaise toh we r only able to listen one side conversation…bt i will make u listen the both side ones….ad he in ff anything is possible)….
he immedialtely picks up the phone….
kunj- dr…hw is tw??? is she fine???
dr- hold on kunj…keep patience…i know it is difficukt for u…bt u have to undrrstand tat tw met wid an major accident so her survival chances a
re less…nd if possible cme asap…
kunj- yes dr..i will be their in 30 minutes…..
then he cuts the call…..
kunj seeing in mirror- kunj u cant be weak u have to be strong for ur twinkle…she needs u…nd this doctor is jst scaring u..nothing else….
ur tw is fine absolutely fine…sying this he washes his face wid water…..

precap- kunj’s breakdown….??

bang bang….!!!!! hw ws the epi??? was the epi good or i bored u all like always???

as u all know tat tw met wid a major accident…so wat u think will happen to tw…will she survive or not???

nd nxt epi will be posted after 16 june….??
till then keep guessing tat wat is going in my small small brain??…

love u all??

Credit to: ridhima

12 comments

  1. Shakti

    oh my God…
    Twinkle’s Accident. ..
    Pls don’t kill twinkle….
    Don’t separate Twinj…
    Btw..I m a silent reader ….
    & the story is really great….
    but the last part shocked me….
    I don’t know whether u’ll consider my words or not…
    But still don’t separate or kill Twinj….

  2. fiona

    first half make me blush and second half make feel sad
    must say u are awesomeeeee…. ridhi (new name by me will u allow me to use this)
    love u loads

  3. bulbul

    Oh god plzz don’t separate twinj can’t bear their separation twice plzz make them one soon and the song made me almost cry very nice episode

  4. Sasmerra

    Ridhima we can’t wait till then dear .pls don’t kill twinkle .the song.the song was very touching

  5. panchi

    Awesome ridhi ………… last part made me sad …….. bt i knw nthng wl happen to twinkle …….. wtng fr nxt one……

  6. Sayeeda

    I’m 1000% sure that twinkle will survive….. but episode was full of romance nd shock too nd the song u selected was fairly fitting to the situation….. Wowww ….amazing… loved it.. nd yah come back soon can’t wait for next one…

  7. dreamer

    Rhidhima killer episode
    Yaar how can u manage 2 write so nice
    Anyways plz don’t separate twinj
    Ctd asap

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