SAVING PRIYANKA(OS)

Shivaay Singh Oberoi searched for his Paanika in the whole Oberoi mansion,checked the garden and then called her on mobile. The call went unanswered as there was no network from the other side.
“Saahil,Rudra”-Shivaay shouted to gain attention of both their brother,”where is my Annika”.
“Bhaiyya!!”- Rudra smiled,”Your Annika”.
He did a great work today of arresting Daksh for false accusation of spoiling the character of a girl specially at a point when that naive girl is his wife ,his innocent wife whose image is destroyed in front of him by that coconut shaped pony tailed friend of his.
“Where is my Annika!!”- Saahil repeated the same word that echoed on his red ear.
In a short time three of them rushed to the black suit wearing security guards for asking if they saw Annika going some where but were disappointed with the reply.
“Khanna!!”- Shivaay roared at the poor fellow,”check all the video footage recorded on security camera inside and outside of Oberoi Mansion hurry up!!”.
“No clue sir”- Khanna checked all the camera,”we have to search for Annikaji soon..I want to shoot another tod phod video between you”.
“What the wuck!!”- Shivaay started his black coloured BMW as Rudra took the passenger seat soon,”this Khanna is flying very high in the sky”.
“Bhaiyya not a word against Khanna”- Rudra show him the other three car following them keeping some distance,”He is very sincere,truthful and hard working guy”.
Shivaay looked at his body builder brother with unbelievable large Kanji eyes.
“Aap mat tadiye mujhe inn kanji ankhon se”-Rudra used the exact word his Annika bhabhi does ,”I am saying truth only”.
“Stop stop bhaiyya”-Rudra saw Annika sitting under the shadow of a large banyan tree ,”bhabhi is sitting in bhook hartal here ..she could have gone to Ramleela maidan ,New Delhi”.
“Shut up Rudra!!”- He said and rushed to his wife who was looking like in some deep thought unaware of the world out side.
“Annika..”- He directly hugged her near to his heart by his strong protecting arms,”I was so worried for you”.
“You came home early from office today”-She tried to hide her pain,”I was about to return home soon”.
“I did not went to office today “- He informed,”I went with police to arrest that Daksh after he flew under the nose of tight police security last evening after insulting both our relation and trying to insult Prinku”.
“Thank God that Ranveer stood for Prinku pehelwan”- Rudra reached his bhaiyya bhabhi to break their magical spell by his sense of logic,”Ranveer is really a nice guy”.
The other three cars stopped at the other side of road and a worried Omkara came out of along with Khanna and some other security guards.
“Shut up Rudra!!”- Annika shouted and Omkara with Khanna and Shivaay closed their ears,”Are you finding any wings on my arm”.
“Bhabhi..your arms are not attached to any wing”- Om tried to calm his angry Annika bhabhi down,”What happened to you”.
“So much of anger”-Rudra teased,”side effect of living with your Bhagad Billa for last few months”.
“I went to terrace to feel the touch of cool breeze but”- Annika went back to her fighting mode,”that cheppada Ranveer pushed me from the terrace down to the garden and I became unconscious there”.
“Daksh smiled like a psycho after getting arrested and threatened to destroy our family”- Shivaay get a meaning now,”he told that we will not be able to breath in peace and will be left with nothing”.
“That Ranveer acted like a good boy only Shivaay”- Om revealed,”you said that Prinku is pregnant so only I agree for their marriage other wise I knew that he was after our sister and was trying to trap both of us in a fake hit and run case”.
“Annika”- Shivaay keenly observe his wife,”did he hurt you ..let me check you”.
“Nothing happened to me”- Annika assured,”just I got a shock when Kaamini aunty threatened me to harm you”.
“That cheppadi Kutti Kameeni is not Ranveer’s mom”- Annika added more information about her great discovery,”they are just together to insult our family”.
“Huh!!”- Khanna felt like killing that dog belt wearing aunty with his bare hands…both his bare hands…
“Khanna”- Annika ordered,”time for some more action”.
“Lets go back and call the gynaecologist for an appointment”- Shivaay gave much needed order.
Om and Rudra looked at each other for gaining some happy news of becoming chacha soon”.
“Prinku should be tested with her pregnancy”- Annika pointed soon to bring the pehelwan and long haired creature back to earth from their dream land.
“Tien tien fiss”- Om got an infection from his friendship with Annika bhabhi,”Rudra we are dreaming too much”.
“We will punish the evil to an extent that no one will ever be able to recognise them”- Shivaay prepared his plan to trap their enemies,” We will trap them in their plan”.
“Bhaiyya!!”- Rudra hugged Shivaay . Om pulled Annika in to their group hug.
“La la la la la…
Lafzon ka ye rishta nahi
Lamhon ka ye rishta nahi
Sadiyon ka ye hai waasta
Hai rooh ka raabta
Na ab kabhi nazdeekiyon ki fiza ye
Aaaye na doori dilon mein
Karti hai aankein dua yeh
Koi khusi ho gum ho
Kahi jyada kam ho..
Koi khusi ho gum ho
Kahin jyada kam ho
Baatenge jo ho ata
Lafzon ka ye rishta nahi..”- Omkara sang their love anthem..
“All for one..one for all”- they kept hand at their heart,”DIL BOLE OBEROI”…
Shivaay looked at his brothers then his wife .he felt very proud and lucky to be with them”.
“My supporter, love and strength is with me”- Shivaay thought,” I am not going to let any one harm my family..my wife and my OmRu”.
Their mission is set as “saving Priyanka” from the clutch of demons…
“Sir I waste very precious time by coming with you here”- Khanna felt sad as he get no tod phod video today “I am very sad sir”.
“Ek minute Khanna”- Shivaay gave him an envelope that contained ticket to Singapore,”You should go for a holiday”.
“Sir there are two tickets”- Khanna tore the envelope to be more sad as he is still single and unmarried,”After working with you.. I forgot to marry . You gave me no time for that”.

51 comments

  1. VHM

    VHM

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    After reading the first line I understood that this OS is by Astha…such is the mark you made in by heart and brain…and what more to say as usual superbbb

  2. Bhavana

    Ohhh poor khannaji..I feel soo sad for him…astha di agli os mein khanna ji ko bhi ekk girlfriend dedena…Loved omru a lot!! Amazing one astha di!!

  3. Surbhi Sharma

    Aww di . This is awesome. But mujhe sab se zyada bura bichare khanu ji ke liye lag rha hai . Bechara . Na video mila na shadi hui .
    Waise di , mujhe lagta hai 2 tickets shivu apne aur ani ke liye laa hoga for HM di . But Bechara khana ko sad dekh ke usse de diya . See , how good my shivu is .

  4. Shree

    As VHM said me too felt d same…….while going through d lines i was getting more n more convinced tat this hs to be aastha only……d typ of humour u put in serious prts makes us understandable tat its ur piece of writing……..keep going my SBSA mate

  5. Gayathri.visu

    Gayathri.visu

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    Excellent di!! I really enjoyed it……!
    Mission saving Priyanka is start….
    See di, what ur bhaiya done with poor Khannaji?? He forget to marry bcz of working pressure…..feeling sad for Khannaji!! This much work, this is not fair di. Be careful di, Liji di is not gonna leave u, because u gave sad ending for her Khannji!!
    Omru are in dreamland….hahaha…..but their dream has very short life!

    • Aastha_Reddy

      Aastha_Reddy

      |Author

      Gayathri..Khannaji has a sad ending !!
      No dear he got a chance to escape from Oberoi family and fly to Singapore to lead a happy peaceful married life there..
      Thank you dear.

  6. Dhar

    Dhar

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    U just nailed it, poor khanna , give him a gf in the next one , awesome episode πŸ˜πŸ˜‚, u just made my day

  7. Ahsana98

    Ahsana98

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    Hai Astha Di it’s me AHSANA.it’s was an super duper OS Di. You are an Amazing writer. Iam feel very sad for khannaji ,after working with shivay he forget to getting married .poor khannaji Iam agree with bhavana you must show your next OS khannaji’s ishqbazzi .I’m waiting for that.

  8. Nita D

    Nita D

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    I knew this had to be u ashta…..it’s just awesome…..

    Wase I know I haven’t been TAAD-ING undeniable desire for a few episodes now…..I’ll be back on May 16 and th as when I’ll read all those chapters, or rather sab chapters ko taadu gi….

  9. Soha

    Soha

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    hahaha omru dream so sad there dream is only dream it was awsome yaar even khanna rocked keep it up

  10. Arpita

    I just knew that it was you.wjo only can write this khdki tod Os
    It was wonderful.
    Specially last part khannaji is un married πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Liji dear will be in cloud nine πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

  11. Vivikhta

    Vivikhta

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    Asthu di…..!!
    Again for the zillionth time am telling u…iIknew it!
    ONE look at the title..and Iknew it that u were tthe personbehind this…OMG!
    This was awesome dear……Kya khidkitod se bhi khidkitod os tha ye. .
    I think to stop liji di from bbashing your bhaiya, u have started giving a lot of space to khannu……am i right?
    Your os r always a package…sweet, funny, romantic and not too senti..just how i like it…
    Anika is really superwomaniya. ..terrace se girne ke baad bhi wo thik hai….and Ireally felt sad for kkhannuji….bechare . .na to video mila..na to shaadi hui. ..actually am thinking kahi aapne sso bhaiya ko ye toh nahi bataya that Liji di really likes HIM?
    Maybe that is why he gave him 2 tickets…..so they can have a trip to Singapore. ….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Btw…also feel sad for omru. ..sapno par panika and panivaay ne paani pher diyaπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Anyways loads of love and come back soon!

    • Aastha_Reddy

      Aastha_Reddy

      |Author

      Vivikhta…I never told Bhaiyya about Liji’s love for Khanna..
      You are right I am not sadist type author…Its always for fun so always happiness…
      Thank you dear. Love you and a thousand hugs for you.

  12. Thedreamsoul

    Thedreamsoul

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    Awesome Astha di , loved the entire part of it and yeah poor khanna , i couldnt stop laughing at that dear . do write more and it was a treat to read it πŸ™‚

  13. Banita

    Awww!!!!!!!! bichara khannaji…….. Really feel sorry for him….. hahaha…… btw it was SUPERBB!!!!!! di… Luv it…. & sry 4 late commenting di…..

  14. Tanz

    Tanz

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    Arre Khannaji , Anacondas ke saath vacation se to bohot acha tha Singapore πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚kya ending ki Ashta Di….really good…
    I think Om is too much infected by Annika’s company…..but this is the beauty of your writings….I really love itπŸ’—

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