sanskar’s swaragini -1-

Heya guys this is priya
This is my new ff of ragsan and swasan.
Hope you guys like it.
And please do comment whether i should continue it or not

Swaras POV

“12 may 2015, I can’t forget that date. From that day to this day you are lying on this hospital beds Sanskar. We were in Mumbai for our holiday. All because of me. We went there and this accident……….
All because of you are now a lifeless body i.front of me…..” I cried remembering those days.

I went to hospital with mom,
Sanskar is on the bed. Closing his eyes……..
‘when is he going to get up doctor??’ I asked the doctor checking my husband
‘may be in a day…..’ He said
‘what…? Really?? Thank god’ I shouted in excitement.
‘may be a month, a year or may be forever he will Ly on the bed.’ Doctor said

Mom and I were with a teary eye after listening that……..

Don’t worry swara. He will, definitely come back……my heart says’ some one from door said that.

I turned to see him, who was coming to us.
‘hoping so Laksh’ I said to him with no hope in my heart and with a teary eye……………

Raginis POV

It has been years since i came here, to Belgium with you. But now you are not there with me, you are somewhere. You left me. Without you I’m feeling like a lifeless body Sanskar.
It was all my fault Sanskar. Because of me, you left this place. All believe that your dead, but i know you will come back soon…… You will not leave your Ragini like this alone forever. All this happened in India, i must have not forced you to go to that Mumbai……you went and never returned back. I love you Sanskar, i love you so much……

‘Ladoo come have lunch’ my ma, she interrupted my thoughts…….. I wiped off my tears and turned back.
‘were you crying ladoo??’ My ma asked, ma haain, she knows everything.
‘its all because of me ma, he left us maa’ I said hugging her.
‘no ladoo it’s not you, its us who forced him to visit India’ my ma said…..

I was silent, not able to speak, tears rolled on my cheeks….

Soo guys hws it?? And do you want me to continue this??
Please tell me. I need your support and suggestion…..

Credit to: priya


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