Sanskars story…ts part 2

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Hey everyone…..I’m back with the 2nd part……sorry for the mistakes….and thank you all for ur support and thanks to all the silent readers too…

Swasan were still hugging each other…
Sanskar:…Swara….how did u know I came……
Swara:ragini called me yesterday….so…
Sanskar:hmmmm….so…
Swara: Sanskar….if u didn’t come now naa….I really don’t know what would I do…Mom and dad started looking propasals….
Sanskar: hmmmm..

Swara(breaking the hug):what hmmmm???…only I know how I’m breaking all those since last years…..when will u talk to dad???
Sanskar: Swara….will he agree…??? U know…
Swara: Sanskar…I loved u….ur true innocent heart…not anything else….and about money and all… I really don’t believe that money can give all the happiness…I’m sure ur hardwork will get its prize soon….and we can really lead a happy life. ..

Sanskar just smiled and hugged her….
Sanskar:I love u….
Swara:I know..love you too….
…….Their blissful moment was disturbed by a call in Sanskar’s phone…..
Sanskar(gets disturbed by the call):ahhh…..who is this…..hmmm…Swara……u go to mom…I’ll come now……
Swara:..ok..but 5 minutes….be there….

Sanskar nods and takes the call after Swara left….
After sometime he went out to sujatha and Swara who were waiting for him…
Sujatha:..come Sanskar…..I’ve made all ur favourite foods….
Sanskar settle down..
Swara and sujatha: where were u in these years Sanskar/beta…

Sanskar:hmmm…mom….swara….I’ll tell…but when the right time comes…
“Whats there to say specially…. Would be wandering here and there and atlast when he couldn’t find any source for money,thought to came back…”: Kaveri comes from behind again taunting them…
Seema:and god knows what was he doing in these years…
Just then they saw Adharsh and Dp coming back…
Ap:.what happened ji???? Why did u comeback???… Any problem???? What is the problem adharsh??? U look tensed….and where is Sahil,he called me said he would be coming now as he needed something….but….didn’t see him….
Dp leaves without replying..
Adharsh:wo ansh called sahil, don’t know why……and …..mom….we lost a deal…we have been trying for that since last 3 years….and if we didn’t win tomorrow’s project,…then…….to pay the penality …..we should find a solution…or else….all our properties will be…….
Ap and suju looks shocked,

Kaveri and seema:what….
Kaveri:see seema,someone just came….
Seema:and…brought this badluck……

Sanskar was about to say something but was stopped by sujatha… He closed his fist tight in anger and left…. Swara aasures suju and went back of him….. She came in the garden and finds him sittingon the bench near the roses…..that was their place of meeting…. She found him staring the varities of roses planted…..
Swara:….Sanskar…
Sanskar: don’t try to cool me by ur stupid ideas…it won’t work…
Swara:but….

Sanskar: I’m tired of hearing all these Swara…….me and mom are hearing this since last 24 years…….
Swara: I know Sanskar…but…..
Sanskar:u don’t know anything Swara….u will bever understand what I’m going through… Useless,fatherless idiot,…these are the words I’m hearing in all these years from all…from my classmates,and these my so called family….. U know Swara, I used to get angry on mom…but now….I understand…it was not her fault…..maybe she fell for the love she didn’t get from these Maheshwaris without looking or caring about the status of the person……but….

Swara:shhh….enough Sanskar…. Don’t get stuck with the past…..u have to move on…. Take all these bad memories and make them ur strength….don’t let anyone use ur weakness….bury all pain and try to live fully…. And I’m sure just like these flowers u’ll also win and that day these people would never open their mouth against u…..(and she rests her head on his shoulders and holds his hands showing her support)

Sanska smiles a little and held her hand in his and stares towards the infinity….both slowly dripped to memories…….
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Flashback……….24yrs ago

Maheshwaris were the richest family in the place…. They owned several estates,schools,hospital and in short had crores of assets….. The head of Maheshwaris Devprasad Maheshwari was a typical orthodox Marwadi…. His sons dp,vp,kp and only daughter Sujatha…. All loved sujatha infront of the society but noone knew their real”love”…. Just kp showed love to her that too hiding from others…..

Sujatha fell in love with Ram, son of an ordinary accountant in one of their estates….. As they came to know about their affair,as usual Sujatha was house arrested and about Ram went unknown suddenly…. Maheshwaris told suju that he ran away stealing money from them…. But unfortunately or fortunately sujatha became pregnant…..so in finding no other way Maheshwaris allowed sujatha and her newborn to stay at mm,but they didn’t give her child a surname and never let an chance to torture both mentally and physically go….. Sujatha always tried to protect Sanskar from her so called family but Sanskar being a naughty kid had to face their angry faces….

Years passed…
Now Sanskar is 10 years old… The innocence and purity of his heart was clear in his cut face…but he was not a naughty kid anymore….. He became too silent bcuz of the continuous teasing from his classmates especially Samrat his cousin and the mental trauma he had to face from the family……
But in all these there were some who cared for him….his mother…..and sahil(11yrs) ragini(8yrs) and ansh(7yrs) even though they loved Sanskar,they couldn’t share sibling love as they were strictly prohibited from meeting or talking with him and they followed it….afterall kids will follow their parents orders!!!….
One day…which was not so good for our Sanskar…..

Sujatha was working in the kitchen and Sanskar was sitting on the slab doing his homework…after finishing it he tried to get up and by mistake his hands hit the vessels kept there….everything fell down making huge noice and the food too spread on the floor…. Hearing the noice all came down and seeing this dp got angry..

Suju:(scared for Sanskar and holding him tight) vo…bhai….it was…a mistake….
Sanskar(moving closer to sujatha):…. Sor….sorryy….
Kaveri:….ohh my god…..this useless is inventing new things to trouble us…
Dp(angrily jerks him):hey u…I have warned u alot na…
Sanskar(tears falls from his cute eyes bcuz of the pain due to dps tight hold)..vo..
Kp:(trying to defend)…leave him bhaisa…hes a kid….

Dp: don’t interfere kp,… I’m the elder…so I’ll decide what to do with this one…
Kp being frustrated leaves from there angrily….
Vp:let him starve tonight….so that he won’t repeat it…
Dp leaves Sanskar’s hand and he runs out crying… Suju was about to go back of him but..
Kaveri:oiii…where are u going…
Seema:clean this all and prepare the food…..
And all left leaving behind suju and ap….

Sanskar was sitting in the garden crying…. Just then he heard someone calling him.. He looked around and found a small girl of about his age sitting on a tree branch in the other side of their wall….
Girl:hey u…… Why are u crying????
Sanskar keeps on looking at her and on getting no response,she jumped from there and came near him..
Girl:why are u looking at me like this…answer me first….
She asked cutely. Sanskar kept looking at her who was looking like a doll in blue 3/4 and pink tee,hairs tied in a pony…

Sanskar:who…r…u…I haven’t seen you….
Girl:ooo…so u won’t talk to strangers…no problem….even my mom told this to me…hmm…soo…I’m Swara Gadodia….we just came here today….and thatbis my house(pointing to the building on the otherside..)…ok…now tell ur name..
Sanskar:…Sanskar…
Swara(smiles): hmmm…good name….
Sanskar: why did u jump like that….I may get hurt baa..
Swara:aww… I’ve many experience dear…but..

“Shona…” they heard a man calling..
Swara:upps…papa…
Shekhar:(from the other side of wall,but can see due to the spaces in design)…uff…shomi look ur daughter reached there…
Sharmista:oh my god…how did this girl went there… Swara……come back..
Swara:ok bye Sanskar….
And she runs to the wall and within seconds she climbed it and jumped to the otherside….
Shemish:Swara…..careful..

Sharmishta:what is this shona…..how could u..
Swara:chill mom…this are all easy…u can also try…
Shekhar:but swara…its dangerous…I may get hurt….
Swara:no papa…it’s easy bcuz of this tree…just one jump I can reach there….wanna try..???
Shekhar:ok..my dear….now come…or u will make us climb this…but u (to Sanskar who was looking at them) did she trouble u beta…
Sanskar nods in a no…
Shekhar:ok..then…swara let’s go..we have to arrange things inside…
Swara:ok….bye Sanskar….

And they leaves talking…Sanskar kept looking at Swara who was giggling in her father’s arms…
And this day Sanskar got a friend…. Whenever Sanskar gets sad somehow Swara will be there for him… Ragini and Swara became good friends as they were classmates…and therefore she could spend time with Sanskar too… Hiding from everyone sahil ragini and ansh made their relation with Sanskar strong……

Time passed… 9 yrs flew….( fb before 5 years)
Shekhar developed his business and is now a well known businessman… Swara and Sanskar’s friendship grew very strong……she always stood near him and always tried to bring the lost smile on his face…..she proved Sanskar’s believe wrong that she will leave him after knowing about him… Sahil and Ansh still hide their love towards Sanskar but ragini didn’t…now she didn’t care about their stupid believes and even though failed tried to raise voice against their mistreatment towards suju and Sanskar…..
Samrat kaveri and vp were jealous of Sanskar bcuz,he was always the topperwhile samrat just managed to pass… And their jealousyand anger reached the peek when Sanskar got admission in one of best college due to his merit……
One day,
Kp was out for some business stuff,ragini was at swaras place…

Seemas room…

A boy of about 19 yrs in yellow t-shirt and black pants is seen searching something….his face was not clear…. Seema is shown coming towards the room…. She opened the door and within a moment she saw the boy running out through the balcony(the room is at ground floor,so dont worry )..sge saw all room messy and the cupboard open…..
Seema(screaming):….bhabhi…..bhaisa…..thief………..
Hearing her scream all came out…..
Ap:seema..what happened…(sees the room)what is this??? Why this is all messy…???
Kaveri:oh..my…god….I think some….
Seema: u r right bhabhi….somebody tried to steal something from my room….(goes in and checks the cupboard)…ohhh….bhabhi..bhaisa….my 10000rps are lost… I’m sure….
Dp:(in anger) who had the guts to do this in my house????? It’s a shame for our prestige if this news goes out……

Seema: bhaisa…I’ve seen that one…but couldn’t see the face……that was a boy …may be 20-21 yrs….and…haa…yellow dress….that was in a yellow t-shirt……(she looks around and stares someone)
All follows her gate and finds her staring at Sanskar who was standing near sujatha….
Sanskar:why are u people staring me????
Sujatha:haa…I’m sure bhai…my son won’t do anything like this….
Dp:that will be decided later…now let us check his room…..
Sanskar: why to check my room????..it’s not only me in that age….and why don’t you people check them…
Kaveri:bcuz our sobs don’t have dirty blood like u…..they don’t need to steal…..
Suju:bhabhi…..
Dp:enough ………
And he goes to Sanskar’s room….and he got a bundle of notes under his bed….
Dp(shouts): What is this????

Sanskar(shocked):how…….this…..its….not….possible….. Pls…mom…I didn’t do anything….u trust ur Sanskar naa….pls mom….
Suju:bha….
Dp:sujatha….leave…..
Kaveri dragged sujatha out….ap was standing all helpless…. Sahil was keenly staring Samrat,who was giving an evil smirk unnoticed by others… Vp holded Sanskar preventing him in going towards sujatha….
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Here outside the room kaveri and seema was continuously taunting suju making her more broken….
Sahil came towards samrat who was a kind of enjoying these all…
Sahil:its u right…..???
Samrat:what…???
Sahil: dont act innocent samrat….I saw u coming from seema chachis room side and u were also in yellow…
Samrat(evil smile):….hmmm….so..what….
Sahil:…oh yeah….so what…..so it was u…not Sanskar….
Samrat:bravo brother….I found the truth……but….u could do nothing….no prrofs…..clean execution of plan…..right mom….???

“Right” kaveri came from behind shocking sahil….
Kaveri:oh sahil…..u r too much honest dear son…..but..so sorry to say,u cannot do anything…all paths have closed…..
Sahil couldn’t believe that his mother will do something like this….
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Sanskar’s side….
Dp(shouting):…speak up ……how did this come here???
Sanskar:pls believe me….I didn’t….I don’t know….

Vp:so thislnotes came by itself and got under ur bed????(to dp) this box will never spit out the truth bhaisa….why to waste time????
Dp(angry):….he have to ….. U….this is the last chance….speak up the truth…..
Sanskar:why don’t you people understand????… I’m saying the truth…..even if u ask 1000times,my answer will be the same….
Dp:hmm….so…..u won’t spill the truth…..I guess u need special treatment …..
He moves towards Sanskar dangerously….
Sanskar:beli….believe…me…..

Slapppp……… A tight slap fell on his face for which he stumbled back….he felt all the world around him rotating……. Even he has grown up,still they had a effect in Sanskar’s mind as he had grown up bearing all these….. “Speak up the truth” he could hear dp roaring…and he saw his hands raising the 2nd time,then 3rd,4th…..and….all went black……
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After sometime Sanskar opened his eyes and finds himself on the floor of his room….he could feel a shearing pain on his temple and he slowly woke up…. Now everything turned unbearable for him…..he took his certificates,some clothes,sujus pic with a man which she said to be his father,and moved out through the balcony…… And that night he escaped from that place leaving a letter to swara stating that he is leaving and would definitely comeback oneday……and left without turning back…..

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Swasan were sitting supporting each other…..their memories breaks hearing Sanskar’s phone ringing…….

Sanskar lazily attended the call and hearing something rushed out dialing someone making swara shocked and confused seeing his actions……..
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So thats the end of 2nd part…..hope all liked it…sorry if it was too boring…..and guys pls keep commenting…..

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28 Comments
  1. nice but it is similar to malayalam movie. thandhoni

    1. ARs

      Hmmm….yes…. I got this idea from that only….

  2. LOVEd iit

  3. awesome . i think it have similarity with pritviraj’s thannonni

  4. Mica

    goooosshhhhh so much sorrow he went trough, but it’s very good that it didn’t let him to wrong part and even God loves him, gave him loves from others…
    uuggh continue soon..

  5. Soujanya

    Awesome…?

  6. Seebu_s

    awesome..emotional…

  7. Simin

    Awwww baby had gone through so much
    Hope she becomes his medicine

  8. It’s similar to thanthonni movie right

  9. Awesome dear

  10. Awesome

  11. Aashi

    Superb!!!
    Samrat is too bad..gonna kill him and that kaveri useless lady!!

  12. Shreeyu

    Mindblowing dear… Loved it a lot.. Post next sooooo??

  13. Simi

    Superb dear

  14. Awesome

  15. Praju

    My poor sanskar. …. hope those idiots get severe punishment

  16. Awesome

  17. Arshaanya

    Oh god sanky n suju gone tru alot…. feeling so bad for dem…
    I knw nw sanky is succsfl n al bt dun want him to ever fgrve d maheshwaris…
    Even though sahil ansh loved him bt nvr showed dere love n sahil nvr sprtd so dun want sanky to b wid dem also… jus want him to keep rltns wid ragini… hope suju n sanky gt justice

  18. AnuAnn

    awesome dear

  19. Zelena81196

    loved it…. update soon….

  20. Jannatul.Nayma09

    Awesome
    Update soon

  21. Independent

    Loved it dear

  22. Tamil

    Awesome

  23. Shifa96

    Awesome

  24. Vyshu10

    superb…i guess sanskar has stood on his own legs and he was the one the mm ppl lost the deal to…let sanky show them ther place now

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