Sanskar..Zindegi meri Episode 5

Hello people..I’m so happy to receive so many comments…to be honest I thought that this ff is a big flop still I continued as u all know that I write for myself and you people and not your comments…after receiving so many comments….i thought that maybe there is something in it that u all liked……keep reading people…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/sanskar-zindegi-meri-episode-1/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/sanskar-zindegi-meri-episode-2/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/sanskar-zindegi-meri-episode-3/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/sanskar-zindegi-meri-episode-4/

The episode starts with…swasan r out with their kids…They went to shopping mall…..Raglak r even in the same mall…..They r roaming around and having fun..Swasan enter a shop..they were selecting something when they heard Sanskrit shouting….They ran to him leaving Sanskruti in the kid’s stroller/pram……Just then Ragini’s eyes fall on the beautiful princess sitting……..Ragini takes her in her lap and checks here and there….
Laksh;Ragini..what r u doing here?Whose kid is she?
Rags;I don’tknow Laksh….i found her sitting here…in the kids stroller/pram
Laksh and Ragini tries to find the baby’s parents but fail…Swasan r very tensed seeing Sanskrit..he has injured himself badly….blood is coming out of his mouth….as he slipped and fell….
Swara;Sanskrit..what do u do?How do u run and jump around like this?See now..what happened?
Sanskrit;Sorry mamaa…
Sanskar;Swarra Sanskruti?
Swara:U go and bring her here…
Sanskar goes but he is shocked to see Sanskruti missing…from the pram….
Sanskar;Swara…..Sanskruti is not here…..
Swara:What?Where is she? Oh god…..meri bacchi…..
Swara starts crying…They all try to find her…Raglak r also trying to find them…..
At last Swasan go to police…and Raglak come home with the child…Evryone is surprised to see them…..with the kid…
DP:Whose child is it?
Laksh;We found her in the mall…..
Rags;Papaji..its night….let her be here for today….we will go to police tomorrow….
Dp:Okay….
Raglak room…
Laksh is very happy to see Ragini playing with the kid…
Laksh;If….she would stay here forever?I will talk to the police..and if we don’t find her parents then we will adopt her…….
It’s the next day…..They go to police but they fail to get to know anything about the kid….
Three days later…
Laksh;Everyone..i have decided 1 thing…we r going to adopt her…..
Everone gets happy except Sujata….
Ragini;Thank u so much…..Laksh..this is the best gift…..u had ever given me….
Laksh:She is our daughter….
Ragini:I name her Lavanya….Lavanya Laksh Maheshwari….
Swara;Nehi Ragini…..
Ragini is shocked to here Swara’s voice…
Swara;I promised not to step in this house…but today I have to…..
Just then the police comes…
Ragini:What r u doing in my house?
Swara;U see Ragini…..my daughter is in this house so I had to come…
Policeman;Mr Laksh Maheshwari….she is the mother of this child…….
Rags is shocked…she held the child tight…and the kid began to cry….
Swara goes near her and takes her daughter from Ragini’s hand..Ragini doesn’t wish to give the child…
Rags;She loves me Swara…don’t separate me from her..see she is crying…
Swara;I’m her mother okay Ragini? She was crying because u held her so tight……u see Ragini…..this is the difference between a mother and any other lady…..i understood my daughter’s problem in a min…and see after coming to me she is quite….she knows her mother’s touch….
Police leaves and Sanskar enters MM House aalong with Sanskrit…Sujata goes and hugs him …
Sujata;Chora…..u here???I missed u so much..now don’t leave us chorra….
Swara points her finger at Ragini;Get this straight…she is not Lavanya Laksh Maheshwariii…..She is Sanskruti Sanskar Maheshwari….
Ap asks the maid to take the kids to their room…including Sanskrit and Sanskruti…they r not actually understanding anything….
Rags;Swara…today u and Sanskar again took away my kid from me…
Swara slaps her….
Swara:Chup kar Ragini….aur kitna galat samjhegi tu? I did not see such a selfish women in my life like u…..u r saying that I and Sanskar took away your kid again?Ush din bhi maine tumhara bacha nehi chinnah tha aur aj bhi nehi chinnah hai….i just snatched my daughter from your hand whom u were hurting…..
Sanskar;Swara…bas karo…
Swara;No Sanskar….i need to tell her that she is wrong….u Ragini…u think that u have your family right?Let me tell u…u have nothing…your family members pity u…they don’t love u..and see me here..i have my husband….my son..my daughter……that day u separated us from our parents and now u r accusing us that we separated u from your child?
Rags;Yes..u did…..because of Sanskar’s rash driving I lost my child….
FB shows…..they all r having fun and r returning from party…Swasan r sitting at front and Raglak r sitting at back……Sanskar was driving in high speed…Swara was 7 months pregnant and Ragini was 4 months pregnant…….
They were going…just then Laksh asked Sanskar to drive faster……They were talking and the car was on speed…..suddenly the car hits a tree…..as Sanskar lost the control……As a result…both swara and Ragini lost their children…..
FB ends….
Swara;Oh Ragini…..u remember that Sanskar was driving but…don’t u remember that it was your husband who asked him to drive faster……
Ragini:I’m so shocked Swara….because of him u r fighting with your own sister?
Swara:Sanskar……Zindegi hai meri…….and u tried to hurt my Sanskar……how can I forgive u? u were so selfish…u….u threw him out of this house……u thought about yourself only…..in that accident…..u did not lose your child only….even we lost our child…..Sanskar lost his child…..i was 7 months pregnant……..after 3 months…we would get our child…and u were just 4 months pregnant….we were more attached to our child then u were…but u….u cared only about your pain…u separated us from our family at that time when we needed them the most….thats why I hate u……i don’t consider u as my sister and this man(pointing at Sanskar) he still cares for u…..he always asks me to forgive u….see now Ragini….god punished u…u can never conceive and we….we r proud parents of two children…..
Sanskar;Swara please……
Swara:See him Ragini..he still cares for his best friend…his laddo……u used to understand him more than me na? What happened?When u needed to understand him u misunderstood him….
Swara goes to the kids’ room and takes Sanskruti and grabs Sanskrit’s hand and leaves from MM house….

Precap:No idea…

Credit to: Eva

83 comments

    • anu

      can i ask you one thing why ragini is behaving with swasan like this? is there any connection between sanskriti and ragini? or why sanskar trying to stop swara when she is talking with ragini? please clear me …. sorry for asking but i got confused so asking please reply me.. and update next part asap.. waiting update regularly dont be late..

      • Eva

        Ragini thinks that Sanskar killed her child…thats why behaving like this..and Sanskar is stopping Swara cause he doesn’t want Swara to fight with her own family…being a great person..I want to be clear about it that there is no connection between Ragini and Sanskruti…i will try my best to update regularly dear….

    • Eva

      I don’t drag stories dear..when the story is going to end..my ff is also going to end..but I’ll keep on writing dear..

  1. Disha

    Hello Eva di…u r an eighth grader and I’m so surprised to see that an eighth grader has so much talent….i’m a seventh grader so calling u di…hope u don’t mind….u r a fab writer di…i read all your ffs..but never commented as I thought u r a swalak and ragsan writer…but this one is swasan..and I’m loving this..update soon…

  2. Kayra

    Awesome as always…mind blowing…i loved each and every dialogue of Swara today…..keep writing dear…

  3. Niharika

    Eva..tbh…i never expected an eighth grader to write like this…i myself is ninth grader..still I can’t write like this….u r simply awesome…

    • Eva

      I believe that if u start writing then u will prove to be a better writer then I am di…why don’t u start writing?

      • Niharika

        Mein reader hii acchi hu…yar..and yes…..i can write but not better than u……u r a fab writer……i don’t get time to comment even everyday….and writing ff is next to impossible for me…..

  4. Niti

    Kaha thi tum Eva? And u r writing this ff? I actually didn’t know that…thanks for the links yar….i just read all of them….they were superb…

  5. Kajal

    Ossum…i loved this episode……thank god the suspense is over….and Ragini…u should apologize to swasan….cause u did really did very bad to them…

    • Eva

      Yeh toh mere dimag meh aya hii nehi tha..btw nice idea…I don’t think ki meh aisa kuch karne wali hu…but not sure…

  6. Mugdha

    Osum….now I understood why your ff’s name is Sanskar zindegi meri..cause Swara left everything for Sanskar who is her life…amazing story line..

  7. Varsha

    Hehehe…she is not Lavanya Laksh Maheshwari..she is Sanskruti Sanskar Maheshwari…..beat dialogue…Ragini haha bhi buri hai…

    • Vishakha

      Dear….just imagine Swara’s pain……then write about her…..Swara ne sabka duq samajneka theka le rakha hai kya?Serial shows that she is mahan….at that time even many people….bash the serial writers…and now here…someone showed that Swara can live for herself and her husband..and u r saying that she is selfish? Ragini deserves this….how can she claim on Swara’s child?A mother can’t be so mahan to give her child to anyone…..how can Ragini ask Swara to not separate her from the child when she herself separated swasan from their parents?

    • Eva

      People r hating Ragini after this….and u r hating Swara?STRANGE…no issues…everyone has his or her own opinion…Ragini fan huh?

  8. Eva dear..u in 8th??me too candy..u write sooooo nice…n here the words ‘get this straight ragini. She isnt Lavanya lakshya maheshwari. She is sanskriti sanskar maheshwari. ‘ I loved this line soo much..n u know I read this part 2 times..plz post asap.

    • Eva

      She can be nice but u see because of Ragini swasan got separated from their family…Ragini just felt her pain but ignored swasan’s pain…koi bhi aisi situation meh accha kese behave karsakta hai?

  9. Asmita

    It’s really awesome. Plzzzzz undate soon.plzzzz understand our situation. We all eagerly waiting for ur update.???

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