Sanskar Laksh and Swara – One shot

hi frnds..
i m writing dis os coz i think dat sanskar’s love towards swara is 2 pure…

sanskar’s pov-
it was d shiny day..
I was standing in my balcony .. wid cup of coffee..
suddenly cold breeze touched to my face…
n I turned..
I saw one beautiful girl.. standing in d balcony …
I was shocked to see her…
she was my shona…

d girl who came into my dreams from childhood..
my frnds told me DAT der is new family shifted ..
means she is our neighbor..
I hv to talk wid her ..
my shona….
after few days…
I saw one small kid playing in d garden..
shona was playing wid DAT kid.. boy hugger her n called her “mommy”

I felt dat I listened something wrong..
meri shona kisi aur ki… na…

I wanna confirm dis news…
so I and ansh(DAT kid) became frnds..

one day he invited me to his home.
he took me to his home while holding my hand..

and I saw, “swara and laksh were too close”..
and after watching mangalsutra … it was confirmed DAT my shona is married to someone else..

I can’t digest dis…I wanna tell her DAT I m her true love ..
not DAT laksh….
.so I arranged one trip.. (d trip to d place of which dream I saw daily)…

may be she will remember abt our past…

swara’s pov-
when we visited DAT place.. I feel something strange . d peoples r calling me as shona.. n sanskar as varun…

I don’t understand why dey r calling like DAT..

dey took us to d place..
der was 1 temple..
after stepping into d temple, ” I saw one girl was running after butterflies.. and one boy was chasing her.. after watching dis, I was shocked coz it was sanskar n me.. but how?
one person told me abt our love story..
shona n varun .. lovers.. one day, d snake bites to shona.. hospitals r not in village.. so she died . but varun is also died.. coz he sucked d poison in try to save shona…

swara was shocked to listen dis.she hugged sanskar..

sanskar asked me,” will u be mine swara?”
I replied , “no sanskar .. I can’t.. I m married .. and dis 7 lifes r for laksh only… ”
he replied to me, “OK I will be waiting for u in our 8th life… ”
after DAT he gone away from mine n laksh’s life…
he was living in d another city..
he left his family..

laksh’s pov-
swara is mad.. she was not allowing me
to go for business trip.. coz she saw d dream DAT I m dying in d accident.. my partners laughed at me.. but wht to do? I didn’t go coz swara forced me to stay in home…

but @ night,i heard dat.. accident of our bus.. all my business partners r dead on d spot…
I was amazed…
actually in shock..
but suddenly due to d ring of call I came to my senses..
our landline phn was ringing.. and swara was busy in work..
so I received DAT call..
d caller said,”thanks swara.. for listening mine.. and not allowing to laksh to go for business tour..u believed on me..my dream.. be happy swara..”
and call was disconnected..
again I was in shock…
coz dis sound was similar to our neighbor, ‘sanskar’…
do they HV some relation?
I was confused.. coz sanskar and swara is in contact .. y???

while searching in our room.. I found d diary of swara .
after reading DAT I came to knew abt shona and varun’s love story…
and after reading DAT , I understand dat swara is mine for dis life.and I m happy coz she is mine.. and I promised my self dat in next life I won’t come in between dem…
dey don’t HV to w8 for 7 life.. to unite ..
in next life dey will be wid each other…
I prayed to god for dis ….
….
till today…
sanskar is like a angel..
who is saving us from small incidents wid his vision power ..
after watching at him… I understand d meaning of true love…
and true love is nothing but watching ur love happy …
he sacrificed his love… but for dis life only….

…. end…
I knw u guys will kill me after reading dis…
do comment…

Credit to: ambika

51 comments

  1. Nishitha

    It was really cool, awesome n excellent!!!!
    Quite emotional too…but you brought out the meaning of true love! Hope you write more soon

  2. Sanu

    Hey really it is awesome….true love doesn’t mean staying together oly….it is also sacrifice so tat der patners vl be happy in der lyf…..really it is good….

  3. L Khan

    Nce dear……something really very different which people in today’s world don’t even realise that

  4. No yrrr its amazing u have tell us the meaning of true love
    True doesn’t mean ro have her in yr life it means to see her happy wid it doest matter if she is wid u or not and i m fan of both swasan and swalak u have done justice
    wid both pairs swasan and swalak

    • ambika

      yeah kritika I will try to update.. actually I posted dis story as fun… coz here r both swasan n swalak fans… so just testing my writing skills …

  5. Well i will not kill u yr…itz too good itz the sweetest one shot i hv ever read…i wonder esa cute plot mene q ni socha πŸ˜› u nailed it…

  6. Lata

    Ambula it was really a good is…. True love is, “to be happy in your loved ones happiness” and days what it was all about…. To sacrifice his life long love for her this birth love……..
    Something was stuck in my throat after reading it……
    After reading true loves wait.. πŸ™‚
    Thanks for such a wonderful OS…

    • ambika

      yeah.. if u πŸ™‚ den I m also πŸ™‚ .. dis happens when we truely love someone… πŸ™‚

  7. Keira

    Ohhh plz I don’t HV wrdz and I don’t know wt I’m writing only 3 wrdz I can say MIND BLOWING, INCREADIBLE

    • ambika

      yeah its too emotional.. dats y I was not posting dis story.. but after reading d argument on swalak n swasan I posted it…

  8. Shagun

    Its amazing and we are happy that this laksh wil not come as Villain in swasan life in nxt birth

  9. it was really emotional one dear…
    i was seriously in tears after reading dis os…
    i seriously dont know d slightest meaning of true love but something connected me to dis story…

  10. Bisha

    True love..if thus is true love..den its amazing !! I loved ur os..but i do wonder how mny things cn define true love..

  11. musku

    Ur writing is too good…this type of love we can expect from sanky only ….unconditional love….true love…but laksh fir se kabab me haddi…lol plz do write more os…n update one month agreement

  12. Tooba

    Really nice……I’m sad that swasan didn’t unite but I’m happy seeing that there love was true

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