Sanskar Ki Sanskari Swara(swasan fs) by Marsuu Shot 13

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Sanskar Ki Sanskari Swara(swasan fs)
Shot 13:
Recap: Ranvir support swasan.

Swara cut the call with her shivering hands. She is breathing heavily thinking Nikita is with sanskar. She turn only to see ranvir looking at her confusedly
“You are okay??” Ranvir asked sensing her tensed.
“hmm” she hummed not feeling to say anything.
“I don’t think so” he said stepping forward.
” I want to be alone” swara whispered
“Alright” ranvir said understandingly and left from there.

USA(Sanskar’s House)
Sanskar panicked when Swara suddenly cut the call.
” Sanskar” said Nikita seeing him lost.
” what are you doing here??” He almost shouted.
” let me come in first” she said stepping inside and sitting on sofa.
“Actually I came to know your answer” she further continued
” which answer??” Sanskar asked getting irked.
“That You accept my friendship or not” She told hoping to get positive response.
” No I don’t want any relation with you not even friendship”he answered sternly.
“But why?!” Nikita asked getting disappointed.
“Its my wish just leave my house” he said showing her door.
“Sanskar….” She tried to say something.
“I said leave” he roared scaring Nikita.
“Okay plzz once again think I’m changed” she said and left.
Sanskar loudly closed the door running hand frustratedly in his hair he called swara’s no. But got disappointed when she didn’t received.

Swara is sitting on the bed and her mobile is lying near her, she is staring at the screen which was non stop displaying ” sanskar calling” but she has silenced it as she don’t want to talk or she don’t know what to talk. Her gaze unknowingly went to the ring in her finger which Sanskar made her wear while promising be to always loyal towards her.

Swara’s POV:
When I was struggling with my thoughts that I love sanskar or not, I never thought that I’m still insecure for him that’s why this thought came in my mind that he is betraying me. If I trust him then why will I feel hurt now. Love is secondary thing if I don’t trust him then our relation is of no use. On that day I had given him chance of course to take our relation on proper track. I didn’t give him one chance also to explain and assumed everything. I trust Sanskar he promised me that he will never cheat me again and on that day I saw truth in his eyes,there was no fakeness. Moreover in these months we became close enough for me to know he only wants me as his wife and he respect our marriage. I think its better to talk to him instead of creating misunderstanding which will eventually hurt both of us.
Swara’s POV ends.

Swara picked her mobile and saw 100+ miss calls from Sanskar. Within an hour he called her so many times like he was having that work only. Swara was about to dial his no. But before that only he called, she received the call
“Hello” swara whispered gulping her tears.
Sanskar closed his eyes tightly as the result tears made their way through his whitish cheeks he felt peace finally listening to her voice.

” Sanskar” she again called not getting any response.
“Swara plz listen to me”he finally spoke in his heavy voice.
“I’m listening” she replied.
” I wanted to tell you earlier also that Nikita asked me to accept her friendship but I forgot and now don’t know after months she came suddenly I didn’t even met her in all these months” He said in one breathe explaining her.

“I trust you Sanskar” she whispered wiping her tears.
There was silence, Sanskar need little time to believe what she said while Swara was waiting for his answer.
“U really trust me after what I did with you” he wanted to confirm again as he never want it to be false.
“Yes and I trust you and our new relation which we formed in these months” she said smilingly.
“Thank you for trusting I just can’t tell how I’m feeling”he said sniffing all the while.
“you are crying??” She asked feeling his heavy voice moreover he is sniffing.
“Yes” he accepted and chuckles.
“Why??” Swara wanted to know.

” I thought I lost you again” he said showing his fear to lose her.
” we both are still insecure about our relation” swara said
“But not anymore bcoz you trust me and i ….” He stopped before completing.
“You???”she asked curiously.
“I love you” he confessed letting few fresh tears flow down.
Swara forgot to breathe for several seconds. Her eyes which dried just now again got wet. Both are crying but now its not becoz of hurt or sorrow instead they are shedding tears of happiness. Swara was not getting words to speak.
” take your time swara I don’t need answer” he said understanding her condition.
“Thanks but I like you and trust you” she said feeling happy.
“And that’s enough for me” he said

“U know I want to confess in a special way but I was not able to wait” sanskar further said
“This was also very special for me” she said making him happy.
” ohh really” he asked trying to act astonished.
” okay may I ask you one thing??” she asked
“Sure” he said as he lie on bed.

“You were jealous when I went for movie with ranvir??” she asked suppressing her laugh.
“Yes bcoz I want you to only go with me”he admitted without any embarrassment.
“Ohhkk Mr Maheshwari next time I will be careful no need to burn” she teases him.
” Having great time making fun of me Mrs Maheshwari” he said cheering the moment.
“Of course how can I lose this chance” swara said as she look at ranvir who just entered the room.
“Let me come madam then will tell you” he said
“Will be waiting now bye”she said
“Bye and love you” he said

“Hmm” her cheeks turn pink listening his confession.
She cut the call and look at ranvir
“Sanskar was there??” Ranvir asked
“Hmm how you know??”She asked getting confused.
“Your blushing cheeks told me”he winks.

“Huh!! What Bought you here??” She tried to divert the topic.
“We have to go out as ma said to bring some things” he said getting up and moving towards the door.
“Okay” she also went after him.

To be continued….

Precap: Sanskar admitted in Hospital.

I’m extremely sorry for this small part but as I had changed my writing style here it was really difficult for me and it took tooo much time.
Tell me how’s it!?? Plz try if you can comment.
Thank you
Bye
Take care

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75 Comments
  1. Rosey

    Wow mars it’s super great year so sweet cute lovely awwww

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc

  2. Shreny

    Awesome…… finally he confessed….plz post next part soin

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post soon tc

  3. Maryam

    Amazing dear..!! Totally loving it dear..!! N dear, no need of changing ur writing style if u aren’t comfortable in it..!! Before also u wrote best so no need of that..!! N yes when are u gonna post MDBACM..!! I am waiting for it since ages..!! Plzz post soon Dear.. waiting n waiting n waiting..!!
    God bless u..!! Keep smiling..

    1. Mars

      Yeah you are right I will think of writing style thank you dear glad you liked it
      MDBCM Will give tomorrow morning I had written half only I’m really sorry for the delay. Will post soon tc

  4. Superb

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  5. Awesome 😍 😍 😍 😍

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  6. Independent

    Loved it thanks a lot for not making a misunderstanding and haan alsobfpr making that idiot confess

    1. Mars

      Thank you dii and yeah finally he confessed let’s see when swara will confess tc

  7. Bush1122

    Ufff… Swara trusted Sanskar… Great…!!!
    Their talk was really nice…
    Loved it aloooot…!!!
    Sanskar confessed… waiting for Swara’s confession…..
    Waiting for da next ome after reading da precap….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post soon tc

  8. Arpita arohi

    Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  9. Arpita arohi

    Awesome πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

    1. Mars

      πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’œπŸ’œ

  10. Hey dear.
    Very nice, awesome, superb.
    Update soon.
    Thank u.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post soon tc

  11. Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  12. Neptune

    Marsuuuuuuuuu…. what an amazing update ….. loved it to the core and much more yaar…..

    Swara’s trust on sanskaar was amazing… so heart touching update….

    Lovely dear .. continue soon.. and yeah the precap sounds scary… but am waiting for it eagerly….. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    1. Mars

      Thank you nepuuu glad you loved it will post soon tc

  13. Abirsha

    Awesome dr loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you diii tc

  14. Samaira_khan

    Awsm it was amazing.. I felt really bad seeing Sanskar ‘s condition though.. Thank God swara trustee him.. But still she took a little time.. Sanskar was so protective there.. I liked it.. Omg Sanskar ‘s accident I don’t want tht!! And y can’t Sanskar Nikita be frnds I mean like I think I didn’t read last update or something like tht.. I guess Nikita ‘s intention ‘s were not right the y Sanskar denied.. If not thr reason the could have been frnds I mean I didn’t understand this plzz reply..

    1. Mars

      Yeah she took time but the way their relation is she can’t instantly trust him and about nikita’s friendship that will be shown in coming updates its just sanskar was frustrated bcoz swara cut the call that’s why he shouted I hope its clear thank you dear tc

  15. Its Just Amazing Mars. Iam fida for your writing skills. I like there trust and love between swasan. i just loved .pls post next part soon pls………………………

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you dear I’m glad you liked it tc

  16. Harneet

    lovely …. i got scared first when swara was upset and she rejected his callsbut then when she trusted him , i felt reliefed .. love ur new writing style but be the way u r comfortable . next part soon . plz post he is dangerous … m waiting . bye love you tc

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear yeah will write the way I will be comfortable glad you liked it.
      I will post he is dangerous most probably tomorrow sorry for the delay tc

  17. Awesome epi..loved it..
    Thank you for showing their trust on each other..
    tc😘😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear glad u liked it tc

  18. Tweety_SwaSan

    Wow…Finally Sanskaar confessed… 😍❀ Not in special but still it’s special in its own way… 😍 Swara understood Sanskaar and there is no misunderstanding b/w SwaSan… 😊 And about trust, you showed it perfectly… Loved SwaSan conversation… 😍😍😍 It is emotional as well as cute… Don’t want any bad to Sanskaar and SwaSan… Thank you… Tc… πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ€—πŸ€—β€

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear yupp they cleared the misunderstanding let’s see what happen to sanskar tc

  19. Awesome dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  20. Gayathri.visu

    Wow….Swara trusts Sanskaar!! Amazing yaar! But precap, sounds scary…
    If u r not comfortable, then don’t change ur writing style dear.

    1. Mars

      Yupp swara trust Sanskar and will think of writing style thank you gayuu dear will post soon tc

  21. Awesome 😊😊😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  22. Really awesome yr..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  23. Awesome dear I loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  24. Awesome and excellent beyond these words……

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear glad you liked it tc

  25. thanx for update dear..love the swara understand sanskar,they trust each other..n finally sanskar confessed… waiting for swaras realization of her feeling..tc dear

    1. Mars

      Yupp Sanskar confessed soon swara will also realize. Thank you dear tc

  26. AbrahamEzra

    Huff at last that idiot had confessed. I so happy. And I loved swaras dialogue- β€œI trust you Sanskar” . It’s superb. O dont have words to describe my feelings. And ha plss post he is dangerous and she is mafias obsession its written by u only right.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear he is dangerous will give soon and she is mafia’s obsession is not my story it is my friend shubhangi’s story but I will not post as some bashed her story so if you want you can read on wattpad.
      Thanks
      Take care

  27. Superbbbb

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  28. Adishu

    lov3ly lovely lovely i loved it…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  29. wow. . amazing part

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  30. Soujanya

    Awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  31. Amazing dear….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  32. Super dearr

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  33. Tamil

    It’s amazing so cute loved it

    1. Mars

      Aww thank you dear tc

  34. Sanskar… He is such a cute person.. Like admitting everything… ❀❀
    N I loved that confession…..
    N the precap…. That seems so scary yar…
    Update soon dear ❀❀❀

    1. Mars

      Yuppp sanskar confessed in sweet way thank you dear let’s see what happened to sanskar will post soon tc

  35. Awesome….loved it…..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  36. NDSG

    Unexpected love confessionπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜š. I never thought Sanskaar will confess like this.
    100miss calls I mean.This much desperate he was!!!! 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘. For a moment even I thought he lost her. But then Swara changed her mind. She trusted her relation and Sanskaar. Good decision 😚😘😚😘😚😘😚😘😚.

    Mars no need to change ur writing style I loved old one most…πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜Œ
    I love the way u R😚😚😚😚😚😚😘

    But precap😰😰😰😰😰😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 please take care of my Sanskaar….

    1. Mars

      Sudden confession is bestπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ swara trust Sanskar that was needed in their relation.
      Yuppp he is desperatoπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Awww so sweet you love me the way I’m love you😘😘😘😘😘
      Don’t worry I will take care of sanskar thank you so much depuuu dear tc😘😘😘😘😘😘

  37. Vyshu10

    awesome….aww dat confession😍😍

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  38. Mica

    waa…. he confessed gis love in a flow

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