SANSKAR GUMNAM ASHIQUE OS

guys i am pathan writing story “swaragini love in slums of india and other with full of lust” and other story “swatragini love me”and my sister and me wrote this first OS PLease read it
and if u will know the reasin of writing this os u will realy laugh at me, i wrote this story because i realy love one shairy which i used in this story, daily i read this
shairy in my copy atleast 20 times so i thought that u also know about my favourite shairy so due to this crazy shairy i wrote this big chapter please read it u will realy
enjoy
NOTE I DID NOT DID PROOF READING SO THERE MAY BE MANY MIStake please FORGIVE ME

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SANSKAR’S POV
ohhh god these office work will kill me one day, today it is late night 6pm i could complete my work so i took my bike keys and started going to my house as i saw today
anytime raining can happen than also i started going towards my home but my fate was not good and heavy raining started so i got good place to wait till rain stops as i
was goign to enter that place i saw one girl is passing road who wore nakaab and one truck is comming towards her i immediately ran towards her and saved her from accident
but in this process we both fell down she was on top of me and as i saw her eyes i was fully lost in her, her dark brown beautifull eyes with black muskara, water droplets
were flowing from her eyes, she was still in nakaab i can not take of my eyes from her, only one thing came in my mind that to see her face anyhoew but my all thought chain
was desturbed by sudden jerk due to her, i came into senses and stood up with wide smile

SANSKAR’S POV END

sanskar- hey can not u see truck while passing door
girl- sorry i did not saw it but thanxx for saving my life
by hearing her voice sanky was fully lost in her now his urgue to see her face has increased
sanky- if u could not see properly u should not wear this nakaab
girl- what is the connection betwwen nakaab and this all
sanky- vo nothiing, if u will not wear nakaab u will able to get full access of road
girl- ohh what a useless theory but thanxx for helping me now i should leave
sanky- have u gone mad in this rainy season how can u go
girl- i will manage
sanky- no never
girl sits at that place hoping rain should stop
sanky-idea came hey why u wear this nakaab
girl- i like it
sanky- but here no one is there so what is need of this nakaab
girl- u aare there na
sanky- ohh u can take out ur nakaab do not feel aukward from me think me as ur freind
girl- no its okkk but i will not unvieil my nakkab
sanky thinks ohh god such a stubborn girl she is
another idea came in his mind
sanky goes near to her and acts as falling and catches his nakkab to stop falling him but she pulls him from her hand and her nakaab was tight on her face so it could not open
goirl- are u okk
sanky- ya

girl- why did u fall suddenly
sanky- nothing just my head was rotating
gorl- okk just than rain fall stops and she starts going
sanky- for what purpose u came here
girl points towards park and says i daily comes here to play with children
sanky smiles widely and goes from there, after reaching his house he thinks about that girl only and says YA IT IS LOVE AT FIRST SITE and says I LOVE U and i will prove my love to u
next day sanky does his office work fast and goes to same park where that girl was there
sanky sees her she was playing with children he admires her beauty and comes towards her and says how are u
she sees him in shock and says u here
sanky says can u give me ur 20 minutes to me
girl shocked but why
sanky- please
girl- hey mister please stay away
sanky- please just 20 minutes and at that end of park please
girl- okkk
sanky takes her to other side of park which he beautifully decrated and it was written i love u from ur GUMNAM ASHUQUE from roses
she sees it and ask to him what is it
sanky holds her hand and says yes i love u from first site, i want u to become my wife i know it is very fast but i am saying correct i love u
she jerks him and starts going but sanky follows her and says one day i will prove my love for u
girl- stay away from me
sanky comes infront of her and says if u do not love me its okk but atleast please show ur face to me one time than i will not say u anything
girl- never
sanky please please
girl noooooooooo

sanky goes to home with broken heart but he did not give up his love
he daily used to come to park to meet her daily he used to say atleast show ur face to me
girl never listen his plead and many time he was bitten by somepeople also but she never show her face this took 3 months in their life
but one day he did not come to meet that girl, she thinks may be he was busy in his work
but it she noticed 2-3 days also he did not come so sshe asked to one shop person who daily sees them so she goes and ask him why he is not comming now a days
person- beta he died
by hearing this that girl falls on ground with thud but she gets courage and ask but how he died
person- that day when he was running behind ur bus to give ur diary which u lost but u did not hear his talk so he was running behind ur bus and got accident
girl sits with thud and ask where he is
person- may be in kabristan
she takes one flower and runs towards kabristan but name was not written in any of the grave so she found one new grave which was 1 to 2 days old only so she thought
it should be that boy and sits there and says (please read it)
AE MERE GUMNAM ASHIQ, AE MERE GUMNAM ASHIQUE
AAI HU TERI MAZAR PE
AE MERE GUMNAM ASHIQUE
AAI HU TERI MAZAR PE
LE RUKH SE PARDA UTHA LIYA
JEE BHAR KE MERA DIDAR KAR
LE RUKH SE PARDA UTHA LIYA
JEE BHAR KE MERA DIDAR KAR
AE MERE GUMNAM ASHIQUE
AAI HU TERI MAZAR PE
LE RUKH SE PARDA UTHA LIYA
JEE BHAR KE MERA DIDAR KAR
by saying this she opens her viel and cries miserabely
but a voice comes
VAH KHUDA KYA HE TERA INSAF
AJ ME PARDE ME HU OR VO BENAKAB HE
VAH KHUDA KYA HE TERA INSAF
AJ ME PARDE ME HU OR VO BENAKAB HE
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guys it is correct ending of this story but i do not want emotional ending of this story so if u want happy ending than read remaining part
by hearing this word she turns back and sees sanky standing who was fully covered with bendages and sitting on wheel chair
she runs and hug him tightly and says tumne mujhe dara hi diya tha but that person told me u died
sanky- i know when i got accident every body thought i died but when they took me hospital, doctor was also telling i will be died but i did not died because god do not
want me to get died without admiring ur face, and it was 3 days i did not see u and i can not live without seeing u so i came to meet u but that person told me that he sent
u to kabristan

she smiles and hugs him and says u do not know i was died when i heard u got died
sanky- but why u felt bad whan i died u do not love me
girl- no I LOVE U MY GUMNAM ASHIQUE she says in flow
sanky happiness was out of limit he cups her face and say u are angel for me u do not know how much extent i l love u, he caresses her face and kisses her on her lips
passionately, she also starts receprocating kiss and both kisses wildely and starts exploring each other mouth and breaks kiss due to lack of oxygen
sanky sees her both breath heavily but he ask in this 2 months why u did not say i love u
she backs to her reality and thinks what she has done, than she says i am sorry due to stress and by mistake i told this word i am sorry i do not love u
sanky pulls her and says till when u will lie
girl- what ???
sanky- i know u love me too much and from first day itself when i saw ur eyes i only found love towards me
girl- please try to understand i am saying correct
sanky takes her hand and puts on his head and says now say correct reason of avoiding me
she could not take it more
girl- i was loving u from 5 years i saw u first time in tv when u took business of maheshwari company in ur hand but one day i thought atleast to see u from my eyes
so i went to maheshwari company just time pass for job purpose so i tohught i could see u there when my application went to ur cabin u saw that i live in red light area
so without looking at me without seeing me u throwed me out of ur company and they beated me badly also but one day u met with me, destiny again played with me, u asked
many question to me that day but i could not give any answeer and i was trying to go becasue i can not control my emotion by seeing u i was loving u madly so everytime
i did not make u see my face because i do not want again heart break in my life, i know for me like daughter of prostitue women and u a rich business men, and i know
for we type of girl love is not there in this world no body can love us because we do not have any place in society and that’s why i tried my level best to away from
u but u were behind me like majnu, and i know if u will know my truth u will not love me so i did not said anything to u, i realy loved when u comes daily to meet me but
i know when u will know my reality u will hate me so i remained away from u but today when i heard u died i could not control myself and came here
, she wipes her tear and continues, says i know now u will not love me but last thing i want to say that my mother was pr*stitute before 10 years only because of this cruel world they made
my mother prostitue forcefull but my mom did not want me to loose my dignity, so she work hard and paid money for my studies and now i got good job and i am very happy
that my mother and me are living peacefully in our life. i think now u understood why i was ignoring u and i know ur reason so i am going and live happily life
amd she starts going away but sanky hold her hand and says what u thought my love is this much weak for u, SWARA I LOVE U I KNOW U ARE PURE AND U ARE ONLY MINE and i know
ur reality swara
swara- but how u got my name and how u know about me
sanky- i read ur diary fully and i love u swara too much and i am sorry what i did with u that day will u marry me
swara- happy teary eyes and says u may get good girl better than me
sanky- swara u are my love and i can not live without u and u are best girl for me please do not leave me i will die without u
swara was tooooooooooo much happy and hugs him and says today u proved that a child of prostitue can also see dreams, sanky today u gave me biggest happinessof my life
sanky also hugs her tightly and says I LOVE U MY JAAN and never think u are child of prostitue but u are wife of great businessmen SANSKAR MAHESHWARI……..

story ends……………………….

GUYS THINK WHO WAS GUMNAM ASHOQUE SWARA OR SANSKAR OR BOTH AND ANSWEER I WILL WAIT FOR UR COMMENT
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guys how was the story did u like it and i did not have idea about swara’s confession so i wrote to give message to u all guys, becasue in our society we never respect red
light girls, that girls are realy humilitated by society and our society needs many boys like SANSKAR MAHESHWARI who can understand there problem
guys only just for 4 line shairy i wrote this much big story but please please please comment if u liked that shairy or my story
and guys today night i will upload my both the story
i have uploaded prologue and episode 1 of my new story
for prologue- http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-love-slums-india-full-lust-prologue/
for episode 1-http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-love-slums-india-full-lust-episode-1/

GUYS IF U REALY LIKED MY OS PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT IF I WILL GET GOOD COMMENT I GUARATEE I WILL WRITE SECOND PART OF THIS OS WITH NEW STORY OR OITS EPILOGUE

GUYS THINK WHO WAS GUMNAM ASHOQUE SWARA OR SANSKAR AND ANSWEER I WILL WAIT FOR UR ANSWEER

32 comments

  1. Poota

    Nice dear
    I am really up to see many such beautiful stories from a beautiful writer like u on a beautiful couple like swasan?

  2. (Menaz)

    Awesome story. & I think first swara is gumnaam aashiq than after that sanky. & the shairi lines are too good.

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