Sanam aur aahil – eh kahani hai 2 lafzon ki (episode 14)

Thanks for everyone …….. Guyz see I already mentioned that this is my first fan fiction so I’ve write whatever comes to my mind so I might make some mistakes….. And today I have updated a big episode……Ok enjoy the episode……

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Scene 1
Hospital

Sanam is taken to hospital while everyone are tensed………. Mainly aahil is tensed…… Sanam is taken to operation theatre ……. Nazia and shazia too comes there…..

After an hour doctor comes out…

Dilshad : doctor plz say ….. Is sanam fine????

Seher : doctor plz say……

Doctor remains silent …..

Aahil : (almost shouts) doctor say…. Is she fine …. Can we go and meet her …. When will u dis charge her plz say something….

Doctor : sir… As per medical reports …… The bullet which was shot landed in her right arm shoulder….. That place is connected to neck and she has fracture in that place….

Everyone are shocked…..

Doctor : now she is not in the normal state ….. She has to come in consciousness before 27hours or else ……

Aahil : doctor plz try ur best to save her…. Plz save my friend….l plz plz plz …..

Doctor : yes sir we are trying to save her….

Seher : doctor … At least can we see her ……

Doctor : voh…. (Thinks and says ) ok….. But only for 30minutes….

Ayan : thanks doctor…….

Aahil rushes to the room where sanam is kept ….. He opens the door….(sad junoon plays)

Sanam is lying on the bed unconscious with oxygen mask in her face….

Everyone sadly eyes her……..

Seher goes near sanam and sits

Seher : sanam …get up …..

Nazia : sanam , plz ….. Get up nah…… We have to practice for the contest right…. Get up…

Shazia : sanam…… Plz ….. U love pizza right???? Let’s go to dominos today …. So get up…. I don’t want to see u like this….

Aahil goes near her….. And says

Aahil : hey jalli wali get up ….. Get up right now if u r not going to get up …. Then…. I’ve break ur Vespa and your smart phone again…..

Dilshad breaks into tears humeira consoles her….. Rehan goes near Dilshad

Rehan : badi ammi …. Don’t worry … Nothing will happen to sanam

Aahil : shut up rehan …. I know about her …. Miss. Jalli wali is acting….. Get up …. I said get up sanam ….. Plz ….. I want to fight with u talk with u I want to irritate u yaar….. I already said to u that I can’t sleep without fighting with u ….. Sanam …. Today we became friends….. So today u have to listen to ur friend …. So get up …… (Sad junoon plays)

Doctor says them to go out to start the treatment ……

Doctor : and by the way I want 3 persons to stay here …… If the patient comes to consciousness we will have to inform …..

Dilshad : ok doctor….. I’ve stay here…. Ayan u too stay here…… Seher humeira u go home ….

Ayan : Han ammi….

Humeira and seher leaves

Nazia : aunty I’ve also stay here…….

Aahil : nazia shazia, ammi will be waiting for u both….. Or else she will be tensed ….. U both leave……I’ve stay here all the night…… ….. Can I stay here badi ammi ?

Dilshad : (smiles lightly and wipes her tears) thanks beta…

Aahil : aunty … U better take rest….. I will stay awake and rehan is with me and don’t worry …. Sanam will definitely be alright…..

Dilshad : fine beta……

Nazia and shazia leaves……

Aahil goes to the corner and says….

Aahil : (almost in tears) becoz of my enemity with that sangram malik …… Now sanam is in this state…

Rehan goes near him

Rehan : aahil … Mera bhai…. It’s not ur fault…

Aahil : no rehan …. All becoz of me …. And now my friend is suffering …. (Sad tune plays)

Aahil hugs rehan and cries….

Aahil : I know what to do …… Right now…… Rehan u come with me start the car

Rehan : (puzzled) bhai now????? Where r we going…

Aahil : I will say …. Let’s start the car…

Rehan : fine… Just wait a minute

He goes near Dilshad …..

Rehan : badi ammi…. There’s a important work …. So we have to go there …. Don’t worry we will be here soon….. If any news comes plz inform us….. So i need ur number….

Dilshad : it’s ok beta…..

Dilshad gives her number ……

Scene 2:
Outside the dargah…

Rehan is shocked when aahil comes to dargah…

Rehan : (happy yet shocked) aahil bhai dargah….

Aahil : yeah …. For sanam’s well being I’ve have to enter this place…..

Aahil and rehan cover their heads with a cloth and go towards the dargah…

Rehan enters the dargah…. Aahil is still standing outside…

Rehan : aahil bhai ….. Come inside…..

Aahil remembers his words that he said when he was a 8 year old kid……

Flashback :

Tanveer is taken to jail as she murdered asad , zoya , najma ….. Aahil asks the police why they are taking his ammi to jail….. They don’t answer him …… He pleads to leave her ……. But they push him aside …… Aahil goes near tanveer and cries……..Tanveer asks aahil to pray to Allah so that she will return soon …… Aahil says I won’t pray to that god who didn’t answer my prayers ……

Tanveer : aahil beta u should not say like that….. U use to pray everyday right….. Don’t worry your ammi will return soon…

Aahil : ammi …. I won’t pray to Allah anymore …. I prayed him a lot …. But he didn’t answer my prayers….. (I don’t want to hurt anyone’s feeling or religion by this dialouge…… I do respect all the religion …. So I don’t want to hurt anyone)

Tanveer is taken to jail and aahil breaks down and cries ……

Flashback ends….

Aahil remembers the same thing and stands freezingly……

Rehan : aahil bhai…. R u alright……

Aahil : rehan……. I can’t enter this dargah …. I know that I only said that we can go to dargah …….. But I’m not to forget that incident …….

Rehan : aahil bhai (holds his hand ) even I didn’t expect that u will come to dargah…. I was shocked when u said that in hospital….. Bhai at least for sanam’s health sake u have to enter this dargah ….. And that’s why we r here….

Aahil : (thinks) yeah ….. For my friends well being I have to enter….

He closed his eyes and he enters the dargah…. (Kalma tere naam ka … Dargah song plays)

Rehan too prays there

Aahil : (prays) Allah ….. After a long time I entering this dargah….. I just wish….. I want my friend back….. She should be healthy happy all the time…… Plz …. Allah Sanam needs u …. Plz help her…. She’s suffering a lot…. Plz save her……

After praying both rehan and aahil come out….

Aahil : I hope sanam is fine….

Rehan gets a call from Dilshad ……..

Rehan : badi ammi … Is everything alright ????? Any news…

Dilshad : (happy mood )….sanam is alright and she came to consciousness ….

Rehan : wow this is indeed a gr8 news…….

Dilshad : and by the way come her as soon as possible….. And where r u both????

Rehan : voh…. (Goes somewhere and says ) we are @ dargah….

Dilshad : dargah???

Rehan : yeah ….. Actually after this incident aahil wanted to pray for sanam’s well being…… And u know what badi ammi after 20years he’s entering the dargah ….

Dilshad : that’s so sweet of him…. First of all u both come here….

Rehan : fine…

Rehan goes near aahil….

Aahil : what happend ???

Rehan : good news aahil bhai………Allah heard your prayers…… Sanam is alright and she came to consciousness ……

Aahil : (happy mood) r u serious???? Thank god my friend is safe now

He hugs rehan

Aahil : fine …. Let me inform this to ammi….

Rehan : fine… But now let’s go to hospital…

Aahil : oh… Ok fine….

Scene 3:
Tanveer’s residence

Tanveer : now …. Definitely sanam would have passed away….. Everyone in her family will be crying …..

She says this and laughs (billo rani tune plays)

After a minute she gets a call from aahil…..

Tanveer : (thinks) aahil is in the hospital …… Of course he’s going to say that sanam is dead… (She smirks and picks up the call)

Aahil : ammi … I want to say something ….

Tanveer : what happend beta ??? Is everything alright???? Plz tell the news

Aahil : ammi u know what …. After 20years… I went to dargah for sanam’s well being …. And Allah heard my prayers….. Sanam is completely alright …..

Tanveer’s smile fades out when aahil says that sanam is alright …

Tanveer : KYA????

Aahil : what happend ammi…

Tanveer : (frustrated but doesn’t show it) oh…. That’s gr8…… Voh aahil beta I’m tired … I’ve talk to u later…

Aahil : fine ammi…

He cuts the call

Tanveer in rage throws her Mobile…

Tanveer : (frustrated ) how could this???? I was dreaming like anything like …. I won the game again but….. I thought she will die and now she’s alive….. And by the way … Aahil .. After 20 years he entered dargah for sanam’s well being…. Unbelievable ….

She breaks the mirror with vase….

Tanveer : I already told u…. Tanveer won’t accept her defeat….. This is my game …. (Billo rani plays) she laughs….

Scene 4
After 2 days ….. morning at hospital…

Sanam is dis charged from the hospital and now she’s completely alright….

Aahil completes all the formalities and gets sanam’s medical reports ….. They both come outside with Dilshad , ayan , humeira , seher and rehan…… And aahil starts the car……

Dilshad : aahil beta…. Plz leave us in our house…

Aahil : badi ammi no way……… Ur house is very far away from this hospital ….. It will definitely take 4hours and doctor told sanam to rest immediately after reaching home……

Dilshad : par beta…

Rehan : badi ammi ….. Aahil’s house is very close….. Let her rest there …..

Dilshad : ok…. Fine (thinks) ya Allah what to do ??? Tanveer will be there and she will definitely try to harm sanam…..

They reach aahil’s residence…….

Tanveer comes there and shows fake concern for sanam…. She takes sanam inside……..

Shazia : thank god sanam is perfectly alright (she hugs sanam)

Nazia : becoz of this stupid mr.malik….. And by the way bhaijaan ….. How did he get out of jail???

Tanveer gets tensed and she coughs…

Aahil : ammi r u alright????

Tanveer : yeah…. Voh…. Yeah I have to go some where ….

Aahil : so ammi I’ve leave u in my car…

Tanveer : no it’s ok… I’ve go by myself….

Aahil : fine… Nazia take sanam to guest room

Nazia : fine…

Tanveer leaves there tensedly ….

Rehan goes to sanam and says

Rehan : sanam …. U know what …. Yesterday night aahil was very concerned about u ….. So do u know what he did yesterday ???

Aahil : rehan…. What’s there in that ???? Nothing sanam …

Sanam : rehan u tell me…

Rehan : your friend …for ur well being he entered the dargah and prayed for u….. Not only that he entered the dargah after 20years only for u….. And Allah heard his prayers and now u r alright ……

Sanam eyes aahil happily (junoon plays)

Sanam : (childish smile and gets up) really ???? Voh bhi after 20years u entered dargah… For my well being …

Aahil : voh … (Smiles) yeah….

Sanam : OMA!!!!!

All : OMA????

Sanam : Oh My Allah…… Mr.bewakoof…… U entered dargah….. For me?????

Aahil gives a look when she says Bewakoof

Sanam : oops sorry…my friend Aahil …… I have decided something…

Aahil : what???

Sanam : hmm…. Recently we became friends…. After this u have proved that u r indeed a very good friend …. So .. (Gives a childish smile) I have decided to give promotion…. From today u r not my friend…

Everyone looks shocked …. Aahil too….

Aahil : I don’t get u …. What r u trying to say???

Sanam : (laughs) from today u r not my friend but my best partner…. Ok???

Aahil : (Smiles) ok from today we are partners… (Junoon plays)

They shake hands…. Meantime rehan,seher,ayan,Dilshad , humeira stare at them and smile seeing them….

Tanveer comes there and sees them like this and gets frustrated (Billo rani plays)

Ayan gets a phone call from his relative…. After speaking with his relative he goes and talks to Dilshad …

Ayan : ammi … Actually our close relative called me now from Lucknow …. They are inviting us for his daughter’s marriage…. They are asking even u to come and join there…. We have to stay there atleast for a month

Dilshad : but….. How could I leave sanam and seher in this mumbai city alone???

Nazia comes there hears this and says

Nazia : if u don’t mind … Can I say something????

Dilshad : yeah… U can say

Shazia too comes there..

Shazia :don’t worry aunty …. Let both sanam and seher stay here….

Dilshad : huh??? Beta but…

Tanveer comes and says

Tanveer : don’t worry Khala (she use to call Dilshad Khala ) …… I will take care of both sanam and seher ….. After all we know each other before long time huh (she smirks)

Aahil : ammi u know her?????

Tanveer : haan beta …. I know her….(eyes Dilshad)

Dilshad eyes her angrily and she asks her to come alone…..

Dilshad : do u think I’m a fool tanveer ….. Don’t ever dream of torturing my sanam and seher… I didn’t forget it and how could I …. U r the one who killed asad and zoya … Becoz of u …. Both sanam and seher suffered a lot (almost in tears)

Tanveer : Khala …. Don’t worry I won’t harm ur darling granddaughters sanam and seher …. Infact ….

Aahil comes there

Aahil : Dilshad badi ammi …. No need to say anything … U go to that function ….. Seher and sanam will be here… Plz agree…..

Tanveer : haan ….. Definitely (evilly smiles) I’ve take care of them…. For 1 month…

Dilshad : (in dilemma she agrees) ok….

Aahil : fine…

Aahil leaves….. Dilshad eyes tanveer and says…

Dilshad : don’t think of doing anything with my grand daughters….. On aahil and nazia’s insistence I’m leaving both of them here…..

Tanveer : don’t worry I’ve take care of both of them……

Dilshad : if u try to harm my grand daughters ….. U will be seeing my other face

Ayan and humeira comes there and ayan says ….

Ayan : u better beware of us tanveer…..

Humeira : ammi u don’t waste ur time by talking to this lady…

Tanveer gives angry look

Tanveer : fine…. Have a very good journey ayan , humeira and especially u Dilshad Khala …..

All 3 give angry look to tanveer and goes to sanam’s room ….. Tanveer gets frustrated…..

Scene 5
Guest room (sanam and seher’s room) and hall….

Dilshad goes to sanam and says that all 3 ayan, humeira and herself (Dilshad ) are going to Lucknow for month …… Sanam first refuses but then says ok……

Aahil leaves to office…

They leave from that room…. Rehan , seher , humeira , Dilshad , ayan are planning for a fake picnic trip to make aahil and sanam come close to each other …..

Rehan : so…. u all said that we can plan a fake picnic trip….. Now what to do???

Seher : and now sanam is also alright ……we can send them place where it will be peaceful …. Like forest area or something….

Seher says some plan and everyone agrees with it…

Rehan : that’s a gr8 idea !!!! And by the way I’ve start my plan… And seher u too…

Seher : fine ….

Ayan : and by the way ammi…. It’s getting late we have to start packing … Let’s go home … And sanam seher take care…. See u after a month …

Seher : (hugs ayan) fine chachu … Bye chachi , chachu , badi ammi…

All 3 leave from the house….

Tanveer hears their conversation

Tanveer : (thinks) wow…. I should not miss this chance …… They are planning to make sanam and aahil come close huh????? Now I’m planning to send them both very close to Allah in this trip (Billo rani plays) she smirks……

The screen freezes on tanveer’s face…

Precap : tanveer cuts the break wire from aahil’s car in which both sanam and aahil are going to travel……. Tanveer tries to talk nicely with seher but seher says that she knows her truth and she even says that she saw her damaging the break wire in aahil’s car….. Tanveer black mails her by saying that they both will die…… Sanam and aahil are travelling ….. Aahil looses the control in car …. But they are safe ….. They both have a fight…..

Promo : holi celebrations …. Sanam sees tanveer’s secret room….

I request all silent readers and regular readers……Plz leave ur comments after reading …. Sorry for the late update actually I have problem in internet connection…. From tomorrow I’ve definitely be regular….
And by the way who will better for ayaz …. I’m planning to make aahil and rehan jealous ….

Who will play a better role for ayaz???

A) mohith malhotra
B) namish taneja

Plz vote and leave ur feed backs and comments…..

Credit to: Sunehri

68 comments

  1. Gargi

    wonderful ep. i vote for mohith malhotra. sunheri in which class do you study and what is your age???

  2. payal

    mohith malhotra…and yur ep was great wonderful and fabulous. when are you updating next?

  3. Awesome awesome….. I vote for mohith …. Ayaz role suits him better…… He would be good for kabab me haddi πŸ˜›

  4. Yamuna

    Awe! It was so adorable that Ahil went to dargah for Sanam after years. I hope Ahil and Sanam soon realize their love for each other and confess during this fake trip…anywho it was a fabulous episode Sunehri…by the way, this Tanveer never changes, same cunning women. She will surely pay for her deeds. My vote would go to Namish Taneja…

  5. jasmine

    hai sunehri..

    very thanks for long episode yar….
    but u know what still iam feeling it would be better if u right much long….
    i mean i want mega maha episode daily yar….

  6. Keira

    Namishhhhhhjjhhh plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sunehri it vil be best he vil look perfect while flirting 2

    Awesome

  7. simran

    Hey sunehri. … I’m simran … actually I was a silent reader of ur ff …. ur fan fiction is going very well. … continue. … I prefer namish taneja for ayaz…

  8. hi dear….
    sorry bestie fr commenting so late… actually little busy due to examssss…. i hate them though..
    bt d update was amazing dear…
    nd i wote fr namish taneja coz he is damn cute nd perfect fr making evry boy jealous..

    • Sunehri

      Aww. .. bestie same situation here … I too have exam … but I’ve update every day. …. and namish looks damn cute when he’s flirting πŸ˜›

  9. Zuha (Asya fan)

    Sorry Sunehri di,commenting a bit late but as usual it rocks ,and my vote is for Namish ,he looks so charming when flirting so I think U should go for him!!! Love U loadsssss

    • Sunehri

      Yes indeed … namish is so cute :P. .. and zuha don’t refer me as di … just call me sunehri πŸ™‚

  10. jasmine

    hai dear ….

    so sorry if u hurt wth my comment as u missed a logic….

    i just tried to give a suggestion to u…

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