Samjhota…..Swaragini ka….Episode 9

Hello people….I’m back with the 9th episode of Samjhota…..Swaragini…ka
So…lets start…..
Sanskar is seen sitting shocked in the terrace…..
San:I’m so sorry Ragini….u did so much for everyone..and now…no one is understanding your feelings….but the truth is now I’m Swara’s husband…….chahakar bhi meh kuch nehi karsakta…..
Its morning….preparations for the godh bharai is going on…..Finally it’s the time for godh bharai….Swara comes down wearing a peach colour lehenga….Ap places a red chunri on her head….the rituals for godh bharai starts……all the ladies come and bless Swara….
Uttara:Bhabi…..there is another ritual for u…

Swara:What?
Uttara:See bhabi…we have this thali…and here there r two bowls covering two things….one has a gold ring and another has a diamond ring……if u pick the one ith the gold ring..then it will be a boy and if it is a girl then diamond ring…
Ap:What ritual is this Uttara?
Uttara:Badi ma…I invented it…..
Everyone laughs….

Swara:Fine….
Swara choses a bowl…Uttara opens it and sees a diamond ring….
Sumi:That means that laxmi will arrive at your place shona….
Uttara:Now bhabi……have u decided any name for your baby?
Swara:Well yes….
Uttara:Then write that name on a chit…..and we’ll keep that in the mandir…and will open it after your baby is born…
Swara smiles and writes a name in the chit…Uttara keeps that chit in the mandir….
Uttara starts dancing..and drags everyone for dance…everyone dances happily…Ragini is sitting beside Swara…..
Everyone comes and gifts her something……Just then a girl comes from behind..and gives Swara a CD….
Swara:What is this?
Girl:I’m Soumya…and this CD is for u…

Swara:Whats in this?
Girl:Umm….your husband’s recorded video…
Swara looks at Sanskar…
Sanskar:No..I haven’t send anything…..
Swara:He is my husband..but he said that he didn’t send anything….
Soumya:Laksh Maheshwari has send this….
Ao:We don’t know anyone of that name…..
Soum:He was your son…
Ap:WAS?
Tears r rolling down Swara’s cheeks….
Sanskar takes the CD from Soumya’s hand and plays it on his laptop…
Laksh is seen half sitting in the hospital bed….
Laksh:Swara…..the time u receive this video…i’ll be gone from this world……the girl who gave u this CD is Doctor Soumya Tripathi….my doctor……yes Swara……I’m having brain tumour…..Swara…i saw your pregnancy reports before u saw it…..but after that report I also received this report that says that I have brain tumour and I won’t survive for long……i decided to go away from u…I started behaving rude with everyone…..so that u all hate me..so that when I die…..u don’t even know about my death..I’m recording this video and handovering this to Soumya…and I told her to give this video to u after u move on in your life…….as now u r seeing it.that means u have moved on in your life……i’m so sorry Swara…i intentionally made u see me with another girl…….I know u were hurt that time….but trust me Swara…it was more painful for me to see u cry……I’m really unfortunate that I could not see my child…..i don’t even know that I have a daughter or a son……but I’m sure that if it is a girl then she would be beautiful like u..andd if boy then handsome like me……see u in the next birth…sorry once again everyone,I couldn’t fulfil the responsibility of a son,brother,friend,husband or father….

Video ends…..
Soumya:Swara…Laksh loved u a lot…..his last word was Swara…u know I was astronished to see this extremity of love…..koi kisi she itn pyar kese karsakta hai?
Swara is speechless…..she is not blinking…..her eyes r at the laptop…….
AP;Swara..beta…say something……
San:Swwara….
Rags:Swara…..please.
Soum:U need to make her cry or else..she may slip into coma….and this is also not good for her child….
San:Swara…say something……
Swara holds her tummy and starts crying loudly….
San:Swara…
Soum:Oh god…her water broke……we need to take her to the hospital…..
Everyone takes Swara to the hospital……
Swara is in OT…..Dr comes out…
Dr:It is a premature delivery and there r many compications…..Mrs Maheshwari is very critical………and in this case….we can save mother or child…..
Everyones crying…..
Ap:Save Swara…..please save her…..
Everyone agrees with her…….
After sometime…..Dr comes again and asks…who is Sanskar and Ragini here?
San:I’m Sanskar and she is Ragini….
Dr:Mrs Maheshwari wants to talk to u both…

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They immediately rush to the OT…
Swara is in pain..she is shouting..Sanskar comes and holds her hand….
Swara:Sanskar..ask them to save my child…if something happens to my child then I will die……..even if I don’t survive then I’ll be happy as the symbol of Laksh’s and my love is in the world..and I know u both will take care of my child ..please……..
Sankar;Par Swara…
Swara:Tumhe meri kasam…..
Rags and Sanskar r disheartened and asks the Dr to save the child……
Swara have tears in her eyes…Swara could imagine Laksh beside her…
Laksh:Swara….u r bringing our child to this world…y do u want to come with me to that world? U need to live….
Swara delivers the child…Sanskar and Ragini r extremely happy as they hold the child…
San:See Swara….
He sees Swara’s eyes r opened….and she is not blinking……..
Rags:Swara!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
San;Swa…….
San;Swara…see..see it’s a baby girl….you chose the dimond ring na..see…..its a girl..u won Swara……say something Swara…
Swara doesn’t respond….Doctor closes Swara’s eyes….
Rags:Swara….

Precap:Baby’s name ceremony..and 22 years leap……

Credit to: Eva

75 comments

    • Niharika

      U don’t need to declare it that u hate it…if u can’t appreciate ones hard work then don’t comment..if u wouldn’t have liked the storyline then your hatred would be justified….for couples..seriously?

    • Dear 1234, no one asked you whether you liked the ff or hate it !! If you don’t like it you can better shut your mouth and stop reading the ff rather than putting such comments. Do you have an idea how it feels for the writer to see such hatred comments? ! Just put yourself in eva’s shoe and see …then you would understand if that time also you don’t then please for god sake get out from here!!!!?

      • meher

        Dear even m a swasan raglak fan…but we should respect the writers choice n mostly creativity 🙂 🙂 n i will read this ff till end 🙂

      • neha

        u all cant just scold 1234
        before that let me make one thing clear I loved this ff and it is amazing though there were no swalak seens.i am a swasan fan but in this ff i like ragsan

        now about 1234 everyone has the right to express their feeling and that is the purpose of comments.1234 just said that he/she likes ragsan and since its not ragsan 1234 didnt like it

        the writer should not take the comments personally maybe since the ff was ragsan 1234 didnt like it . the writer should do magic with her words so that even people like 1234 likes it.
        so eva please take the comments positively and try to get inspired or encouraged to write more

        🙂 i personally liked ur ff and as i said dont feel bad after reading the comments 🙂

      • Swasan fan

        I didn’t unedrstand what u said Neha…i mean were u supporting 1234 or critisizing the writer? Did u ever write a ff yourself? If yes…then u should know..how a writer feels when he or she is critisized…..at that time..no one will take it as encouragement..other than Eva….this girl never wrote anything rude to anyone..she never gave an rude or critisizing answer to any bashing comments…..i know this cause….once i even wrote similar thing…but the way she replied impressed me…now thats why i read all her ff…and i don’t care about her couple choice…and yes….only couples freak will dislike this writer’s ff…so sorry to be rude…but i really didn’t like the words u used..and said that writers should do some magic…with her words…this ff is actually magical..still u r saying this….

      • neha

        hey swasan fan,
        the point i tried to make is that everyone have right to express what they feel.
        if u liked this ff u commnt that nd if anyone didnt likeeven they can comment.
        u or anyone dont have the right to stop someone from expressing their views..
        in case u didnt like the comment just ignore it, no need to reply to that comment

        nd i am not critisising the writer.the way one sees or understands this ff is different from what another sees.
        if u liked this doesnt mean that everyone should like it. u cant impose ur likes or dislikes on others.
        nd wat i meant by magic is also the same. everyone is not perfect. thewritter can improve their skill.there is no limit for that.what i mean is eva can improve her skill even more so that even those like 1234 will like it irrespective of the couples

        one more thing i would like to make u understand is i love this ff and also i love u too.

      • Swasan fan

        Yeah right everyone has their own likes and dislikes…but how can anyone write on someone’s face that I hate this ff….the people who r so obsessed with the couples should read other ffs…and not this one..people ‘s criticising comments can be used to improve writing but such critisises like I hate u is not justified..

      • Swasan fan

        And yes 1234 didn’t like this ff because of its couples…i mean seriously? Story Mein kya kharabi hai?

  1. Anahita

    Maan gayi meh apko di. What are fab writer u r..u gave me unbelievable shocks….emotional episode…

  2. Kayra

    Oh ho..now I’m feeling guilty cause I cursed Laksh after reading that he left Swara…par woh bechara toh Swara ke liye hi usehh due gaya…

  3. Niharika

    Miss 8th grader….how can u write so well being in class 8 only? Really impressive..tbh..your all stories r meaningful..and very heart touching…not those nok jhok ones….and the best part of your ff is its not all around the couples….its about your storyline…amd different truths of life…

  4. Aanya

    It was obvious… olwayz ragsan… i nvr read swalak or ragsan ff… bt ur start was gud so i imagined lyk i wud make swara sanskar fall in love takin care of baby n al.. n new entry for ragini… its jus a req do declare pairs first coz see it hurts… i dun knw abt others bt m die hard fan n i cnt imagine dem wid others.. i dun hve prblm u can use ragsan bt i jus wanted to knw d pairs coz starting u gave me hope dat it might b swasan as u said u r both swasan n ragsan fan bt ve seen.. bt anywayz ur ff ur thoughts… n urz olwayz b ragsan ff so nvr gonna read again… no hard feelings..

    • Sahi

      At first i didn’t like this ff cause Eva only writes on Ragsan..and i was kinda sure that its a ragsan ff…but this was full of Swasan scenes….still being a swasan lover u didn’t like this…thats strange…..and Eva…ignore these types of comments..cause these type of people r damn deperate about couples…….and can do nothing except for bashing….

      • Aanya

        Ya i care abt d pairs… n dats ma POV… if u ve prblm wid ma cmnt dan dun do it who told u…

      • Aanya

        N for ur kind of info i didn’t bash her.. u can read ma cmnt again… i jus said to reveal pairs earlier… n ya m die hard fan of swasan dats d only reason i cnt imagine dem wid others… bki u can think watever u want 2 man

      • Kashish

        oh really Miss Aanya…i read this ff regularly and for your kind info..i have read your comments as well..well not today..in the previous episode or anyone of the previous episode..i read something..that was your comment…a bashing one…so before proving Sahi wrong..check yourself…and your comments..and if u r so desperate for swasan then go and read the other ff..all r for swasan..no need to read such an different story…

      • Aanya

        N one more thing wat do u mean by these type of people han… if u can share ur views same goes wid others also… first think n dan talk

      • Manya

        Aanya..dear even I saw your comment on episode 5 or 6..the way u asked the writer to stop the DRAMA….was really rude…u definitely don’t write a ff..if u would then I would understand the hardwork needed to write a single episode…respect the writer’s thoughts..if u can’t encourage them..then don’t at least discourage them…

      • Khyati

        Hehehe Aanya..galat baat galat baat…chut bole kouwa Kate…don’t lie…i read your comment…once…its was in this ff..and u commented with different names…aanya..anjel..and I don’t remember the other names…..u can check…i wrote a nice reply to u…and yes…y do u need to be rude to everyone?First of all Sahi wrote this yo Eva…to ignore bashing comments….y do u feel that she said that pointing u only?

      • Khyati

        And yes..u declared that u r not going to read Eva’s ff…why do u need to declare it and hurt her?

      • Aanya

        Kashish
        Khyati
        Manya
        Ya datlings luk @ d way u guyz r talkin
        N abt my cmnt on prvs chap if u guyz read u can see i ve said srry if i hurt u… n my point was only to reveal pairs… ya n thanku i will nvr read coz i nvr read ff othr dan swasan bt she gve d hope… n abt drama it was a drama offcrse… nywayz if ur talkin abt my rudeness luk at u al… i even dun knw u guyz n didn’t said anything 2 u guyz.. n ya if shez a writr n writes for readers ever readers wil gve dere view points… N dats my POV n nobody can change dat… n again wil say no hard feelings for u guyz coz i dun knw u n ve nothing against u… n dats m POV n i stick 2 it n u can oppose as dats ur POV

      • Manya

        Yeah right drama….u said that I’m being rude….what a rudeness….I just expressed what I felt in your language…and yes…I think u even took part in that voting which u call a drama…so as u have taken part in that drama…u have become an actress….good job….I have no enmity with u..but trust me if I come to rudeness…then u won’t be able to talk further….with me..i can use hard and harsh words….but I won’t..cause I have no intension to hurt ANYONE…

      • Aanya

        Ya right manya even i jus expressed what i felt… n wat do u think if u’l talk to others dan others wil stay quite… if u r sayin u can use harsh wrds n i wil not b able 2 rep den u r mistaken… if u’l use harsh wrds u’l recieve d same… period

      • Sahi

        Aanya just see yourself…u r telling that I’m rude..but see the way u r talking to everyone..and about Manya..she said that she won’t use any harsh words…respect her view….u r arguing with all of us..and yes..Manya said correct..absolutely correct..u won’t be able to reply further cause..we r many..and if we come to bash u..the u really won’t have a reply….trust me…

      • Eva

        Please people….don’t fight or argue for me…everyone has his or her point of view..if Aanya didn’t like my ff…then maybe thats my fault..i couldn’t write that well and I’m receiving such comments….but trust me Manya,Kashish,Sahi,Anahita…..i love u all…u wrote so much for me…and yeah Aanya..i love u too….cause u r giving me advices…..and maybe that will make my ff better….and if u don’t want to read my ff further than i have nothing to do in that….love u all….and yes….i’m not hurt….i receive many comments like this…ab adat hogayi hai…..

    • Anahita

      Aanya..I read all your comments…so to be honest u started the rude behaviour….and about the writer giving u hope….if u were so confused with the pairs then u should had left this ff immediately….no hard feelings….

      • abcd

        why all are you fighting for silly reason just enjoy the ff its not real so you are taking this on heart be practical

  5. OMG swara die i want ragsan as pair but dont want to swara die plz make her back even i’m happy with swasan make a new entry for ragini plz plz eva make swara back

  6. Chahat

    Eva di..i hope u don’t mind if I call u di.cause u r 8th grader and me 6th….i’m a silent reader..but I didn’t miss a single episode of your ff…its really amazing..u nailed it…and yes I read all your comments…di…don’t be disheartened…i hate people who bash the ff writers for couples only..many had written that u do this for comments..maybe they r jealous..that your ff got so many comments…ignore basher and hater..comments…and keep writing…

  7. Nisha

    Superbbbbbbbb..dear trust me I’m a diehard swasan fan..but for the first time I loved a ff which doesn’t have swasan happy ending..

  8. Ishita

    U nailed it dear..such a emotional episode…feeling bad for swalak…perfect name samjhota….

  9. divi

    Ur ff is so good
    guys plzz donot comment like that to her ff its so good if dont like plz exit from this ff

  10. Shirin

    How ca.n i am felling scattered myself i love you eva i fell as if i am in swaras place
    Love u

  11. Vinni

    This is your 9th episode..that means the next episode is your last episode?…please change your plan and continue this story dear….cause I love it a lot…

  12. Akanksha

    Eva…too good yar…u have a great future in writing….u write for yourself….thats the best thing…

  13. Vibha

    Outstanding episode..u proved what u said..its swasan…swalak as well as ragsan….very heart touching..

  14. Kashish

    Hehehehe..a nice answer to all the bashers…u all asked about how it can be ragsan and swasan at the same time….such people…accused the writer of playing with both swasan and ragsan fans….this ff was full of swasan scenes..and at last it was ragsan…for me its a swasan ff..cause this story concept says that swara and Sanskar r the leads…so what if Swara died ….swasan r still there…

  15. Joona

    Omg..what an episode.. Loved it..so imotional.. ..u r superb writer dear..love u so much…

  16. omg you are damn good , i was not at all expecting this , such an emotional twist , seriously you are an “AWESOME WRITER”…………..:-)

  17. sara

    Awesome .. no words to describe it.. u r an excellent writer.. don’t stop for anyone.. today’s made my cry..

  18. simran

    I love this story…how can people criticize this story..it is so different. .this is one of the best story I had ever read..

  19. Ezria

    Eva this was mind blowing I cried reading it. Ur a fabulous writer. U can be great writer in future. This was so emotional.

  20. Bisha

    Eva…if its true wat i got frm sm cmnts that u r in 8th grade..thn i am really stunned..u r awsum..hw u handled all the pairs n their scenes equally!! I must say one more thing too…the ppl whu r criticising..critise ond story..its shortcomings due to d writings..c wl b happy nd correct dsefaults…but nt on d couples…this is cming out frm hr hrad…its not to please us…its her story..completely..nd Eva..welcome all criticisms bt nvr tk dat personally..To others whu r commenting…a good reviewer reviews a story or a film not its couples evn if thy dn look good to thm…story must alwys b d priority..THANK U ONCE MORE FOR PRESENTING US SUCH A GOOD FF…

  21. Nd one more thng only swasan is made for each other not sanskar nd ragini…ragini nd sanskar ir alike sis nd bro…önly swasan..SWASAN FOREVER… SWASAN IS MADE FOR EACH OTHER

  22. Meghs

    Its nice one eva …. I really treated well to swasan aswell as ragsan fans….
    If u guys like one couple to much it doesn’t mean u can bash another couple n criticize ….
    Just enjoy stry guys y r fighting for small issue …

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